FelixSpade wrote:

hi! modding this map to do M4M request

firstly, i think the best offset of this map should be on here 00:00:961 -
and for the difficulty name should be Easy and Hard since its just 4K only.
if there are some difficulty that have a different key, then use the prefix.

Column prefs : 0|1|2|3

4K Easy

00:00:961 - 00:27:677 - nice LN =w= but i have a strange feel on those LN, might be on 1/2 snap

00:14:100 (14100|3,14319|3) - better avoid the jacks for Easy diff
00:14:976 (14976|3,15195|3) - ^
00:28:991 - 00:57:020 - its too quiet here, my suggestion is to follow the hi-hat sounds as single note
01:02:056 (62056|2,62056|1,63808|2,63808|1,65560|2,65560|3,67531|1,67531|2,68407|0,68407|3) - this should be single since it is Easy
01:13:443 (73443|3) - suggest, col 2
01:16:947 (76947|3) - suggest, col 2
01:20:450 (80450|2) - suggest, col 3
01:27:458 (87458|0) - suggest, col 1
01:30:961 (90961|0) - suggest, col 1
01:34:465 (94465|0) - suggest, col 0

it is Easy difficulty, so avoid of using 1/2 jacks

4K Hard

00:00:961 - 00:27:677 - nice LN =w= but i have a strange feel on those LN, might be on 1/2 snap

00:14:866 (14866|1,14976|1) - avoid minijack, its kind of strange feel
00:14:319 (14319|3) - just suggesting, this should be on col 2
00:14:538 (14538|1,14538|2) - suggest, this should be on col 0 and 1
00:14:866 (14866|1) - suggest, col 2
00:14:976 (14976|2) - suggest, col 3
00:01:837 (1837|3,1837|2,2713|0,2713|1,3589|3,3589|0,4465|1,4465|3,5341|2,5341|3,6217|1,6217|0,7093|0,7093|3,7969|3,7969|1,8845|3,8845|2,9720|0,9720|1,10596|3,10596|0,11472|3,11472|1,12348|3,12348|2,13224|0,13224|1,15852|0,15852|1,16728|3,16728|2,17604|0,17604|3,18480|2,18480|0,19355|1,19355|0,20231|3,20231|2,21107|3,21107|0,21983|0,21983|2,22859|0,22859|1,23735|3,23735|2,24611|3,24611|0,25487|2,25487|0,26363|0,26363|1,27239|1,27239|3) - all of this should be single, because the kick sound is weak than the snare
00:32:494 (32494|3,32494|0,32494|2) - double? i dont hear anything but synth and bass guitar
00:39:501 (39501|3,39501|0,39501|2) - ^same reason
00:46:509 (46509|1,46509|0,46509|3) - ^same reason
00:50:012 (50012|3,50012|0,50012|1) - ^
00:53:516 (53516|3,53516|2,53516|0) - ^
00:55:268 (55268|2,55268|0,55268|3) - ^
01:08:407 (68407|0,68407|1,68407|3) - ^
01:24:392 (84392|2,84611|2,84830|2,85049|2) - anchors, try to avoid it
01:24:830 (84830|2) - suggest, this should be on col 0

well, goodluck on working this map
m4m form soon

SyShawn wrote:

wow thanks i'll try them later, and give the reply to the mods.
but first i should know what map i need to mod.
is it the same one in my queue(https://osu.ppy.sh/s/677212)?

FelixSpade wrote:

hi! modding this map to do M4M request

firstly, i think the best offset of this map should be on here 00:00:961 - ok
and for the difficulty name should be Easy and Hard since its just 4K only.
if there are some difficulty that have a different key, then use the prefix.
there were two 7Ks but deleted yesterday.
I think 7K doesn't fit this song

Column prefs : 0|1|2|3

4K Easy

00:00:961 - 00:27:677 - nice LN =w= but i have a strange feel on those LN, might be on 1/2 snap

00:14:100 (14100|3,14319|3) - better avoid the jacks for Easy diff
00:14:976 (14976|3,15195|3) - ^
00:28:991 - 00:57:020 - its too quiet here, my suggestion is to follow the hi-hat sounds as single note
applied

