01:52:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is cool and all, but i expected a pattern that that progressively gets more difficult like 01:44:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - instead of a pattern that gets progressively easier for that climax of the kiai...?
03:51:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh i don't understand this, from what i see 03:51:167 (1,2,3,4) - this is its own pattern just highlighting the stronger part of the build up and then 03:51:834 (5,6,7,8) - you reset the build up on the vocals by reducing spacing for the vocal entrance > i think a gradual build up would have been better to match intensity because that critter sound or w/e starts ticking from 03:51:167 (1) - and progressively gets faster until 03:52:500 (1) - but ./shrug
04:37:167 (1,2,1,2) - tbh this is fine because nc and ya but, don't take this the wrong way, alot of stuff in this map is predictable and intuitive, and this kinda trashes allover that because same slider back to back but slow vs really fast, it would have been nice to see some shape variation or something but yea its fine as is
01:29:167 (1,2,3,4,5) - idk what you had in mind when placing this stream but i find this pretty painful because of the sharp clockwise into counterclockwise
smh i can't find anything else
p good though, gl kibb