Ayana Taketatsu - Hey! Calorie Queen [Taiko] · forum

ts8zs

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2017-08-16T07:35:45+00:00

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:15:600 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - kdkkd kdk to make 00:15:792 (78,79) - kk
00:26:946 (134,135,136) - ddk
00:29:831 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - dkkkd K d to make 00:30:600 (154) - K
00:37:331 (192,193,194,195) - d k d K for damedame
00:49:831 (275) - d
01:08:100 (389,390) - dd to make 01:08:292 (391) - k more fit
01:17:427 (453) - d to make 01:17:523 (454) - more fit and make 01:17:331 (452,453,454) - same to 01:17:716 (455,456,457) - for wazuwazu
01:18:100 (458,459,460) - kkd
01:18:677 (462,463,464,465) - kkdkd
01:21:177 (480,481,482,483,484,485) - kkd kkd
01:24:254 (503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511) - ddk x3
[Skylish's Oni]
00:06:177 (10) - move to 00:06:273 -
00:12:715 (15,16) - kd
00:14:446 (7,8) - dk
00:15:792 (15,16,17) - kdk
00:45:600 (8,12) - keep same
00:57:138 (4) - K
00:57:331 (5) - move to 00:57:427 -
01:08:292 (8,9) - dd for nuno same pitch
01:26:177 (2,3) - KK
[Muz]
i think this muzu is a little difficult
00:43:485 (132,133,134) - dkk
01:26:754 (58,59) - DD
[Fut&Kat]
nothing

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-08-18T04:48:11+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Muz]
i think this muzu is a little difficult //i don't think so xD
00:43:485 (132,133,134) - dkk //changed kdk for voice :>
01:26:754 (58,59) - DD //okay
[Fut&Kat]
nothing

Thanks o:

Tyistiana

osu! Alumni

541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-08-21T09:54:02+00:00

Hello again~ Etsu

From my modding queue~

[

Overall]
OD on Kantan seems too high, how about decrease it to 3 ? :3

[

Kantan]
Flawless! <3

[

Futsuu]
00:09:061 / 00:11:369 - Maybe delete , looks like the note is too long in this part, give some mercy to Futsuu player might be a good idea. :3
00:44:831 - Maybe k , the vocal here seems like higher than 00:44:735 and let's have a look on Muzukashii at the same point~
00:56:946 - Change to K , it's even higher than 00:56:658 pitch :3
01:21:369 - Change to k , to emphasize this pitch while this pitch is higher than 01:21:177
01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754

[

Muzukashii]
00:22:331 - Maybe add a note here , similar pitch to 00:22:523
00:29:446 - Hmmmmm, only my opinion here. How about this one?

00:33:196 - Change to d , the vocal seems different from 00:33:100 and 00:33:292
00:56:946 - Change to K , it's even higher than 00:56:658 pitch :3
01:21:369 - Change to k , to emphasize this pitch while this pitch is higher than 01:21:177
01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754

[

Skylish's Oni]
Overall is good enough, but here is only my opinion, might be rejected all :3
00:22:331 - Maybe change to d , similar pitch to 00:22:523
01:04:350 - Looks like that note in this part is too long, how about delete it? And as the vocal is 1/2 here , not like 01:25:215 (8,9,10)
01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754

[

Rew's Inner Oni]
~~ขอใช้ภาษาไทยแล้วกัน ความขี้เกียจเข้าครอบงำ~~
00:15:119 (73,74) - ลองสลับสีดูไหม เสียงตรง 00:15:119 ดูสูงกว่า 00:15:215
00:25:408 (127,128) / 01:25:023 (510,511) - เหมือนเดิม ลองสลับสีดูไหม ตรง 00:25:408 เสียงคล้ายๆตรง 00:22:331 บวกกับเสียงร้องตรง 00:25:600 สูงพอตัว เน้นเสียงนี้ด้วย k ก็ดูดี (มั้ง) :3
00:29:831 - ลองเรียงอย่างงี้เป็นไงครับ จะได้เน้น D K D เหมือนตรง 00:17:908 (92,93,94)

00:34:831 - เสียงต่ำกว่า 00:34:638 ลองเปลี่ยนเป็น d ไหม?
00:45:600 - ท่อนนี้ ลองเป็น K ddd K ดีไหมครับ , เสียงร้องตรง เย้ มันก็สูงอยู่ น่าจะเหมาะกับ K มากกว่า
00:46:754 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็น kkddd ดู ตามเสียงร้องท่อนนี้ เสียงร้องเริ่มต่ำตรง 00:46:946
01:18:965 (464,465) - ลองเน้นเสียงร้องด้วย k ตรง 01:19:061 ดูอาจดูเข้าท่า (?)
01:21:658 - ลบ , จะได้เน้นเสียงตรง 01:21:561 มากขึ้น

Love this song so much! Take my star (*´▽｀)ﾉﾉ
Good luck for ranking!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-08-21T11:21:19+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:15:600 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83) - kdkkd kdk to make 00:15:792 (78,79) - kk Change in another.
00:26:946 (134,135,136) - ddk Change.
00:29:831 (149,150,151,152,153,154,155) - dkkkd K d to make 00:30:600 (154) - K Change in another.
00:37:331 (192,193,194,195) - d k d K for damedame Change.
00:49:831 (275) - d Change.
01:08:100 (389,390) - dd to make 01:08:292 (391) - k more fit Change.
01:17:427 (453) - d to make 01:17:523 (454) - more fit and make 01:17:331 (452,453,454) - same to 01:17:716 (455,456,457) - for wazuwazu Change.
01:18:100 (458,459,460) - kkd Change.
01:18:677 (462,463,464,465) - kkdkd Change in another.
01:21:177 (480,481,482,483,484,485) - kkd kkd Change.
01:24:254 (503,504,505,506,507,508,509,510,511) - ddk x3 Change.

