m4m, sorry it's a bit late
[General]
[General]
- offset sounds a bit off. try something around 420 offset
- 00:06:260 (3,4) - Ctrl + G the rhythm here to match 00:01:600 (3,4) - ? since they're literally the exact same music notes.
- 00:06:842 - remove whistle and move to 00:06:551 -
- 00:09:172 (5) - don't think a 1/4 repeat is the best idea since there's no sound on the blue tick
- 00:24:901 (4,5,1) - i know it's properly distance snapped, but it looks visually off since 4->5 is spaced more apart than 5->1 where the slider bodies are a lot closer to each other
- 01:01:308 (2,3,4,5,6) - why the spacing increase for 2->3? if anything i think you should have spacing increase for 3->4 to emphasize the "doo-doo-doo"
- 01:07:425 (6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - even if these are all 1/4 sliders the density increase compared to the Normal is ridiculous
- 01:15:580 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this one is even worse
- 00:04:221 - i think you should make this clickable, actually. guitar is pretty emphasized, and can break up the monotonous tone rhythm pattern that you use for 7 seconds
- 00:57:522 (4) - 00:59:852 (4) - 01:02:182 (6) - sort of similar to the above, i think having clap on just the downbeat is enough cause the song doesn't really make much use of snares during the bridge
- 01:06:551 (4,1) - 01:15:871 (4,1) - i find the patterns have some awkward movement to it, mainly due to the jerky leftwards motion you have to make whereas everything else in the kiai is a lot smoother
- personally i think the density for the kiai is a bit too much as well for a Light Insane. i get that it's low bpm, but you couldn't fit in any 1/2 gaps?
- 00:17:910 (3,4,5) - kind of expected these three to have the triangle pattern thing you make since each syllable here makes up the word "Spider-Man"
- 00:29:561 (4,5,6,7,1) - 00:33:638 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - tbh i think that having a star pattern with equal spacing would look more aesthetically nicer and match the distance snapping of vocals like 00:31:308 (2,3,4) -
- honestly i think everything beyond 00:47:910 - , especially the "doo-doo-doos" are overspaced and kind of a mess. there's no discernable difference between 1/2 and 1/4 spacing so it also becomes pretty annoying to read
- the first half of the kiai is entirely made up of counterclockwise flow, kind of worried about potential mouse drift
- 00:20:240 (1) - i get the idea of the letter sliders, but the B for Batman feels too long and ruins the flow of the map
- 00:22:862 (2,3) - why map to the snares here when you don't do it anywhere else
- 00:35:386 (1) - shape kind of looks out of place with the rest of your sliders, just a minor nitpick lol
- 00:42:303 (1) - yes, while the word does sort of start here, the main sound doesn't start until the downbeat so i recommend moving this to 00:42:376 -
- you've established with 00:47:910 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - that these are mapped to the vocals, so 00:50:823 (1,2,3,4) - sounds really out of place since the (2,3) don't land on any vocals
- 01:00:143 (1,2,3,4) - ^read the above
- 01:00:434 (3) - if you don't bother changing the above with whatever reason, this isn't stacked
- 01:05:677 - you're really going to straight up ignore the start of the kiai? do you have any idea how awkward this looks and plays to have the kiai start in the middle of a slider
- 01:10:774 (2) - 01:13:104 (2) - shouldn't be clickable; there's no discernable sound here
- 01:15:580 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:16:745 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:17:910 (1,2) - 01:18:493 (1,2) - 01:19:075 (1,2) - 01:20:240 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:21:405 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 01:22:570 (1,2,1,2) - no.
- i know that this is a part of the lyrics, but why choose Spider-Man out of all the other heroes? just seems kind of odd to me.
- also while i'm here, it's "Spider-Man", not "SpiderMan" lol
- 00:17:910 (3,4,5) - i mentioned this in the Insane, but i think if you made a pattern out of this because "Spider-Man" syllables it'd be cool
- 01:04:512 (1,2,3,4,1,2,4) - actually i think if you used a drum sampleset here it could work
- 01:09:172 (1,2,3,4) - don't think the four circles really work that well here simply because the sounds don't really help to emphasize it. it works for 01:13:833 (1,2,3,4) - though because of the additional instrumentals