Thanks Broo )mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi Gordon! It looks like you did quite a lot of changes in this set, so I'll remod it c:. As per your request in my queue!
[tutuhara's Hard]- The main problem in this difficulty is the spacing, especially in the kiai section. I tried to mention all of them to make it better in this aspect. In addition I see you have a mod you've not answered yet, make sure to complete it so I can check this once again (because I don't understand a single word of russian ). Even so, I think this difficulty have improved quite a lot after a year.
- 00:08:387 (4,1) - vs. 00:10:213 (4,1) - I have to say you should reconsider these patterns, in my opinion the jump in the second pattern should be higher than the one you used in the first one because in the first only vocals are acting and in the second are acting vocals + bells sound in the instrumental. Even so, I think both patterns deserved a little spacing increase, but makes more sense if you do that as I told you. - remap
- 00:15:169 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Linear and square patterns, this reminds me ooooold maps . If you rotate a bit this pattern (maybe 20 clockwise degrees or something like that) you can make this pattern more enjoyable visually. Btw, you can keep a little jump between 00:18:039 (4,5) - because the music represent that. - remap ) oWo Thansk
- 00:24:039 (2,1) - The jump between these objects feel excessive, you decided to do that for symetry and it's not the best way. Try other pattern instead, to reduce that, maybe replacing the objects position between 00:24:300 (1,2) - - fixed
- 00:27:170 (4,1) - Looking to your patterns, you can increase the spacing between these objects to emphasize vocals/bells. - yess ! ) Thanks
- 00:28:734 (3,1) - And the spacing between these is excessive too, symetry stuff once again. Try reducing it, I'm sure you can represent the song much better. - ok
- 00:34:995 (1,1) - After the constant spacing increases that you had in the chorus, these objects feel so close, try increasing them a bit more please. In addition, I don't think the New combo in 00:34:995 (1) - is really necessary, you didn't do so in 00:18:300 (5) - for example. Would you mind removing it? - fixed
- 00:38:126 (1,2) - Use the distance snap between these objects, the music goes in a same pitch as 00:02:648 (1,2) - and I think this way is more correct.
-really )) Thaksu
That's all!
I think that some stuff can be improved here but I would like to give you a chance because those things can be corrected with mods. My main problem in this set are those spacing in Hard, the density thing in Normal and the monotonus 1/1 in Easy.
You can contact me again after receiving some more mods (2~3).
Till then, Good luck!
PD: If you have a metadata source I'd like to see it somewhere.
In addition I see you have a mod you've not answered yet, make sure to complete it so I can check this once againim answer he mod - remap all kiai time )
and Good luck u )
Gordon - code
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