Tyistiana wrote:
Hello again~ Etsu
From my modding queue~

[ Rew's Inner Oni]
~~ขอใช้ภาษาไทยแล้วกัน ความขี้เกียจเข้าครอบงำ~~ มีความภาษาไทยเวอร์ xD //นี่ใครอะ ;w;
00:15:119 (73,74) - ลองสลับสีดูไหม เสียงตรง 00:15:119 ดูสูงกว่า 00:15:215 เคจ้า
00:25:408 (127,128) / 01:25:023 (510,511) - เหมือนเดิม ลองสลับสีดูไหม ตรง 00:25:408 เสียงคล้ายๆตรง 00:22:331 บวกกับเสียงร้องตรง 00:25:600 สูงพอตัว เน้นเสียงนี้ด้วย k ก็ดูดี (มั้ง) :3 เคจ้า
00:29:831 - ลองเรียงอย่างงี้เป็นไงครับ จะได้เน้น D K D เหมือนตรง 00:17:908 (92,93,94)
ไม่ง่ะ ตรง 00:30:215 (153) - เสียงมันไม่หนักเท่าไร เลยใส่ให้มันรัวไปเลยดีกว่างะ

00:34:831 - เสียงต่ำกว่า 00:34:638 ลองเปลี่ยนเป็น d ไหม? เคจ้า
00:45:600 - ท่อนนี้ ลองเป็น K ddd K ดีไหมครับ , เสียงร้องตรง เย้ มันก็สูงอยู่ น่าจะเหมาะกับ K มากกว่า เรารู้สึกว่าเสียง K มันไม่ค่อยหนักแน่นพองะ ไม่เปลี่ยนนะ
00:46:754 - ลองเปลี่ยนเป็น kkddd ดู ตามเสียงร้องท่อนนี้ เสียงร้องเริ่มต่ำตรง 00:46:946 เราว่าแบบนี้ดีอยู่แล้ว ไม่เปลี่ยนนะ
01:18:965 (464,465) - ลองเน้นเสียงร้องด้วย k ตรง 01:19:061 ดูอาจดูเข้าท่า (?) เปลี่ยนเฉพาะตรง 01:19:062 (465) -
01:21:658 - ลบ , จะได้เน้นเสียงตรง 01:21:561 มากขึ้น เราว่าแบบนี้โอเคอยู่แล้ว

Love this song so much! Take my star (*´▽｀)ﾉﾉ
Good luck for ranking!

Thank you all

Update

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Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-08-22T12:32:53+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Skylish's Oni]
00:06:177 (10) - move to 00:06:273 -
00:12:715 (15,16) - kd
00:14:446 (7,8) - dk
00:15:792 (15,16,17) - kdk
00:45:600 (8,12) - keep same
00:57:138 (4) - K
00:57:331 (5) - move to 00:57:427 -
01:08:292 (8,9) - dd for nuno same pitch
01:26:177 (2,3) - KK

> Rejected all due to unreasonable suggestions above without the consideration of structures, pitches, and mapping channels and flows. The most impt is: why don't you put a single reason behind, even in Chinese?

Tyistiana wrote:
Hello again~ Etsu
From my modding queue~

[ Skylish's Oni]
Overall is good enough, but here is only my opinion, might be rejected all :3
00:22:331 - Maybe change to d , similar pitch to 00:22:523

> concrete k k d patterns at 00:22:138 - / 00:23:677 - / 00:25:215 - / .... no change

01:04:350 - Looks like that note in this part is too long, how about delete it? And as the vocal is 1/2 here , not like 01:25:215 (8,9,10)

> 01:04:254 - vocal lasts for a whole 1/1 beat actually, a proper density difference is shown in the map.

01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754

> personally like D D ending there, and the most noticeable pitch difference is 01:26:177 (2,3) - .

Love this song so much! Take my star (*´▽｀)ﾉﾉ
Good luck for ranking!

Thanks for your mods anyway. I expect the first one could be better when we share the same language....

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-08-25T16:04:16+00:00

Tyistiana wrote:
Hello again~ Etsu //hai again
From my modding queue~

[ Overall]
OD on Kantan seems too high, how about decrease it to 3 ? :3 //okay change to 3

[ Kantan]
Flawless! <3 //<3

[ Futsuu]
00:09:061 / 00:11:369 - Maybe delete , looks like the note is too long in this part, give some mercy to Futsuu player might be a good idea. :3 //delete some note although it still did me difficult but i understand if this is long for this diff xD
00:44:831 - Maybe k , the vocal here seems like higher than 00:44:735 and let's have a look on Muzukashii at the same point~ //sure
00:56:946 - Change to K , it's even higher than 00:56:658 pitch :3 //i want to make it easy here to futsuu is equal the sound is similar not so loud :3
01:21:369 - Change to k , to emphasize this pitch while this pitch is higher than 01:21:177 //okay
01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754 //01:26:177 (41) - //Lately i do not listen well with kat so keep don too so you feel better easy finish on the whole map for this note 01:26:177 (41) -

[ Muzukashii]
00:22:331 - Maybe add a note here , similar pitch to 00:22:523 //yeah but looks a bit weird this section so keep
00:29:446 - Hmmmmm, only my opinion here. How about this one? //no thanks i stay with mine xD

00:33:196 - Change to d , the vocal seems different from 00:33:100 and 00:33:292 //is bit difficult kdk in muzu is preferible triple single color
00:56:946 - Change to K , it's even higher than 00:56:658 pitch :3 //yes here :3
01:21:369 - Change to k , to emphasize this pitch while this pitch is higher than 01:21:177 //yeah
01:26:946 - How about K ? , since the pitch seems different from 01:26:754 //same reason futsuu

Love this song so much! Take my star (*´▽｀)ﾉﾉ //thanks ><
Good luck for ranking!

Thanks for the mod @Tyistiana

Updated! inner.

Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-08-27T08:57:34+00:00

Self mod a bit again,

Skylish's Oni: https://puu.sh/xkDoS/d5307a1b93.rar

Please update it for me when you are free, Etsu

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-08-27T14:04:14+00:00

Updated! thanks Skylish.

Surono

7,195 posts

Joined November 2013

Surono 2017-09-01T18:11:37+00:00

fixing spread issues (already informed the mapper to continue it) and minor things but important i guess

