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Ayana Taketatsu - Hey! Calorie Queen [Taiko]

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JarHed
Im Here from my Mod Queue!


Difficulties Requested: Futsuu,Muzukashii

Futsuu:

-00:25:215 (40) - I feel this note should be changed to a Kat seems to be a higher sound here. (Flows Better)

This Futsuu is really near perfection I'm getting picky here! Just a general suggestion, You seem to have a lot of finishers in places where i really don't reckon you need them, however i know this is a mapping style and i don't seem to dislike it! It suits the song, however i know there will be people who don't necessarily favor that too much! However no more changes just be aware of that! Great Job!

Muzukashii:

- 00:28:292 (81) - I think this note can be changed to a Kat Higher pitched sound that's noticeable here and should be mapped!

One again, Really not anything to change. All of the notes fit really well besides the one i changed, The only thing i noticed really with the Muzukashii is you seem to switch of from mapping the rhythm in the song and the vocals going on. This isn't really an issue because you seemed to pull it off very well with this map. Good job to you on that, that's not to easy to do. Sorry i may not have provided to many changes i just think its good as is!

Recommendations for sound: I think you should lower the hit sound volume from 80% to 75% its not that big of a difference but i found it to be a slight tiny bit to loud. On the kiai section of your map you can increase it back to 80% since it adds a bit more energy to that section of the map!

One again great job! Hope this short mod helps at least a bit!

Good Luck With Ranking!!!
Topic Starter
Etsu
change all except muzu to kat not fit with the sound but you change to kat to the next note for the vowel is better imo, also i check once again on the finish of the futsuu, anyway thanks for the mod :)
Skylish
From rdmlish,

[General]

! There're some unsnapped objects in the difficulties. Please use 'resnap all notes' function in the 'Timing' list. Please do so in ALL difficulties.

For example, in Kantan, 00:07:139 (1) -

[Kantan]

> 00:10:600 - / 00:13:677 - / ... / I think the are the dominant and leading notes in the melody. They should not be missed. After adding them, the density is even more acceptable in terms of spread with Futsuu. This change is applicable to similar sections.

> 00:45:600 (52,53) - very clear cymbal crashes and strong vocal notes, not sure why you did not put Finishers on them. Maybe you can consider it a bit.

> 00:58:677 - very awkward and enforceful note is put, for trying to match the rhythm. It is not that effective since the main melody is on vocal part now, and this is what you are going to follow too. Shifting it to 00:58:869 - may be better.

> 01:10:985 - same issue as above, fix it on your own :D

[Futsuu]

> 00:25:023 - missed a note (don) here. It should be consistent to 00:26:561 - / 00:28:485 - .

> 00:27:715 - this note indeed matches the vocal, but it is put so awkardly. Imo a better representation could be made: put the focus on the instrumental part, shift the note to 00:27:908 - . It can still cover the long vocal note well.

> 00:37:331 - / 00:38:869 - where are the similar ornament notes?

> 00:47:715 - same case as above, this time, the comparison would be 00:44:638 -

> 00:47:138 - a Finisher is missed, check Kantan and Muzukashii for the same timing.

> 01:00:792 - you can put a note here (don) to continue the dense pattern from 00:58:677 (119,120,121,122,123) - . That sounds more natural

> 01:13:100 - similar as above, this time could be a kat to show some variations.

> 01:19:061 - k sounds better to show a greater impact with the upcoming DON

> 01:20:215 - adding a k here can fill the vocal note gap, and enhancing the density flow. 1/1 spamming from 01:17:908 - to 01:21:561 - is a bit boring for Futsuu level players.

[Muzukashii]

> 00:26:946 - a triplet is possible here

> 00:37:908 - with some notes before it, the cymbal crash could be expressed better by using a Finisher. If there are differences in the vocal or instrumental layers, displaying them with appropriate techniques is important to show your mapping sense.

> 01:07:523 - it is expected to have a note, by the previous pattern at 01:05:985 - . 01:05:600 (227,228,229) - k dk, so 01:07:138 - d kd is expected.

> 01:15:023 - this note comes out so awkwardly. Sometimes, emptiness is for emphasizing too. Remove 01:15:023 - to show the importance of vocal note at 01:14:831 -

> 01:19:061 - same as Futsuu, k?

[]

Some personal styles could be observed from Kantan, Futsuu, and Muzukashii. The experssion of mapping styles could be made practised more clearly and precisely.
Topic Starter
Etsu

Skylish wrote:

From rdmlish,

[General]

! There're some unsnapped objects in the difficulties. Please use 'resnap all notes' function in the 'Timing' list. Please do so in ALL difficulties.