01:02:056 (62056|2,62056|1,63808|2,63808|1,65560|2,65560|3,67531|1,67531|2,68407|0,68407|3) - this should be single since it is Easy
01:13:443 (73443|3) - suggest, col 2
01:16:947 (76947|3) - suggest, col 2
01:20:450 (80450|2) - suggest, col 3
01:27:458 (87458|0) - suggest, col 1
01:30:961 (90961|0) - suggest, col 1
01:34:465 (94465|0) - suggest, col 0

it is Easy difficulty, so avoid of using 1/2 jacks
it seems like it's too hard to me to make an Easy diff,
so i change the diff name to Normal since it's over 1.5* after some hi-hat notes are added

4K Hard

00:00:961 - 00:27:677 - nice LN =w= but i have a strange feel on those LN, might be on 1/2 snap

00:14:866 (14866|1,14976|1) - avoid minijack, its kind of strange feel
00:14:319 (14319|3) - just suggesting, this should be on col 2
00:14:538 (14538|1,14538|2) - suggest, this should be on col 0 and 1
00:14:866 (14866|1) - suggest, col 2
00:14:976 (14976|2) - suggest, col 3
00:01:837 (1837|3,1837|2,2713|0,2713|1,3589|3,3589|0,4465|1,4465|3,5341|2,5341|3,6217|1,6217|0,7093|0,7093|3,7969|3,7969|1,8845|3,8845|2,9720|0,9720|1,10596|3,10596|0,11472|3,11472|1,12348|3,12348|2,13224|0,13224|1,15852|0,15852|1,16728|3,16728|2,17604|0,17604|3,18480|2,18480|0,19355|1,19355|0,20231|3,20231|2,21107|3,21107|0,21983|0,21983|2,22859|0,22859|1,23735|3,23735|2,24611|3,24611|0,25487|2,25487|0,26363|0,26363|1,27239|1,27239|3) - all of this should be single, because the kick sound is weak than the snare
00:32:494 (32494|3,32494|0,32494|2) - double? i dont hear anything but synth and bass guitar
00:39:501 (39501|3,39501|0,39501|2) - ^same reason
00:46:509 (46509|1,46509|0,46509|3) - ^same reason
00:50:012 (50012|3,50012|0,50012|1) - ^
00:53:516 (53516|3,53516|2,53516|0) - ^
00:55:268 (55268|2,55268|0,55268|3) - ^
01:08:407 (68407|0,68407|1,68407|3) - ^
01:24:392 (84392|2,84611|2,84830|2,85049|2) - anchors, try to avoid it
01:24:830 (84830|2) - suggest, this should be on col 0
all applied

well, goodluck on working this map
m4m form soon

Navyzeap09 wrote:

Hitsounding

00:00:961 - 00:28:990 - I think the clap hitsounds are not match because it's too bland I think you should change it to snare (I'll give you a snare that matches that link down below)
00:28:990 - 00:57:019 - The hi-hats don't actually match the song I think you should replace that with the synth, I will review that part more so I can review on what can I replace it (maybe I can do that and replace with the synth but I need midi )
00:32:493 (32493|3,32493|0) - This two hitsouds sounds so awkward and irrelevant I think you should remove this 00:32:493 (32493|0) because it doesn't sound right and remove the hit sounds (I'm gonna find also an alternative for that
00:35:997 (35997|3,35997|0) - Again this two toms are just not right for the song I think you should remove those hitsounds
00:37:968 (37968|3,37968|2) - The hihats sounds so awkward if its doubled I think you should remove one of the hitsounds there I think you should replace it into a snare (the one I will give you
00:39:501 (39501|0) - Again this sounds so awkward I think you should remove it until we find an alternative
00:40:596 (40596|2) - You should replace it to snare again
00:43:004 (43004|0) - Sounds so awkward
00:43:442 (43442|2) - Replace it into snare
00:44:099 (44099|2) - Replace it too
00:44:537 (44537|2) - Replace it here too
00:46:508 (46508|3) - Replace it here too
00:46:946 (46946|0,47603|0,48041|0) - In this too
00:50:450 (50450|0) - Here too
00:51:106 (51106|1,51544|1) - here too
00:53:515 (53515|3) - Replace this into kick (I will give you a kick hitsounds too)
00:55:705 (55705|3,56362|3,56800|3) - Replace this into snare
01:00:085 (60085|1) - Remove the claps ^_^
01:01:836 (61836|1,62055|1) - Replace this into snare again
01:03:588 (63588|2,63807|2) - You should replace this into snare again
01:07:530 (67530|3,67530|2,67530|1,67968|0,67968|2,67968|1,68406|1,68406|3,68406|0,68844|2,68844|3,68844|0,69501|2,69501|3,69501|1,69720|1,69720|2,69720|0,70158|1,70158|2,70158|0) - Find a better hitsounds here (I can help you there if you want)

