I don't really think this map is ready for rank...
I really hope this can be improbed a bit.
[Descendant]
- You have used a lot of variation of rhythms for intro. These include 1/1, 1/2 sliders, 1/1,1/2 reverse sliders and 2 1/2 circles. However the music is kinda similar for the whole intro.
00:01:811 (3,4) - this, for example, idk why you use 1/1 slider plus a circle to emphasise 00:02:287 (4) - instead of 00:02:128 - ,which has a louder drum beat. Kinda weird 00:01:176 (1,2,3,4) - not consistent when the music is basically 1/2 drum spam.
00:05:938 (1,2) - this is even worse cuz i dont think music is intense enough for you to use 2 circles instead of a slider. Music doesn't change.
00:12:922 (3) - weird 1/1 reverse slider here, what's your intension? You never used this pattern when music is similar, and i think you ignored some red tick sounds that you mapped before.
00:14:192 (2,3,4,5) - i feel like you are creating a kind of rhythm in your mind...00:14:192 (2,4) - totally inconsistent with other parts. Even in your hitsound the downbeats are on white ticks, so idk why you do this here.
00:18:001 (3) - same here, i think 2 sliders will be more appropriate - 00:28:954 (1,2) - blanket
- 00:31:970 (4,6,3) - 00:33:557 (5,2) - overlaps here seem really random, id prefer clean them up a bit
- 00:40:224 (1,2,3,4) - why is ds increasing so much here? 00:40:541 (3,4) - too far away, music isn't intense.
- 00:49:112 (1,3) - overlap feels messy
- 00:51:335 (2) - should be 2 circles. Unlike 00:43:716 (2) - 00:46:255 (2) - 00:48:795 (2) - , 00:51:493 - has a downbeat so should be mapped imo.
- 00:58:478 (4) - NC
- 01:01:732 - shouldn't slider end here? Having 80% volume 01:01:493 - is really too loud.
- Slider tick rate 2 is unnecessary imo ,for sliders such as 01:00:541 (1) - the ticks are too loud.
- 01:09:906 (2,3) - keep some symmetry?
- 01:13:874 (1,2,3,4) - i dont get why you suddenly choose 4 circles instead of 2 sliders here. There's no change in music and 01:14:033 (2,4) - don't deserve such emphasis
- 01:16:414 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
- 01:26:097 (2,4,6) - dont think there should be circles here, the music here is too weak compared to 01:25:938 (1,3,5) -
- 01:26:811 - this should be mapped but you ignored..
- 01:28:636 - etc. why put this as reverse? Clearly you are not following drums so this is downbeat.
- 01:30:858 (4) - use a slider is better. Not good to keep it empty.
- 01:31:970 (3,4) - should be smaller ds
- 01:37:049 (2,3,4,5) - 3 and 5 isnt that clear, 1.0x ds stream seems overdone. You could try 2 1/4 sliders instead.
- Not going to mention similar places throughout this section.
- 01:42:922 (4,2,1) - kinda messy overlaps
- 01:48:478 - why empty here..
- 01:49:747 - 01:49:827 - same,should map a 1/4 slider here
- 02:16:096 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - should be grouped in 3s so 02:16:096 (1,2,1) - 02:17:048 (2,1,2,3) - and you should delete 02:17:524 (2) -
- 02:21:175 (3,2) - can probably stack them
- 02:32:286 - downbeat here, why mapped as slider end?
- 02:35:143 (1,2) - sudden change from 1/6 reverse to 2 sliders, very inconsistent and confusing.
- 02:37:048 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - same as above
- 02:52:683 - why ignore the drum?
- 02:58:477 (3,4,5) - aesthetics.
- 04:11:493 (1) - might use a bigger sv, and 04:11:731 - 04:12:048 - there are 1/4 beats here.
- 04:23:953 - not sure why it's 1/4
- 04:52:603 - etc should be emphasised rather than mapped as slider end..
- 04:52:206 (3) - 04:54:111 (3,5) - etc i think they are ghost notes.
- 04:54:111 (3,5) - aesthetics.
- 05:43:397 (3,1) - ds feels too small
- 05:43:080 (1,1) - overlap is a bit messy
- 06:00:699 (1) - 1/8d
- 06:01:016 (2) - use a 1/4 slider instead? drum 06:01:096 -
80% is kinda too loud imo so maybe reduce some volumes. Also its better to silence some slider ends on blue tick.
I didné mention everything, sometimes there are similar problems.
I really hope this can be improbed a bit.