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Yakushi Ruri - Ruri-iro

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Imouto koko
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Imouto koko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年6月13日 at 18:12:45

Artist: Yakushi Ruri
Title: Ruri-iro
Source: 鯨神のティアスティラ
Tags: avg galgame whirlpool 天川 凑月 tenkawa mizuki Oiso Pata-Mon kujiragami no tearstilla 84461810 firika
BPM: 143
Filesize: 8169kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. 844's Easy (1.47 stars, 235 notes)
  2. Firika's Normal (1.82 stars, 351 notes)
  3. Imouto-Mon's Hard (3.09 stars, 640 notes)
  4. Tearstilla (4.12 stars, 973 notes)
Download: Yakushi Ruri - Ruri-iro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd Mapset.
好甜好甜。

844's Easy by 84461810 Finished
Firika's Normal by Oiso Finished
Imouto-Mon's Hard collab by Pata-Mon & me Finished
Tearstilla by me Finished

学习意识流摸图

Gust wrote:

你离中间就几个像素，不放中间，有种感觉就是，和妹子告白被妹子甩了然后赌气

papapa213 wrote:

你这个pattern的感觉，让我想到了初中的时候我喜欢隔壁班的女孩子好久，但是最后她却和别人在一起了，那种看到有人对她好很欣慰但是心里又很不是滋味的矛盾感觉，所以建议2放到中间做个对称

PinkHeart wrote:

没有这种经历，不改

Pata-Mon wrote:

虽然你追不到姑娘很可怜但我还是不改
Last edited by Imouto koko , edited 97 times in total.
Mikazuki
34 posts
Joined July 2011
Mikazuki
社保哇
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

Mikazuki wrote:

社保哇
高弹棉大大卷鸽 :)
papapa213
152 posts
Joined November 2014
papapa213
[normal]
4大拍一nc 太长了，建议减一半
节奏感觉怪怪的
00:17:117 (6,7,8) - 听起来像这样↓
SPOILER
00:20:473 (1,2,3) - 别把老哥，这段背景音这么明显的↓
SPOILER
emmmm节奏和我想预差有点大，我不建议跟全跟人声
随便下了一下节奏
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59914
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Ruriiro
TitleUnicode:瑠璃色
Artist:Yakushi Ruri
ArtistUnicode:薬師るり
Creator:Imouto koko
Version:pa
Source:鯨神のティアスティラ
Tags:Galgame Whirlpool Tenkawa Mizuki
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:622146

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你不想改就不改吧，也怪麻烦

01:10:823 (5,6,7) - kiai都是跟背景音，别突然就跟人声了↓
SPOILER
01:26:557 (8,9,10) - 我的下法↓
SPOILER
后面一样

02:54:879 (1,2) - 有点搞事

什么垃圾，不能收到box里

hard
[hard]
舍不得关ds啊你
02:07:047 (2) - 滑条声消掉
02:22:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - overlap，这段有点乱了啊
insane
[insane]
00:25:508 (5) - NC
01:15:438 (6) - 往下错开一点吧
01:41:243 - 这段break是shenmegui，01:40:403 (4,5,6,1) - 本来这个地方间距慢慢缩回来就挺适合接着摆后面这一段子的
02:23:201 (2) - 这地方已经看不到被02:22:152 (5) - 包住了，还不如挪开防止和02:24:250 (7) - 擦边
02:58:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 按照前面的趋势，02:59:914 (1) - 一串应该是从02:59:494 (7) - 上面顺时针转下来，02:59:914 (1) - 刚好是前面八个音达到最大值的时候，你这反而憋住了
03:29:285 (1,1) - 1/4间隔的滑条离这么远我只见到这一次，我觉得变sv已经足够了，还是贴上比较好
03:38:935 (2) - 出界
Last edited by papapa213 , edited 1 time in total.
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

papapa213 wrote:

