sorry to very late modding ;w;
Rain■ 00:07:309 (1,2,3) -
this rhythm would be better because 00:07:309 is high pitch but 00:07:709 is low pitch so using same slider wouldnt be good and between 000:08:109 and 00:08:409, it'll be nice if there is dash
■ 00:11:309 (1) - if you want keep this spinner time, add note on 00:12:909 but if you dont want, make 00:10:909 (5) be slider and move spinner to 00:11:709
■ 00:14:509 (3,4) - make more distance. compared with previous patterns, it's too near
■ 00:15:309 (5,6) - ^
■ 00:16:409 - there's lyric so you should add note on here or use slider
■ 00:18:109 (1) -
this rhythm would be nice because lyrics are on 00:18:309 and 00:18:509
■ 00:32:909 (2,3) - move the the left to maker more distances
■ 00:36:109 (3,4) - make more distance. it's too near
■ 00:54:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you can change these hitsounds too loud to use at this song
■ 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
good luck!