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offset is a bit weird i guess try 820 mod will be in old offset
is it just me or does your file have an unused storyboard
offset is a bit weird i guess try 820 mod will be in old offset
is it just me or does your file have an unused storyboard
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00:14:402 (14402|1) - maybe to 1 because like 00:14:087 (14087|0,14245|0,14402|1) - has the thing sound thing i am bad at descriptions also 00:14:402 (14402|3,14402|1,14560|3,14560|1) - weird to make these the same chords00:16:139 (16139|2,16613|0) - cause i saw like 00:12:824 (12824|1,13613|1) - this thing where you repeated patterns i thought you could maybe change 00:16:613 (16613|0,16771|2,16771|3) - into 3[34] or 3[23]; second one a bit gayer
00:18:429 - you ignored a woosh thing here which you did not ignore back at 00:12:074 (12074|2) - ok maybe theyre a bit different but the woosh thing is still there
00:18:745 - $10% people will complain
00:21:271 - $20% people will complain
idm these btw
00:25:060 -
00:21:666 (21666|3,21666|2,21824|2,21824|3) - second chord should be a bit more airy
00:21:745 - also theres snares on the 1/4s here too but again idm ignoring these
00:22:218 (22218|2,22297|3) - flip so it looks like 00:10:218 (10218|1,10297|3,10376|1,10455|3) - maybe
00:22:455 (22455|3,22534|2,22613|0,22613|1) - you can flip this since last round you already did the slap snare sound on [12] also it follows up with 00:23:245 (23245|3,23245|2) -
00:23:402 (23402|0) - is there enough emphasis idk
00:23:718 (23718|2) - starts 1/8 before
00:24:429 (24429|0) - probably some weird ass 1/7.9999999295i9568945678903567892357890235 snap but its defs. not this late also it should?? end early but i get why it ends at 1/2 anw
make sure to transfer over the snapped LNs to the other diffs btw
00:26:718 (26718|2,26876|1,26876|3) - sounds like where youd put some LN thing
00:27:902 (27902|1,28139|2,28376|3) - would prefer if these were in the same column to make the jumpy effect more pronounced
00:30:192 (30192|3,30192|2,30350|3,30350|0,30508|0,30508|1) - i guess this is somewhat of a good compromise but like idk i feel like it's not really enough
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cuz the middle 323 makes it such that it focuses the player more on the inner columns and by doing that the [34][23][12] thing looks wayyyy more obvious idk my opinion im stupid
00:31:929 (31929|0) - if you did above then this would make sense to go to er 3 yes
00:31:929 (31929|1,31929|0,32087|0,32087|2,32087|3,32245|1,32245|3,32402|2,32402|3,32402|0) - if you want this to be more cohesive then erm do the above and 00:32:245 (32245|3) - shift to 3 also
i think you have to adjust the stuff above if you do this
00:32:560 (32560|2,32797|0,33034|3) - same thing as before would prefer if in same column
00:33:271 - think if you did above then this can look something like
this
idk though it looks a bit monotonous
00:35:245 - part is a bit copy pasted so will assume same position for this part
00:38:560 (38560|3) - i think 1 LN is enough this note kinda detracts from the swooosh feeling for me
can see a bit of repetition for this whole part so will assume you can apply throughout so will stop pointing (why am i even assuming you definitely do)
00:48:508 - starting back here
01:04:929 (64929|0,65087|0,65245|0) - seems like a bit of a victim of circumstance here, i think the stack thing should be better off within 01:04:613 (64613|1,64613|0,64771|1,64850|3,64929|0,65008|2) - notes like these
01:08:560 (68560|0,68560|1,68639|2,68797|2,68797|3,68876|1) - shouldnt the double be on the like next 1/4 with the snare thing
01:09:350 (69350|3,69429|1,69508|2,69587|1,69666|3,69666|0) - maybe change to like idk 2424[13]
01:09:666 - only reason why it sounds so weird here is because the offset is a bit off so ill try my best to decipher stuff
01:15:034 (75034|2,75034|3,75034|0,75350|2,75350|1,75350|0) - perhaps same columns
01:18:824 (78824|2) - maybe LN
think part after preview point is about the same as before, so you can extrapolate but ill try to point out some other stuff
