hello there
[box=[SGYuno:1337]]
00:07:844 (2) - this whole section isn't mapped to anything in the music. i would recommend cutting this and starting at the (7) in the combo
00:16:750 (3) - not snapped to 1/4 tick
00:18:625 (7) - ^
(you may have had these snapped to 1/3 on purpose to match the music, but change the offset to the proper time first and it will sound correct in 1/4)
there may also be a few more notes that need proper snapping in this section
00:20:500 (3) - needs to be snapped (check AiMod before asking for mods)
00:30:897 (5) - distance snapping for the slider jumps in this section is very strange. it should be evened out and made closer together after lowering the sv (assuming this is a hard difficulty)
01:08:633 (1) - spacing between notes really needs to be evened out here
01:28:555 (2) - what does this slider represent in the music?
note: i would recommend a song with less timing changes for just starting out. these can be pretty hard to time properly
good luck friendo ♡
general
ar9 is extremely high for this difficulty
the sv is also rather high in the 150bpm section, and the freeform sliders are too much for a hard map
if you're aiming for ranked you'll need more difficulties
timing is off a bit. offset for your timing sections/changes should be:
(128bpm) 5959
(150bpm) 28901
(110bpm) 50285
(128bpm) 65565
also, don't add in unnecessary red lines. they can easily throw off the offset of the song if you make further timing changes without adjusting them
the kiai sections seem to be a bit random. i would probably leave kiai out of the map altogether or leave it for the last section
also the metadata should probably be something other than various artists, but i couldn't tell you what to change it to. ask around in #modhelp
many of the combos should be changed. combos should represent new phrases and/or patterns in the map, not placed in the middle of them
the sv is also rather high in the 150bpm section, and the freeform sliders are too much for a hard map
if you're aiming for ranked you'll need more difficulties
timing is off a bit. offset for your timing sections/changes should be:
(128bpm) 5959
(150bpm) 28901
(110bpm) 50285
(128bpm) 65565
also, don't add in unnecessary red lines. they can easily throw off the offset of the song if you make further timing changes without adjusting them
the kiai sections seem to be a bit random. i would probably leave kiai out of the map altogether or leave it for the last section
also the metadata should probably be something other than various artists, but i couldn't tell you what to change it to. ask around in #modhelp
many of the combos should be changed. combos should represent new phrases and/or patterns in the map, not placed in the middle of them
[box=[SGYuno:1337]]
00:07:844 (2) - this whole section isn't mapped to anything in the music. i would recommend cutting this and starting at the (7) in the combo
00:16:750 (3) - not snapped to 1/4 tick
00:18:625 (7) - ^
(you may have had these snapped to 1/3 on purpose to match the music, but change the offset to the proper time first and it will sound correct in 1/4)
there may also be a few more notes that need proper snapping in this section
00:20:500 (3) - needs to be snapped (check AiMod before asking for mods)
00:30:897 (5) - distance snapping for the slider jumps in this section is very strange. it should be evened out and made closer together after lowering the sv (assuming this is a hard difficulty)
01:08:633 (1) - spacing between notes really needs to be evened out here
01:28:555 (2) - what does this slider represent in the music?
note: i would recommend a song with less timing changes for just starting out. these can be pretty hard to time properly
good luck friendo ♡