Hello, m4m
[General]
I'm a little bit confused about diffnames. You have two diffs with similar names, one of them is insane/another diff (4.9*), and second is extra (5.73*), so I guess some people will be unable to recognize it's difficulty lvl. What about renaming last diff in "Fairy of Hell", since it's character's title and sahuang's diff in Extra Stage?
[Extra Stage]
00:18:589 (1,2) - normie nc, swap it D:
00:43:327 (8,9,10,11,12) - ugh, I don't really like how it looks, try to make straight stream here?
01:28:955 (1) - this is only one red-anchor slider in this combo, try to make it a little bit curved?
01:51:887 (3,4,5,6,7) - this curve is a bit sudden Try to make it smoother?
01:55:186 - you skipped drums here :c
02:06:023 (3) - make it curved so it will looks cool with other two sliders in this combo?
02:14:033 (2) - these two sounds are strong enough, try to replace this slider with two notes?
03:05:080 (4,5) - make it with similar curve, please .o.
03:15:761 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - satorare stream???
03:23:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - d-don't skip guitar solo, b-baka
03:31:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - wow, this sream is cool. but it looks out of place in this curved stream part
03:48:431 (1) - normie nc [2], can you removed it, please, I can't see any reason to leave it here
[sahuang]
00:15:055 (2,3) - there is no visual difference between this 1/4 pattern and this 00:15:761 (5,6) - 1/2 double, try to make it more clear for players?
00:34:217 - I would like to have a note here
00:37:751 (3,4) - replace it with a slider because sound on 4 is not strong enough?
00:59:583 (2,1) - swap nc?
02:14:033 (2) - same like in Jonathan's diff - I would like to replace it with two circles
02:16:389 (1,1) - overlap with slider's reverse arrow looks unclean
03:43:405 (1) - this sound is not so strong, but you make a huge jump here, try to put it closer to previous sliders? Smth like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/10130374
05:04:137 - will be better to end spinner here?
[Lunatic]
00:14:819 (1,2,3) - I wish you have slimilar spacing between slider and note here and 00:16:076 (1,2,3)
00:38:379 (3) - make it less curved so it will looks well with 00:37:751 (3)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10130524
02:00:369 (1) - wtf you copied part from last diff???
That's it
[General]
I'm a little bit confused about diffnames. You have two diffs with similar names, one of them is insane/another diff (4.9*), and second is extra (5.73*), so I guess some people will be unable to recognize it's difficulty lvl. What about renaming last diff in "Fairy of Hell", since it's character's title and sahuang's diff in Extra Stage?
[Extra Stage]
00:18:589 (1,2) - normie nc, swap it D:
00:43:327 (8,9,10,11,12) - ugh, I don't really like how it looks, try to make straight stream here?
01:28:955 (1) - this is only one red-anchor slider in this combo, try to make it a little bit curved?
01:51:887 (3,4,5,6,7) - this curve is a bit sudden Try to make it smoother?
01:55:186 - you skipped drums here :c
02:06:023 (3) - make it curved so it will looks cool with other two sliders in this combo?
02:14:033 (2) - these two sounds are strong enough, try to replace this slider with two notes?
03:05:080 (4,5) - make it with similar curve, please .o.
03:15:761 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - satorare stream???
03:23:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - d-don't skip guitar solo, b-baka
03:31:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - wow, this sream is cool. but it looks out of place in this curved stream part
03:48:431 (1) - normie nc [2], can you removed it, please, I can't see any reason to leave it here
[sahuang]
00:15:055 (2,3) - there is no visual difference between this 1/4 pattern and this 00:15:761 (5,6) - 1/2 double, try to make it more clear for players?
00:34:217 - I would like to have a note here
00:37:751 (3,4) - replace it with a slider because sound on 4 is not strong enough?
00:59:583 (2,1) - swap nc?
02:14:033 (2) - same like in Jonathan's diff - I would like to replace it with two circles
02:16:389 (1,1) - overlap with slider's reverse arrow looks unclean
03:43:405 (1) - this sound is not so strong, but you make a huge jump here, try to put it closer to previous sliders? Smth like this osu.ppy.sh/ss/10130374
05:04:137 - will be better to end spinner here?
[Lunatic]
00:14:819 (1,2,3) - I wish you have slimilar spacing between slider and note here and 00:16:076 (1,2,3)
00:38:379 (3) - make it less curved so it will looks well with 00:37:751 (3)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10130524
02:00:369 (1) - wtf you copied part from last diff???
That's it