General Thoughts- You should tone down the hitsound volume, its pretty loud imo
lowered it- Why is ''pp'' , ''heck yeah'' and ''desu'' in the tags, unless its correct metadata, which i doubt, you might need to remove them if you want to rank this
- Add '' カントク '' to tags, and maybe '' kantoku '' its in both the ranked mapsets
joke tags, forgot to remove when i finished the spread, added suggested tagsEasy- 00:03:026 (1) - This slider has so many unecessary nodes its both impractical and pretty ugly looking , why not go for something simpler like
this , like all your other sliders
- 00:14:857 (1) - go for something more symmetrical with the slider nodes
- 00:18:237 (1) - in my honest opinion, the pathing used on this slider is too much for a beginner diff, the shapes must be straightforward, easily readable and easily playable, I'd suggest trying something else
- 00:24:575 (2) - would be nice if this blanketed the 1
i just remapped this without seeing this mod, oopsNormal - 00:00:279 - this can be clickable, with a circle maybe, really strong sound, you should take advantage of it
done- 00:00:491 (1,1) - this pattern and all the patterns similar to this pattern throughout the diff concern me the most. The fact that this has less DS even tho it has more distance than a normal 1/2 slider -> 1/2 slider spacing troubles me. It would have been fine if the song suddenly stopped there because there wouldnt be something to emphasize with a spacing, but the vocals keep going. Put some proper spacing reflecting on the stable DS you are following
fixed- 00:02:181 (3) - since you are following vocals, this should be a pair of 1/2 sliders as well, another alternative is one slider and 2 circles, making 00:02:815 - clickable in the meantime
did the first one- 00:05:561 (3) - ^ same applies to these slider, so much untapped rhythm choices hidden by just placing a 1/1
done- 00:07:040 (3) - for reference , this is were an extended slider would be supported by vocals, so this is good
:DI Dont see any further problems with rhythm, but the problems mentioned above appearing over and over again
fixedIsnt it stated in the RC that a map has to be more than 30 seconds to be mapped? this has 28 seconds of drain time. Then again, there are ranked sets already so i might be wrong
HardI really like this hard diff, Probably the best diff in the set
- 00:03:237 (1,2) - you should either go full overlap with the other slider body or non at all, decide
overlap- 00:06:195 - this is really strong as a beat vocal-wise, it should be made clickable
copypaste woo- 00:11:899 (2) - blanket could be improved
fixed- 00:22:040 (2,3) - suddenly jumps that are supported on the same vocal basis as these 00:19:505 (4,5) - have no spacing between them, after this point this is repeated. In my opinion this is not okay for the consistency of this difficulty. Other examples include 00:23:730 (2,3) -
trying another pattern- 00:25:420 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is the first time and the only time so many consecutive jumps appear, id say include at least one slider in this rhythm
trying another pattern Overall pretty well-made diff
tyInsane- 00:00:913 (3,1) - This feels so mashed up together, space it out just a bit, something along the lines of
thiswould make an interesting and clean pattern
- 00:03:026 (1,2,3) - the 1->2 jump is a stronger sound, while 2->3 has bigger spacing, you should readjust this
- 00:04:293 (4) - move to x:254 y:265 for better symmetry
- 00:17:815 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pretty unecessary chain of jumps, sliders on some sounds would work better and give more variety
- 00:20:667 (4) - not only there is no beat on the blue tick, you make it clickable with a kickslider, kick slider should be deleted, 2 plain jumps would suffice
- 00:07:885 (4) - why is there not a triple here, 00:07:991 - there is clearly sound here
- 00:23:096 (1,2) - the 2 is too close, should be spaced out. It feels like you deliberately limit your self
probably remapping the whole diff fixed most of theseHarmonyTo begin with, i firmly disagree with your pattern and rhythm choice in this diff, its pretty overdone, so im just gonna point out stuff that can be improved other than the rhythm choice itself
I wanted to try something different- 00:00:913 (3) - something like
this would work better
spaced evenly- 00:03:449 (3) - blanket
done- 00:07:040 (1) - move the red slider node in the middle to x:282 y:79
done- 00:11:266 (4,1,2) - is this 1/8 snap? imo its pretty overmapped
remapped- 00:12:322 (1,2) - ^
^- 00:14:223 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part is just plain kicksliders, no vocal emphasis, just kicksliders ;w;
extended 00:17:181 (1) - - 00:20:561 (3,4,1) - properly stack this together, why was even a spacing there to begin with its not supported by anything
fixed- 00:28:378 (1) - tweak this slider so the pathing is more visible
made it easier to read and more aesthetically pleasing