Thanks manNevo wrote:
just one little thing
maybe make 02:36:148 (1) - just a straight slider because then 02:34:214 (1,1,1) - these three could be like "complex" to "simple" shapes since the first slider has 2 red anchors and the second has 1 red anchor the 3rd should have none \o/ I was gonna say "that's the idea" but actually adding a red anchor to every slider is cool, so 02:37:131 (1) - has one less red anchor than 02:36:148 (1) -
edit: oh hey i found more things xd
01:36:728 (2) - fairly subjective but i think have the part after the red anchor being parallel with 01:36:413 (1) - is more aesthetically pleasing like this maybe? I like it
02:48:036 (3) - maybe un nc this since for these 02:47:093 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - you nc the note after the 1/1 gap every NC in the kiai show that there's a change of rhythm, whether it's 1/1, 1/2, or 1/4. (with the exception of 02:48:664 (1) - because it's the strongest sound and is NCed before)
02:57:774 (5,6,7,8) - perhaps have these be the most spaced out since it's kinda higher pitched than 02:57:460 (1,2,3,4) - also gives cool end of streams feel I hear a decrease in intensity from 02:57:774 (5) - to the end of the stream, aren't the most high pitched notes on the first 4 ?
03:35:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - i personally dont like how 03:35:627 (5) - flows into this especially when all the stream transitions prior to this dont turn this hard. I expected something more like how you did 03:32:800 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - but meh im not exactly a stream mapper xd Yeah, it was pretty harsh, widened the angle a bit
03:43:323 (1,1,1,1) - dont know if it does anything but maybe add breaks after these notes IT MAKES THE MAP Ú̵̧̞̘̯͕̥̪͖͓̘͖̤̟̙͓̮͖̖̹͠͞Ņ͎̭͎͔͡R̵̬̟̩̰͓͖̰͔͙͝ͅÀ̴̷̞̘͉̰͙̗͚̺̠̩̳̫͚̳͎̀͜Ń̶̰͖̝̹͜K̵̨̼̪̺̥͉̱̠̥̮̙̭͠͝Ą̵̝̙̺̹͕̟̯͓̥͙̦̮͚̲̮̲̕͢͟B̶̧̰̤͚͇̦̙͚̯̟͙̯̖̬̝̤̙́̀Ĺ̷҉̬̼͍̝̼̦͙̼̜̜E̸̶̥̣̻̥͉̖̼̭̠͎̜̘͢͝ because of drain time i think
04:02:800 (4) - maybe nc yes
yeah idk i tried xd
eh kinda small mod but heres my map xd https://osu.ppy.sh/s/713944 I'll get to it soon
Thanks for the mod !bite you death wrote:
im here cause nevo sucks
big subjective wall incoming r u bn?????
00:02:487 (1) - this might be 1/3 idk i suck at timing lul pretty sure it's 1/4
also at 00:02:487 (1) -, i'd flip this like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10041256 so that the visual spacing is the same, looks cooler imo nice idea
00:18:508 (1,2) - i think you should replace these 2 sliders with circles, as it is the climax of the buildup tbh, and having 2 1/2 sliders this close to eachother doesnt fit at all. if you dont want to change it to circles, atleast increase the spacing here. I liked having two sliders at the end because it fits the cymbals as well. However, I did increase spacing, it really wasn't big enough
00:17:722 (4,5) - the sound here is dragging, so i feel like it goes against the song to put 2 circles here when you didnt before, if anything this is the one place where a slider would fit the most the circles were meant to represent the guitar here, like the rest of the buildup
00:19:764 - to 00:39:869 - in this section you switch your focus between drum and guitar back and forth, i think it would be better if you followed one of them mainly. I don't think it would feel natural not to follow the guitar as it very reminiscent of the original 2hu song (it's basically what I think about when remembering clownpiece's theme) However, in moments like 00:20:942 - guitars do nothing for 3 beats so drums are more noticeable. In the second part, I switch between the two guitars based on the same thing. I think it's ok to switch between instruments
00:39:241 (1,2,3,4) - i think a fading in spacing here and then an increase at 00:39:869 (1) - would be pretty cool, kinda like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10041339 (same at 01:19:450 (1,2,3,4) -) It was like this originally, can't remember why I even changed it in the first place since I like it better that way
00:41:754 (3) - i think you can make this slider look sharper, like 00:40:497 (3) -, as this sound isnt something you would accompany with a smooth curve rly tru
00:43:010 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - there's no sound at 00:43:089 - so you should extend 00:43:010 (3) - to 1/2 and remove 00:43:167 (4) -, it would be also be easier to react to with these slow sliders right before yes
