Regou wrote:
hi
Geeneral
你個mapset可能都bug左;w; 一Down落黎一開頭唔見個diff之後搵返但D diff全部要update ?_?
柚!Insane
- 00:18:750 (5) - delete? KEEP
- 00:16:166 - 呢度個節奏應該可以執執,前面00:16:166 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 比人感覺係跟人聲但係之後就突然跟樂器感覺怪怪地 懶 比較prefer咁樣
- 00:34:500 (4) - (nazi) 拍近D(2)? ok
- 00:46:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 同00:34:833 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - spacing差太遠啦,呢度spacing改大D? ok
- 00:49:833 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 中間個組spacing突然咁細嘅@@...? 感覺唔太Fit首歌 諗左好耐架 為左跳又唔會比人感覺亂跳
- 01:01:500 (1,2,3) - 個移動角度太細打起黎個flow唔係好自然qwq ok la
- 01:13:666 (2) - 音量較細D?
- 01:25:666 (2,3,4,5,6) - 呢度都係移動角度太細打起黎感覺麻麻 ok la
- 01:26:750 (1) - unsnapped
Hard
- 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - ???????????????????????????
- 00:45:500 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 隔開佢地?咁樣開DS好似寡左D 改左
- 00:55:166 (2) - 好似拆返開做1/2 slider加個圈好D? e家都ok吖
- 01:05:000 (1) - 好似前面00:54:000 (2,3) - 咁樣好似好D,中間人聲突出都係要有D clickable嘅野好D
- 01:21:833 (2,4,5,6,1) - 改改個visual spacing?依家咁擺唔太整齊 隨機美
- 00:00:167 (1,2,3) - spacing 後面copy and paste個舊都改改
- 00:16:166 (1,2) - fix blanket
- 00:28:000 (5,1) - 改做一個1/1 slider?
- 00:34:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 咁嘅spacing+咁嘅排位對於hard黎講唔知會唔會太難...;w; 有少少難讀 應該唔會 睇下之後點先
Nostalgic wrote:
hello m4m from your q and i assume my req got accepted
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/637223extra
- 00:48:833 加個note? 唔太想
- 01:01:833 (2,3,4) - 好似wide-angle得滯 應該唔會
- 00:56:833 (3,4) - 點解stack既?我見你 01:02:166 (4,5) 都冇 fun
- 01:24:333 (2) - 255,136 左近?
insane
- 00:22:833 clickable?
- 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - 我諗應該係手誤,原本應該係triples?
其他diff我都唔覺有咩問題,gl
Pata-Mon wrote:
M4M from your q
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/666366
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:34:833 (1) - 碰血条
- 00:38:833 (3) - 单独的note最好还是给个音效?感觉空空的.Sampleset Normal?
- 00:51:833 (2,3) - 这节奏有点怪,感觉00:52:166 - 还是跟了好
- 01:07:833 - 一个明显finish音,加个note或许更好
- 可以考虑略微增大一点cs 前面很多地方有点黏到
[Hard]
- 00:30:666 - 加个音效?现在00:30:833 - 听着还音量更大点就会有点奇怪
- 00:44:000 - 00:44:666 - ^
[Insane]
- 01:02:000 (3,4,5,6) - 这里不太顺手,感觉重音在4和6但4和6都是正常ds,倒是5跳了下,然后456还是一个方向,感觉卡手
[主难度]
- 00:22:000 (2,3,4) - 这里节奏有点怪,还是比较建议跟下vocal,前面00:17:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 也是明显跟vocal的
- 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - 这是摆错了……?
GL
- 00:40:166 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏有点怪,如果想主跟伴奏的话,00:40:166 (1,2) - 合成一个折返滑条会舒服些 這個還可以吧 挺自然
Pulse wrote:
hi, M4M from your queue!
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/673138
[General][Easy]
- I've downloaded map twice and seems like BG is gone, could you check?