00:25 Etsu: hi suro, sorry for the interruption :>
00:25 Etsu: wanted to know if you would help me with your opinion of a diff on my map
00:28 Surono: let me see
00:29 *Etsu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/984707 Taketatsu Ayana - Hey! Calorie Queen (TV edit.)]
00:43 Surono: ya
00:44 Etsu: o:
00:44 Surono: :
00:45 Etsu: what should I do :s
00:45 Etsu: you think i should improve it more? xd
00:45 Surono: 00:07:138 - ~ 00:16:177 - eks de iks di
00:45 Surono: your muzukashii density too high here
00:46 Surono: buff low diffs or nerf muzu.
00:46 Etsu: oh i see
00:46 Surono: nerf right ways
00:47 Surono: since it close with oni w
00:47 Surono: 00:09:254 - 00:12:331 - 00:15:408 - 
00:48 Etsu: I should delete it then
00:48 Surono: 00:12:715 - d
00:48 Surono: yes
00:49 Etsu: oh ya
00:49 Etsu: I was thinking of doing it dense by the kiai xD
00:52 Surono: its just option on timing panel setup to make it WOAHHh effect, dw.
00:52 Surono: 00:21:754 - 00:22:138 - weird to ignore this, seems too futsuu-ish.
00:53 Surono: add kat there, 00:22:523 (60) -  then d here, and apply on other similar parts if you agree.
00:54 Etsu: is ready kat 00:22:523 (57) -
00:55 Surono: i meant that above, look at coma.
00:55 Etsu: oh ya
00:58 Surono: but oooo, it seems overall vocal mapping concept.
00:59 Etsu: yeas
00:59 Surono: and yeh, try to selfmod.
01:00 Surono: how to fix spread issues = open Modding Assistance.exe or manual ( file -> Open Difficulty... -> For Editing -> check each diffs -> *repeat* )
01:00 Etsu: okay the majority following the voice
01:00 Etsu: oh i see
01:05 Surono: ya idk, im not really giva attention to something with opinion of mapping, I just take care with something issues. okay i will post it, i want cookiEZ.

at all I did this entire osh, when people ask something. orz :residentsleeper:
ty cookiez and webozz.mp3

Gemu-

1,015 posts

Joined October 2010

Gemu- 2017-09-02T02:24:43+00:00

Hi! >w<

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

00:05:600 (1) - Podrías quitar ese spinner, la verdad queda muy bien, pero podrías quitarlo para darle un pequeño respiro a los jugadores, ya que luego viene un patrón un poco largo para los nuevos jugadores 00:07:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
00:27:908 (27) - Podrías eliminar esa nota, para seguir la secuencia que hiciste acá 00:25:600 (25) - para que se pueda ver el incremento de la canción y de la voz de forma creciente y también para que estas notas puedan fluir con la voz de la cantante desde 00:28:677 (28,29,30,31,32) - Aquí hiciste lo que te estoy explicando (Otra razón sería consistencia con la parte que te voy a señalar) --> 00:37:908 (41,42,43) -
00:57:138 (67) - Elimina esa nota para dejar un pequeño descanso con el fin de dar como un aviso de que se acerca el Kiai conteniendo patrones largos, es importante colocar un descanso para ello.
01:20:792 (16,17) - En esta parte se puede escuchar que el sonido aumenta mucho, colocando unos finish (Ya sea K o D) quedaría muy bien y también para enfatizar 01:22:523 (18) -

00:30:215 (51) - Cambia la nota a k para culminar la secuencia que tiene acá 00:28:677 (47,48,49,50,51) - debido a que la voz y la melodía está de alto-bajo-alto-bajo-alto para luego llegar al finish 00:30:600 (52) - así que cambiando a k la nota que le dije también enfatizaría el finish K.
00:57:139 (109) - Puede cambiarlo a un finish K, el sonido incrementa mucho comparado con el anterior 00:56:946 (108) -

00:58:292 (195) - Cambiando a k suena muy bien con 00:58:485 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202) -
01:10:600 (2) - Cambie a k para tener consistencia con la sugerencia anterior ^

HP: 5

Very nice!

00:25:023 (125) - Change to k to variate because you have the same here 00:21:369 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113) -
00:53:004 (291) - Chnage to k to flow better the stream 00:52:523 (286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) -

Me encantó su mapa :3 muy bueno, mucha suerte y éxitos! >//<

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-09-02T02:26:05+00:00

Surono wrote:

fixing spread issues (already informed the mapper to continue it) and minor things but important i guess

00:25 Etsu: hi suro, sorry for the interruption :>
00:25 Etsu: wanted to know if you would help me with your opinion of a diff on my map
00:28 Surono: let me see
00:29 *Etsu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/984707 Taketatsu Ayana - Hey! Calorie Queen (TV edit.)]
00:43 Surono: ya
00:44 Etsu: o:
00:44 Surono: :
00:45 Etsu: what should I do :s
00:45 Etsu: you think i should improve it more? xd
00:45 Surono: 00:07:138 - ~ 00:16:177 - eks de iks di
00:45 Surono: your muzukashii density too high here
00:46 Surono: buff low diffs or nerf muzu.
00:46 Etsu: oh i see
00:46 Surono: nerf right ways
00:47 Surono: since it close with oni w
00:47 Surono: 00:09:254 - 00:12:331 - 00:15:408 - 
00:48 Etsu: I should delete it then
00:48 Surono: 00:12:715 - d
00:48 Surono: yes
00:49 Etsu: oh ya
00:49 Etsu: I was thinking of doing it dense by the kiai xD
00:52 Surono: its just option on timing panel setup to make it WOAHHh effect, dw.
00:52 Surono: 00:21:754 - 00:22:138 - weird to ignore this, seems too futsuu-ish.
00:53 Surono: add kat there, 00:22:523 (60) -  then d here, and apply on other similar parts if you agree.
00:54 Etsu: is ready kat 00:22:523 (57) -
00:55 Surono: i meant that above, look at coma.
00:55 Etsu: oh ya
00:58 Surono: but oooo, it seems overall vocal mapping concept.
00:59 Etsu: yeas
00:59 Surono: and yeh, try to selfmod.
01:00 Surono: how to fix spread issues = open Modding Assistance.exe or manual ( file -> Open Difficulty... -> For Editing -> check each diffs -> *repeat* )
01:00 Etsu: okay the majority following the voice
01:00 Etsu: oh i see
01:05 Surono: ya idk, im not really giva attention to something with opinion of mapping, I just take care with something issues. okay i will post it, i want cookiEZ.

at all I did this entire osh, when people ask something. orz :residentsleeper:
ty cookiez and webozz.mp3

thanks suro, i've been trying selfmod to improve the patterns even the spread that is very messy so i take more into account about them. xD

game rock wrote:
Hi! >w<

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

00:05:600 (1) - Podrías quitar ese spinner, la verdad queda muy bien, pero podrías quitarlo para darle un pequeño respiro a los jugadores, ya que luego viene un patrón un poco largo para los nuevos jugadores 00:07:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - //tienes razon por las notas de al principio tambien xD
00:27:908 (27) - Podrías eliminar esa nota, para seguir la secuencia que hiciste acá 00:25:600 (25) - para que se pueda ver el incremento de la canción y de la voz de forma creciente y también para que estas notas puedan fluir con la voz de la cantante desde 00:28:677 (28,29,30,31,32) - Aquí hiciste lo que te estoy explicando (Otra razón sería consistencia con la parte que te voy a señalar) --> 00:37:908 (41,42,43) - //lo voy a pensar ya que lo siento muy vacio para el vocal.
00:57:138 (67) - Elimina esa nota para dejar un pequeño descanso con el fin de dar como un aviso de que se acerca el Kiai conteniendo patrones largos, es importante colocar un descanso para ello. //okay
01:20:792 (16,17) - En esta parte se puede escuchar que el sonido aumenta mucho, colocando unos finish (Ya sea K o D) quedaría muy bien y también para enfatizar 01:22:523 (18) - //listo

