Taikocracy wrote:

wow who thought i'd be back

00:13:893 (31,32) - i'd use kkd here to bring out the bass and vocal hit on 00:14:219 - ok
00:17:806 (46,47) - same thing here kind of, except this is more optional because the instrument sounds like it's being cut off at this spot, a don could go here if you'd like one to be there would rather map to vocals in this section, so no change
00:24:328 (69,70) - refer to #1 ok
00:49:436 (152,153,154,155) - could go k d d k instead to emphasize the bass drum hits as oppose to the vocals, which works better imo as a transition from the off-beat rhythm changed to K d d k, as there's a crash at the K i think
00:56:936 (171,172,173) - kkd maybe to show that note 173 is lower in pitch than 171 and 172 when compared vocally pitch is still high enough here, so no change
01:16:012 (239,240,241,242,243) - idk if i recommend using a 1/8 kkk here, i'd simply just make it k k d d because it will have the same effect, but if you really want to keep it then i recommend kkd k d instead, note 242 is a snare hit and higher than 243, 241 would be a d just to help it flow a little bit better than kkk k changed to kkd d d, i want to keep the 1/8 simple enough to introduce this into the map
02:21:067 (478,479,480,481,482,483) - same thing for here^ did same thing as above
02:36:067 (534,535,536,537) - could be kkdkd if you want because of the drum hit between notes 536 and 537 ok
02:49:925 (587,588,589,590,591) - same as 01:16:012 - same change as above
03:20:089 (701,702,703,704,705,706) - imo this should be kdkkd k instead because there's a clear drum hit on 03:20:252 - and ignoring it for the sake of this pattern sounds really off-putting ok
03:40:958 (772,773,774,775,776) - for all the other patterns like it as well, although i clearly understand the choice of improv here, it's inappropriate as this section is still fairly calm, improv in a calm section like i've written below isn't really appropriate i don't want to ignore the drums in the background, and the idea is introduced enough with the sliders in the first section like this, so no change
04:00:849 (844,845,846) - i recommend deleting 844 and 845 for the sake of simplicity in this section, it's calm so the improv isn't really needed i agree with the simplicity, but i'm only going to remove 846 so this section isn't too boring and make sure the vocals are represented in this part
04:39:002 (989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - i struggle liking this patterning, dk dkdkkd sounds much more appropriate seeing as 991 isn't really mapped to any concrete sound changed to dk ((kkd))dkkD to remain consistent with the patterns before it
04:59:871 (1070,1071,1072,1073,1074,1075,1076,1077) - dkddkdkkd reflects the music better as the current patternage skips the drum beat on 05:00:360 - and the triplet sounds kind of weird too ok

really minor things, overall the map is fine and has some potential due to it's simplicity

Vulkin wrote:

Fateful Journey
idk why, just felt like saying it

-Delusion-
The diff is way too polished imo, the only thing that i could try is to give small suggestions in how to follow drums, and because of it, its going to be like a mod that i used to do back when i started modding
Note patterns like for ex ddkdk are in 1/4
00:14:871 (35) - Maybe k? could follow the drums a bit ok
00:18:784 (50) - ^ ok
00:22:371 (63,64) - Ctrl+G because ^ ok
00:28:893 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630639 ^ only changed 88 to k, i want the guitar in the background to be represented here
00:41:773 - I think this sounds more like dkdkkd snare is only present in d"kkk"dd, so no change
00:50:252 - add a d maybe? for the drum ok
01:15:197 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630655 could follow drums somewhat better this would ruin the difficulty progression of the kiai's, as i want to keep a 1/4 gap here, so no change
01:16:828 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630664 ^ changed it to this instead
01:23:023 - kdkkd it's 1/2 here for vocals, and i want to keep this kiai easy enough for difficulty progression, so no change
01:26:121 - could really add a k here for the drums same as above, no change
01:27:262 (289) - not sure why, but this could sound better as K i want to represent the comparatively low pitch to this half of the kiai in this part, so no change
01:35:415 - i dont think putting that many sliders is a good idea this introduces players to the 1/8 streams in the map, so no change
01:40:958 - i dont hear anything where you placed the 1/8, might want to remove them mapped to drumrolls, so no change
01:59:545 - kdkkd changed to dkd k
02:03:132 (428) - maybe k? higher pitch than previous note imo still a low pitch compared to the notes after it, no change
02:05:904 (440) - and this k because previous note (k) is the same pitch with drum ok
02:21:719 (496) - maybe k? i hear a tom here, so no change
02:41:773 - maybe a d here for the drums? ok
02:50:415 (606) - maybe k? ok
02:55:958 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9630747 way too many k's for this part, and the way i mapped this part i'm 100% sure i balanced vocals and drums enough, no change
03:00:034 (645,646) - Ctrl+G so the k follow durms and d voices ok
04:20:904 - a k could follow for drums ok
04:23:023 - kdkkd this is mapped to background violin (?), so no change
04:25:306 (949) - k ok
04:25:632 - kdkkd would ruin the triplet scheme i have going here, no change
04:26:610 (955) - k mapped to voal, no change
04:28:893 - ddkdkkD ok
04:41:284 - ddkkd k ok
04:46:502 - ddkdk changed to ddkkk instead, i want the vocals to pop out here like in the other sections
04:48:947 (1051) - maybe move to 04:49:599 - for drums ok

sorry if the mod doesnt help at all, orz
its too good for me LOL

Raphalge wrote:

