[Easy]
00:02:928 (2928|1,3382|3,3837|2) - I prefer these notes doing a roll pattern here, i think that it will fit better for the tom drums:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001541 Guess that's kinda subjective. I like my pattern simply more00:17:473 (17473|2,17776|3) - I rather change the second longnote to |0| or |1|, for less effort on the right hand, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001582 <- The next notes stacks, look good in my opinion.
Changed00:27:928 (27928|1) - Move to |0| like the pattern used on 00:25:503 (25503|3,25655|1,25806|3), but inverted.
Changed00:29:897 (29897|2,30200|3,30503|0) - I would prefer a roll pattern for the violin sounds here, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001660 Again pretty subjective. I like mine more00:38:534 (38534|3,38685|2) - For vocal, i rather change the Longnote to |0| or |1|, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001690 Arranged the pattern differently. Maybe you noticed that i never had two LN's on the same hand. I always switched the Hand when i changed the LN, this is what i want to keep01:09:594 (69594|1,69746|2,69897|1,70049|0,70352|1) - I think will look better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001710 Trill doesn't fit hit.
The last note has a different pitch.01:25:352 - No chord for cymbal? I think will look good.
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Hitsounds(?):
00:20:049 (20049|2) - This isn't a kick or W?
changedBy the way, cymbals (in Insane for example) have a kick(W) at the same time, here not so much. I think is intentional? (or because the cymbal is a normalSet instead of drumSet and that limits the W/F/C in a same note). For example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001903 or
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9001983[Normal]
00:02:928 (2928|1,3382|2,3837|0) - Can you replace these Longnotes to Notes? I think will be more easier, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002143 Mh, i think you're right. Such LNs i better keep for the Hard00:13:837 (13837|1) - I think this is a longnote, that ends on 00:14:443.
Ohhhh. Looks like i overlooked it. Nice catch!00:16:261 (16261|2) - ^Same as before, but ends on 00:16:867.
Damn, how did that happend. Changed00:38:685 (38685|2,38988|1,38988|3) - I rather change the position of the longnotes for vocal, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002603 Mh..
i guess that's kinda subjective. My personal preference is like i mapped so i keep it.00:45:200 (45200|0) - I think this a Longnote for violin, ends on 00:45:352.
I disagree. I don't hear a violin here anymore00:52:625 - About this part, i rather accentuate better the drumrolls like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002638 I give it a try01:01:261 (61261|2,61412|1) - I think that will better in |1|,|0| and after |2|,|3| for vocal, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002699 Mh..
personal preference again. I like mine more01:13:534 - I would add note here to be more consistent with the next difficulty. I mean here there isn't any note, but in Hard there is a chord.
I don't think that's necessary here01:20:200 (80200|1,80503|1,80806|1) - I think this part can be inverted for evade that stack, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002751 That's not even that noticeable and i like these pattern here as a whole one :c---------------------
Hitsounds:
00:42:776 (42776|0) - I think that this is snare(C).
[Hard]
00:07:776 - I think that this stream will be more clean to read like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002876 I personally prefer'd pattern like mine. This little bit "random" placed has a special charm i always liked00:08:988 - I rather change of hand between each stack, maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002905 I think we are different here xP I like mine 00:10:655 - I think that this fits better the drumroll sound:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9002940 Same as at the first suggestion00:17:776 (17776|1,18079|1,18382|1,18685|1) - I rather change this and the stacks on 00:19:746 - maybe like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003018 Arranged a bit differently but overall accepted i guess00:29:594 (29594|3,29594|2,29897|1,29897|2,30200|0,30200|2,30503|3,30503|2) - I think would be easier with only one longnote, when i compare this part with the Insane difficulty i was thinking: "Where was the second longnote?" Suggestion:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003092 It would be easier but here we are again with personal preference 
00:36:261 (36261|0,36412|3,36564|2) - I think will look better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003113 changed00:49:897 - I would add a note on |3| here, so it will more similar to the next difficulty in density.