For example, in Kantan, 00:07:139 (1) - //fixed all

[Kantan]

> 00:10:600 - / 00:13:677 - / ... / I think the are the dominant and leading notes in the melody. They should not be missed. After adding them, the density is even more acceptable in terms of spread with Futsuu. This change is applicable to similar sections. //you're right lately i learned about this

> 00:45:600 (52,53) - very clear cymbal crashes and strong vocal notes, not sure why you did not put Finishers on them. Maybe you can consider it a bit. //i think had forgotten finish so added

> 00:58:677 - very awkward and enforceful note is put, for trying to match the rhythm. It is not that effective since the main melody is on vocal part now, and this is what you are going to follow too. Shifting it to 00:58:869 - may be better. //always this part is difficult for me haha but i followed your suggestion and seems better but as it is a part of alert i put a note in 00:59:061 - combines more voice clear 1/2 and improves the spread of the next diff

> 01:10:985 - same issue as above, fix it on your own :D //fixed

[Futsuu]

> 00:25:023 - missed a note (don) here. It should be consistent to 00:26:561 - / 00:28:485 - . //oh true, added

> 00:27:715 - this note indeed matches the vocal, but it is put so awkardly. Imo a better representation could be made: put the focus on the instrumental part, shift the note to 00:27:908 - . It can still cover the long vocal note well. //i put a note in 00:27:523 - because i feel that i should map and with the suggestion seems to me that it combines better the voice and the instrument imo

> 00:37:331 - / 00:38:869 - where are the similar ornament notes? //yes

> 00:47:715 - same case as above, this time, the comparison would be 00:44:638 -

> 00:47:138 - a Finisher is missed, check Kantan and Muzukashii for the same timing. //oh my bad added

> 01:00:792 - you can put a note here (don) to continue the dense pattern from 00:58:677 (119,120,121,122,123) - . That sounds more natural //oh sure also did some changed

> 01:13:100 - similar as above, this time could be a kat to show some variations.

> 01:19:061 - k sounds better to show a greater impact with the upcoming DON //okay

> 01:20:215 - adding a k here can fill the vocal note gap, and enhancing the density flow. 1/1 spamming from 01:17:908 - to 01:21:561 - is a bit boring for Futsuu level players. //okay is better

[Muzukashii]

> 00:26:946 - a triplet is possible here //added roll is clear

> 00:37:908 - with some notes before it, the cymbal crash could be expressed better by using a Finisher. If there are differences in the vocal or instrumental layers, displaying them with appropriate techniques is important to show your mapping sense. //yes better muzu added finish

> 01:07:523 - it is expected to have a note, by the previous pattern at 01:05:985 - . 01:05:600 (227,228,229) - k dk, so 01:07:138 - d kd is expected. //okay

> 01:15:023 - this note comes out so awkwardly. Sometimes, emptiness is for emphasizing too. Remove 01:15:023 - to show the importance of vocal note at 01:14:831 - //feel better removed

> 01:19:061 - same as Futsuu, k? //yes

[]

Some personal styles could be observed from Kantan, Futsuu, and Muzukashii. The experssion of mapping styles could be made practised more clearly and precisely.
Thanks for the mod Skylish is great help also did selfmod i think it looks better now especially the spread. :)
Tyistiana
Ranked this, please. :3
Topic Starter
Etsu

Tyistiana wrote:

Ranked this, please. :3
Let's see will happen and thanks for another star :D
Ozu
.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
from m4m!

[ Futsuu ]

00:27:715 (53,54) - delete 00:27:908 - and 00:27:715 (53) - k? 00:27:715 (53) - sound is impact so for emphasize it imo.

00:40:408 (83) - d? have kick sound so little unmatched to me even vocal pitch is right.

01:02:138 (140,141) - ctrl g? 01:02:138 (140) - so high vocal pitch and also 01:02:523 (141) - have kick sound.
01:14:446 (14,15) - ^

01:08:485 (156) - k? kkk spinner so beautiful wonderful i like it im not hentai

01:20:023 (26,27,28,29) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9303452 ?

01:26:754 (41,42) - KK? more finish feel.

great Futsuu =v=b


[ Skylish's Oni ]

00:26:561 (5) - add circle? for fill the vocal sound and smooth play.

00:55:408 - no consistency with 00:56:177 - ? almost similar sound but different pattern. maybe put 00:55:408 - circle and some color change?

01:08:869 (10,11,12,13) - in fact i dunno why you put these in here with finisher =v=;;



[ Rew's Inner Oni ]

00:26:946 (134) - k? i think ddk is so much in this part. if changed, can prevent continued ddk and also fit pitch.