00:30:215 (51) - Cambia la nota a k para culminar la secuencia que tiene acá 00:28:677 (47,48,49,50,51) - debido a que la voz y la melodía está de alto-bajo-alto-bajo-alto para luego llegar al finish 00:30:600 (52) - así que cambiando a k la nota que le dije también enfatizaría el finish K. //tienes razon pero lo hice por el spread de kantan ya que el vocal termina en bajo + drum, y si cambio otro patron tendria que cambiar hasta en muzu haha, esperare mas opiniones :3
00:57:139 (109) - Puede cambiarlo a un finish K, el sonido incrementa mucho comparado con el anterior 00:56:946 (108) - //cambie a K en 00:56:946 (191) - es el mismo sonido que 00:56:369 (189,190) - y el siguiente se siente como baja el sonido largo, aunque tu sugerencia me ayuda con el balance del D en el principio del kiai (lo cambie) por el K mas adelante, tal vez lo considere.

00:58:292 (195) - Cambiando a k suena muy bien con 00:58:485 (196,197,198,199,200,201,202) -
01:10:600 (2) - Cambie a k para tener consistencia con la sugerencia anterior ^ //me gusta :3

Me encantó su mapa :3 muy bueno, mucha suerte y éxitos! >//< //thanks ^^

Muchas gracias gemu por el mod

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-09-03T07:28:54+00:00

game rock wrote:
Hi! >w<

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (NM, M4M & GD)

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

00:25:023 (125) - Change to k to variate because you have the same here 00:21:369 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113) -
00:53:004 (291) - Chnage to k to flow better the stream 00:52:523 (286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) -

Change All

Me encantó su mapa :3 muy bueno, mucha suerte y éxitos! >//<

Thank you

Rew's Inner Oni

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Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-09-03T23:36:32+00:00

Updated!

JarHed

169 posts

Joined November 2015

JarHed 2017-09-12T00:21:44+00:00

Im Here from my Mod Queue!

Difficulties Requested: Futsuu,Muzukashii

Futsuu:✔

-00:25:215 (40) - I feel this note should be changed to a Kat seems to be a higher sound here. (Flows Better)

This Futsuu is really near perfection I'm getting picky here! Just a general suggestion, You seem to have a lot of finishers in places where i really don't reckon you need them, however i know this is a mapping style and i don't seem to dislike it! It suits the song, however i know there will be people who don't necessarily favor that too much! However no more changes just be aware of that! Great Job!

Muzukashii:✔

- 00:28:292 (81) - I think this note can be changed to a Kat Higher pitched sound that's noticeable here and should be mapped!

One again, Really not anything to change. All of the notes fit really well besides the one i changed, The only thing i noticed really with the Muzukashii is you seem to switch of from mapping the rhythm in the song and the vocals going on. This isn't really an issue because you seemed to pull it off very well with this map. Good job to you on that, that's not to easy to do. Sorry i may not have provided to many changes i just think its good as is!

Recommendations for sound: I think you should lower the hit sound volume from 80% to 75% its not that big of a difference but i found it to be a slight tiny bit to loud. On the kiai section of your map you can increase it back to 80% since it adds a bit more energy to that section of the map!

One again great job! Hope this short mod helps at least a bit!

Good Luck With Ranking!!!

Etsu

1,240 posts

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Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-09-13T18:42:05+00:00

change all except muzu to kat not fit with the sound but you change to kat to the next note for the vowel is better imo, also i check once again on the finish of the futsuu, anyway thanks for the mod

Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-09-22T02:29:49+00:00

From rdmlish,

[General]

! There're some unsnapped objects in the difficulties. Please use 'resnap all notes' function in the 'Timing' list. Please do so in ALL difficulties.

For example, in Kantan, 00:07:139 (1) -

[Kantan]

> 00:10:600 - / 00:13:677 - / ... / I think the are the dominant and leading notes in the melody. They should not be missed. After adding them, the density is even more acceptable in terms of spread with Futsuu. This change is applicable to similar sections.

> 00:45:600 (52,53) - very clear cymbal crashes and strong vocal notes, not sure why you did not put Finishers on them. Maybe you can consider it a bit.

> 00:58:677 - very awkward and enforceful note is put, for trying to match the rhythm. It is not that effective since the main melody is on vocal part now, and this is what you are going to follow too. Shifting it to 00:58:869 - may be better.

> 01:10:985 - same issue as above, fix it on your own

[Futsuu]

> 00:25:023 - missed a note (don) here. It should be consistent to 00:26:561 - / 00:28:485 - .

> 00:27:715 - this note indeed matches the vocal, but it is put so awkardly. Imo a better representation could be made: put the focus on the instrumental part, shift the note to 00:27:908 - . It can still cover the long vocal note well.

> 00:37:331 - / 00:38:869 - where are the similar ornament notes?

> 00:47:715 - same case as above, this time, the comparison would be 00:44:638 -

> 00:47:138 - a Finisher is missed, check Kantan and Muzukashii for the same timing.

> 01:00:792 - you can put a note here (don) to continue the dense pattern from 00:58:677 (119,120,121,122,123) - . That sounds more natural

> 01:13:100 - similar as above, this time could be a kat to show some variations.

> 01:19:061 - k sounds better to show a greater impact with the upcoming DON

> 01:20:215 - adding a k here can fill the vocal note gap, and enhancing the density flow. 1/1 spamming from 01:17:908 - to 01:21:561 - is a bit boring for Futsuu level players.

[Muzukashii]

> 00:26:946 - a triplet is possible here

> 00:37:908 - with some notes before it, the cymbal crash could be expressed better by using a Finisher. If there are differences in the vocal or instrumental layers, displaying them with appropriate techniques is important to show your mapping sense.

> 01:07:523 - it is expected to have a note, by the previous pattern at 01:05:985 - . 01:05:600 (227,228,229) - k dk, so 01:07:138 - d kd is expected.