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00:25:632 (75,76,77,78) - re-arrange into 2 doubles for consistency with the rest of the section? ok
01:16:502 (247) - change to k for the higher pitch bass? I also think a lot of players would recognize the kkddk pattern and having an easier time hitting it. ok
01:41:284 (329) - change to k to maximize simplicity? can change 01:42:915 (340) - to k to keep it unique with its loud drums no change on first part because i'd be mapping k to nothing, but ok on second part
01:51:882 - add d? skipping the "mi" in "himitsu" sounds kinda weird imo added at 01:52:045 - instead because that's when she says "mi"
02:21:719 (489) - change to k for the same playability stuff as 01:16:502 (247) but also to maximize contrast between it and 02:22:045 (490) - ? i think i'll leave it as d here to hint at the difficulty increase, so no change
02:57:589 (626) - change to d for basically no reason? I have no idea why but it being k bothers me vocal is high here, so no change
03:19:110 (706) - change to k? it's the highest pitched note in the pattern and would provide nice contrast between it and the coming finisher ok
03:43:893 (800) - change to k to match the previous 2 1/8's? there might be a very subtle change in sound that I'm missing but k d d at the end of it sounds nice. ok
03:44:871 (807) - sounds like there's some more higher pitch bass here, change to k for that and also the k d d reason from before? i mapped this part to the drumroll, which is always a d sound anyway, so no change
04:01:175 - skipped sound? d would sound fine here imo there's no note here to emphasize the vocal break, so no change
04:54:002 (1060) - 04:54:654 (1062) - change to K for vocal emphasis? Would also flow a bit better I think. ok
05:19:778 (1) - shorten the spinner end to 05:23:039 - ? Sounds like the audible part of the reverb cuts out there i hear the reverb end at 05:23:202 - so i moved the end there

I hope a lot of the suggestions weren't too subjective. Really nice map, osu needs more low bpm!!!

Astolfo wrote:

https://gyazo.com/023f76ed55d497af7e6b9dc4be2150af

general:
od6? with this low bpm and the 1/8 rolls its hard to acc kinda owo.. 5 or 5.something better od6 to avoid notelock in 1/8's, and because od5 is lame

dif:
00:06:067 - to 00:10:958 - feel this is undermapped , not sure how to go about it but there are a lot of snare sounds in this section that could be mapped made some triples to fit the snare
01:19:273 - k here since this whole section is followin the vocal p much a 5-stream would be out of place here, and the pattern would be awkward to read in the first place, so no change
01:26:121 - also since u mapped that previous triple snare sound this one should be mapped too 5-stream would be out of place here, no change
01:35:741 - i thought there was a guideline for not having sliders at a low bpm because it acts as double bpm for the ticks but its not there anymore ok
but i still dont recommend sliders at this bpm for the same reason it introduces the players more to the 1/8 drumrolls, so no change
also why does it change here ? 01:39:654 - hi-hat is introduced here, and i want to map to that
01:49:762 - kinda random double.. 01:48:295 (367) - this ccan be removed and 01:49:110 - can be changed to ddkkd k ok
01:54:654 - kkd triple for the snare sound ok
id put a d on 02:05:578 - just for the sake of playing more comfortably tbh 1/4 doubles are poo (in this case 1/8 but u get it) would create a difficulty spike in this calmish section, and there's nothing to map there so no change
02:07:860 - snare sound ok
02:10:469 - ^ ok
02:23:349 - this little part is rly off i think dkk ddkdK sounds a lot better changed to D dkkkd K instead, and changed some notes before it
02:39:165 - add k and delet 02:39:491 (556) - ok
02:54:817 (617) - k owo ok
02:56:936 - kkkdk here then 02:56:936 - this triple remove middle note, theres no vocal part on the middle part i think you messed up the links here, but changed to kkk k d k
03:09:002 - to 03:29:545 - missing some snare sounds if u wanna map all of them, u can go and check ur self added some notes here so it builds up better to the long stream near the end of this section
03:40:795 (780,781) - no good pattern right here brother change first to d and ill do anything i promise made into kd((kdddk)) instead,
i want to represent voice here too
03:55:958 - try and only follow the drum stuff here it feels off with the vocal stuff mapped especially this double 04:00:849 (853,854) - when theres a clear hard downbeat note on the next white tick added some notes, and changed double to dkd i guess
04:11:936 - feel this is mapped very off, this goes exactly to the drum beat if u wanna use https://gyazo.com/5c47c13df33adbfe9b6c976852eb9879
(890 is on 1/3) removed the first note from the triple instead, i want to keep this part simple enough
04:22:534 (930) - d owo violin hits a high note here, no change
oki this last kiai in the beginning some triples feel out of place and then some snare stuff isnt being followed whats reasoning behind that (example 04:22:371 (929,930,931,932,933,934) - ) rushed mapping on my part, changed a lot of shit here
04:39:491 (1000) - new combo or u die tonight Nope
05:12:605 (1128,1129,1130,1131,1132) - dddkd sound better but poo pattern so idk changed to dkdkd instead


sorry picky gay mod probably the best mod i've gotten tbh

Sinnoh wrote:

how many people misread this as harumachi

Sinnoh wrote:

how many people misread this as harumachi