insane
[insane]
00:25:508 (5) - NC 会补，不过全图nc打算重下一遍。
01:15:438 (6) - 往下错开一点吧 改了个排列。
01:41:243 - 这段break是shenmegui，01:40:403 (4,5,6,1) - 本来这个地方间距慢慢缩回来就挺适合接着摆后面这一段子的 不怎么喜欢做这段人声，没什么节奏还是break吧。
02:23:201 (2) - 这地方已经看不到被02:22:152 (5) - 包住了，还不如挪开防止和02:24:250 (7) - 擦边 说得好，我把后面挪走了。
02:58:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 按照前面的趋势，02:59:914 (1) - 一串应该是从02:59:494 (7) - 上面顺时针转下来，02:59:914 (1) - 刚好是前面八个音达到最大值的时候，你这反而憋住了 改了。
03:29:285 (1,1) - 1/4间隔的滑条离这么远我只见到这一次，我觉得变sv已经足够了，还是贴上比较好 。没懂，这个距离不是一大堆么，我前面也是这样的。
03:38:935 (2) - 出界 改了。
Hard那段也改了 :)
thx for mod
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
马克

[Oiso's Normal]

NC简化一下吧，上10了不太好。
比如像00:10:403 (5) - 00:17:117 (6) -
后面类似的。

00:20:473 (1,2) - 人声稍微有点误差打起来都会觉得不舒服 所以这个地方换个节奏摆放如何，或者你加个音效00:21:942 (2) - 在这个的开头

00:57:396 (6) - nc
01:04:110 (5) - nc
01:10:823 (5) - ^
01:17:536 (5) - ^
01:24:250 (5) - ^
后面的节奏一样我就不重复了。

[Imouto-Mon's hard]

这个难度名。很容易误导 感觉collab最稳妥 （主要还是小心搞事的

03:31:802 (1,2) - 这个遮挡有点突兀 不能说是梗吧。 感觉改flow好些。

[Insane]

01:08:306 (3,4,5,6,7) - 再弯一点 感觉弯的还不够

03:02:431 (1) - 03:02:851 (3) - 这俩为什么不ctrl g哇 反过来会很顺手的。

03:04:110 (1,2,3,4) - 这里就相当于前面一段03:03:271 (1,2,3,4) - 的逆时针旋转90度再摆在1的位置上。感觉会好点

就这些吧 qwq
gl~！
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
这种难度名允许的，很安全，没事~

@雷米 看了一眼感觉你那边最大的问题可能是难度分布，作为曲子高潮的kiai几乎没有1/2，不太合理，建议加点
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

[Kamiya] wrote:

马克
[Imouto-Mon's hard]

这个难度名。很容易误导 感觉collab最稳妥 （主要还是小心搞事的

03:31:802 (1,2) - 这个遮挡有点突兀 不能说是梗吧。 感觉改flow好些。 改啦。

[Insane]

01:08:306 (3,4,5,6,7) - 再弯一点 感觉弯的还不够 好！

03:02:431 (1) - 03:02:851 (3) - 这俩为什么不ctrl g哇 反过来会很顺手的。 当时做这段就有点欠考虑，你提的都改啦，后面也修了一点。

03:04:110 (1,2,3,4) - 这里就相当于前面一段03:03:271 (1,2,3,4) - 的逆时针旋转90度再摆在1的位置上。感觉会好点 同上。

就这些吧 qwq
gl~！
蟹蟹四萌 :)
Fia
Fia
00:07:886 (5,6,7) - 不好 歌曲这里突出的是行进感 结果却空了一拍
00:22:571 (2,2,2) - 3/4滑条接个没音的note游戏体验极差 特别是重音在3/4上的时候
00:42:292 (1,2,3) - 保持一下一致用不跳过白线的节奏比较好 你这一段每个小节开头都是跟鼓的
00:44:599 (4) - 上边比下边舒服
00:47:956 (6,7,8) - 有点没看懂想突出哪个轨 跟背景音里那个锣的话drumfinish这个音效是削弱这种音的 建议删了或者换点别的比如normalfinish
01:11:662 (7,8) - 01:25:089 (4,5) - 两个音一样的 8也用滑条比较好 而且你这间距有点小和后面的空拍长度不太搭
01:29:285 (1,2,3) - 整段跟鼓你却只有这个梗跟了电吉他 是真的僵硬

后两段没看 估计同上
Dored
287 posts
Joined May 2017
Dored
[Imouto-Mon's Hard]

