Hihi Rave. I really like this song and the beatmap looks really cool but i would like to point out some things.
[Hopes and Wishes]
General:
It seems that some hitsounds have a delay of more than 5ms. Let me point out:
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So, while Audacity shows a straight line, the actual sound get's played after 5ms which gives still a delay while playing. I have fixed it for you. Get the fixed hitsounds here:
clickI noticed that the Keysounds seem pretty quiet to me.. especially the Piano sounds.. you know. I mean i support always when people add these to their beatmaps, i do that too when i have a chance.. but they should be at least audible. I have checked it with 50/50/50 volume on the default skin and they seem really quiet to me.. maybe you should raise the volume a bit?
Pattern:
00:23:970 - Are you really sure you want to keep this hihat unmapped? It's pretty loud and it feels like there is something missing :/
00:34:657 (34657|3,34845|2) - Aaaaaa please please jack these pattern. You have two piano notes here with the exact same pitch. It would play really cool!
00:38:220 (38220|2,38407|1) - Since you followed with almost all your LNs here the vocals i have to assume you do it here too.. and then they are wrong snapped. They play way to early.
00:42:532 (42532|0) - And this LN is then too long. It should end at 00:42:720 - (I simplified it to not let it end on a 1/8 beat what would be strange. It's fine to simplify it here).
01:13:667 (73667|3) - Move this note to 3. It feels a bit weird to have a jack here with 01:13:480 (73480|3) - while the piano pitch get's lower. Gives it a better feeling :3
01:50:417 - I feel a note is missing here. You have mapped the kicks here with jumps, like at 01:53:417 - .
01:54:542 - Same goes for here.
01:57:542 - And here again.
02:03:730 - Woa. Um.. the drums and your pattern get really really off here. Especially noticeable at 02:03:730 (123730|3,123730|2,123823|1,123823|0,123917|2,123917|3) - , when i move them down for 1/12 beat it sounds way more accurate. Probably you need to add some timing points like you did at 02:36:611 - to snap them correctly. But you def. need to fix stuff here because the notes play way too late.
02:04:480 (124480|0,124480|2,124480|3,124480|0,124480|2) - These notes are too late too. The sound is almost ended and then the notes get played.
02:04:855 (124855|1,124855|0,125042|2,125042|1) - These two seem a bit too early too.
A bit weird because later the stuff seems to get correctly snapped. Blame the Artist for playing it off :v But.. uhh you should fix that!
03:09:917 - Again a missing note for kick.
03:17:511 (197511|2,197605|1) - CTRL+H here to create a jack with 03:17:792 (197792|2,197980|2) - for the Piano. It's the same you did at 01:07:105 - and it plays really cool. You should keep up with that.
03:23:605 (203605|2,203792|1,203980|1) - You should try to do it here too. By arranging some previous notes you can indeed create a cool playing jack here!
03:25:855 - Missing note on 3 for Piano jack and kick.
03:32:792 - The Piano changes pitch here and you have here a pretty loud kick. You should map it with a double.
03:41:558 (221558|0,221605|3,221605|2) - These notes are
Wrong Snapped. By moving 03:41:558 (221558|0) - up to the next 1/12 line and then move 03:41:605 (221605|2,221605|3) - 1/12 up is it correct. I know it seems weird because you actually let start such stuff at a white line.. but try it. You will see that it is way more accurate.
And about 03:41:230 (221230|1) - i am not sure what it follows. If you want to follow the guitar, move it 1/12 down and add another note at 03:41:323 - . Would actually flow really cool with the stuff above i mentioned.
03:46:105 - Such a loud piano, you have even two piano samples in the storyboard.. and yet you map it with a single note. Don't you think it would be cooler with a double? Emphasize it! :3
04:40:105 - A little suggestion for better piano pitch, the marked notes represent the piano PR
Should you accept the suggestion, arrange some previous notes because you will have an ugly anchor on 5.
Oh, and then move 04:41:792 (281792|0) - two to right and 04:42:167 (282167|2) - one to right!
05:01:144 (301144|3,301148|1) - OH NO.
Remaining looks cool. Hope the stuff can get fixed for a quick re-qualify. I really like this song