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01:04:027 (2,3,4) - could space this a bit more, atm it's not on par with the rest of the patterns like 01:06:489 (2,3,4) -
ok01:08:797 - in this section you are clearly mapping the guitar but, you decide to leave this 01:10:335 - guitar beat unclickable which makes it awkward, you could try 1/4 repeats here 01:10:027 - and here 01:10:335 - . 01:10:643 (2) - this is good tho!
i hear the guitar being played with one stroke, so hence one slider, though i did add the red anchors there on purpose to try to also emphasize the rift in the middle of it
01:50:950 (2,4) - you should 1/4 sliders instead. the white and red ticks are a lot more intense than the blue ticks because of the vocals. o wait you did it here 01:55:873 (2,3) - nice. but oh wait you didn't do it here 02:00:797 (2,3,4,5) - . uhh but yea you should look into this inconsitency issue, i highly recommend those 1/4 sliders instead
meant to alternate because the kick sliders on the the lyrics are purposely there as its way louder than the other, changed the 4th part to keep consistency with the alternation between streams and kicksliders02:13:950 (4,1) - this should have more spacing than this 02:14:258 (4,1) - kinda like this 02:14:566 (4,1) -
ctrl gd the kicksliders02:17:412 (5) - pitch changes, sharp turn tbh
yea02:18:335 (2,1) - the spacing between the slider and the circle is too small now. what happened to this 00:42:335 (2,1) - ? : /
fixed02:47:258 (1) - yes i know you're following vocals but it really isn't good imo. you can do like 02:47:258 - 1/2 slider here, triple here 02:47:566 - then
02:47:720 - 1/1 slider here. feels much better to play while still following vocals
fixed said above04:11:258 - the drums pick up here and the rhythm changes, notice how there are kicks on every 1/2 white beat compared to the previous part, should be mapped differently, with higher density and and less reverse sliders
04:18:335 (1) - cool slider but you shouldn't do that, that's not what the song is doing, you really should map it with hitcircles and sliders as the climax of the section. (it's even a kiai section but it's a slider!!!!!) even if you're following the vocals on that slider then these 04:15:873 (1,1,1,1) - should have been 1/2 sliders too
remapped entire section04:55:873 (2) - reverse and sliderend should be clickable, it's the most intense part of the song. it's mapped exactly like it 5 seconds later 05:00:797 (1,2,3) - which fits better
yea
zukinathan
04:10:950 - I feel like you used too many repeats for this section.. it's more upbeat than the previous section of the song but you mapped it in a way that's rhythmically less dense
yea remapped to remove like every single repeatsquirrelpascal
• 00:14:851 (3) - 00:15:851 (3) - dont you usually use some sort of spacing gimmick here? maybe you can ctrl+g 00:14:851 (3,4) - or add something
changed• 01:11:489 (4,1) - 01:11:797 (4,1) - this is a pretty mean angle for a stream jump.. I know thats like the theme of this map but it should still play pretty fluently. With that being said i would suggest moving these more to the left and upwards so that they aren't as much of a pain in the ass to hit
https://i.imgur.com/AelXjyf.png (i see that you might run out of room here, but i think considering this is more important)
wot the fuc nop its hard either way
• 01:14:566 (4,1) - Same here, pretty sharp change in direction. Maube move 01:14:643 (1,2,3,4) - upward
yea moved it a bit upwards cus admittingly i actually have never even fcd this pattern before so it needs a slight nerf• 02:58:873 (4) - This really isnt a strong note compared to most triples. Delete?
changed in previous mod• 04:16:950 (4) - Would suggest moving this a bit down and to the left, or increasing the spacing at 04:16:950 (4,1) - A small jump like this in the midst of all these big jumps feels offputting
oh yea didnt see that fixewd• 04:21:027 (4,1) - 04:21:334 (4,1) - consider decreasing the spacing here. the players are going to keep their cursor pretty still because these streams aren't spaced much, so it will feel like a quick 1/4 jump. Plus, nothing else but drums are playing in this part, and the notes youre jumping to 04:21:104 (1) - 04:21:412 (1) - arent as strong either cuz theyre not on a snare lol. picture
what the fuck
•05:00:027 (3,4) - This is like the only time in the map that you dont use a kickslider here? Would suggest adding one
fixed