Volta wrote:

Hey! Calorie Queen

[General]

1. Title: Hey!カロリーQueen
   Romanised Title: Hey! Calorie Queen
   
   Can't seem to find any sources that stated (TV edit.) in the title, not even the ending credit //true there is no source that says that so fixed.

[Kantan]

1. OD 3, you're babying new player too much imo. //changed
   
   
2. 00:08:292 - i think you can add d here to reflect the melody and make the kiai denser //not think so, I feel good adding in 00:09:061 - is better imo. //yes changed
3. 00:18:677 - consider to create 4/1 break at the end of kiai by deleting this note. //okay
4. 00:30:985 - remove for same reason as above, and 00:30:600 - you can move this to 00:29:061 - (vocal based) or 00:29:831 - (drum based) but i prefer the first one. //remove for break 4/1 and change d to first.
5. 00:43:677 - the rhythm might be too complex for new player, so i highly suggest to remove this note
   00:46:754 - same as ^ //yep
6. 00:57:138 - consider to create a break here before 2nd kiai as well //okay remove
7. 01:08:100 - remove? feels weird and a break is nice before the spinner build the tension to next part. //you're right
8. 01:12:908 (5,6) - maybe swap? the pitch is going down and for consistency with 01:00:600 (79,80) - //okay

[Futsuu]

1. OD 4
   
   
2. 00:30:215 - maybe you forgot to put finisher here? it's the same as 00:17:908 - //it's not so strong it's kind of poor that sound compared to the previous imo.
3. 01:00:985 - how about change to d and 01:02:138 (139,140) - swap these notes? it can fits the vocal pitch better imo //i like
4. 01:17:908 - changing this to k could emphasis the high pitched voice better //changed
5. 01:22:138 - consider to add k for consistency with 01:15:985 - //okay
   

[Muzukashii]

1. OD 4.5 or 5
   
   
2. 00:20:792 - considering this session is relatively calm, i think the 1/2 chain is too long and better to remove this note
   00:21:754 - remove for 2/1 break. You also made longer rest in futsuu at this spot. //thought it would be more playable but it's too much so I'll eliminate it better.
3. 00:23:869 - remove for same reason as above point
   00:25:985 - ^ //removed
4. 00:28:100 - can be removed as well //sure.
5. 00:30:215 - give finisher? //it does not feel so strong imo
   
   
6. 00:34:061 - , 00:34:254 - , 00:34:638 - considering the difference in the break length with futsuu it would be much better to remove these notes. //okay
7. 00:38:292 - same as ^ //fixed
8. 00:41:561 - instead you can start building the density by adding d here //it does not feel good but it would be in 00:41:946 - fit sound better imo. //now i like :3
   00:40:215 (1,2,3,4,5) - while you're at it, i think changing these to k-k-d-k-d could make it flows better
9. 00:45:408 - removing this could emphasis the finisher at 00:45:600 - better imo. Spread becomes smoother as well //yes
   
   The second kiai should be more dense and no need for many weird break length. It's pretty lenient compared with other parts in this diff and makes unbalanced spread. I didn't mention the reason because it's mostly easy to catch the instrument.
10. 00:57:427 (1,2) - For preparation you can remove these notes for 2/1 break before the kiai rather than scattered around in the middle of the session. //you're right
    
11. 01:00:215 - add d
12. 01:02:331 - add d,
    01:03:196 - move to 01:03:388 -
    01:03:677 - change to d
13. 01:04:446 - , 01:05:311 - can add d
14. 01:12:523 - add k //I have followed the consistency better.
15. 01:14:638 - add k,
    01:15:215 - , 01:15:792 - add d
16. 01:17:138 - add d
17. 01:20:023 - move to 01:19:254 -
    01:20:985 - , 01:21:273 - add d
    01:21:369 - change to d //the triple feels somewhat dense with the previous finish so I will not add these notes.
18. 01:22:138 - add k
19. 01:25:023 - add k
    //the rest is accepted.
    

Calorie Queen.

Skylish wrote:

@Etsu: Please help me fix them directly. Thank you!