00:44:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - would be cool if u could copy the pattern of 00:05:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -, you already kinda did but you swapped 00:46:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and 00:47:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - around (00:06:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -) or do it the other way around I kinda get what you mean, but it seems like it would be kinda complicated to do this without just copy pasting (the patterns aren't really the same right now), and I already really like how it's done already. I don't think that it's really important to have both parts mapped exactly the same way, as both ways of doing it aren't too far away and pretty reprensatitive of the song imo
00:59:345 - maybe make this clickable? you could try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/z4AzB.png I prefer it how it is right now, drums stopping -> pause so it should resume when drums start playing again too
01:09:712 (5) - nc this to continue the nc pattern you had here? no kick on this
01:30:131 (1,2) - you should make these 2 sliders the same, like you did at 01:20:078 (1,2) -, 01:25:105 (1,2) - and 01:26:361 (1,2) - I used a lot of copy-pasting in this part but it wasn't really a theme I wanted to have, as 04:03:428 - this part shows, that has differents kinds of patterns for these sounds
01:35:157 (1,2) - 01:35:785 (1,2) - 01:36:413 (1,2) - 01:37:042 (1,2) - ctrl-g'ing these, because the important sounds (of 01:35:157 (1,2) -, for example) are at 01:35:157 - 01:35:392 - and 01:35:628 -, so making 01:35:471 - clickable doesnt make much sense when you could make 01:35:392 - clickable instead. alternatively try this rhythm https://puu.sh/z4AUV.png reworked it with more difficult rhythm at the second time this occurs to show progression
01:56:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i feel like this should be bigger, as the sounds here are quite heavy (if you do this dont forget to also increase 01:57:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - slightly) in the first times this sections appears I use 1/3 repeat sliders to indicate rhythm change, so I want following circles to have a same distance as sliderhead-slidertail since it makes the same hand movement
02:00:288 (1,1) - are every 3rd downbeat, but 02:07:827 (1,1,1,1) - etc are on every other downbeat, and its basically the same sound without distortion so i think you should make it consistent. what i seriously don't get what you mean
Edit : oh ok sure
02:25:733 (3,4) - this could easily be misread as a 1/1 gap with context players of this skill level should have time to read that properly,
none of the people I asked for playtests got any problem with this part
02:26:675 (1,2,3,4) - this is also hard to read; 02:26:675 (1,2) - uses basically the same spacing as 02:27:617 (3,4) - but one is a 1/1 gap and the other is 1/2 gap, making this quite difficult to play, especially with this context. same as before, and gap is justified by guitar that breaks through the repetitive rhythm of the entire slow part
02:36:148 (1) - you could remove the sliderpoint in this slider to make have the effect of gradually losing a sliderpoint each slowdown, subjective, but would be cool done in mod before
02:37:131 (1,1) - imo this stack kinda ruins this part, as the sound makes 02:37:984 - seem like a sudden speedup after a slight slowdown, and this stack kinda ruins the element of surprise. unstack it por favor si, sen~or, he unstackedido el circle para tener una gran SURPRISA
02:37:131 (1) - remove the reverse, its the same sound as 02:34:214 (1,1,1) -, but on those you didnt map the middle sound, so why should you here?because there wasn't one on the other sliders ?actually it's just simpler and cleaner to just remove it
02:52:434 (1,2,3,4) - imo you're undermapping 02:52:748 (3) - with this rhythm, try https://puu.sh/z4BuF.png I honestly hear nothing on blu tick so leaving it as it is for now
02:58:088 (1) - this should be further spaced from 02:58:010 (8) - than 02:58:010 (8) - is from 02:57:931 (7) -, not the other way around tbh tru
03:02:800 (5,4) - why did you only just start using 3/4 slider for this sound? 02:59:030 (5,5) - are the same sounds, just lower pitch, but you mapped them as 1/2. note is held longer on this slider
03:19:135 (1) - this slider should probably be faster rather than slower, as the pitch is higher. I think it's fine. (+ I hear the pitch to actually be lower but I'm probably as good as deaf with my ears so who knows)
03:43:324 (1,1,2) - either stack all of them or none of them, also, nc 03:48:035 (2) - maybe? (if you decide to stack then you should stack 03:48:350 (1,1,1) - too) cymbal = no stack + nc
04:39:240 (4,4) - nc want to be consistant with 01:55:262 - and 03:58:402 -
some of these repeat but im too tired to mention all, check for yourself pls ye
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