kajiyatta wrote:
M4M
[General]
Fine.
[Easy]
Placement
00:22:592(1,2) I don't suppose it is better to change spacing on Easy. fixed
00:33:501(1) You should move this note with distant snap better, stack on the end of slider looks hard for newbie since spacing changed. fixed
00:41:001(7)^ fixed
00:38:955(5) Add NC here since combo looks too long. fixed
In KIAI TIME, again you should use distant snap with all notes. Spacing looks randomly. fixed
[Normal]
AR5 is common for Normal, and I suppose it fits better for music. fixed
Placement fixed
00:42:024(4) Add NC here, 7 combo looks a bit longer. fixed
00:46:114(2) I sppose it's better not to use blanket here, it looks a bit forced. e.g.) fixed
00:57:535(3) This stack is not easy to read for newbie, you should move this note with distant snap better. fixed
01:07:592(1) Same as Hard. fixed
Rhythm
Hit Sound
00:14:410(1) Add clap at end not whole. fixed
00:25:319(5)^ fixed
[Hard]
I suggest AR7, AR8 looks a bit fast for this BPM.
Placement
00:05:546(3,2,3,4) You can stack better. fixed
00:07:421(5,6,1) It's ok but this width stream looks a bit difficult for Hard.So, you can make this spacing more smaller better. fixed
00:12:024(1) Add NC here. After a spinner, it must be needed. fixed
01:07:592(1)^ fixed
00:52:421(4,5) You can make blanket more beautiful, current looks a bit odd. fixed
Rhythm
00:15:480 Unnecessary green line fixed
00:16:455 ^ and more. fixed
Hit Sound
00:12:024(1) Add finish at head. fixed
00:38:274(4) Delete finish at head, it sound noisy. fixed
00:48:501(1) Add clap at end. fixed
00:49:694(4) Delete finish at head. fixed
[Insane] I completely remapped Insane
Placement
00:14:069(1,2) This flow looks a bit odd and not good for playing, just considering, you can move (2) more downward. e.g.) 20:280.
00:25:489(2) Similar suggestion on here. ^
00:59:239(9)^
00:20:205(3) Again, I don't feel good with this stack. It looks forced and not reasonable.
00:36:910(3) ^. And example here.
00:22:592(9,1) Swap NC better to follow downbeat.
00:41:512(5) It looks better if you move this note away, this stack on the end of slider looks not good for playing.
Rhythm
00:09:467 Unnecessary green line
00:08:274(1,2) Well, you missed some drum sounds on here. You can put stream here and it would follow music more properly. e.g.)
Hit Sound
00:02:649(2) Delete finish better since you didn't add at 00:05:376.
00:09:637(4) Add finish at head better.
00:22:592(9)^
00:37:421(1) Add finish at head and delete one on end.
00:22:080(6) It sounds really noisy, turn down volume better.
01:09:467(2) Delete finish here, it sounds noisy and overused.
There are a lot of same patterns and placements on Hard and Insane, it's not unrankable but really boring. In addition, most of them doesn't work effectively for playing, stacks looks forced and flow is awkward. I don't force you to re-map, but you should consider on this mapset.
Anyway, good luck.
thank you for modding!