00:30:985 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - dkk d K or delete 00:31:177 (156) - . drum sound 'k(weak)kk d K' to me.

00:43:966 (232,233) - delete 00:43:966 - and 00:44:062 (233) - D?

00:44:254 (234,235,236) - kdk? only 00:44:254 (234,236) - has melody so make bridge with 00:44:350 (235) - d. also 00:44:446 (236) - k sound to me.

00:53:004 (291) - delete? drum end at 00:52:908 (290) - so for fit the song.

00:54:831 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - D K K D K D? for consistency between 00:54:831 (304,305) - and 00:55:600 (307,308) - .

00:57:331 (314,315,316,317,318) - kkkdd or dkkdd? here's drum sound is going lower so fit.

01:23:485 (495,496,497,498) - kkd k? vocal pitch but looks fine present's too to me.

01:25:985 - add k and 01:26:177 (513) - D? here has also sound.

01:26:561 (514,515) - remove finisher? for the emphasize of the last K. also have no crush sound.

little long but almost minor thing sorry ;w;


GL~~
rew0825

404 AccNotFound wrote:

.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
from m4m!

[ Rew's Inner Oni ]

00:26:946 (134) - k? i think ddk is so much in this part. if changed, can prevent continued ddk and also fit pitch. Change.

00:30:985 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - dkk d K or delete 00:31:177 (156) - . drum sound 'k(weak)kk d K' to me. Change at first.

00:43:966 (232,233) - delete 00:43:966 - and 00:44:062 (233) - D? Change.

00:44:254 (234,235,236) - kdk? only 00:44:254 (234,236) - has melody so make bridge with 00:44:350 (235) - d. also 00:44:446 (236) - k sound to me. Change.

00:53:004 (291) - delete? drum end at 00:52:908 (290) - so for fit the song. Change.

00:54:831 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - D K K D K D? for consistency between 00:54:831 (304,305) - and 00:55:600 (307,308) - . Change to D K D D K D

00:57:331 (314,315,316,317,318) - kkkdd or dkkdd? here's drum sound is going lower so fit. Change to kkkdd.

01:23:485 (495,496,497,498) - kkd k? vocal pitch but looks fine present's too to me. Change.

01:25:985 - add k and 01:26:177 (513) - D? here has also sound. Change.

01:26:561 (514,515) - remove finisher? for the emphasize of the last K. also have no crush sound. Remove at the fisrt.

little long but almost minor thing sorry ;w; No problem It's well for me.


GL~~
Thank you so much ;w;.

Rew's Inner Oni
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Topic Starter
Etsu

404 AccNotFound wrote:

.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp //np no hurry xD
from m4m!

[ Futsuu ]

00:27:715 (53,54) - delete 00:27:908 - and 00:27:715 (53) - k? 00:27:715 (53) - sound is impact so for emphasize it imo.//after thousands of attempts i stay with dk

00:40:408 (83) - d? have kick sound so little unmatched to me even vocal pitch is right.//kk to follow the vowel is fine for me

01:02:138 (140,141) - ctrl g? 01:02:138 (140) - so high vocal pitch and also 01:02:523 (141) - have kick sound.//ok
01:14:446 (14,15) - ^

01:08:485 (156) - k? kkk spinner so beautiful wonderful i like it im not hentai //change to ddk xD

01:20:023 (26,27,28,29) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9303452 ? //i like makes sense

01:26:754 (41,42) - KK? more finish feel. //i like it ends up varying in the last note

great Futsuu =v=b //ty -v-

GL~~
thaks for the mod :)

diff inner updated waiting Skylish.
Skylish

404 AccNotFound wrote:

.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
from m4m!

[ Skylish's Oni ]

00:26:561 (5) - add circle? for fill the vocal sound and smooth play.

> nope, wanna keep a clean structure until 00:31:754 -

00:55:408 - no consistency with 00:56:177 - ? almost similar sound but different pattern. maybe put 00:55:408 - circle and some color change?

> 00:56:177 - special emphasis for upcoming K K K D 00:56:369 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:55:408 - is empty due to clean mapping style.

01:08:869 (10,11,12,13) - in fact i dunno why you put these in here with finisher =v=;;

> 01:09:350 (13,15) - background strong fz melody, Finishers were placed to display them.



GL~~
Thanks for modding! No updated version.
Protonori
From my modding queue~

[Futsuu]
01:03:292 (142,143) - d k?
01:15:600 - Add k? It matches the structure from 01:03:100.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:638 (37) - Switch to d? It emphasizes the triple/pitch change. You did this at 00:08:485.