No. That would make it too hard00:50:200 (50200|0,50200|1,50503|0,50503|2,50806|3,50806|0,51109|1,51109|3) - This part without Longnotes look more easier than the Normal, maybe change to this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003193 I had it with 1/2 notes before but i didn't like it01:13:534 (73534|3,73534|2) - I think that mapping the kicks will be better, also to be more consistent with the Normal difficulty:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003863 Mh.. tried it but don't like it :/01:15:049 - Add a note on |2| for snare drum. A chord like 01:13:837 (73837|1,73837|3).
Oops. Added01:19:329 and 01:19:784 - 1/8 Snap, You could add 1 note for snare in this points, to be more consistent with the next difficulty.
I'm aware of it but this isn't a problem with the next difficulty. I will NOT add 1/8 into my hard.01:25:352 - I think a Hand/Triple for end will look good.
Mh.. no[Insane]
00:02:776 - About this part i rather change it to use more Longnotes, in my opinion is like the Hard difficulty, Suggestions:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003922 ,
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003927 Oh god n-o. I dislike00:05:049 - I think that you can add a note here for snare:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9003941 But like this it plays better00:10:049 (10049|3) - I rather erase this note, i think will be more balanced when you compare this part with Hard difficulty.
Not a big deal i think. Used pattern like this in previous maps too00:10:655 to 00:11:412 - I think is balanced... but in Hard was a stream. Well, here there are SVs so up to you here, look nice anyway.
Jup.
Because of SV i didn't add the stream00:16:716 (16716|1,16867|3) - I think that this will look better:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004009 changed00:17:170 (17170|0,17322|0,17625|0,17776|0) - I rather move 00:17:625 (17625|0) to |2|, there are many notes on |0|.
Good catch00:23:231 (23231|0) - This Longnote is for guitar/vocal? Because you can do Longnote on 00:22:019 (22019|2) - if it's for guitar. Up to you. Skipping the next ones from now on.
Wasn't sure here. Added00:24:746 (24746|2,24897|2,24897|3,25049|3) - The stacks will be more balanced like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004061 Good catch00:28:988 (28988|2,29140|2,29140|3,29291|3) - I think that will better for less effort like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004093 Changed a bit differently00:29:594 - If the Longnotes are suited by pitch, then ignore this, but if not maybe look better like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004107 PR00:37:625 (37625|1,37625|0,37776|0,37776|1) - I rather move 00:37:776 (37776|1) to |3| instead.
Changed00:40:352 (40352|3,40503|3,40655|2) - I think that will look better inverted, like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004136 Changed00:47:170 (47170|1,47322|1,47473|1,47625|1) - I think will be better if you change the position of 00:47:625 (47625|1,47776|2) - like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004165 Changed00:50:200 to 00:51:109 - You could add 1 Longnote for each Hand for violin, if you like. That... depends of the SVs here. Still look nice.
I rather have it without LN 00:53:534 (53534|2,53685|2,53837|2,53988|2) - For better rest on the right hand, you could move like this instead:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004225 Changed01:02:928 - I think that the left hand have better rest, so i would move 01:03:685 (63685|3,63837|0,63837|3,63988|2,64594|0,64746|3) - like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004281 Changed01:09:443 (69443|2,69443|3,69594|2,69746|2,69897|3) - I rather swap 01:09:746 (69746|2,69897|3) - like this:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9004302 ChangedReally Cool SVs! :3
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Hitsounds:
00:20:352 (20352|0) - I think that this is snare(C).
Yup01:02:625 (62625|0) - ^Also, snare. (I looked the Normal and Easy diff.)
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Beginner by me | 100% Hitsounded
Normal by me | 100% Hitsounded
Hard by me | 100% Hitsounded
Insane by me | 100% HitsoundedHere's the reason why i added a Beginner diff. I asked several people in #german who doesn't play Mania for testplay for the Easy difficultie. All of them told me they don't like it because it's simply too hard. While for experianced player the Easy might look really.. well.. Easy, it didn't for them. According to feedback and several more testplays this is the Beginner which most of them liked!
