wow who thought i'd be back
00:13:893 (31,32) - i'd use kkd here to bring out the bass and vocal hit on 00:14:219 -
00:17:806 (46,47) - same thing here kind of, except this is more optional because the instrument sounds like it's being cut off at this spot, a don could go here if you'd like one to be there
00:24:328 (69,70) - refer to #1
00:49:436 (152,153,154,155) - could go k d d k instead to emphasize the bass drum hits as oppose to the vocals, which works better imo as a transition from the off-beat rhythm
00:56:936 (171,172,173) - kkd maybe to show that note 173 is lower in pitch than 171 and 172 when compared vocally
01:16:012 (239,240,241,242,243) - idk if i recommend using a 1/8 kkk here, i'd simply just make it k k d d because it will have the same effect, but if you really want to keep it then i recommend kkd k d instead, note 242 is a snare hit and higher than 243, 241 would be a d just to help it flow a little bit better than kkk k
02:21:067 (478,479,480,481,482,483) - same thing for here^
02:36:067 (534,535,536,537) - could be kkdkd if you want because of the drum hit between notes 536 and 537
02:49:925 (587,588,589,590,591) - same as 01:16:012 -
03:20:089 (701,702,703,704,705,706) - imo this should be kdkkd k instead because there's a clear drum hit on 03:20:252 - and ignoring it for the sake of this pattern sounds really off-putting
03:40:958 (772,773,774,775,776) - for all the other patterns like it as well, although i clearly understand the choice of improv here, it's inappropriate as this section is still fairly calm, improv in a calm section like i've written below isn't really appropriate
04:00:849 (844,845,846) - i recommend deleting 844 and 845 for the sake of simplicity in this section, it's calm so the improv isn't really needed
04:39:002 (989,990,991,992,993,994,995,996,997) - i struggle liking this patterning, dk dkdkkd sounds much more appropriate seeing as 991 isn't really mapped to any concrete sound
04:59:871 (1070,1071,1072,1073,1074,1075,1076,1077) - dkddkdkkd reflects the music better as the current patternage skips the drum beat on 05:00:360 - and the triplet sounds kind of weird too
really minor things, overall the map is fine and has some potential due to it's simplicity