[Skylish's Oni]
00:09:158 (13) - Move to 00:08:965? The Muzu and Inner Oni use a triple here. This is a guest diff though, so it's fine if you don't want to.
00:12:235 (12) - ^
00:15:311 (12) - ^
00:12:908 (16) - d?

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:09:350 (31) - Delete? This note doesn't seem necessary.
00:12:427 (52) - ^
00:16:273 (82,83) - kd? The pitch is descending, so I think it fits.
00:31:177 (156) - k?

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! :)
Skylish

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Skylish's Oni]
00:09:158 (13) - Move to 00:08:965? The Muzu and Inner Oni use a triple here. This is a guest diff though, so it's fine if you don't want to.
00:12:235 (12) - ^
00:15:311 (12) - ^

> 00:09:061 - manage to create 'nnn n n n n' concrete pattern in presenting the melody clearly. No change since the current patterns fit.

00:12:908 (16) - d?

> pitch flow seems to go along with k d k k better at 00:12:523 - .

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! :)

> I am surprised too!
BN incoming soon (tm).
Topic Starter
Etsu

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Futsuu]
01:03:292 (142,143) - d k?
01:15:600 - Add k? It matches the structure from 01:03:100. //^ ye changed it looks better this structure

[Muzukashii]
00:14:638 (37) - Switch to d? It emphasizes the triple/pitch change. You did this at 00:08:485. //nice catch so change

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! :) //thanks, just now was thinking about searching in November since i have not had time these days. feel that they will reject me yet xd
thanks for mod and two star ^^
rew0825

Protonori wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:09:350 (31) - Delete? This note doesn't seem necessary. Remove
00:12:427 (52) - ^ Remove
00:16:273 (82,83) - kd? The pitch is descending, so I think it fits. The melody is high on first note of this so I think now is ok.
00:31:177 (156) - k? Change.

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! :) Waiting BN now :3
Thanks for mod :)

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Topic Starter
Etsu
Updated!
DeletedUser_9022173
hi from my queue. and sorry, I very late reply.

Kantan
00:10:023 - Delete. I think add a rest time here

00:13:340 - Same reason to 00:10:023

00:41:754 - d. because this vocal pitch is low on comparison 00:42:523 (49,50)

01:12:808 (5,6) - k d. This part is the same pattern as 00: 59: 446, and since it is patterned as "d k k d", I think that this should also be the same.


Futsuu
※I heard that it is necessary to make this degree of difficulty in 1/2 as a rule in principle. (Sorry if it was a mistake)
When it is set to 1/2, it is necessary to delete some notes.

00:52:042 - Move to 000:52:138

00:52:331 - delete

01:03:292 - k. This vocal pitch is high


Muzukashii
00:18:869 - if you like so, add a ddd here

00:31:177 - add a kkk. I think this rest time is long for bit

00:38:292 - add a d d. reason is same a 00:31:177

00:39:831 - same to 00:38:292

00:57:331 - ddd


I was very late mod. and good luck for rank :)
Topic Starter
Etsu

Hayate1129 wrote:

hi from my queue. and sorry, I very late reply. //do not worry and thanks for the assistance.

Kantan
00:10:023 - Delete. I think add a rest time here //okay

00:13:340 - Same reason to 00:10:023

00:41:754 - d. because this vocal pitch is low on comparison 00:42:523 (49,50) //changed

01:12:808 (5,6) - k d. This part is the same pattern as 00: 59: 446, and since it is patterned as "d k k d", I think that this should also be the same. //already


Futsuu
※I heard that it is necessary to make this degree of difficulty in 1/2 as a rule in principle. (Sorry if it was a mistake)
When it is set to 1/2, it is necessary to delete some notes. //you are right, although i think no problem diff normal, in katan it is obligatory but better i remove for space tho

00:52:042 - Move to 000:52:138

00:52:331 - delete

01:03:292 - k. This vocal pitch is high //okay


Muzukashii
00:18:869 - if you like so, add a ddd here //i leave it with double this helps me not repeat the finish and the sound is acceptable.

00:31:177 - add a kkk. I think this rest time is long for bit

00:38:292 - add a d d. reason is same a 00:31:177 //okay

00:39:831 - same to 00:38:292

00:57:331 - ddd //okay


I was very late mod. and good luck for rank :) //thanks ^^
Updated! thanks for the mod Hayate :) looking fo bn...
Volta
Hey!

[General]
  1. Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
    Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

    Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit
[Kantan]
  1. OD 3, you're babying new player too much imo.