00:28:236 (3) - 这个是不是有点太靠下了？在编辑器里已经看不到滑条的下沿了 要是在两边还好 在中间被判定条盖上了一点不太舒服 往上微调一下比较好吧

[Insane]

00:27:606 (2,3) - 前面基本都是滑条和圈差1/4的音 突然冒出来一个1/2的用和1/4一样的形式感觉不太好 区分一下比较好 后面还有些同样的也是
kiai部分有些三连和相同作用的折返滑条规划一下比较好 要不就都用同一种 要不就有vocal音时用一种 只有乐器音时用另外一种 看现在这个好像没什么特定规律 要是你用某种规律我没看出来不要打我
01:39:984 (1,2,3) - 不如和01:39:354 (1,2,3) - ctrl+H一下 然后后面四个note就相应调整一下
01:59:285 (7,1) - 包歪了
3分钟开始的那段吉他solo部分里有些同向平行的1/4滑条擦边 不太好看

整体上还是不错的 大佬就是大佬
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

PinkHeart wrote:

00:07:886 (5,6,7) - 不好 歌曲这里突出的是行进感 结果却空了一拍 改啦。
00:22:571 (2,2,2) - 3/4滑条接个没音的note游戏体验极差 特别是重音在3/4上的时候 想了很久实在是不会改……姑且修了一部分。
00:42:292 (1,2,3) - 保持一下一致用不跳过白线的节奏比较好 你这一段每个小节开头都是跟鼓的 改了。
00:44:599 (4) - 上边比下边舒服 对！
00:47:956 (6,7,8) - 有点没看懂想突出哪个轨 跟背景音里那个锣的话drumfinish这个音效是削弱这种音的 建议删了或者换点别的比如normalfinish 换normalfinish了。
01:11:662 (7,8) - 01:25:089 (4,5) - 两个音一样的 8也用滑条比较好 而且你这间距有点小和后面的空拍长度不太搭 先尝试了个摆法，改了。
01:29:285 (1,2,3) - 整段跟鼓你却只有这个梗跟了电吉他 是真的僵硬 改啦。

后两段没看 估计同上 都看了看也改了。

Dored wrote:

[Insane]

00:27:606 (2,3) - 前面基本都是滑条和圈差1/4的音 突然冒出来一个1/2的用和1/4一样的形式感觉不太好 区分一下比较好 后面还有些同样的也是 这段算是重新调整了一下。
kiai部分有些三连和相同作用的折返滑条规划一下比较好 要不就都用同一种 要不就有vocal音时用一种 只有乐器音时用另外一种 看现在这个好像没什么特定规律 要是你用某种规律我没看出来不要打我 kiai有个固定位置的三连音啊，白线起所以全都三连/折返不太舒服就加了一些flow合适的折返。红线三连我是不用折返的。
01:39:984 (1,2,3) - 不如和01:39:354 (1,2,3) - ctrl+H一下 然后后面四个note就相应调整一下 感觉空一拍的还是原地好一些。
01:59:285 (7,1) - 包歪了改啦。
3分钟开始的那段吉他solo部分里有些同向平行的1/4滑条擦边 不太好看1/4滑条我个人是觉得无所谓滑条本身的overlap的……读起来也是读成单点才好打吧。

整体上还是不错的 大佬就是大佬 :( 但是毫无内容啊，感觉做鱼了。
DalouBot
DalouBot
一米四无敌！
第一次写摸，啥都不会，不过试试吧写的不好别打我
就先摸主难度好了

[Tearstilla]