And you should know what to do on the chorus ^_^

Note placements & Timing points

I think you should reduce the number of three notes being clicked at the same time because its too repitetive

01:07:530 (67530|3,67530|2,67530|1,67968|0,67968|2,67968|1,68406|1,68406|3,68406|0,68844|2,68844|3,68844|0,69501|2,69501|3,69501|1,69720|1,69720|2,69720|0,70158|1,70158|2,70158|0) - Pretty sure on this placement you can do a SV's here (like ya know fast pause slow fast pause slow)
and also in this part you can use three notes but use different three note patterns on every note for more variations

TIP
You can override the hitsounds on soft and drum because it will continue to sound awkward because if someone changes the skin (like me)
it will be different on every person

Ayyy here are the keysounds you can use as an alternative I can only give you this two but I will get back on this map
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0ByCP7Os7Y7gpU3FlcVViZkV3ZzA

Navyzeap09 wrote:

I'll check on the wav later ^_^ Tell me if you have troubles reading those wavs

ArcherMahou wrote:

整體來說我覺得不錯 但我感覺兩格難度有差異
A 1 3 1 3
B 1 4 1 4
兩個難度感覺節奏的重點不同

Umo- wrote:

hi
1|2|3|4
[NM]

00:13:452 (13452|2) - this should be a LN like other notes
00:13:890 (13890|1) - ^
00:27:905 (27905|2) - ^
great point,
I think it's due to forgetting the two notes
00:13:233 (13233|1)
00:27:248 (27248|1)
and the synth sounds not that long here(compared to previous part)

00:32:503 (32503|3,32503|0) - remove clap from one of those notes because 1 in enough
00:33:160 (33160|0,33160|1) - ^
remove all notes that have double hitsounds
i don't know whether it is too loud or not, since i feel it's a bit quiet now.
waiting for further mods.
or maybe it's not the problem of volume?
but triple hitsounds on finishes are fixed

00:41:262 - I belive you missed a note here
I can't hear a hi-hat sound there
01:11:919 - missed a double here
01:15:423 - ^
01:18:927 - 01:29:438 - 01:30:533 - ^ and so on
true, but i think it is too hard for 1.5* to hit so much objects while holding.
so finally i choose to follow only snares here now.

[HD]

00:27:467 (27467|0,27905|2) - these should be LN like other notes
same as NM
00:43:014 - it would be nice if you changed the pattern here, change it to 232323 and dont repeate 121212 pattern since it can be a little boring
00:46:518 - same here but change to 14141414
fixed
00:57:029 - could rearange some notes so that they are not same as in EZ difficulty
i don't know which it's better,
try to follow everything in easy diff for consistency,
or try to rearrange everything for variation.
at least i think i'm a believer in consistency, if it doesn't break the ranking rules
01:07:540 - could map hihats here every 1/2

true.but then the SVs will make it too hard to play.

01:07:540 - I didn't check if you did but make sure that you average your SVs
here is the formula

click

• Y = average of an SV sequence
• S1 = Starting SV value (the one you choose)
• S2 = Second SV value to make the sequence average 1x
• U = Units (counted by snaps)
• U1 = Total number of units
• U2 = Remaining number of units

Here are two equations you’ll probably end up using a lot:
• Finding average SV of a sequence when given both values

(S1 × U + S2 × U) ÷ U1 = Y

• Finding S2 when given the average SV, U1, and S1

(U1 – S1) ÷ U2 = Y

but you can use http://zardoru.github.io/sv-tools/ but I'm not sure if it works lol
since i use a concept of how to map SVs in StepMania

expand the two white snaps to three white snaps by 1.5SV
shrink the two white snaps to one white snap by 0.5SV
then it will remain 4 white snaps in total, keeping the snaps going properly.

this may be another way to check easy SVs for ppl who are bad at arithmetic like me


01:10:496 (70496|2,70606|1) - ctrl+j. feels better while playing imo
fixed
01:14:109 (74109|0,74547|0) - this shouldn't be in same column since they are not the same pitch, same applys for other ones
i think the synths are.
but it's true that there are guitars in different pitch
01:22:430 (82430|3) - I belive this should be double
same as normal, i double them for snares,
but i think this is a kick or something i can't describe.