> 01:15:023 - this note comes out so awkwardly. Sometimes, emptiness is for emphasizing too. Remove 01:15:023 - to show the importance of vocal note at 01:14:831 -

> 01:19:061 - same as Futsuu, k?

[]

Some personal styles could be observed from Kantan, Futsuu, and Muzukashii. The experssion of mapping styles could be made practised more clearly and precisely.

Etsu

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Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-09-23T00:34:27+00:00

Skylish wrote:
From rdmlish,

[General]

! There're some unsnapped objects in the difficulties. Please use 'resnap all notes' function in the 'Timing' list. Please do so in ALL difficulties.

For example, in Kantan, 00:07:139 (1) - //fixed all

[Kantan]

> 00:10:600 - / 00:13:677 - / ... / I think the are the dominant and leading notes in the melody. They should not be missed. After adding them, the density is even more acceptable in terms of spread with Futsuu. This change is applicable to similar sections. //you're right lately i learned about this

> 00:45:600 (52,53) - very clear cymbal crashes and strong vocal notes, not sure why you did not put Finishers on them. Maybe you can consider it a bit. //i think had forgotten finish so added

> 00:58:677 - very awkward and enforceful note is put, for trying to match the rhythm. It is not that effective since the main melody is on vocal part now, and this is what you are going to follow too. Shifting it to 00:58:869 - may be better. //always this part is difficult for me haha but i followed your suggestion and seems better but as it is a part of alert i put a note in 00:59:061 - combines more voice clear 1/2 and improves the spread of the next diff

> 01:10:985 - same issue as above, fix it on your own //fixed

[Futsuu]

> 00:25:023 - missed a note (don) here. It should be consistent to 00:26:561 - / 00:28:485 - . //oh true, added

> 00:27:715 - this note indeed matches the vocal, but it is put so awkardly. Imo a better representation could be made: put the focus on the instrumental part, shift the note to 00:27:908 - . It can still cover the long vocal note well. //i put a note in 00:27:523 - because i feel that i should map and with the suggestion seems to me that it combines better the voice and the instrument imo

> 00:37:331 - / 00:38:869 - where are the similar ornament notes? //yes

> 00:47:715 - same case as above, this time, the comparison would be 00:44:638 -

> 00:47:138 - a Finisher is missed, check Kantan and Muzukashii for the same timing. //oh my bad added

> 01:00:792 - you can put a note here (don) to continue the dense pattern from 00:58:677 (119,120,121,122,123) - . That sounds more natural //oh sure also did some changed

> 01:13:100 - similar as above, this time could be a kat to show some variations.

> 01:19:061 - k sounds better to show a greater impact with the upcoming DON //okay

> 01:20:215 - adding a k here can fill the vocal note gap, and enhancing the density flow. 1/1 spamming from 01:17:908 - to 01:21:561 - is a bit boring for Futsuu level players. //okay is better

[Muzukashii]

> 00:26:946 - a triplet is possible here //added roll is clear

> 00:37:908 - with some notes before it, the cymbal crash could be expressed better by using a Finisher. If there are differences in the vocal or instrumental layers, displaying them with appropriate techniques is important to show your mapping sense. //yes better muzu added finish

> 01:07:523 - it is expected to have a note, by the previous pattern at 01:05:985 - . 01:05:600 (227,228,229) - k dk, so 01:07:138 - d kd is expected. //okay

> 01:15:023 - this note comes out so awkwardly. Sometimes, emptiness is for emphasizing too. Remove 01:15:023 - to show the importance of vocal note at 01:14:831 - //feel better removed

> 01:19:061 - same as Futsuu, k? //yes

[]

Some personal styles could be observed from Kantan, Futsuu, and Muzukashii. The experssion of mapping styles could be made practised more clearly and precisely.

Thanks for the mod Skylish is great help also did selfmod i think it looks better now especially the spread.

Tyistiana

osu! Alumni

541 posts

Joined February 2012

Tyistiana 2017-09-29T16:45:02+00:00

Ranked this, please. :3

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-09-29T19:36:06+00:00

Tyistiana wrote:
Ranked this, please. :3

Let's see will happen and thanks for another star

Ozu

647 posts

Joined July 2011

Ozu 2017-10-13T02:59:57+00:00

.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
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[ Futsuu ]

00:27:715 (53,54) - delete 00:27:908 - and 00:27:715 (53) - k? 00:27:715 (53) - sound is impact so for emphasize it imo.

00:40:408 (83) - d? have kick sound so little unmatched to me even vocal pitch is right.

01:02:138 (140,141) - ctrl g? 01:02:138 (140) - so high vocal pitch and also 01:02:523 (141) - have kick sound.
01:14:446 (14,15) - ^

01:08:485 (156) - k? kkk spinner so beautiful wonderful i like it im not hentai

01:20:023 (26,27,28,29) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9303452 ?

01:26:754 (41,42) - KK? more finish feel.

great Futsuu =v=b

[ Skylish's Oni ]

00:26:561 (5) - add circle? for fill the vocal sound and smooth play.

00:55:408 - no consistency with 00:56:177 - ? almost similar sound but different pattern. maybe put 00:55:408 - circle and some color change?

01:08:869 (10,11,12,13) - in fact i dunno why you put these in here with finisher =v=;;

[ Rew's Inner Oni ]

00:26:946 (134) - k? i think ddk is so much in this part. if changed, can prevent continued ddk and also fit pitch.

00:30:985 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - dkk d K or delete 00:31:177 (156) - . drum sound 'k(weak)kk d K' to me.

00:43:966 (232,233) - delete 00:43:966 - and 00:44:062 (233) - D?

00:44:254 (234,235,236) - kdk? only 00:44:254 (234,236) - has melody so make bridge with 00:44:350 (235) - d. also 00:44:446 (236) - k sound to me.

00:53:004 (291) - delete? drum end at 00:52:908 (290) - so for fit the song.

00:54:831 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - D K K D K D? for consistency between 00:54:831 (304,305) - and 00:55:600 (307,308) - .

00:57:331 (314,315,316,317,318) - kkkdd or dkkdd? here's drum sound is going lower so fit.

01:23:485 (495,496,497,498) - kkd k? vocal pitch but looks fine present's too to me.

01:25:985 - add k and 01:26:177 (513) - D? here has also sound.

01:26:561 (514,515) - remove finisher? for the emphasize of the last K. also have no crush sound.

little long but almost minor thing sorry ;w;

GL~~

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-10-14T19:33:59+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
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[ Rew's Inner Oni ]

00:26:946 (134) - k? i think ddk is so much in this part. if changed, can prevent continued ddk and also fit pitch. Change.