00:23:830 (1,2) - 第一个滑条建议按照前面的一样改成往返条。因为打下来感觉后一个滑条仿佛是在一堆鼓点中突然跟了一下人声，导致这个停顿的节奏很别扭。
00:49:739 - 这里可以加一个note，既然跟背景就别漏这里。02:10:299 - 同理
01:28:340 - 同上，位置放在3号滑条头偏左上一点就行。这里本身就有一个音感觉漏了不好。
01:29:180 - 同上，这里可以把原地三连改成01:28:865 (4) - 的当前位置到下一个滑条头区间的移动五连打。理由（包括上面那个改动）是从前面kiai的各种切指连打到这里间奏时候，按键的节奏突然变的很简单不太适应，可以稍微加少量note过渡一下。
01:29:599 - 同上，放在2号滑条头重叠位置，理由也同前面的。
01:39:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 把每次三连打的原地改成间距0.9x斜向右上方向吧，第二次三连打稍微是第一次往左偏30码这样（或许偏右也行？），大概效果是下面这个图。这样直觉感觉更好呢。
SPOILER
02:20:893 (1) - 改成单点吧（既然前面一个都是单点了），前一段kiai是两下滑条，这里两下单点感觉更搭配。
02:56:557 (3) - 这个滑条可以改成往返条，这样和下一个单点在节奏和移动上都更加契合。
03:00:753 (1,2) - 第一个滑条改成0.5x然后时间拉长1/4，第二个滑条改成1.2x（或者1x也行），然后排列成下面这样
SPOILER
03:08:306 (1,2,3,4) - 3次折返打起来不是很舒服，不过我自己尝试好久也不会改略尴尬。试了一下前面一个改成2次折返+单点，后面一个改成短滑条+2次折返+单点或许好一些
03:11:662 (1) - 这滑条也改成往返条吧
03:13:970 (2) - 这个break的开始时间不自然，感觉更应该靠后一点。所以用一个滑条拉长到下一个长白线这样比较合适，顺便脑洞大开摆了个下面这个样子
SPOILER
完全瞎摆别在意，不过节奏上来说舒服很多。
PS：其实我觉得第一段的break也超级不自然，但是想了想也不知道怎么改就先不说了。
03:56:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 滑条尾好像没啥背景音，干脆再拉长1/4吧接上后面连打，然后这个连打间距是不是有点大了
03:58:655 - 这后面一段时间节奏又突然好简单，大概和1分半那个地方的感受差不多。
04:15:462 (4) - 位置放到1号滑条尾那里看着舒服些

具体就是这些感想了，可能有的地方我没考虑仔细，总之上面说的都是自己打起来别扭的地方
另外kiai段总体还行，等以后有点想法了再来写吧
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

DalouBot wrote:

一米四无敌！
第一次写摸，啥都不会，不过试试吧写的不好别打我
就先摸主难度好了

[Tearstilla]

00:23:830 (1,2) - 第一个滑条建议按照前面的一样改成往返条。因为打下来感觉后一个滑条仿佛是在一堆鼓点中突然跟了一下人声，导致这个停顿的节奏很别扭。 emmmm……我觉得可能个人感受更多一点？我是没这么觉得啦。
00:49:739 - 这里可以加一个note，既然跟背景就别漏这里。02:10:299 - 同理 我听不太出这里的音……而且我想强调后面的1212。
01:28:340 - 同上，位置放在3号滑条头偏左上一点就行。这里本身就有一个音感觉漏了不好。 这段是全跟鼓的。（虽然这里我也没听出有音）
01:29:180 - 同上，这里可以把原地三连改成01:28:865 (4) - 的当前位置到下一个滑条头区间的移动五连打。理由（包括上面那个改动）是从前面kiai的各种切指连打到这里间奏时候，按键的节奏突然变的很简单不太适应，可以稍微加少量note过渡一下。 同上。
01:29:599 - 同上，放在2号滑条头重叠位置，理由也同前面的。 同上。
01:39:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 把每次三连打的原地改成间距0.9x斜向右上方向吧，第二次三连打稍微是第一次往左偏30码这样（或许偏右也行？），大概效果是下面这个图。这样直觉感觉更好呢。 改了个差不多的。
SPOILER
02:20:893 (1) - 改成单点吧（既然前面一个都是单点了），前一段kiai是两下滑条，这里两下单点感觉更搭配。 单点有点无聊诶。
02:56:557 (3) - 这个滑条可以改成往返条，这样和下一个单点在节奏和移动上都更加契合。 改了。
03:00:753 (1,2) - 第一个滑条改成0.5x然后时间拉长1/4，第二个滑条改成1.2x（或者1x也行），然后排列成下面这样 emmmm，说不来哪个好，不过姑且还是先改了。
SPOILER
03:08:306 (1,2,3,4) - 3次折返打起来不是很舒服，不过我自己尝试好久也不会改略尴尬。试了一下前面一个改成2次折返+单点，后面一个改成短滑条+2次折返+单点或许好一些 。这为什么会不舒服 :(
03:11:662 (1) - 这滑条也改成往返条吧 听起来实在怪怪的……而且flow摆不好了。
03:13:970 (2) - 这个break的开始时间不自然，感觉更应该靠后一点。所以用一个滑条拉长到下一个长白线这样比较合适，顺便脑洞大开摆了个下面这个样子 break改了，跟轨仔细听了几遍还是不改了。
SPOILER
完全瞎摆别在意，不过节奏上来说舒服很多。
PS：其实我觉得第一段的break也超级不自然，但是想了想也不知道怎么改就先不说了。 个人喜好的break而已。
03:56:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 滑条尾好像没啥背景音，干脆再拉长1/4吧接上后面连打，然后这个连打间距是不是有点大了 滑条尾改不改感觉无所谓的，连打间距是正好的（甚至摆之前和摆之后星数是不变的）。
03:58:655 - 这后面一段时间节奏又突然好简单，大概和1分半那个地方的感受差不多。 因为鼓就是这样的哇。
04:15:462 (4) - 位置放到1号滑条尾那里看着舒服些 。放1太丑了吧，不过想了想还是拉开了点距离放上面了。