Good Luck!

[ Blaze ] wrote:

hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
it depends from you,feel free to reject my mod

column
l1l2l3l4l

HD

00:28:353 (28353|1,28572|3) - ctrl + j will fit this imo ok
00:30:980 (30980|1,31199|0,31418|1,31637|0,31856|1,32075|0,32294|1,32513|0) - well it's too many pattern like this (I call this stacks)so I suggest you don't do that in hard diff lol replace this to become a random pattern (I'll not repeat the same problem like this again)
i think i won't change this, since it's the best way i can find to emphasize the bass guitar here.
except jack them all in a column
00:35:579 (35579|3,35798|3,36017|3) - don't put jacks like this since it's still possible to move that into another column imo
fixed
01:09:740 (69740|2,69740|0) - change this become normal note and the LN put it into the white line imo
follow NM

well this diff is "NEED A LOT FOR TIDY UP" since the pattern is not really so neat imo
do the self-mod for more experience
edit: i think i just change the pattern in the stack part and do another fan diff that's not for mod.

NM

00:35:798 (35798|3,35798|2,35908|0,35908|1) - remove 1 note each Line because I think it's too hard if you put a note like that imofixed
00:53:754 (53754|1,54192|1,54630|1,55068|1,55506|1,55944|1,56382|1) - what is this lol
fixed
01:07:550 (67550|1,67550|2) - same problem
fixed
01:09:740 (69740|0,69740|2,70178|2,70178|0) - why you dare to use shield pattern on normal mode? well the best solution for this I think move the normal note to col 2 and 4 then the LN sould finish at whine line
good suggestion


well not bad for NM diff but I don't really understand with your mapping style for this song
it's do the drum and bass for this song by hitsounds

good luck!

1. NM=HD diff are same OD HP (HD HP-7 8)
2. Turn off Widescreen Support (both diff)
3. Fix Kiai problem https://i.imgur.com/89WLKex.png

1. 00:35:798 - So this pattern focused to catch only Right-hand? maybe you can try re-arrange like this
2. 00:48:061 (48061|1,48280|3) - 1/2 triple jacks kinda awkard to get it so Ctrl+G for the balance, after 00:48:499 (48499|1,48718|3) - Ctrl+G
3. 00:42:805 - Add LN for [1] it's must be more difference than NM
4. 00:44:119 (44119|0,44338|0,44557|0) - Same triple jacks as before
5. 00:55:068 (55068|1) - Move to [4] column
6. 00:56:820 (56820|2) - What about move to [1] and 00:57:039 (57039|3) - [3]?
7. 00:58:791 (58791|0,60105|1,60543|0) - This LN's looks spammed
8. 01:02:294 (62294|1) - Move to [3] for keeping 1/2 triple jacks

1. 00:13:681 - 00:14:557 - Missing one more notes? same as 00:28:572
2. 00:58:791 (58791|0) - Move to [4] if it's possible, same reason as HD

error_exe777 wrote:

hello!

unfortunately, im going to have to skip on modding this. its because i feel like the map needs more work and i cant mod it to the best of my abilities.

sorry for the bail, i really do hate bailing out. i hope you understand.

best of luck! o/

SpectorDG wrote:

Normal mod request from my queue!

[General]

1. NM=HD diff are same OD HP (HD HP-7 8)
2. Turn off Widescreen Support (both diff)
3. Fix Kiai problem https://i.imgur.com/89WLKex.png

[HD]

1. 00:35:798 - So this pattern focused to catch only Right-hand? maybe you can try re-arrange like this
2. 00:48:061 (48061|1,48280|3) - 1/2 triple jacks kinda awkard to get it so Ctrl+G for the balance, after 00:48:499 (48499|1,48718|3) - Ctrl+G
3. 00:42:805 - Add LN for [1] it's must be more difference than NM
4. 00:44:119 (44119|0,44338|0,44557|0) - Same triple jacks as before
5. 00:55:068 (55068|1) - Move to [4] column
6. 00:56:820 (56820|2) - What about move to [1] and 00:57:039 (57039|3) - [3]?
7. 00:58:791 (58791|0,60105|1,60543|0) - This LN's looks spammed
8. 01:02:294 (62294|1) - Move to [3] for keeping 1/2 triple jacks