  2. 00:08:292 - i think you can add d here to reflect the melody and make the kiai denser
  3. 00:18:677 - consider to create 4/1 break at the end of kiai by deleting this note.
  4. 00:30:985 - remove for same reason as above, and 00:30:600 - you can move this to 00:29:061 - (vocal based) or 00:29:831 - (drum based) but i prefer the first one.
  5. 00:43:677 - the rhythm might be too complex for new player, so i highly suggest to remove this note
    00:46:754 - same as ^
  6. 00:57:138 - consider to create a break here before 2nd kiai as well
  7. 01:08:100 - remove? feels weird and a break is nice before the spinner build the tension to next part.
  8. 01:12:908 (5,6) - maybe swap? the pitch is going down and for consistency with 01:00:600 (79,80) -
[Futsuu]
  1. OD 4

  2. 00:30:215 - maybe you forgot to put finisher here? it's the same as 00:17:908 -
  3. 01:00:985 - how about change to d and 01:02:138 (139,140) - swap these notes? it can fits the vocal pitch better imo
  4. 01:17:908 - changing this to k could emphasis the high pitched voice better
  5. 01:22:138 - consider to add k for consistency with 01:15:985 -
[Muzukashii]
  1. OD 4.5 or 5

  2. 00:20:792 - considering this session is relatively calm, i think the 1/2 chain is too long and better to remove this note
    00:21:754 - remove for 2/1 break. You also made longer rest in futsuu at this spot.
  3. 00:23:869 - remove for same reason as above point
    00:25:985 - ^
  4. 00:28:100 - can be removed as well
  5. 00:30:215 - give finisher?

  6. 00:34:061 - , 00:34:254 - , 00:34:638 - considering the difference in the break length with futsuu it would be much better to remove these notes.
  7. 00:38:292 - same as ^
  8. 00:41:561 - instead you can start building the density by adding d here
    00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - while you're at it, i think changing these to k-k-d-k-d could make it flows better
  9. 00:45:408 - removing this could emphasis the finisher at 00:45:600 - better imo. Spread becomes smoother as well

    The second kiai should be more dense and no need for many weird break length. It's pretty lenient compared with other parts in this diff and makes unbalanced spread. I didn't mention the reason because it's mostly easy to catch the instrument.
  10. 00:57:427 (1,2) - For preparation you can remove these notes for 2/1 break before the kiai rather than scattered around in the middle of the session.
  11. 01:00:215 - add d
  12. 01:02:331 - add d,
    01:03:196 - move to 01:03:388 -
    01:03:677 - change to d
  13. 01:04:446 - , 01:05:311 - can add d
  14. 01:12:523 - add k
  15. 01:14:638 - add k,
    01:15:215 - , 01:15:792 - add d
  16. 01:17:138 - add d
  17. 01:20:023 - move to 01:19:254 -
    01:20:985 - , 01:21:273 - add d
    01:21:369 - change to d
  18. 01:22:138 - add k
  19. 01:25:023 - add k
[Skylish's Oni]
  1. 00:27:715 (10,11,12) - kkd plays smoother tbh
  2. 00:40:023 (10,11,12) - ^
[Rew's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:47:716 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - maybe change to d-kdkkddk? it creates better flow imo
  2. 00:49:638 (270,271) - swap to reflect the snare at (271) better?
  3. 00:52:331 - remove finisher and 00:52:427 - add d feels more natural with the vocal and drum
  4. 00:53:196 - remove? no sound and i think it can emphasis the vocal better
  5. 00:58:100 - consider to remove, i think double fits better with the drum and emphasis the vocal in a way better
    01:04:254 - same as ^
    01:10:408 - same as ^
  6. 01:03:581 - add d? i think it's nice to make longer pattern in this part
  7. 01:15:888 - , 01:16:081 - add d?
  8. 01:17:811 - consider to remove, the vocal needs to be highlighted here imo
  9. 01:20:792 (1,2) - change to k-d? it's nice to reflect the high pitch in the first note
  10. 01:21:561 - change to k? same reason as ^
  11. 01:23:292 - , 01:23:388 - add d? feels empty since there is the drum playing there

Calorie Queen.
Skylish

Volta wrote:

Hey!

[General]
  1. Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
    Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

    Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit

> Agree that (TV size)


[Skylish's Oni]
  1. 00:27:715 (10,11,12) - kkd plays smoother tbh
  2. 00:40:023 (10,11,12) - ^
> Applied all

Calorie Queen.

@Etsu: Please help me fix them directly. Thank you!
rew0825

Volta wrote:

Hey!