具体就是这些感想了，可能有的地方我没考虑仔细，总之上面说的都是自己打起来别扭的地方
另外kiai段总体还行，等以后有点想法了再来写吧
感谢mod :)
- Cappuccino -
43 posts
Joined January 2016
- Cappuccino -
mod as req in pm

Tearstilla
00:02:012 (3) - 开头的两个遮挡梗可以小小错位下

00:03:690 (3) - 这八个单点可以考虑换成短滑条 背景鼓声我觉得还是蛮突出的

开头这段感觉滑条后2连和三连有点多

pm里聊过的 排列整体有点紧了
00:33:900 (5) - 比如这里排列真的有点挤
00:51:103 (5,7,1) - 也是一个事情 这么多note放在一个点 而且之前一句都没有重叠

00:59:389 (2,3) - 这个遮挡 感觉不好读 你试试第二个滑条做成3/4拍

kiai部分节奏本来应该是最紧凑的 可是和开头那段对比 三连和滑条后2连都少很多
建议适当减少下开头的二连三连 增加kiai部分的

01:25:403 (5) - 做成两个note打起来舒服点

02:20:473 (4) - 建议换成和第一段的滑条 可以弄成慢速滑条 两段跟不一样的音挺奇怪的

03:03:271 (1,1) - 这两组短滑条头可以拉开点间距弄点角度 03:05:788 (1,2) - 像这样就挺好

03:56:977 (1) - 这里是没鼓声的 九连最后一个follow人声挺违和的
你试试做成7连 然后最后一个note换成短滑条 03:56:873 (8) - 顿在这里

04:14:611 (2,3) - ctrl+g 试试 有意思的

以上~
Imouto koko
95 posts
Joined January 2016
Topic Starter
Imouto koko

- Cappuccino - wrote:

mod as req in pm

Tearstilla
00:02:012 (3) - 开头的两个遮挡梗可以小小错位下 已经错位了哇。

00:03:690 (3) - 这八个单点可以考虑换成短滑条 背景鼓声我觉得还是蛮突出的 短滑也不是不好……只是我不会摆orz

开头这段感觉滑条后2连和三连有点多 口号是塞爆。

pm里聊过的 排列整体有点紧了
00:33:900 (5) - 比如这里排列真的有点挤 算是为了flow牺牲一下？也有我是个默认HD玩家的缘故吧。
00:51:103 (5,7,1) - 也是一个事情 这么多note放在一个点 而且之前一句都没有重叠 感觉这里的鼓点挺适合重叠的。

00:59:389 (2,3) - 这个遮挡 感觉不好读 你试试第二个滑条做成3/4拍 换3/4可能是好打一点，但是这里渐强还是不太想这么改，看看之后有没有人提吧。

kiai部分节奏本来应该是最紧凑的 可是和开头那段对比 三连和滑条后2连都少很多
建议适当减少下开头的二连三连 增加kiai部分的 kiai节奏下满了哇，难度也的确是最难的了。