00:30:985 (155,156,157,158,159,160) - dkk d K or delete 00:31:177 (156) - . drum sound 'k(weak)kk d K' to me. Change at first.

00:43:966 (232,233) - delete 00:43:966 - and 00:44:062 (233) - D? Change.

00:44:254 (234,235,236) - kdk? only 00:44:254 (234,236) - has melody so make bridge with 00:44:350 (235) - d. also 00:44:446 (236) - k sound to me. Change.

00:53:004 (291) - delete? drum end at 00:52:908 (290) - so for fit the song. Change.

00:54:831 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - D K K D K D? for consistency between 00:54:831 (304,305) - and 00:55:600 (307,308) - . Change to D K D D K D

00:57:331 (314,315,316,317,318) - kkkdd or dkkdd? here's drum sound is going lower so fit. Change to kkkdd.

01:23:485 (495,496,497,498) - kkd k? vocal pitch but looks fine present's too to me. Change.

01:25:985 - add k and 01:26:177 (513) - D? here has also sound. Change.

01:26:561 (514,515) - remove finisher? for the emphasize of the last K. also have no crush sound. Remove at the fisrt.

little long but almost minor thing sorry ;w; No problem It's well for me.

GL~~

Thank you so much ;w;.

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Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-10-15T16:03:49+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp //np no hurry xD
from m4m!

[ Futsuu ]

00:27:715 (53,54) - delete 00:27:908 - and 00:27:715 (53) - k? 00:27:715 (53) - sound is impact so for emphasize it imo.//after thousands of attempts i stay with dk

00:40:408 (83) - d? have kick sound so little unmatched to me even vocal pitch is right.//kk to follow the vowel is fine for me

01:02:138 (140,141) - ctrl g? 01:02:138 (140) - so high vocal pitch and also 01:02:523 (141) - have kick sound.//ok
01:14:446 (14,15) - ^

01:08:485 (156) - k? kkk spinner so beautiful wonderful i like it im not hentai //change to ddk xD

01:20:023 (26,27,28,29) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9303452 ? //i like makes sense

01:26:754 (41,42) - KK? more finish feel. //i like it ends up varying in the last note

great Futsuu =v=b //ty -v-

GL~~

thaks for the mod

diff inner updated waiting Skylish.

Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-10-17T00:12:08+00:00

404 AccNotFound wrote:
.....sorry big late blame my fking laziness xp
from m4m!

[ Skylish's Oni ]

00:26:561 (5) - add circle? for fill the vocal sound and smooth play.

> nope, wanna keep a clean structure until 00:31:754 -

00:55:408 - no consistency with 00:56:177 - ? almost similar sound but different pattern. maybe put 00:55:408 - circle and some color change?

> 00:56:177 - special emphasis for upcoming K K K D 00:56:369 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:55:408 - is empty due to clean mapping style.

01:08:869 (10,11,12,13) - in fact i dunno why you put these in here with finisher =v=;;

> 01:09:350 (13,15) - background strong fz melody, Finishers were placed to display them.

GL~~

Thanks for modding! No updated version.

Protonori

140 posts

Joined February 2015

Protonori 2017-10-31T03:38:57+00:00

From my modding queue~

[Futsuu]
01:03:292 (142,143) - d k?
01:15:600 - Add k? It matches the structure from 01:03:100.

[Muzukashii]
00:14:638 (37) - Switch to d? It emphasizes the triple/pitch change. You did this at 00:08:485.

[Skylish's Oni]
00:09:158 (13) - Move to 00:08:965? The Muzu and Inner Oni use a triple here. This is a guest diff though, so it's fine if you don't want to.
00:12:235 (12) - ^
00:15:311 (12) - ^
00:12:908 (16) - d?

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:09:350 (31) - Delete? This note doesn't seem necessary.
00:12:427 (52) - ^
00:16:273 (82,83) - kd? The pitch is descending, so I think it fits.
00:31:177 (156) - k?

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck!

Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-10-31T12:33:31+00:00

Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~

[Skylish's Oni]
00:09:158 (13) - Move to 00:08:965? The Muzu and Inner Oni use a triple here. This is a guest diff though, so it's fine if you don't want to.
00:12:235 (12) - ^
00:15:311 (12) - ^

> 00:09:061 - manage to create 'nnn n n n n' concrete pattern in presenting the melody clearly. No change since the current patterns fit.

00:12:908 (16) - d?

> pitch flow seems to go along with k d k k better at 00:12:523 - .

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck!

> I am surprised too!

BN incoming soon (tm).

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-11-01T02:59:08+00:00

Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~

[Futsuu]
01:03:292 (142,143) - d k?
01:15:600 - Add k? It matches the structure from 01:03:100. //^ ye changed it looks better this structure

[Muzukashii]
00:14:638 (37) - Switch to d? It emphasizes the triple/pitch change. You did this at 00:08:485. //nice catch so change

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! //thanks, just now was thinking about searching in November since i have not had time these days. feel that they will reject me yet xd

thanks for mod and two star ^^

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-11-01T09:56:45+00:00

Protonori wrote:
From my modding queue~

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:09:350 (31) - Delete? This note doesn't seem necessary. Remove
00:12:427 (52) - ^ Remove
00:16:273 (82,83) - kd? The pitch is descending, so I think it fits. The melody is high on first note of this so I think now is ok.
00:31:177 (156) - k? Change.

I'm surprised that this isn't ranked, honestly. Good luck! Waiting BN now :3

Thanks for mod

Rew's Inner Oni

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Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-11-02T01:34:27+00:00

Updated!

DeletedUser_9022173

DeletedUser_9022173 2017-12-05T09:39:42+00:00

hi from my queue. and sorry, I very late reply.

Kantan

00:10:023 - Delete. I think add a rest time here

00:13:340 - Same reason to 00:10:023

00:41:754 - d. because this vocal pitch is low on comparison 00:42:523 (49,50)

01:12:808 (5,6) - k d. This part is the same pattern as 00: 59: 446, and since it is patterned as "d k k d", I think that this should also be the same.

Futsuu

※I heard that it is necessary to make this degree of difficulty in 1/2 as a rule in principle. (Sorry if it was a mistake)
When it is set to 1/2, it is necessary to delete some notes.

00:52:042 - Move to 000:52:138

00:52:331 - delete

01:03:292 - k. This vocal pitch is high

Muzukashii

00:18:869 - if you like so, add a ddd here

00:31:177 - add a kkk. I think this rest time is long for bit

00:38:292 - add a d d. reason is same a 00:31:177

00:39:831 - same to 00:38:292

00:57:331 - ddd

I was very late mod. and good luck for rank

Etsu

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Etsu 2017-12-05T18:18:24+00:00

Hayate1129 wrote:
hi from my queue. and sorry, I very late reply. //do not worry and thanks for the assistance.

