Thanks a lot for mod!JUDYDANNY wrote:
Hello, and sorry to late... np, i delayed the same time :<
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[Timing][Kantan]
01:23:089 - ~ change to 3/4 its not common. My bad, fixed
- 00:06:661 - not kat...? to follow the bass up-down-up-down... like 00:03:090 (1,2,1) - . Yeah, changed
- 00:35:947 - + 00:37:197 - how about?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9385949 - to make a consistent with 00:24:518 (16,17,18) - and 00:30:232 (2,3,4) - ? It needs to consistency because of the similar flows with instrumental. Yeah, I added a kat here 00:37:732 (14) - for more consistency
- 00:38:447 - try add don? to linked with 00:32:375 (5,6,7) - . Its more fun with plays imo. lol Looks good, added
- 00:46:661 - , 00:52:375 - add , too lower dense than intro. Added
- 00:57:911 - add kat, too airly. Added
- 01:09:875 - ,add don? it seems very lonely... Added
- 01:15:589 - same reason, add don? I added kat and changed this 01:15:946 (8) - to don for counterpart with 01:09:875 (7,8) -
01:24:518 - move to 1/1 left ,it seems to not well followed the waltz. I added note to follow the vocal, I guess it's fine now (forgot the before pattern lol)
[Futsuu][Muzukashii]
- 00:08:447 - move to 1/1 left? to make a consistent with rhythm. Moved
- 00:36:482 - move to 00:35:589 - and change to kat? 2-2 seems to be surprised. Its better to make a consistent with 00:41:304 - than current. I removed that note, feels weird if 00:35:589 - have note because i'm following the vocal.
- 00:38:268 - add don? similar as Kantan. Added
- 00:47:018 - , 00:52:732 - add kat? similar as Kantan. Added
- 01:05:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not use 1/1+1/2 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474628 ...?
It seems not well flow as Current Futsuu imo. I think you're right, it feels a bit hard for a Futsuu- 01:10:768 - add note? too airly imo. Added
- 01:11:661 - ~~~ same. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474630 Changed
- ,01:16:482 - same, add note? Added
hmm....01:19:518 - change to kat(*-2), 01:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - change to ddkk(*-1), 01:21:661 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - change to ddd-kkk(*-3?All applied
*-101:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - d-d-k-k seems not well followed with chorus. d-k-d-k seems much better.
*-2to avoid the same flow with 01:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - .
*-3plays better imo like Kantan coloring.
01:24:518 - move to 1/1 left, similar as Kantan. Moved[Oni]
- 00:03:625 - move to 00:04:875 - ? seems better to connect and use 1/1 plet. I wanna keep for a better gap with Oni following the vocal
- 00:15:768 - remove, to make a consistent with 00:49:518 (21,22,23,24) - Removed
- 00:38:268 - add don, 00:38:625 - add kat? like futusu,kantan suggestions. Added
[Inner Oni]
- 00:26:482 (70,71) - consider to remove the greenline and 00:27:018 - change to x0.87 (1→0.87→0.75). It's early to deceleration. Really nice, changed
- Comapring with 00:44:518 - ~~ and 00:50:232 - ~~, its too far dense. Should add more from 00:50:232. I emphasizes the vocal, this 00:50:232 - is less dense than 00:44:518 - imo, but I added some notes 1/2
- 01:21:482 - seems to good to me to add kat for climax. Added
- 01:18:982 - consider to change to kat, to make a gap colors with 01:20:411 - . it plays and sounds better. Changed
Call me when you checked them(¦3[___] I need see some thing about spread and thumbnail
- 00:12:197 - change to don, 00:14:339 - and 00:18:625 - change to kat? - to emphasized for piano.
- 00:12:464 (16,17) - dk, 00:18:804 (62,63,64) - ddk?
- - bored dkddk, its not clear dkddk on 00:14:518 (31,32,33,34,35) - .
- 00:18:804 - ~~ Its different from usual flow, it seems to use normal way.- 00:26:482 (102,103) - same as Oni. should remove green and 00:27:018 - change to x0.87. Fixed
- 00:38:268 (54,55,56,57) - kdk-k seems better with plays imo lol. Changed the patterm
- 00:55:054 - change to k? seems better to make a different 00:55:054 (11,12) - k-d. Nice, changed
- 01:18:982 - consider to change to kat, same as Oni. Oke
Beatmap updated~