01:25:403 (5) - 做成两个note打起来舒服点 但是就overmap了，怪怪的。

02:20:473 (4) - 建议换成和第一段的滑条 可以弄成慢速滑条 两段跟不一样的音挺奇怪的 想了想还是点+滑条比较符合先抑后扬的人声，所以把前面的的也改成点滑条了。

03:03:271 (1,1) - 这两组短滑条头可以拉开点间距弄点角度 03:05:788 (1,2) - 像这样就挺好 改了。

03:56:977 (1) - 这里是没鼓声的 九连最后一个follow人声挺违和的
你试试做成7连 然后最后一个note换成短滑条 03:56:873 (8) - 顿在这里 这里follow的是鼓啊……滑条是静音的，用减速来强调了鼓点的停顿吧。

04:14:611 (2,3) - ctrl+g 试试 有意思的 作为player我挺讨厌这种的）

以上~
看法有好多分歧呢 :) 感谢mod！
Firika
Beatmap Nominator
278 posts
Joined January 2017
Firika
ALL FIXED

Thanks for your moding! :)

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yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
鸽了好多天不好意思

这首好像可以做286bpm ver

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/622146
[Tearstilla]
给我的感觉是滑条速度整体偏慢 也没什么变速来强调 整个图就略平淡
部分可以放开跳
1/2节奏过多 有的节奏可以替换
连续跳摆的比较怪 滑条flow少了点灵性
音效有点惨

kiai我感觉整体怪 看了下总结是滑条速度+节奏密度和间距+flow不符 意思就是 kiai要么最好去除一些1/2节奏 要么就是降低滑条的速度 要么就是拉开部分梗的距离比较好，要么就是优化一下flow（目前很乱，flow我的角度不是看局部哪些梗的flow 而是一个整体感）。四选一吧

00:06:208 (1) - 试下3/4. 会更合曲 然后00:06:942 (1) - 可以放心地放的更远
00:12:082 (5,6,7) - 2个3/4 加速 表现力比现在的好
00:16:697 (3,4,1) - 这个组合就很奇怪 打着并不好 突然一个跳然后flow又折回去了
00:19:005 (4,5) - 过近
00:44:809 (5) - ctrl+g 168, 348 推荐 flow. 而且这个finish即使是故意加的也不好
00:47:956 (6,7,8) - 过于平淡 推荐加速
00:51:313 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - 推荐复制前面的改梗
01:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不够灵 但我不知道怎么建议改… 要不先关注一下这
01:04:529 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:11:977 (8) - 推荐1/2
01:12:501 (3,4) - 这里好换梗了 不要1/2滑条
01:15:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里我就比较喜欢
01:20:893 (1,2) - 太近
01:25:403 (5) - ^ 所有一样的地方都这么推荐 下面不提
01:32:641 (1,2,3) - 同上类似
02:08:515 (6,7,8) - ^
后面这段应该跟前面差不多. 直入solo
03:00:753 (1,2) - 3/4会比1/2好
03:01:592 (1,2,3,4) - 03:02:431 (1,2,3,4) - 不要碰到, 或者后面的03:03:271 (1,2,3,4) - 碰到, 不过推荐前者
03:05:788 (1,2,3,4) -
03:13:340 (1,2) - 空的很怪啊 要么就在距离上摆远点
03:36:417 (1) - 不如1/4 强调那个停顿，但排列上需要更换下
04:13:972 (4) - +个慢速1/4很有感觉(虽然我会+3/8)
04:14:185 (1,2,3,4) - 不要碰

[Pata-koko's Hard]
00:55:508 (1) - finish
02:58:655 (2,4) - 这两个不如不叠，02:58:655 (2,3) - 然后这里跳点 效果好
03:32:222 (2,3,4) - @kencho
04:13:236 (5,2) - 不建议后面这堆和这挤着

[WudiOiso's Normal]
横平竖直还行
03:15:019 (2,4) - 这么摆非常不建议 主要是乱
Firika
Beatmap Nominator
278 posts
Joined January 2017
Firika

