1. a408746369's Oni (4.94 stars, 592 notes)
2. Another (5 stars, 364 notes)
3. Beginner (1.53 stars, 91 notes)
4. Hyper (4.93 stars, 331 notes)
5. Normal (4.15 stars, 144 notes)

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

kors k<3

Another:
00:35:725 (6,7) - Maybe don't stack these under the slider 00:35:222 (4) ? They're kinda hard to see >w<

banvi wrote:

hi~

red : you should fix
black : just suggestion

[Another]
HP +1 , OD +1
00:34:552 (2) reverse selection?
00:54:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) 1 grid down (grid lv2)
00:49:468 (4) 1 grid down
01:11:256 (2) new combo?
01:21:815 (9) 1 grid left
01:40:921 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) lol nice...but hard to see... can you make more visible??? (I think you should adjust using grid lv3)
01:50:977 (1) remove new combo
01:52:317 (1) ^

overall nice map!

banvi wrote:

hi~

red : you should fix
black : just suggestion

[Normal]
00:09:748 (timing point) hitsound volume -2
00:14:775 (1) remove new combo
00:16:451 (3) new combo
00:56:004 (1) remove new combo
01:06:060 (5) new combo01:07:401 (1) remove new combo
01:44:273 (6) new combo? I think this combo is too long
01:52:653 (2,1) hmm , this jump don't fit & too suddenly for normal... remove new combo (1) & fix spacing
01:58:351 (1) add finish?

[Hyper]
HP +1
00:09:664 (1) move 00:09:747(white tick).
00:43:099 (6) 1 grid down(grid lv3)
00:43:267 (7) new combo
01:16:787 (1,1,1,1) finish really don't fit imo...
01:37:234 (1) remove new combo



overall nice map!

Tonoko wrote:

:oops: hi

[normal]
spacing比较大 作为easiest diff 可能被挑。不太确定。
01:40:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 中间加个new combo
01:54:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 最后这段好像节奏有些怪？不把3个空位填上么？
OTL真的不怎么会做新手难度 不过重新排了
[hyper]
一点问题在于一些交接位置有些生硬恩稍微修改了一些地方
00:38:910 (5) - 这个太诡异了。。。有吗？

star

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
mp3 @ 320 kbps, try to compress it to 128~192 kbps.

[Hyper]
0:17:625 (2,3,4,1,2) - (2,3,4) left 1 grid, (2,1) remove finish
0:25:334 (4) - right 1 grid
0:51:479 (6) - up 1 grid
0:57:345 (3) - finish at beginning instead of ending

[Normal]
ok for me

star~

LunaticSHIKI wrote:

hyper
01:00:530 (8) - dont bpmx2..
01:15:781 (1) - Delete this spinner? im sure a slider or something would work better here, rather than a sudden short spinner.

01:11:423 - make the rhythm like that?[attachment=0:b9349]123.jpg[/attachment:b9349]

01:22:150,01:27:513,01:30:194,01:32:206,01:50:306 - i dont think those quick jumps make much sense.is there any way that you could close these a little bit up? of course this is only a suggestion.

easy
wtf slider tick rate 3....

plz restore it to the old version>_>

Wiinter wrote:

Hello >w<~

General
For some reason I don't know it seems like there isn't a bg here.. But dunno if it isn't some problem with me as soon as in the preview it appears.

Normal
I can't get the spacing you used here I mean, it's really irregular >< Well, anyways.
01:22:485 (1) - start it at 01:22:150?
01:46:284 (9) - new combo

Hyper
01:37:234 (1) - remove new combo
01:38:239 (1) - ^

That's all. Cool hitsounds <3 Star.

Sandpig wrote:

hi

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

come from selee's queue


Hyper

感觉一开始的地方缺乏连贯性（虽然不反对停顿但是有的略显长了）
个人建议补NOTE的地方：00:15:613，00:16:787，00:18:295和00:18:295 FIXED
01:26:842 (9) - 唔……个人反对慢速slider接jump，而且又是突然减慢的slider。1PC的话多半要被坑掉。而且从打图角度来看，前边的0.5x slider都是拉满两排整，这里少了半拍，容易产生经验性错误……可以理解你希望达到的效果但是建议缩小距离。OK FIXED


Normal

一上来为什么distance spacing这么低，感觉已经算easy的标准了._.
00:23:491 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:29:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:35:222 (1) - 这里开始又突然0.4的间距了
01:18:798 (3) - 1 grid left


挺有意思的图，不过Normal还是要认真对待下。不建议normal里面使用两种相差很大的distance spacing，你用到的大致是0.4和0.8，而且是在slider速度相同的前提下。慢速slider带来的距离缩减比较容易接受。(0.5x的话0.4也会变成0.8 xD，总之还是保持了distance spacing一致)
我已经后悔从不打新手难度造成的恶果了 改成基地哥的难度了

star

Sprosive wrote:

diff name was joking.

4 stars LOL
okay whatever.

LunaticSHIKI wrote:

normal
00:21:815 (1) - evil jump? no
00:25:502 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:446 (5) - why not stack as 01:12:261 (1,2,3,4) - ? >DeeN newcombo @ 01:15:446 (1) -
01:54:329 (1,2,3,4) these sliders timing are same with 01:12:261 (1,2,3,4) but u put them in a diffrent way(not stacked)
it's better to keep them in a same layout(all stacked or standard DS) no