Ultimatum
00:16:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - Was the point here that the player is supposed to wiggle up and down with their cursor? Cause atm you can just rest your cursor ontop of these and still hit them all.
00:17:600 (1,2,3,4) - Same for patterns like these.
00:40:894 - Consider improving aestetics in this part because atm, it looks a bit messy. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773178 is an example of what you could do.
Holy crap i cant mod this
Extra
00:09:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Doesn't flow well. Perhaps this works better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773235
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4) - Should've just made rhythm consistent cause it doesn't sound any different musically.
00:14:070 (1,2,3) - This rhythm sounds more correct imo. http://puu.sh/vdLAU/c9212527b2.jpg
00:39:129 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no way that anyone could read this without retrying a couple of times cause its clearly set up visually to be a normal stream. I suggest you rework this part visually for readability.
Insane
00:41:776 (9) - Unstack cause of the change of melody?
00:42:835 (9) - ^
00:43:629 (7) - ^
00:44:423 (7) - ^
00:45:482 (9) - ^
00:46:100 (5) - ^
00:46:717 (2,3,4) - Triangle is off
Hard
00:51:835 - Missing beat
00:51:482 (1,1,1) - Current rhythm doesn't follow music. Try this? https://puu.sh/vdMq0/bb9ad76e27.jpg
Not a big fan of frequent kick sliders in hard difficulties. But I guess it's fine.
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Good luck!
00:16:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - Was the point here that the player is supposed to wiggle up and down with their cursor? Cause atm you can just rest your cursor ontop of these and still hit them all.
00:17:600 (1,2,3,4) - Same for patterns like these.
00:40:894 - Consider improving aestetics in this part because atm, it looks a bit messy. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773178 is an example of what you could do.
Holy crap i cant mod this
Extra
00:09:129 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Doesn't flow well. Perhaps this works better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773235
00:12:658 (1,2,3,4) - Should've just made rhythm consistent cause it doesn't sound any different musically.
00:14:070 (1,2,3) - This rhythm sounds more correct imo. http://puu.sh/vdLAU/c9212527b2.jpg
00:39:129 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - There's no way that anyone could read this without retrying a couple of times cause its clearly set up visually to be a normal stream. I suggest you rework this part visually for readability.
Insane
00:41:776 (9) - Unstack cause of the change of melody?
00:42:835 (9) - ^
00:43:629 (7) - ^
00:44:423 (7) - ^
00:45:482 (9) - ^
00:46:100 (5) - ^
00:46:717 (2,3,4) - Triangle is off
Hard
00:51:835 - Missing beat
00:51:482 (1,1,1) - Current rhythm doesn't follow music. Try this? https://puu.sh/vdMq0/bb9ad76e27.jpg
Not a big fan of frequent kick sliders in hard difficulties. But I guess it's fine.
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Good luck!