hi, M4M from your queue!
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/673138
[General]
Looks great
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Good luck!
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/673138
[General]
- I've downloaded map twice and seems like BG is gone, could you check?
- It seems like last spinner on all diffs are one or two beats unnecessarily long (a little more on wkyik). Fading out effect is 99% gone on 01:28:666, so consider reducing spinner until this mark or on next blue tick instead the white one
- 00:01:500 (5,6,7) - Shouldn't be equally NC'd on Hard and Insane? Also I think that NC on 00:01:500 (5) fits better (looking on Insane). Same goes to the following pattern
- 01:12:166 (1,1) - Sounds on these notes aren't exactly on same intensity. I think that second green line should be 50% vol. instead 40%
Looks great
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- 00:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you could move this first pattern a little up and left in order to fix 00:02:000 (4) DS, since it was pointed out on AiMod
- Pointed on General but I think that this note should be NC'd even on this stacking at 00:01:500 (5) or 00:01:666 (1)
- 00:12:666 (2,3,4,1) - You could use +0,1x on spacing (1,2x) so stacking won't make looks like (2) and (1) are spaced differently and (1) kinda touches stack. Here
- 00:14:833 (1,2) - Also could be a little bit moved and spaced, it looks unnecessarily close to previous slider
- 00:35:500 (5) - This kind of pattern probably still potentially confusing to players that are advancing on game. Perhaps a NC would help on reading
- 00:45:500 (1,2,3,4) - Not big deal but do you think that you could make these shapes visually better? They just doesn't look visually pleasing
- 01:14:666 (4) - I think that due kiai density, this tick needs a note, or maybe a 01:14:333 (3) with reverse. Leaving it without a object sounds kinda "empty" due to the way the sounds were represented in kiai
- 00:01:500 (5,1,2) - Pointed on General but anyway I think that NC's should be consistent between these notes and 00:04:166 (5,6,7)
- 00:13:833 (2,4) - Minor suggestion but these sounds are kinda similar. It looks better to me if 00:13:833 (2) was Ctrl+G'd
- 00:37:166 (6,7,8) - o that's kinda hard at first sight but I liked it
- 00:00:666 (4) - Sorry but wouldn't something like this flows a lot better? 00:01:000 (5) - Can be copied and rotated from new shape to keep symmetry without harm 00:01:333 (1)
- 00:14:333 (4) - Could be moved a little bit to the right, making a triangle with (2) and (3)
- 00:54:333 (2) - It plays a little unconfortable, maybe you could decrease spacing just a bit
- 01:05:333 (1) - That's gay to mention but shouldn't it be 1px to right?
- 01:26:750 (1) - Pointed on general but btw spinner is unsnapped
Good luck!