Kantan
00:10:023 - Delete. I think add a rest time here //okay

00:13:340 - Same reason to 00:10:023

00:41:754 - d. because this vocal pitch is low on comparison 00:42:523 (49,50) //changed

01:12:808 (5,6) - k d. This part is the same pattern as 00: 59: 446, and since it is patterned as "d k k d", I think that this should also be the same. //already

Futsuu
※I heard that it is necessary to make this degree of difficulty in 1/2 as a rule in principle. (Sorry if it was a mistake)
When it is set to 1/2, it is necessary to delete some notes. //you are right, although i think no problem diff normal, in katan it is obligatory but better i remove for space tho

00:52:042 - Move to 000:52:138

00:52:331 - delete

01:03:292 - k. This vocal pitch is high //okay

Muzukashii
00:18:869 - if you like so, add a ddd here //i leave it with double this helps me not repeat the finish and the sound is acceptable.

00:31:177 - add a kkk. I think this rest time is long for bit

00:38:292 - add a d d. reason is same a 00:31:177 //okay

00:39:831 - same to 00:38:292

00:57:331 - ddd //okay

I was very late mod. and good luck for rank //thanks ^^

Updated! thanks for the mod Hayate

looking fo bn...

Volta

1,622 posts

Joined March 2014

Volta 2017-12-12T03:47:48+00:00

Hey!

[General]

Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit

[Kantan]

OD 3, you're babying new player too much imo.
00:08:292 - i think you can add d here to reflect the melody and make the kiai denser
00:18:677 - consider to create 4/1 break at the end of kiai by deleting this note.
00:30:985 - remove for same reason as above, and 00:30:600 - you can move this to 00:29:061 - (vocal based) or 00:29:831 - (drum based) but i prefer the first one.
00:43:677 - the rhythm might be too complex for new player, so i highly suggest to remove this note
00:46:754 - same as ^
00:57:138 - consider to create a break here before 2nd kiai as well
01:08:100 - remove? feels weird and a break is nice before the spinner build the tension to next part.
01:12:908 (5,6) - maybe swap? the pitch is going down and for consistency with 01:00:600 (79,80) -

[Futsuu]

OD 4
00:30:215 - maybe you forgot to put finisher here? it's the same as 00:17:908 -
01:00:985 - how about change to d and 01:02:138 (139,140) - swap these notes? it can fits the vocal pitch better imo
01:17:908 - changing this to k could emphasis the high pitched voice better
01:22:138 - consider to add k for consistency with 01:15:985 -

[Muzukashii]

OD 4.5 or 5
00:20:792 - considering this session is relatively calm, i think the 1/2 chain is too long and better to remove this note
00:21:754 - remove for 2/1 break. You also made longer rest in futsuu at this spot.
00:23:869 - remove for same reason as above point
00:25:985 - ^
00:28:100 - can be removed as well
00:30:215 - give finisher?
00:34:061 - , 00:34:254 - , 00:34:638 - considering the difference in the break length with futsuu it would be much better to remove these notes.
00:38:292 - same as ^
00:41:561 - instead you can start building the density by adding d here
00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - while you're at it, i think changing these to k-k-d-k-d could make it flows better
00:45:408 - removing this could emphasis the finisher at 00:45:600 - better imo. Spread becomes smoother as well

The second kiai should be more dense and no need for many weird break length. It's pretty lenient compared with other parts in this diff and makes unbalanced spread. I didn't mention the reason because it's mostly easy to catch the instrument.
00:57:427 (1,2) - For preparation you can remove these notes for 2/1 break before the kiai rather than scattered around in the middle of the session.
01:00:215 - add d
01:02:331 - add d,
01:03:196 - move to 01:03:388 -
01:03:677 - change to d
01:04:446 - , 01:05:311 - can add d
01:12:523 - add k
01:14:638 - add k,
01:15:215 - , 01:15:792 - add d
01:17:138 - add d
01:20:023 - move to 01:19:254 -
01:20:985 - , 01:21:273 - add d
01:21:369 - change to d
01:22:138 - add k
01:25:023 - add k

[Skylish's Oni]

00:27:715 (10,11,12) - kkd plays smoother tbh
00:40:023 (10,11,12) - ^

[Rew's Inner Oni]

00:47:716 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - maybe change to d-kdkkddk? it creates better flow imo
00:49:638 (270,271) - swap to reflect the snare at (271) better?
00:52:331 - remove finisher and 00:52:427 - add d feels more natural with the vocal and drum
00:53:196 - remove? no sound and i think it can emphasis the vocal better
00:58:100 - consider to remove, i think double fits better with the drum and emphasis the vocal in a way better
01:04:254 - same as ^
01:10:408 - same as ^
01:03:581 - add d? i think it's nice to make longer pattern in this part
01:15:888 - , 01:16:081 - add d?
01:17:811 - consider to remove, the vocal needs to be highlighted here imo
01:20:792 (1,2) - change to k-d? it's nice to reflect the high pitch in the first note
01:21:561 - change to k? same reason as ^
01:23:292 - , 01:23:388 - add d? feels empty since there is the drum playing there

Calorie Queen.

Last edited by Volta 2017-12-12T04:09:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Skylish

1,070 posts

Joined June 2013

Skylish 2017-12-12T04:04:03+00:00

Volta wrote:
Hey!

[General]
Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit

> Agree that ~~(TV size)~~

[Skylish's Oni]
00:27:715 (10,11,12) - kkd plays smoother tbh
00:40:023 (10,11,12) - ^
> Applied all

Calorie Queen.

@Etsu: Please help me fix them directly. Thank you!

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-12-12T10:36:21+00:00

Volta wrote:
Hey!

[Rew's Inner Oni]
00:47:716 (256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263) - maybe change to d-kdkkddk? it creates better flow imo Change.
00:49:638 (270,271) - swap to reflect the snare at (271) better? Change.
00:52:331 - remove finisher and 00:52:427 - add d feels more natural with the vocal and drum Change.
00:53:196 - remove? no sound and i think it can emphasis the vocal better Change.
00:58:100 - consider to remove, i think double fits better with the drum and emphasis the vocal in a way better Change.
01:04:254 - same as ^ Change.
01:10:408 - same as ^ Change.
01:03:581 - add d? i think it's nice to make longer pattern in this part Change.
01:15:888 - , 01:16:081 - add d? Add on 01:15:888 -. at 01:16:081 - I unheard the melody hear so I not add it.
01:17:811 - consider to remove, the vocal needs to be highlighted here imo Change.
01:20:792 (1,2) - change to k-d? it's nice to reflect the high pitch in the first note Change.
01:21:561 - change to k? same reason as ^ Change.
01:23:292 - , 01:23:388 - add d? feels empty since there is the drum playing there Change to k.