[NM]

1. 00:13:681 - 00:14:557 - Missing one more notes? same as 00:28:572
2. 00:58:791 (58791|0) - Move to [4] if it's possible, same reason as HD

goodluck!

tailsdk wrote:

heyo sorry for delay got pretty busy for a moment
no worries

Mod

[HD]
00:57:696 - 00:57:915 - maybe add a note on these sounds just to make it feel less empty and i think it will play in aswell
00:59:448 - 00:59:667 - ^ and so on
i think it means trying to follow the lyrics.
but these maps focus on drums(e.g. snares, hihats),
so i think it would be kind of misleading if do so,
and because this part is trying to let player get some rest, it would be fine with less notes.
but still good suggestion
01:08:864 - 01:09:521 - this SV feels really weird to play maybe change it a little so it's not super awkward
try to do them 'lighter',
maybe because i play mania with only 18 scrollspeed.
01:14:119 (74119|0,74557|0) - i feel like they should be placed like this here it makes sense on these 01:16:966 (76966|3,77185|3) - because the sound is almost identical but it doesn't at the other part at all
01:17:623 (77623|0,78061|0) - same here and so on
i'm not sure what this part is talking about,
but i just try to change jacks.
00:48:280 (48280|1,48280|0) - these notes are using the wrong hitsound
fixed

[NM]
00:29:010 - in this section i think i would focus on the white ticks sounds instread of doing the red ticks
follow the hihats
00:57:696 - 00:57:915 - same thing here as in the last difficulty
same as HD
would completely avoid this on the easiest difficulty 01:14:119 (74119|0,74557|0) -
fixed
seems ok otherwise

GL with the map and hope this mod helped and again sorry for deley

CrumpetFiddler wrote:

As requested in Crumpey's Mod Queue!

General

Change offset to 950 (im pretty sure)
but i'm not sure.
since it will be too late when i try to hit the notes on time.
would you teach me how to find the offset in the right way?
i search it by playing it and feel if it's too late or too early
for a set to be considered rankable you need at atleast 3 mania difficulties
i read the criteria and it seems to be 2.
but it's still a good suggestion to make a EZ.

HD

all up until here 00:28:134 - the lns are copy pasted between diffs, they feel basically the exact same, i strongly suggest you change them to be different in probably the harder diff
that's not copy-paste, but i will make them the same on purpose everytime i change something.
the sv leading up to this note is incredibly deceptive, it'll need some tweaking 01:09:521 (69521|3,69521|2,69521|1) -
try to slow them down
01:09:740 (69740|2,70287|2) - avoid jacks like this
ok
01:14:119 (74119|0,74557|0) - dont do this
01:16:966 (76966|3,77185|3,77623|0,78061|0) - again same issue
01:16:966 (76966|3,77185|3,77623|0,78061|0,84630|3,85068|3,88134|3,88572|3,90980|0,91199|0,91637|3,92075|3) - rest of the jacks
ok, they're changed now
i spy copy pasted sections throughout the map, im sure you know where these are, i suggest probably changing them
(both pics from HD, thats not all of them)
since the chorus(and the intro, too) just repeat the same synth part twice,
so i think it's reasonable(or necessary) to repeat the same LN pattern twice.

NM

NM as a whole isnt to bad... except for the fact every ln in NM is also in HD.
it's true since i do it on purpose, but i think i will change some of them.
at least make the whole map mirrored first

Fix the ln jacks as suggested in the other mod, but also move them around a bit, its okay to have lns, just dont make them the exact same, it feels like a watered down HD diff.
edit: now fixed

Bar the copy pasting and jacks the map seems pretty sound, keep at it and im sure youll get better in no time

Time Series wrote:

Hi! NM from my queue. Sorry for the late mod

我這裡用中文寫應該可以吧？我mania玩得不如ctb多，所以可能mod得不好，不過還是希望能夠對你能有幫助
當然可以應該說非常歡迎
我英文是不怎麼好的

我在寫完mod之後才發現你又更新了Easy,所以我會放在最後去寫
謝謝你因為昨天有Ranker說2張沒辦法Rank但後來他好像發現可以了
但我已經做到一半了www