[Rew's Inner Oni]
  1. 00:47:716 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - maybe change to d-kdkkddk? it creates better flow imo Change.
  2. 00:49:638 (270,271) - swap to reflect the snare at (271) better? Change.
  3. 00:52:331 - remove finisher and 00:52:427 - add d feels more natural with the vocal and drum Change.
  4. 00:53:196 - remove? no sound and i think it can emphasis the vocal better Change.
  5. 00:58:100 - consider to remove, i think double fits better with the drum and emphasis the vocal in a way better Change.
    01:04:254 - same as ^ Change.
    01:10:408 - same as ^ Change.
  6. 01:03:581 - add d? i think it's nice to make longer pattern in this part Change.
  7. 01:15:888 - , 01:16:081 - add d? Add on 01:15:888 -. at 01:16:081 - I unheard the melody hear so I not add it.
  8. 01:17:811 - consider to remove, the vocal needs to be highlighted here imo Change.
  9. 01:20:792 (1,2) - change to k-d? it's nice to reflect the high pitch in the first note Change.
  10. 01:21:561 - change to k? same reason as ^ Change.
  11. 01:23:292 - , 01:23:388 - add d? feels empty since there is the drum playing there Change to k.

Calorie Queen.
Thank you so much :)

Rew's Inner Oni
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Topic Starter
Etsu

Volta wrote:

Hey! Calorie Queen

[General]
  1. Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
    Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

    Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit //true there is no source that says that so fixed.


[Kantan]
  1. OD 3, you're babying new player too much imo. //changed

  2. 00:08:292 - i think you can add d here to reflect the melody and make the kiai denser //not think so, I feel good adding in 00:09:061 - is better imo. //yes changed
  3. 00:18:677 - consider to create 4/1 break at the end of kiai by deleting this note. //okay
  4. 00:30:985 - remove for same reason as above, and 00:30:600 - you can move this to 00:29:061 - (vocal based) or 00:29:831 - (drum based) but i prefer the first one. //remove for break 4/1 and change d to first.
  5. 00:43:677 - the rhythm might be too complex for new player, so i highly suggest to remove this note
    00:46:754 - same as ^ //yep
  6. 00:57:138 - consider to create a break here before 2nd kiai as well //okay remove
  7. 01:08:100 - remove? feels weird and a break is nice before the spinner build the tension to next part. //you're right
  8. 01:12:908 (5,6) - maybe swap? the pitch is going down and for consistency with 01:00:600 (79,80) - //okay
[Futsuu]
  1. OD 4

  2. 00:30:215 - maybe you forgot to put finisher here? it's the same as 00:17:908 - //it's not so strong it's kind of poor that sound compared to the previous imo.
  3. 01:00:985 - how about change to d and 01:02:138 (139,140) - swap these notes? it can fits the vocal pitch better imo //i like
  4. 01:17:908 - changing this to k could emphasis the high pitched voice better //changed
  5. 01:22:138 - consider to add k for consistency with 01:15:985 - //okay
[Muzukashii]
  1. OD 4.5 or 5

  2. 00:20:792 - considering this session is relatively calm, i think the 1/2 chain is too long and better to remove this note
    00:21:754 - remove for 2/1 break. You also made longer rest in futsuu at this spot. //thought it would be more playable but it's too much so I'll eliminate it better.
  3. 00:23:869 - remove for same reason as above point
    00:25:985 - ^ //removed
  4. 00:28:100 - can be removed as well //sure.
  5. 00:30:215 - give finisher? //it does not feel so strong imo

  6. 00:34:061 - , 00:34:254 - , 00:34:638 - considering the difference in the break length with futsuu it would be much better to remove these notes. //okay
  7. 00:38:292 - same as ^ //fixed
  8. 00:41:561 - instead you can start building the density by adding d here //it does not feel good but it would be in 00:41:946 - fit sound better imo. //now i like :3
    00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - while you're at it, i think changing these to k-k-d-k-d could make it flows better
  9. 00:45:408 - removing this could emphasis the finisher at 00:45:600 - better imo. Spread becomes smoother as well //yes

    The second kiai should be more dense and no need for many weird break length. It's pretty lenient compared with other parts in this diff and makes unbalanced spread. I didn't mention the reason because it's mostly easy to catch the instrument.
  10. 00:57:427 (1,2) - For preparation you can remove these notes for 2/1 break before the kiai rather than scattered around in the middle of the session. //you're right
  11. 01:00:215 - add d
  12. 01:02:331 - add d,
    01:03:196 - move to 01:03:388 -
    01:03:677 - change to d
  13. 01:04:446 - , 01:05:311 - can add d
  14. 01:12:523 - add k //I have followed the consistency better.
  15. 01:14:638 - add k,
    01:15:215 - , 01:15:792 - add d
  16. 01:17:138 - add d
  17. 01:20:023 - move to 01:19:254 -
    01:20:985 - , 01:21:273 - add d
    01:21:369 - change to d //the triple feels somewhat dense with the previous finish so I will not add these notes.
  18. 01:22:138 - add k
  19. 01:25:023 - add k
    //the rest is accepted.
Calorie Queen.
Thanks so much for the mod volta :)

Skylish wrote:


@Etsu: Please help me fix them directly. Thank you!
fixed!

