Hello, sorry for being late.
[Inner Oni (i guess)]
[Nepuri's Oni]
[Muzukashii]
[Inner Oni (i guess)]
- 00:48:314 - It'd be better if you keep it simple by starting with kkdd 1/4 instead, since there is no 1/6 that supporting it.
- 01:23:503 - Removing this finisher might be a good idea, since there isn't a sound like the first one that actually emphasizes the guitar strum and the crash cymbal.
- 01:35:503 ~ 01:36:151 - To match the structure with the part that starts from 01:29:665 - this spot, I suggest following the drum attack instead of emphasizing the keyboard.
- 02:08:584 ~ 02:11:179 -
Between this section, I suggest something like this to edit the kiai: apparently it's acceptable if it makes sense so, here is the link of the suggestion. (This might be general depending on your thought.)nope
[Nepuri's Oni]
- 00:13:449 - Put a break there to make it consistent with 00:18:638 - this.
- 00:35:989 - I think your intention is to emphasize the keyboard that's going on for the beat but filling it with a note (preferrably don) will keep the structure stable as in 1/2 1/4 for the entire 3 stanza and emphasizing the strong sounds on 4th which are at 00:37:773 - this spot.
- 00:41:179 - Same for this one with above.
- 01:09:557 - I suggest KAT on this one to make the same pitches emphasized with same hitsounds, referring to 01:08:908 - this one.
[Muzukashii]
- 00:17:016 - 00:17:665 - Those finishers are over-emphasize for me.
- Big issue: 00:07:935 ~ 01:09:557 - Between those spots there aren't neither 3/2 breaks nor 2/1, which is longer than a minute. Try adding some breaks to fix this diff. This exists after the strong part enters again, so... First this issue needs to be adressed, then I'll mod the diff.
- Same finisher issue I've mentioned on Muzukashii.
- 00:53:341 - Starting from here, due to musical pitch I recommend k d kdkkd on the upcoming patterns.
- 00:59:179 - Finisher seems a bit inconsistent with the rest of the kiai.
- 01:04:692 - You can add a note here since you have a note right before the kiai at 00:49:124 -
- 01:17:989 - Add a finisher to make the finishers consistent throughout the section.
- 01:33:233 - Add a note here to keep the structure consistent.
- 01:37:773 - You can make this one kat to emphasize the snare on it.
- 01:41:341 (296,297) - Swap these by keeping the finisher on the 1st one and removing on the 2nd one to follow drums. Adjust the patterns afterwards by that idea.
- 01:50:422 - k d kdkkd here too.
- 02:11:179 - This section feels weird, while you have 1/1 notes on Muzukashii you only have a D k on this diff and the kat doesn't really emphasize anything.
My recommendation would be putting 2/1 snapped dons around the section.