1. Coco (1,3 stars, 122 notes)
2. Sara (2,56 stars, 153 notes)
3. Tsugumi (4,1 stars, 211 notes)

wmfchris wrote:

[general]
-mp3 @ 320 kbps, compress it to 128~192 <- in work
-Unused BG image in your folder?

[Tsugumi]
0:43:382 (5) whistle?
0:54:291 (3,4) up 1 grid, (1,6) + whistle?
1:37:248 (4) properly stack on ending of (5)
1:41:145 (2,3) delete
1:58:287 (1) imo that it too loud and too sudden, make it a bit softer

[Sara]
-soften hitsound at begining section a bit
1:46:404 (1) spacing?

[Coco]
-hitsound even louder than the other diff? soften them a bit

This worth many pink stars :3 LOL thank you so much chris <33333

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi again~~

Overall:
Timing sounds correct... (oh my this song sure is hard to time)
I am not so good with hitsounds, but I feel fine. Yup, it's very hard to time ^^ Big thanks to NatsumeRin & 100pa- for timing me this difficult soundtrack!!!

[Coco]
02:05:266 (1) - is it just me? I hear a tiny pop sound when the spinner begins. Investigate it lol. Eh? = =

[Sara]
01:33:937 (2,3) - why not just using regular slider speed? good question, next question
02:01:404 (1) - space this out like 01:59:846 (2,3). (Player could've mistaken this for a red-tick note) ok

[Tsugumi]
The dark gray combo is not really visible. Nooooo I love this colour! D: I'll think about it *sob* *sob*

01:07:137 (1,2) - The spacing made me thought it was a red-tick note... fix'd
01:27:119 (7) - yea, spacing should be like this =w=
01:31:404 (1) - a jump?! a jump!!...got fixed


I was curious so I googled this game.
Wow.
Some psychology theorems run through my mind.
Betcha I am now interested lol yay~~

Star~

1. 02:03:195 (5,6) - use x1.1 spacing snap at (6)?

1. 02:01:404 (1) - this end is not at the CORRECT time, you should use 1/16 to snap this, but the slider speed would be a problem, as we can't set the uninherited and inherited sections at the same place, idk how to solve this :S (to keep the things as they are now) maybe you have to double the bpm of the total song and half the slider velocity?
2. 01:13:073 (7) - ^

1. 02:03:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing the volume doesn't work well here imo
2. 02:05:404 (1) - make this 1/8 beat ealier and longer.
3. AR is a bit low, 7 is better imo
4. 00:55:060 (7) - new combo?

Colin Hou wrote:

[Coco]:

1. 02:03:195 (5,6) - use x1.1 spacing snap at (6)? oh ok

[Sara]:

1. 02:01:404 (1) - this end is not at the CORRECT time, you should use 1/16 to snap this, but the slider speed would be a problem, as we can't set the uninherited and inherited sections at the same place, idk how to solve this :S (to keep the things as they are now) maybe you have to double the bpm of the total song and half the slider velocity? ow x.x I'll ask a MAT or else before i start some nonsense ><
2. 01:13:073 (7) - ^^

[Tsugumi]:

1. 02:03:195 (1,2,3,4,5) - decreasing the volume doesn't work well here imo ehehehe you're right ^^'
2. 02:05:404 (1) - make this 1/8 beat ealier and longer. oke~
3. AR is a bit low, 7 is better imo Hmm I don't want the AR to be that fast :S I increased to 6 AR
4. 00:55:060 (7) - new combo? hm okay

Pro-Timing by 100pa- as always

seems good, more jumps can improve this but that's only my opinion I don't like them for sad instrumentals... sorry >< and good luck with my star

PS: Harry Potter is a cute boy LOL !

Sandpig wrote:

hi heya~

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)

sry for modding late np!

Tsugumi

00:11:813 (9) - I think it feels better if it's changed into 2 circles same
00:25:644 (2,3) - 1/4 later and make them like this oh, cool idea^^

SPOILER

00:54:865 (6,1) - reduce the distance? naah, i want it that big :/
01:08:707 - add a note? uh ok


Sara

good job with hitsound but the arrangement looks a little random i will make them better if I'm in mood x.x

00:43:177 (3,4) - maybe seperate them, you didn't stack others like these 2. hm ok
01:45:820 (4) - new combo
01:46:404 (1) - remove nc fixd


Coco

fine. but I still recommand you making the arrangement more pretty :> same like [Sara] hehe ^^'


star

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi! What do we have here? It's a pretty good map, you know

Btw, sorry for the delay, I've been quiet busy lately :S no prob no prob ^_^

[General]

Perfect timing and excelent hitsounds!


[Coco]

19:216 (7) - Maybe a new combo here? kay
25:839 (2) - Move this one grid down and one right naah , don't think so sry :/
1:02:073 (7) - New combo here, and remove it from the next circle. no sry ><


[Sara]

17:657 (2) - One grid left? I mean, it won't change a thing, but it would be exactly on the middle of the screen haha, I bet there will be a hyper-nazi-modder if i get bad luck and then I'll have to change it again anyway XD
41:034 (1) - Hmmm.. Maybe remove the new combo and add it to the next slider? nope sry
45:709 (1) - ^^
59:540 (6) - Stack this under 5? i don't think so >_<


[Tsugumi]

Combo colours 1 and 2 seem TOO similar to me. Try changing one of them. hmm okay !