[Normal]
00:07:769 (7769|0) - 並不是說這裡不對，不過我覺得這一段的滑條有點太多節奏有點單調，所以也許你可以把這個滑條改為單點，比如這樣https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9503499
00:21:783 (21783|3) - 這裡和上一條一樣
01:03:608 (63608|2) - 這裡我覺得也是滑條太多，所以可以改為單點緩和一下節奏
01:14:109 (74109|3) - 這個滑條我覺得持續到紅線位置就可以了。現在它和下一個滑條間距這麼短，我不知道會不會對於NM來說太難了這個地方你已經改過了，我覺得現在這樣挺好的。不過我認為這裡的人聲部分僅僅持續到紅線的位置，所以縮短1/2拍也許更好一點
01:17:623 (77623|0) - ^
01:21:345 (81345|1) - 在前面的部分相同的位置都沒有這樣一個滑條出現，所以我覺得這個可以刪掉
01:21:564 (81564|0) - 這個滑條會不會按的時間有點太長？也許你可以在中間白線處換到左數第三條軌道上
01:24:630 (84630|3) - 我覺得這個滑條持續到紅線處就可以了
01:28:134 (88134|3) - ^
01:35:360 (95360|2) - 同樣的，我覺得這個滑條可以刪掉
01:35:579 (95579|3) - 可以和01:21:564 (81564|0) - 做相似的處理
hitsound方面我沒有聽出單個音的問題，不過我覺得00:01:199 - 這裡的hitsound音量應該比00:29:010 - 這裡大一些才對。現在我覺得00:01:199 - 的hitsound有點聽不到而00:29:010 - 的音量又有點太大了，所以也許你可以調整一下

[Hard]
01:02:284 (62284|0,63160|3) - 如果你仔細聽，這裡最後1/2拍其實並沒有人聲，所以我建議你把他們縮短，也可以讓滑條有一個間斷的時期。或者你也可以按照Normal裡面01:03:608 (63608|2) - 的mod改
01:10:715 - 這個位置加一個音會不會連貫一點？
01:24:620 (84620|3) - 這一段音樂全部都有滑條，所以這裡改成單鍵休息一下會不會好一點？
hitsound方面同我在Normal提到的一樣，另外為什麼01:07:540 - 到01:09:511 - 你只用了30%的音量呢？

[Easy]
前奏的音樂 - 對比兩個難一點的圖，我覺得你應該保留滑條而去掉單鍵才對，因為你的這一套圖主要的難點是在滑條上，這個Easy這一段有點和其他圖的風格有些不同
01:13:452 (73452|0) - 我覺得這個滑條應該拉長1/2拍而01:14:109 (74109|1) - 應該縮短1/2拍。這樣在樂句與樂句之間就可以斷開了
01:17:613 (77613|2) - 把這個滑條改成與01:21:116 (81116|0,81335|1) - 相似的組合可能會好一點
01:27:467 (87467|3,88124|2) - 同01:13:452 (73452|0) - 有相同的意見
hitsound方面和Normal一樣

GL!

Time Series wrote:

Hi! NM from my queue. Sorry for the late mod

我這裡用中文寫應該可以吧？我mania玩得不如ctb多，所以可能mod得不好，不過還是希望能夠對你能有幫助

我在寫完mod之後才發現你又更新了Easy,所以我會放在最後去寫

[Normal]
00:07:769 (7769|0) - 並不是說這裡不對，不過我覺得這一段的滑條有點太多節奏有點單調，所以也許你可以把這個滑條改為單點，比如這樣
我現在稍微把它隨機一點放，看起來應該沒有那麼重複單調了。
長條是因為合成器的聲音在這個段落相當一致，所以我會持續用長條來表達這個聲音。
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9503499
00:21:783 (21783|3) - 這裡和上一條一樣
01:03:608 (63608|2) - 這裡我覺得也是滑條太多，所以可以改為單點緩和一下節奏
01:14:109 (74109|3) - 這個滑條我覺得持續到紅線位置就可以了。現在它和下一個滑條間距這麼短，我不知道會不會對於NM來說太難了這個地方你已經改過了，我覺得現在這樣挺好的。不過我認為這裡的人聲部分僅僅持續到紅線的位置，所以縮短1/2拍也許更好一點
01:17:623 (77623|0) - ^
01:21:345 (81345|1) - 在前面的部分相同的位置都沒有這樣一個滑條出現，所以我覺得這個可以刪掉
01:21:564 (81564|0) - 這個滑條會不會按的時間有點太長？也許你可以在中間白線處換到左數第三條軌道上
01:24:630 (84630|3) - 我覺得這個滑條持續到紅線處就可以了
01:28:134 (88134|3) - ^
01:35:360 (95360|2) - 同樣的，我覺得這個滑條可以刪掉
01:35:579 (95579|3) - 可以和01:21:564 (81564|0) - 做相似的處理
其他我想應該是聽到人聲了
hitsound方面我沒有聽出單個音的問題，不過我覺得00:01:199 - 這裡的hitsound音量應該比00:29:010 - 這裡大一些才對。現在我覺得00:01:199 - 的hitsound有點聽不到而00:29:010 - 的音量又有點太大了，所以也許你可以調整一下
沒錯前面確實聽起來要比較大聲，後面那個是因為要強調Hi-hat的聲音，
怕可能有人感覺不出我把鍵放在紅線上是在放什麼。