1. 00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout.
2. 01:11:177 - same as ^

Volta wrote:

a quick recheck (no kd)

[Kantan]

1. 00:58:869 (76,77) - i think this 1/2 pattern wasn't there before. Even if it's barely acceptable, i'd like to avoid using it when possible. How about 00:58:869 - remove this note and add k at 00:58:292 - instead for the shout. //haha i changed it because it not feel good but i will stay with your suggestion is feel better more thanks.
2. 01:11:177 - same as ^

call me back :3

Volta wrote:

Mapset looks sweet. Good luck.

Bubbled~

xfraczynho wrote:

aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p

[Kantan]

1. 00:12:138 (9) - esta nota se siente fuera de lugar, la movería a 00:12:908 - y quedaría bastante mejor //cierto no tenia sentido so changed, tambien agrege algunas notas como me sugirio volta ya que se siente muy simple con el kiai.
2. 00:16:369 (16) - te parece cambiarlo por spinner? el sonido es más largo que streamy //prefiero el slider encaja mejor por ese sonido largo imo

[Futsuu]

1. 00:16:369 (28) - refer to K //same reason in kantan
2. 00:29:061 (57) - podrías moverla a 00:30:023 - , se siente muy vacío y los tambores son muy notorios, por otra parte si sólo agregas queda muy denso, así que prefiriría verlo movido //tienes razón pero prefiero no agregar ya que solo me enfoco el vocal en esa sección para esta diff.
3. 00:58:292 (131) - me gustaría saber por qué no usas big note acá y sí en 00:59:831 (136) - , los niveles son iguales imo, los dos con bignote sería mejor //los niveles no me parecen iguales, el primero no gritan tan alto como el segundo en ese es notorio es por eso ademas pienso que quedaría un poco denso con mucho big así que lo mantendré como esta.
4. 01:10:600 (2) - ^also
   También podrías tomar esto para la Kantan y hacer las 4 big notes

[Muzu]

1. 00:16:369 (46) - same //same reason above

call me back, you know ~

xfraczynho wrote:

aquí estoy! mucho no hay que decir, el spread está bien y la consistencia igual :p

[Skylish's Oni]

1. as i can feel in the kiai, you're following electronic distortion sound as triplet, so i think it totally fits better to make a triple in 00:14:831 - instead 00:15:215 - , feels strange otherwise
   
   > 00:15:215 (11,12,13) - shows a progression of usage of 1/4 triplets, and a equalised density spread with 00:15:792 (15,16,17) - .
   
2. 00:52:811 (13) - this note sounds so overmapped imo, would be better if you delete so the focus on 00:52:331 (9,10,11) - is better
   
   > 00:52:811 - clear low pitch drum hits exactly. Another purpose for keeping it is: 00:52:715 (12,13,14,15,1) - / 00:54:254 (4,5,6,7,1) - , same repetitive pattern shows strong emphases at 00:53:292 - / 00:54:831 -

inner is cool

call me back, you know ~

xfraczynho wrote:

Kantan:
00:34:831 - 00:56:369 - la sección entera no tienen ningún break 4/1, aún considerando el 'low' bpm, es necesario. Podrías borrar 00:43:100 (36) - ya que siento que desde esta sección el doble cymbal alto es más notorio que en la sección anterior.
Aplica algo similar para la siguiente sección, aún siendo Kiai es un poco densa, borraría 01:17:523 (12) -
Sería suficiente para mí

Ayana Taketatsu

Noffy wrote:

what i literally checked a standard set of this same song earlier today for metadata
what a weird coincidence for a 2 year old anime opening (I guess it's partly because of season 2 airing right now ?_? ) //since i uploaded this set I've never let him die xd
wowowo
anyways

Hello, metadata check here
please fix romanised artist to

Ayana Taketatsu

it's her preferred romanisation and can be seen like, all over her website.
http://ayanataketatsu.jp/
yea

idk whether i can technically pop or not since i'm not a taiko bn and just a new standard bn learning about these kinds of rules still so i wont risk it but please fix the metadata

Noffy wrote:

what i literally checked a standard set of this same song earlier today for metadata
what a weird coincidence for a 2 year old anime opening (I guess it's partly because of season 2 airing right now ?_? )
wowowo
anyways

Hello, metadata check here
please fix romanised artist to

Ayana Taketatsu

it's her preferred romanisation and can be seen like, all over her website.
http://ayanataketatsu.jp/
yea

Tyistiana wrote:

Finally, congratz! Etsu :3

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

Finally gratz~

Gemu- wrote:

Muchas felicidades Etsu! :3