The map seems good to go for me


Really, - I have to say - well done!
You have my star, definitely.

NatsumeRin wrote:

BPM:77.000 offset:505
BPM:76.400 offset:65,959
BPM:77.000 offset:69,100
BPM:70.000 offset:72,216
BPM:65.000 offset:73,070
BPM:77.000 offset:76,210
BPM:67.000 offset:121,404
BPM:64.000 offset:123,195
BPM:54.000 offset:124,132
BPM:54.000 offset:125,266 (BPM doesn't matter, this is the last note)

main by 100pa-.

edit: time to have a star.yay ! ~ Thank you Rin =D

Colin Hou wrote:

02:01:404 (1) - this end is not at the CORRECT time, you should use 1/16 to snap this, but the slider speed would be a problem, as we can't set the uninherited and inherited sections at the same place

1. Sorry to say this to you but silencing the slider ticks are unrankable. =/ Its best to remove that. If you don't find what I say is true, ask a BAT or MAT.
2. Its not a big deal but I would name the backgrounds some more professional.

1. 00:47:268 (6)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.

Roddie wrote:

Hi

Sorry for the delay.

General:

1. Sorry to say this to you but silencing the slider ticks are unrankable. =/ Its best to remove that. If you don't find what I say is true, ask a BAT or MAT. no = =
2. Its not a big deal but I would name the backgrounds some more professional. whaddya maen? owo

Coco:

1. 00:47:268 (6)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.

no sry :/

Sara:
Nothing that I encountered.

Tsugumi:

Nothing I can find.

Hm... I could point out some of the spacing that you need to fix but its just a minor thing.

Sadness......

Good luck getting this ranked.

Star~

karenying wrote:

hi

Coco
00:37:917(1,2,3) - that not beautiful,try to move like this?

SPOILER

[attachment=0:9c62f]0.png[/attachment:9c62f]

00:46:489 - whistle?
01:23:222 - ^
01:34:521 - ^
01:37:248 - ^

Sora
00:29:346 - whistle?
00:58:566 - ^
01:22:054 - ^
01:32:573 - ^
01:34:521 - ^

nice map

dNextGen wrote:

H-boy wrote:

Coco

nice~

00:12:982(4) - whistle ok
00:14:540(3) - remove whistle aye ~
00:40:644(2) - move 1 grid left or 2 grid left(lv3) done
01:58:287(8) - symmetric with (7)-01:56:729-[include the shape]' nope sry = =


Sara

00:02:268~00:03:047 reduce volume cool idea, changed owo
[attachment=1:a5272]1.png[/attachment:a5272]

Tsugumi

00:06:748(1) - by this way? i think that shape is pretty cool
[attachment=0:a5272]2.png[/attachment:a5272]
*00:07:527(2) - if you change the shape of (1) ,make (2) symmetric with (1)
00:18:826(1) - move 4 grid up and 1 grid right(lv3) okessu ~

star~

artpiggo wrote:

Sara and Coco is too nice to mod XD

Tsugumi diff

00 55 060 I think it's too jumping from 6 to 1
02 05 243 I think it's too jumping from 4 to 5 hm, i think these jumps are okay...sry ><

just suggestion. you can ignore me

Star

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi phoenix~

[General]
- see this for a perfect symmetry slider = =|||
- silent slider slide and slider tick is unrankable, at least don't silent the tick reduced Slider Tick Rate so it doesn't matter now = =
- 02:01:404 (3) - this offset is too early, try listening with 25% speed and you'll notice it. 121.446 is better ok~
- I don't understand why do you have to use so many timing section, even the volume is always changing. I suggest you to not put timing section all over the place, maybe only in some part of the music =A=....

[Coco]
increase HP by 1 tick ok
02:03:195 (5) - the volume decrease is too sudden, use 30% volume then decrease it in the next timing section ok

[Sora] Sara not Sora !
there are inconsistency in offsets in this diff, they are:
- missing an offset in 73.070
- missing an offset in 121.404 (change this offset pls) oh forgot them somehow^^
rise the CS by 1 hm..ok
01:06:744 (7) - the repeat doesn't follow anything, might as well change this into a single long slider it does IMO
02:05:543 (1) - add timing section in this spinner and decreased the volume all the way to the left ok

[Tsugumi]
00:42:787 (3) - (nazi) stack this properly, there's still 0.04x spacing XDD
01:04:800 (6) - follow the music and change this into circle in 01:04:800 & 01:04:995 chang'd =w=
01:07:137 (4) - remove the 0.5 timing section then snap this slider to 1/6 in 01:07:006 add another repeat to it
like this http://puu.sh/LoA oh cool idea =D
02:06:377 - move this timing section to 02:05:404 (1) ok
02:05:243 (5) - too far in the corner, maybe move this poor circle up a little I feel sorry for that circle too but i want to follow the "submarine"

Coco and Sora is kinda similar pattern wise, but it's not a big problem...I guess
Nice map but very sad music, I'm weak with this kind of thing desho desho ;_;
~star