regarding the 01:33:192 (93192|3,93429|1,93666|3) - i think theres should be a way to execute it without making everything the same, maybe like do this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9065138 for the first half and then make them in the same columns for the second
another suggeggstiong would be 01:43:297 (103297|3,103376|2,103534|2,103613|3,103771|3,103850|2) - doing something like this for the first part and then graduating to the same column thing (btw i dont really think shapes like [13][31][13] are too obvious to the player so you could exercise some caution with that i guess maybe)
this page will be washed with blood probably
01:49:218 (109218|3,109218|2,109297|0,109297|1) - think this is a bit disingenuous (if you can call a pattern that), personally feel that there should be more emphasis on 01:49:297 (109297|1,109297|0) - cause it should pair with 01:49:455 (109455|2,109455|3,109455|0) -
01:54:271 (114271|1,114350|2,114429|0,114429|1,114508|3,114508|2) - case here is a bit different (and should be fine imo), now theres 1/4 note stuff beforehand lending further expectations of emphasis on the ending snare note
02:41:087 (161087|1,161087|0,161166|0,161166|1) - maybe not double double but double single, not strong enough to me
if you like did the above then 02:41:639 (161639|2,161639|3,161718|1,161876|1,161876|2,161955|0) - could possibly be the same as that thing
02:44:560 (164560|2,164560|1) - 03:04:771 (184771|2,184771|1) - these are a bit iffy to be doubled
02:51:666 (171666|2,171666|3) - snare is a bit different from your usual 02:50:402 (170402|2,170402|3) - ones
02:59:876 (179876|1,179876|0) - you did the 1/8 grace thing here ok now im beginning to doubt the legitimacy of 02:39:666 (159666|0,159705|1) -
03:01:297 (181297|3,181297|2,181376|2,181376|3) - same thing as above here
also related stuff are the same
03:10:297 - maybe end on some weird offseted note lol idk
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literally me rn00:10:850 (10850|2,10929|1) - shift one to left, 00:10:534 (10534|3,10613|2) - differentiates it
00:14:560 (14560|0,14718|1,14718|0,14876|1) - part is actually denser than observer
00:32:560 - somewhat similar comment on this part, up to you to decide i guess; will not mention
01:33:192 - actually the progression here is cool i like it
00:38:560 (38560|2,38560|3) - same deal, a bit too much emphasis for me imo
01:12:666 (72666|0) - forgot to mention that this LN is a bit too long to me applies to all diffs
02:38:402 (158402|1) - to 4, mirrors the pattern before
02:58:613 (178613|1) - same as above
02:38:876 (158876|1) - think its fine if you remove this note, better to assimilate into the pattern straightway given how the music throws you into the weird sounds right from the get go
02:59:087 (179087|0) - woo
02:41:087 (161087|3,161087|2,161166|0,161166|1) - kind of the same deal? like double double is too much, double single fits better etc.
03:01:297 (181297|3,181297|2,181376|0,181376|1) - mmmmm
you can only really point out so much in lower diffs
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00:14:008 (14008|0) - misleading to me, better to just focus on the tututut sound for now
00:24:350 (24350|1) - idk you should fix the LN snap first imo right now this part kinda runs weirdly, feels like this note is out of place
01:11:876 (71876|1,71981|2,72087|1,72192|3) - maybe use an LN cause its hard to follow the sounds and noob people will assume theyre 1/4s
01:12:824 (72824|2,72824|3,72929|1,73034|2,73139|1) - these are a bit more obvious so theyre ok i think
02:35:087 (155087|3,155245|2,155402|3,155560|2,155718|3,155876|2,156034|3,156113|2) - watch as 500 nominators point this out
02:38:955 (158955|2,159192|0,159192|3,159429|2,159429|0,159666|0,159666|1) - personally feel its a bit misleading to leave out the snares, you can either 1) let the LN start on the snare rather than the wowowowoah thing and end at the same place, or 2) do something like 12 34 13 or something bolded are LNs
02:41:718 (161718|2,161797|3) - flip because 02:41:560 (161560|2,161797|3) - snare snare
02:53:955 (173955|0,174034|1,174113|0) - this is quite a feisty spike in difficulty
02:59:166 (179166|2,179402|3,179402|0,179639|2,179639|0,179876|0,179876|1) - same as above
03:01:929 (181929|2,182008|3) - UWU?!
ok good