Hello, and sorry to late...
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[Timing]
[Futsuu]
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[Timing]
01:23:089 - ~ change to 3/4 its not common.
- 00:06:661 - not kat...? to follow the bass up-down-up-down... like 00:03:090 (1,2,1) - .
- 00:35:947 - + 00:37:197 - how about?https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9385949 - to make a consistent with 00:24:518 (16,17,18) - and 00:30:232 (2,3,4) - ? It needs to consistency because of the similar flows with instrumental.
- 00:38:447 - try add don? to linked with 00:32:375 (5,6,7) - . Its more fun with plays imo. lol
- 00:46:661 - , 00:52:375 - add , too lower dense than intro.
- 00:57:911 - add kat, too airly.
- 01:09:875 - ,add don? it seems very lonely...
- 01:15:589 - same reason, add don?
01:24:518 - move to 1/1 left ,it seems to not well followed the waltz.
[Futsuu]
- 00:08:447 - move to 1/1 left? to make a consistent with rhythm.
- 00:36:482 - move to 00:35:589 - and change to kat? 2-2 seems to be surprised. Its better to make a consistent with 00:41:304 - than current.
- 00:38:268 - add don? similar as Kantan.
- 00:47:018 - , 00:52:732 - add kat? similar as Kantan.
- 01:05:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not use 1/1+1/2 like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474628 ...?
It seems not well flow as Current Futsuu imo. - 01:10:768 - add note? too airly imo.
- 01:11:661 - ~~~ same. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9474630
- ,01:16:482 - same, add note?
hmm....01:19:518 - change to kat(*-2), 01:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - change to ddkk(*-1), 01:21:661 (27,28,29,30,31,32) - change to ddd-kkk(*-3?
*-101:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - d-d-k-k seems not well followed with chorus. d-k-d-k seems much better.
*-2to avoid the same flow with 01:20:232 (23,24,25,26) - .
*-3plays better imo like Kantan coloring.
- 00:03:625 - move to 00:04:875 - ? seems better to connect and use 1/1 plet.
- 00:15:768 - remove, to make a consistent with 00:49:518 (21,22,23,24) -
- 00:38:268 - add don, 00:38:625 - add kat? like futusu,kantan suggestions.
- 00:26:482 (70,71) - consider to remove the greenline and 00:27:018 - change to x0.87 (1→0.87→0.75). It's early to deceleration.
- Comapring with 00:44:518 - ~~ and 00:50:232 - ~~, its too far dense. Should add more from 00:50:232.
- 01:21:482 - seems to good to me to add kat for climax.
- 01:18:982 - consider to change to kat, to make a gap colors with 01:20:411 - . it plays and sounds better.
- 00:12:197 - change to don, 00:14:339 - and 00:18:625 - change to kat? - to emphasized for piano.
- 00:12:464 (16,17) - dk, 00:18:804 (62,63,64) - ddk?
- - bored dkddk, its not clear dkddk on 00:14:518 (31,32,33,34,35) - .
- 00:18:804 - ~~ Its different from usual flow, it seems to use normal way.
- - bored dkddk, its not clear dkddk on 00:14:518 (31,32,33,34,35) - .
- 00:26:482 (102,103) - same as Oni. should remove green and 00:27:018 - change to x0.87.
- 00:38:268 (54,55,56,57) - kdk-k seems better with plays imo lol.
- 00:55:054 - change to k? seems better to make a different 00:55:054 (11,12) - k-d.
- 01:18:982 - consider to change to kat, same as Oni.