- Frontier - wrote:
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[Cordi's Normal]Thanks for the feedback!
- As a current Ranking Criteria states, the lowest difficult difficulty must not be above 2 stars!! I thought that only applied to mania. Anyways sacrificed the circles at 01:08:232 (3,4) - into a slider. Also replaced the slider 01:03:572 (3) - with a circle to leave some breathing room, since this section continues too long. Now it sits at 2.00.
- 00:39:334 (4) - The lump thingy is very unrecommended because the slider path doesn't look clear enough for newbie players to understand, that could cause newbies players a confuse. Reminder this is the lowest difficulty and it should be beginner-friendly difficulty. This problem could cause newbie players a confuse. It'd be better to change the slider to plain circle slider for newbie players to understand. right, made it more straight
- 00:40:854 to 00:45:514 - It is unjustified to leave the empty space here without a blank. Players could failed at this part if the players' health point is really low. Because leaving this part a blank, the health point could decrease. If the situation happened, players' health bar will slowly decrease and finally died. And there is no reason to leave this as a blank anyway so please add a break here. added a break
- 01:05:902 (4) - In my perspective it will be better to flip this slider vertically and horizontally. (as known as ctrl+j and ctrl+h) Using the same slider shape as the previous slider looks sloppy and monotonous. But flipping this slider vertically and horizontally could make the slider have the variation and the flow here will look much smoother. right
- 01:10:562 (4,2) - So try not to make the slider tail 01:10:562 (4) - overlaps with the slider tail 01:11:436 (2) -. It looks anticlimactic. okay
- 02:09:979 (1) - Making an unjustified jump in lower difficulties is strongly unacceptable here. Since it is a lowest difficulty in the mapset, the difficulty should be beginner-friendly difficulty for newbie players to play with, but this unjustified jump could be a strong unfair playing challenge for newbie players!!(just kidding lol. I know you are just forgot to reverse the slider back.) Or maybe, I did it intentionally to bait modders..
- 02:13:474 (1) - Players could rarely see the slider head because the slider tail 02:12:309 (1) - is perfectly overlapping the slider head, causing an unfair reading challenge for newbie players. I'd recommend to reverse this slider so it will be easier for players to see. done
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