Updated! all diff.
Edit: forget to mention that I made changes based on your mod :>
Volta
a quick recheck (no kd)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout.
  2. 01:11:177 - same as ^
call me back :3
Topic Starter
Etsu

Volta wrote:

a quick recheck (no kd)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout. //haha i changed it because it not feel good but i will stay with your suggestion is feel better more thanks.
  2. 01:11:177 - same as ^
call me back :3
Updated!
Volta
Mapset looks sweet. Good luck.

Bubbled~
Topic Starter
Etsu

Volta wrote:

Mapset looks sweet. Good luck.

Bubbled~
Thank you volta ^^
Topic Starter
Etsu
pop bubble for me did some change note to muzu, this week i will be selfmod likewise with other diff.
Edit: K-F-M Updated!
Aisha
aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:138 (9) - esta nota se siente fuera de lugar, la movería a 00:12:908 - y quedaría bastante mejor
  2. 00:16:369 (16) - te parece cambiarlo por spinner? el sonido es más largo que streamy
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:369 (28) - refer to K
  2. 00:29:061 (57) - podrías moverla a 00:30:023 - , se siente muy vacío y los tambores son muy notorios, por otra parte si sólo agregas queda muy denso, así que prefiriría verlo movido
  3. 00:58:292 (131) - me gustaría saber por qué no usas big note acá y sí en 00:59:831 (136) - , los niveles son iguales imo, los dos con bignote sería mejor
  4. 01:10:600 (2) - ^also
    También podrías tomar esto para la Kantan y hacer las 4 big notes :D
[Muzu]
  1. 00:16:369 (46) - same
[Skylish's Oni]
  1. as i can feel in the kiai, you're following electronic distortion sound as triplet, so i think it totally fits better to make a triple in 00:14:831 - instead 00:15:215 - , feels strange otherwise
  2. 00:52:811 (13) - this note sounds so overmapped imo, would be better if you delete so the focus on 00:52:331 (9,10,11) - is better
inner is cool

call me back, you know ~
Topic Starter
Etsu

xfraczynho wrote:

aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p
[Kantan]
  1. 00:12:138 (9) - esta nota se siente fuera de lugar, la movería a 00:12:908 - y quedaría bastante mejor //cierto no tenia sentido so changed, tambien agrege algunas notas como me sugirio volta ya que se siente muy simple con el kiai.
  2. 00:16:369 (16) - te parece cambiarlo por spinner? el sonido es más largo que streamy //prefiero el slider encaja mejor por ese sonido largo imo
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:16:369 (28) - refer to K //same reason in kantan
  2. 00:29:061 (57) - podrías moverla a 00:30:023 - , se siente muy vacío y los tambores son muy notorios, por otra parte si sólo agregas queda muy denso, así que prefiriría verlo movido //tienes razón pero prefiero no agregar ya que solo me enfoco el vocal en esa sección para esta diff.
  3. 00:58:292 (131) - me gustaría saber por qué no usas big note acá y sí en 00:59:831 (136) - , los niveles son iguales imo, los dos con bignote sería mejor //los niveles no me parecen iguales, el primero no gritan tan alto como el segundo en ese es notorio es por eso ademas pienso que quedaría un poco denso con mucho big así que lo mantendré como esta.
  4. 01:10:600 (2) - ^also
    También podrías tomar esto para la Kantan y hacer las 4 big notes :D
[Muzu]
  1. 00:16:369 (46) - same //same reason above

call me back, you know ~
Thank you frac :3
waiting skylish for response.
Skylish

xfraczynho wrote:

aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p
[Skylish's Oni]
  1. as i can feel in the kiai, you're following electronic distortion sound as triplet, so i think it totally fits better to make a triple in 00:14:831 - instead 00:15:215 - , feels strange otherwise

