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- 00:30:883 (2) - would move this a bit more to the right like x238, makes 00:29:228 (4,1,2) - play smoother
- 00:34:210 (2,5) - minor stack off
- 01:39:333 (4,2) - would try to avoid those those tails minor overlapping, looks a ugly
- 02:02:146 (5,2) - ^ just a bit to the left and its fixed[
- 02:08:637 (3) - missing finish on this diff, for the other diffs you used 2 finishes for the last 2 notes but maybe try to change these into a clap instead since you got the snare here with no cymbals and kinda removes a bit of finish spam
- 00:21:048 (2) - only "real" jump you got here in the diff for these and similar parts, the rest has some leniency so this kinda felt a bit off to me compared to the rest of the diff, might wanna try control + g it
- 00:40:241 (1) - maybe start at the downbeat here since theres the highpoint of the vocal and theres not really anything atm at the red tick. Just feels that 00:40:448 (1,2) - should be similar lenght due to the vocals having the same tempo
- 02:07:436 (1) - might need to put a 150bpm line here so the ending of 02:07:636 (2) - is snapped
- 00:07:205 (8,3) - could try stacking these since they're really close to stacking anyway atm, makes it look a bit cleaner
- 00:16:524 (6) - try to rotate this by -60° on the spot and 00:16:938 (7) - -15°, you'll lose that stack but this transition will play a lot smoother 00:16:318 (5,6,7,1,2) -
- 00:40:448 (1) - same like insane
- 01:02:925 (4,5) - would move 4 a bit more to the right and 5 more to the left equally so you have more momentum for 01:03:332 (6,1) -
- 01:13:015 (4,2,4) - could polish this pattern up a bit, one part got the slider borders touching others spacing between wich makes it kinda noticable that its a bit uneven, bit similar like here 01:28:667 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing kinda uneven
- 01:33:580 (1) - move a bit up here, the overlap due to the stacking from prev trip feels a bit off
- 01:48:478 (2,3) - bit anti jumpy since its the only one of its kinda for this section, a bit more ds here would be good like moving 01:47:858 (5,2) - more upwards
- 01:57:836 (1,2) - placing the NC on 2 makes this pattern alot more readable and a 9 combo in a 4/4 kinda looks like something is off