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- 00:04:755 (1,3) - These two sliders seem to be in the same place, making the pattern quite monotonous. There's lots of room for new patterns here, so this diff will be more creative if you change this.
- 00:16:462 (5,1) - Have your NC at (5) instead of (1), to be consistent with your NC pattern. (One NC per two downbeats)
- 00:19:389 (2,3) - Perhaps you could move (3) to the right a bit? Having 90° flow seems dull here.
- 00:22:315 (1,1) - Why is there so many finishes here? You should only use finishes when a beat is really powerful, or if you can hear a cymbal in the music. Therefore, I suggest you get rid of all the finishes on these notes and add one at the head of 00:28:169 (1) - instead. This issue is also present in Easy and Normal.
- 00:28:169 (1) - Remove the NC here, as it breaks the NC pattern you have.
- 00:28:169 (1,2) - This overlap looks a bit scruffy, adjust the pattern so that no overlap is visible. This will make the map look nicer, and it will be easier read by beginners.
- 00:30:730 (4,5) - Here's another overlap that can be easily avoided. Move (5) further so it complies with distance snap (1.3x).
- 00:33:291 (1,2) - Again, for consistency I recommend you have an NC at (2) instead.
- 00:39:145 (1,2) - ^
- 00:51:584 (1,2) - Blatant spacing error here, move (2) so that it's 1.3x away from (1). Consistent spacing is needed for new players to learn the correlation between distance and when to hit.
- 00:19:389 (4,5) - I think you could create a nicer blanket here. Curve (4) a bit more so that its trail is parallel with the head of (5). Like this.
- 00:33:291 (6) - The end of this slider is on a fairly strong sound, so I recommend shortening this slider to 1/2 and to add a circle on the downbeat. This is better because the downbeat will actually be clickable, providing more intuitive gameplay.
- 00:35:486 (2,3) - It would be better if you moved (3) so that it's head would be blanketed under (2). This will look nicer and be more structured.
- 01:04:755 (2,3) - Again, this blanket also needs some work. Make sure (3) is parallel with the trail of (2).
- 00:14:267 (2,3) - This pattern is poorly structured, as it doesn't really represent anything. It's also very hard to read, due to how the slider end is hidden. For these reasons I suggest you change this pattern into something more appropriate.
- 00:31:828 (1,2,3) - It would look nicer if this was a perfect, equilateral triangle ((1),(2), and the head of (3)) as it appears more structured.
- 00:53:230 (3,4,5,6) - I'm pretty sure this is overmapped, as nothing in the music suggests all this 1/4. To solve this, I would get rid of (4) and make (3,5) the ends of a slider. This rhythm would be much better because it appropriately covers the main parts of the melody, whilst being simple to understand. The rhythm looks like this on the timeline, in case you are wondering.