- It seems like last spinner on all diffs are one or two beats unnecessarily long (a little more on wkyik). Fading out effect is 99% gone on 01:28:666, so consider reducing spinner until this mark or on next blue tick instead the white one
- 00:01:500 (5,6,7) - Shouldn't be equally NC'd on Hard and Insane? Also I think that NC on 00:01:500 (5) fits better (looking on Insane). Same goes to the following pattern
- 01:12:166 (1,1) - Sounds on these notes aren't exactly on same intensity. I think that second green line should be 50% vol. instead 40%
Looks great
[Normal][Hard]
- 00:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could move this first pattern a little up and left in order to fix 00:02:000 (4) DS, since it was pointed out on AiMod
[Insane]
- Pointed on General but I think that this note should be NC'd even on this stacking at 00:01:500 (5) or 00:01:666 (1)
- 00:12:666 (2,3,4,1) - You could use +0,1x on spacing (1,2x) so stacking won't make looks like (2) and (1) are spaced differently and (1) kinda touches stack. Here
- 00:14:833 (1,2) - Also could be a little bit moved and spaced, it looks unnecessarily close to previous slider
- 00:35:500 (5) - This kind of pattern probably still potentially confusing to players that are advancing on game. Perhaps a NC would help on reading
- 00:45:500 (1,2,3,4) - Not big deal but do you think that you could make these shapes visually better? They just doesn't look visually pleasing
- 01:14:666 (4) - I think that due kiai density, this tick needs a note, or maybe a 01:14:333 (3) with reverse. Leaving it without a object sounds kinda "empty" due to the way the sounds were represented in kiai
[wkyik]
- 00:01:500 (5,1,2) - Pointed on General but anyway I think that NC's should be consistent between these notes and 00:04:166 (5,6,7)
- 00:13:833 (2,4) - Minor suggestion but these sounds are kinda similar. It looks better to me if 00:13:833 (2) was Ctrl+G'd imo now is better
- 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - o that's kinda hard at first sight but I liked it world best triple
- 00:00:666 (4) - Sorry but wouldn't something like this flows a lot better? 00:01:000 (5) - Can be copied and rotated from new shape to keep symmetry without harm 00:01:333 (1) the flow seem same
- 00:14:333 (4) - Could be moved a little bit to the right, making a triangle with (2) and (3) current one better flow imo
- 00:54:333 (2) - It plays a little unconfortable, maybe you could decrease spacing just a bit its very strong
- 01:05:333 (1) - That's gay to mention but shouldn't it be 1px to right?
- 01:26:750 (1) - Pointed on general but btw spinner is unsnapped
Good luck!
Hailie wrote:
NM (or M4M depending on if you actually accept the request or not since you didn't specially said nothing after you close
- but either way I just want to mod the map and didn't see the harm of doing so if ya didn't)
wkyik
- 00:13:333 (5,6,1) - maybe at X: 164 Y:324 to be a bit more comfortable (probably need adjustments)
- 00:14:333 (4) - I feel the spacing on this is a tad bit low so bringing it up a bit would help
- 00:24:833 (3) - imo I think the spacing is too high for this note since it not that strong comparing to here 00:25:500 - I do understand it somewhat though so maybe lower it a little would hurt this is perfect flow for me
InsaneGL
- 00:04:000 (4) - maybe move to X: 401 Y: 240 to flow better
- 00:16:166 (1) - (probably not a problem) but should this be more far away from 00:15:666 (3,4) - due to the pause like how 00:15:666 (3,4) - is far away from 00:15:333 (2) -
Not saying to move it that far but give it some more distance would help consider it the same spacing as 00:14:666 (5) -- 00:58:833 (1,2) - just feel this should have more emphasis - move up to something like X: 348 Y: 240 (that is just an example so you may wanna move it somewhere else if you do something)
StarrStyx wrote:
水一水
到時想搵你點個nagi 雖然仲未upload (
[General]
fix一fix個bg name啦,宜家redl都顯示唔到 https://starrstyx.s-ul.eu/5hR703fa
[柚!.jpg]
00:22:000 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 覺得其實呢part唔好甘多圓圈,不如好似呢部分其他位置放1/2 slider算 放得耐又好似慣左circle
00:31:166 (2) - 呢個curve望落去真系好麻麻,不如試下呢個/其他相似方案?https://starrstyx.s-ul.eu/GX9UEc0Y
00:35:833 (3) - 放92|66可能好d
nazi美觀度,01:02:833 (1) - ctrl g?
01:10:666 (1) - 會唔會有d遠。。唔會
[Insane]
00:16:166 - 感覺多餘的綠線but w/e
00:37:166 (6,7,8) - wat
00:54:666 (1,2) - 呢兩個slider rotation有d怪,少少違和感
你d圖真系安全到我次次都搵唔到野可以講
no comment = fixedChocobo wrote:
Hi, 觉得ED好听就来搜了搜,没想到真的有图~Insane1. 00:30:500 (4,1) - 这个flow认为不是很好,可以稍微调整一下滑条的位置;
2. 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - 连续的三个鼓点,感觉不适合强行拆开,主难度利用滑条拆开比较合理一些;
3. note间距摆放感觉有些小误差,但是不是什么大问题就不水字数了XD;wkyikAnyway, I like this mapset (have my star XD), hope this mod will help and wishing for its ranking~这个难度感觉就是Insane放大版,其实我倒是觉得诸如:其實insane是ex的縮小版
00:49:333 (2,1,2,1,2) -
00:54:666 (1,2,3,4,5) -
等等,很多拖音都可以map成stream而不是slider+大跳,虽说是为了加星星,但未免会显得有些无趣(
下面是一些小建议
1. 00:20:833 (5) - 换到00:20:500 (3) - 的位置如何?
2. 01:06:166 (3,4) - 这两个slider听着很不对劲,不如换成三个连续单点;
3. 01:12:000 (1) - ctrl+G
thanks!