From my Queue,
Hybrid NM
[Futsuu]
⏩00:08:107 (16,17,18) - May want to change to ddk. Muzu has ddk here so it would make the spread neater.
⏩00:26:107 (64,65,66) - Change to kkk? Sound here very different from 00:21:307 (48,49,50) - which I think using ks represent better.
⏩00:56:257 (1) - End the spinner at 00:57:097 - just like muzu does would be better.
[Muzukashii]
⏩Well crafted.
⏩00:11:407 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddk ddk? More intense overtone percussion sounds at 00:11:707 (28) - 00:12:307 (31) - than the others.
[Crowie's Normal]
⏩A creative attempt
⏩00:08:407 (1) - May add a whisle sound at the tail for that high pitched percussion sound.
⏩00:23:707 (4) - Don’t see the reason of overlapping them. The gimmick of this diff I think is mainly on the overlapping of ¼ gaps but not this one.
⏩00:28:507 (1,2) - I think this pattern is not tidy at all. It closes to overlap completely but its not. Besides it is a normal difficulty so I can’t give a pass on this one.
⏩00:31:357 (5) - May add a whisle sound at the tail as well.
⏩00:39:307 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The flow is sort of weird here, you may want to move up 00:42:907 (3) - up above.
⏩00:44:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same.
[Hard]
⏩Good hard diff again! I can’t point out many points cause the diff is already good enough.
⏩00:26:407 (2) - I think this one does not represent the intense percussion at this section. May apply a 180° turn from (1).
[Easy]
⏩Feel like this DS is too low and there are many overlaps on the diff.
⏩00:39:307 (1,2,3) - 00:41:707 (1,2,3) - Make a proper straight line just like 00:00:907 (1,2,3) -
⏩00:54:907 (1) - May remove new combo because you NC every two base lines on the diff.
[Insane]
⏩00:09:307 (1) - Feel like the sharp angle turn in this funny-shape slider should be earlier because there’s a glass breaking sound earlier than the place now where the slider turns sharply.
⏩00:58:507 (1) - Why this one goes to the corner? I think there’s not a strong reason supporting it from going to the corner. Maybe stack with 00:56:107 (1) - ?
[AWM]
⏩00:16:357 (5,6) - Maybe make 00:16:507 (6) - blanket with (5) as in 00:16:957 (7,8) - .
⏩00:58:507 (1) - Same as in insane.
That’s all. Thanks for requesting.
Good luck with the set!
Hybrid NM
[Futsuu]
⏩00:08:107 (16,17,18) - May want to change to ddk. Muzu has ddk here so it would make the spread neater.
⏩00:26:107 (64,65,66) - Change to kkk? Sound here very different from 00:21:307 (48,49,50) - which I think using ks represent better.
⏩00:56:257 (1) - End the spinner at 00:57:097 - just like muzu does would be better.
[Muzukashii]
⏩Well crafted.
⏩00:11:407 (26,27,28,29,30,31) - ddk ddk? More intense overtone percussion sounds at 00:11:707 (28) - 00:12:307 (31) - than the others.
[Crowie's Normal]
⏩A creative attempt
⏩00:08:407 (1) - May add a whisle sound at the tail for that high pitched percussion sound.
⏩00:23:707 (4) - Don’t see the reason of overlapping them. The gimmick of this diff I think is mainly on the overlapping of ¼ gaps but not this one.
⏩00:28:507 (1,2) - I think this pattern is not tidy at all. It closes to overlap completely but its not. Besides it is a normal difficulty so I can’t give a pass on this one.
⏩00:31:357 (5) - May add a whisle sound at the tail as well.
⏩00:39:307 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The flow is sort of weird here, you may want to move up 00:42:907 (3) - up above.
⏩00:44:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same.
[Hard]
⏩Good hard diff again! I can’t point out many points cause the diff is already good enough.
⏩00:26:407 (2) - I think this one does not represent the intense percussion at this section. May apply a 180° turn from (1).
[Easy]
⏩Feel like this DS is too low and there are many overlaps on the diff.
⏩00:39:307 (1,2,3) - 00:41:707 (1,2,3) - Make a proper straight line just like 00:00:907 (1,2,3) -
⏩00:54:907 (1) - May remove new combo because you NC every two base lines on the diff.
[Insane]
⏩00:09:307 (1) - Feel like the sharp angle turn in this funny-shape slider should be earlier because there’s a glass breaking sound earlier than the place now where the slider turns sharply.
⏩00:58:507 (1) - Why this one goes to the corner? I think there’s not a strong reason supporting it from going to the corner. Maybe stack with 00:56:107 (1) - ?
[AWM]
⏩00:16:357 (5,6) - Maybe make 00:16:507 (6) - blanket with (5) as in 00:16:957 (7,8) - .
⏩00:58:507 (1) - Same as in insane.
That’s all. Thanks for requesting.
Good luck with the set!