    > 00:15:215 (11,12,13) - shows a progression of usage of 1/4 triplets, and a equalised density spread with 00:15:792 (15,16,17) - .
  2. 00:52:811 (13) - this note sounds so overmapped imo, would be better if you delete so the focus on 00:52:331 (9,10,11) - is better

    > 00:52:811 - clear low pitch drum hits exactly. Another purpose for keeping it is: 00:52:715 (12,13,14,15,1) - / 00:54:254 (4,5,6,7,1) - , same repetitive pattern shows strong emphases at 00:53:292 - / 00:54:831 -
inner is cool

call me back, you know ~
No change. Thanks for modding~ :D
Topic Starter
Etsu
ok updated :)
Aisha
Kantan:
00:34:831 - 00:56:369 - la sección entera no tienen ningún break 4/1, aún considerando el 'low' bpm, es necesario. Podrías borrar 00:43:100 (36) - ya que siento que desde esta sección el doble cymbal alto es más notorio que en la sección anterior.
Aplica algo similar para la siguiente sección, aún siendo Kiai es un poco densa, borraría 01:17:523 (12) -
Sería suficiente para mí
Topic Starter
Etsu

xfraczynho wrote:

Kantan:
00:34:831 - 00:56:369 - la sección entera no tienen ningún break 4/1, aún considerando el 'low' bpm, es necesario. Podrías borrar 00:43:100 (36) - ya que siento que desde esta sección el doble cymbal alto es más notorio que en la sección anterior.
Aplica algo similar para la siguiente sección, aún siendo Kiai es un poco densa, borraría 01:17:523 (12) -
Sería suficiente para mí
Oh ya veo, parece importante por lo que he quitado las siguientes notas:
00:25:215 - , 00:37:523 - , 00:40:600 - , 00:43:100 - , 00:50:215 - , 00:52:523 - , 01:00:600 - , 01:03:677 - , 01:08:100 - , 01:12:908 - , 01:17:523 -
con esta pienso que ya quedaría mejor con menos densidad y mas break, y en la ultima parte 01:23:677 - agregue una nota para variar no creo que sea un problema so updated!
Aisha
Yes, it's cool
Metadata stuff from here



Song itself

Remove 'anime' from tags and I will bubble, it'll be in genre :D
Topic Starter
Etsu
fixed! :D
Aisha
Let's go ~
Noffy
what i literally checked a standard set of this same song earlier today for metadata
what a weird coincidence for a 2 year old anime opening (I guess it's partly because of season 2 airing right now ?_? )
wowowo
anyways

Hello, metadata check here
please fix romanised artist to
Ayana Taketatsu
it's her preferred romanisation and can be seen like, all over her website.
http://ayanataketatsu.jp/
yea
Topic Starter
Etsu

Noffy wrote:

what i literally checked a standard set of this same song earlier today for metadata
what a weird coincidence for a 2 year old anime opening (I guess it's partly because of season 2 airing right now ?_? ) //since i uploaded this set I've never let him die xd
wowowo
anyways

Hello, metadata check here
please fix romanised artist to
Ayana Taketatsu
it's her preferred romanisation and can be seen like, all over her website.
http://ayanataketatsu.jp/
yea

idk whether i can technically pop or not since i'm not a taiko bn and just a new standard bn learning about these kinds of rules still so i wont risk it but please fix the metadata
This is valid if they are on all albums, so changed!
Thank a lot Noffy :)
Aurele
get a rebubble and I’m sending this to the Qualification Planet
Topic Starter
Etsu
oh i will tell to frac.
Aisha

Noffy wrote:

what i literally checked a standard set of this same song earlier today for metadata
what a weird coincidence for a 2 year old anime opening (I guess it's partly because of season 2 airing right now ?_? )
wowowo
anyways

Hello, metadata check here
please fix romanised artist to
Ayana Taketatsu
it's her preferred romanisation and can be seen like, all over her website.
http://ayanataketatsu.jp/
yea
Thanks for the artist fix, there we go again!
Topic Starter
Etsu
thanks frac :)
Aurele
i will check after my class tomorrow :3
Aurele
yeah what's up
rew0825
Thank you owo ~
Topic Starter
Etsu
thanks gabe ^^
Tyistiana
Finally, congratz! Etsu :3
Topic Starter
Etsu

Tyistiana wrote:

Finally, congratz! Etsu :3
Thanks tyistiana :3
yuzu__rinrin
Finally :) gratz~
Topic Starter
Etsu

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Finally :) gratz~
thanks yuzu-senpai ><
Gemu-
Muchas felicidades Etsu! :3
Topic Starter
Etsu

Gemu- wrote:

Muchas felicidades Etsu! :3
gracias gemu owo
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