Calorie Queen.

Thank you so much

Rew's Inner Oni

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Etsu

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Etsu 2017-12-15T23:36:49+00:00

Volta wrote:
Hey! Calorie Queen

[General]
Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen

Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit //true there is no source that says that so fixed.

[Kantan]
OD 3, you're babying new player too much imo. //changed

00:08:292 - i think you can add d here to reflect the melody and make the kiai denser //~~not think so, I feel good adding in~~ 00:09:061 - ~~is better imo~~. //yes changed
00:18:677 - consider to create 4/1 break at the end of kiai by deleting this note. //okay
00:30:985 - remove for same reason as above, and 00:30:600 - you can move this to 00:29:061 - (vocal based) or 00:29:831 - (drum based) but i prefer the first one. //remove for break 4/1 and change d to first.
00:43:677 - the rhythm might be too complex for new player, so i highly suggest to remove this note
00:46:754 - same as ^ //yep
00:57:138 - consider to create a break here before 2nd kiai as well //okay remove
01:08:100 - remove? feels weird and a break is nice before the spinner build the tension to next part. //you're right
01:12:908 (5,6) - maybe swap? the pitch is going down and for consistency with 01:00:600 (79,80) - //okay
[Futsuu]
OD 4

00:30:215 - maybe you forgot to put finisher here? it's the same as 00:17:908 - //it's not so strong it's kind of poor that sound compared to the previous imo.
01:00:985 - how about change to d and 01:02:138 (139,140) - swap these notes? it can fits the vocal pitch better imo //i like
01:17:908 - changing this to k could emphasis the high pitched voice better //changed
01:22:138 - consider to add k for consistency with 01:15:985 - //okay

[Muzukashii]
OD 4.5 or 5

00:20:792 - considering this session is relatively calm, i think the 1/2 chain is too long and better to remove this note
00:21:754 - remove for 2/1 break. You also made longer rest in futsuu at this spot. //thought it would be more playable but it's too much so I'll eliminate it better.
00:23:869 - remove for same reason as above point
00:25:985 - ^ //removed
00:28:100 - can be removed as well //sure.
00:30:215 - give finisher? //it does not feel so strong imo

00:34:061 - , 00:34:254 - , 00:34:638 - considering the difference in the break length with futsuu it would be much better to remove these notes. //okay
00:38:292 - same as ^ //fixed
00:41:561 - instead you can start building the density by adding d here //~~it does not feel good but it would be in~~ 00:41:946 - ~~fit sound better imo~~. //now i like :3
00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - while you're at it, i think changing these to k-k-d-k-d could make it flows better
00:45:408 - removing this could emphasis the finisher at 00:45:600 - better imo. Spread becomes smoother as well //yes

The second kiai should be more dense and no need for many weird break length. It's pretty lenient compared with other parts in this diff and makes unbalanced spread. I didn't mention the reason because it's mostly easy to catch the instrument.
00:57:427 (1,2) - For preparation you can remove these notes for 2/1 break before the kiai rather than scattered around in the middle of the session. //you're right
01:00:215 - add d
01:02:331 - add d,
01:03:196 - move to 01:03:388 -
01:03:677 - change to d
01:04:446 - , 01:05:311 - can add d
01:12:523 - add k //I have followed the consistency better.
01:14:638 - add k,
01:15:215 - , 01:15:792 - add d
01:17:138 - add d
01:20:023 - move to 01:19:254 -
01:20:985 - , 01:21:273 - add d
01:21:369 - change to d //the triple feels somewhat dense with the previous finish so I will not add these notes.
01:22:138 - add k
01:25:023 - add k
//the rest is accepted.

Calorie Queen.

Thanks so much for the mod volta

Skylish wrote:

@Etsu: Please help me fix them directly. Thank you!

fixed!

Updated! all diff.
Edit: forget to mention that I made changes based on your mod :>

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Volta

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Volta 2017-12-16T03:02:23+00:00

a quick recheck (no kd)

[Kantan]

00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout.
01:11:177 - same as ^

call me back :3

Etsu

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Etsu 2017-12-16T04:47:39+00:00

Volta wrote:
a quick recheck (no kd)

[Kantan]
00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout. //haha i changed it because it not feel good but i will stay with your suggestion is feel better more thanks.
01:11:177 - same as ^
call me back :3

Updated!

Volta

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Volta 2017-12-16T08:24:45+00:00

Mapset looks sweet. Good luck.

Bubbled~

Etsu

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Etsu 2017-12-16T20:13:15+00:00

Volta wrote:
Mapset looks sweet. Good luck.

Bubbled~

Thank you volta ^^

Etsu

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Topic Starter

Etsu 2018-01-10T00:16:47+00:00

~~pop bubble for me did some change note to muzu, this week i will be selfmod likewise with other diff.~~
Edit: K-F-M Updated!

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Aisha

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Aisha 2018-02-01T23:39:46+00:00

aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p

[Kantan]

00:12:138 (9) - esta nota se siente fuera de lugar, la movería a 00:12:908 - y quedaría bastante mejor
00:16:369 (16) - te parece cambiarlo por spinner? el sonido es más largo que streamy

[Futsuu]

00:16:369 (28) - refer to K
00:29:061 (57) - podrías moverla a 00:30:023 - , se siente muy vacío y los tambores son muy notorios, por otra parte si sólo agregas queda muy denso, así que prefiriría verlo movido
00:58:292 (131) - me gustaría saber por qué no usas big note acá y sí en 00:59:831 (136) - , los niveles son iguales imo, los dos con bignote sería mejor
01:10:600 (2) - ^also
También podrías tomar esto para la Kantan y hacer las 4 big notes

[Muzu]

00:16:369 (46) - same

[Skylish's Oni]

as i can feel in the kiai, you're following electronic distortion sound as triplet, so i think it totally fits better to make a triple in 00:14:831 - instead 00:15:215 - , feels strange otherwise
00:52:811 (13) - this note sounds so overmapped imo, would be better if you delete so the focus on 00:52:331 (9,10,11) - is better

inner is cool

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