[Hard]
01:02:284 (62284|0,63160|3) - 如果你仔細聽，這裡最後1/2拍其實並沒有人聲，所以我建議你把他們縮短，也可以讓滑條有一個間斷的時期。或者你也可以按照Normal裡面01:03:608 (63608|2) - 的mod改
01:10:715 - 這個位置加一個音會不會連貫一點？
01:24:620 (84620|3) - 這一段音樂全部都有滑條，所以這裡改成單鍵休息一下會不會好一點？
這些應該是因為沒發現在對合成器跟鼓的關係
hitsound方面同我在Normal提到的一樣，另外為什麼01:07:540 - 到01:09:511 - 你只用了30%的音量呢？
音量的部份把前面放大了。30%是因為這邊有三顆同時按的hitsound，
如果每個難度都一樣的話Hard會非常大聲，不過確實我現在應該把它改成33%以突現這件事情。

[Easy]
前奏的音樂 - 對比兩個難一點的圖，我覺得你應該保留滑條而去掉單鍵才對，因為你的這一套圖主要的難點是在滑條上，這個Easy這一段有點和其他圖的風格有些不同
我就是發現了這件事情所以把長條拿掉讓他更簡單一點。後面也盡量避免短的長條。
01:13:452 (73452|0) - 我覺得這個滑條應該拉長1/2拍而01:14:109 (74109|1) - 應該縮短1/2拍。這樣在樂句與樂句之間就可以斷開了
01:17:613 (77613|2) - 把這個滑條改成與01:21:116 (81116|0,81335|1) - 相似的組合可能會好一點
01:27:467 (87467|3,88124|2) - 同01:13:452 (73452|0) - 有相同的意見
後面應該是人聲問題
hitsound方面和Normal一樣
這個改成100%了

GL!

Quick Draw wrote:

Nice map! The offset was an easy fix haha, no probs~

pic

cut since there's lots of personal imformation, i'm not sure it should be posted.

and thank CrumpetFiddler again, really a nice guy.

Murasame wrote:

hihi
NM request from my modding quene
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hard

|1|2|3|4|
00:00:971 - 建议在column 3加一个note
確實不要放雙鍵跟後面的鼓聲(W)搞混比較好
00:13:233 - 建议在column 1加个note
00:13:890 (13890|1) - 建议挪到column 3 然后在 00:14:109 - column 1加一个note
00:28:124 - 建议在column 1加一个note
我大概猜的到是要說對那個重低音吧，你沒說我都沒聽到那個聲音耶，
不過我想我會用hitsound去對他，因為在這段裡面雙鍵是給那個鼓聲(W)的。
00:32:503 (32503|0,32503|1,32722|2,32941|3,32941|0,33160|1,33160|2,33160|0,33379|3,33379|2) - 这里感觉改成这样更舒服些
這個主要問題是我不太懂為什麼要雙鍵連打，
其實主要是前面的mod非常強烈的一直建議不要放雙鍵連打。
但我覺得這個建議本身是適合的。
00:37:978 (37978|2) - 建议挪到column 1
同上
00:42:576 (42576|0) - 建议改成single note
原本放兩個長鍵是因為要跟normal不一樣，
不過不知道什麼時候我改過normal了所以現在這個確實應該改回來比較順。

就这些了
图很不错
祝早日rank
第一張好像都要個一年半載QQ