Wudiyf_bmp wrote:

[WudiOiso's Normal]
横平竖直还行
03:15:019 (2,4) - 这么摆非常不建议 主要是乱 改了改了 √
感谢竵捱玸大师的摸 ;)

Oiso's Normal
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Imouto koko
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Imouto koko

yf_bmp wrote:

[Tearstilla]
给我的感觉是滑条速度整体偏慢 也没什么变速来强调 整个图就略平淡
部分可以放开跳
1/2节奏过多 有的节奏可以替换
连续跳摆的比较怪 滑条flow少了点灵性
音效有点惨

kiai我感觉整体怪 看了下总结是滑条速度+节奏密度和间距+flow不符 意思就是 kiai要么最好去除一些1/2节奏 要么就是降低滑条的速度 要么就是拉开部分梗的距离比较好，要么就是优化一下flow（目前很乱，flow我的角度不是看局部哪些梗的flow 而是一个整体感）。四选一吧

00:06:208 (1) - 试下3/4. 会更合曲 然后00:06:942 (1) - 可以放心地放的更远
00:12:082 (5,6,7) - 2个3/4 加速 表现力比现在的好
00:16:697 (3,4,1) - 这个组合就很奇怪 打着并不好 突然一个跳然后flow又折回去了
00:19:005 (4,5) - 过近
00:44:809 (5) - ctrl+g 168, 348 推荐 flow. 而且这个finish即使是故意加的也不好
00:47:956 (6,7,8) - 过于平淡 推荐加速
00:51:313 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - 推荐复制前面的改梗
01:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不够灵 但我不知道怎么建议改… 要不先关注一下这
01:04:529 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:11:977 (8) - 推荐1/2
01:12:501 (3,4) - 这里好换梗了 不要1/2滑条
01:15:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里我就比较喜欢
01:20:893 (1,2) - 太近
01:25:403 (5) - ^ 所有一样的地方都这么推荐 下面不提
01:32:641 (1,2,3) - 同上类似
02:08:515 (6,7,8) - ^
后面这段应该跟前面差不多. 直入solo
03:00:753 (1,2) - 3/4会比1/2好
03:01:592 (1,2,3,4) - 03:02:431 (1,2,3,4) - 不要碰到, 或者后面的03:03:271 (1,2,3,4) - 碰到, 不过推荐前者
03:05:788 (1,2,3,4) -
03:13:340 (1,2) - 空的很怪啊 要么就在距离上摆远点
03:36:417 (1) - 不如1/4 强调那个停顿，但排列上需要更换下
04:13:972 (4) - +个慢速1/4很有感觉(虽然我会+3/8)
04:14:185 (1,2,3,4) - 不要碰

[Pata-koko's Hard]
00:55:508 (1) - finish
02:58:655 (2,4) - 这两个不如不叠，02:58:655 (2,3) - 然后这里跳点 效果好
03:32:222 (2,3,4) - @kencho
04:13:236 (5,2) - 不建议后面这堆和这挤着
基本都改了，除了极少数实在不会改。
非常感谢！ :)
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都改了 谢摸
Imouto koko
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Gust
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[Oiso's Normal]
多余的绿线删掉
tag和别的难度统一-0
全图应该是用1.1x的ds基础。那么note前后的ds就要保持1.10x左右，检查一遍全图，看看下面图里的红框地方是不是1.10x，差太大的(>0.02的)要改一下。
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02:56:557 (1) - normal的叠还是少点好，这里不推荐
02:58:236 (2) - +NC
03:16:697 (4) - 同
03:20:893 (4) - 改成note更好感觉
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Halfslashed
[General]
Change combo color 5 to something below 220 luminosity since you use kiai time in this mapset. Also, add combo colors to Oiso and Imouto-Mon difficulties.
Tags are also inconsistent for Oiso/Imouto-Mon difficulties, copy over the tags from your difficulty onto theirs.
Regarding spread, there's a large gap between normal and hard, as well as hard and insane. The hard difficulty doesn't introduce any sorts of spacing changes while the insane has tons of them (like a typical insane), and the hard difficulty also has quite a bit of 1/4 and overall large distances, which make the gap between normal and hard too much. My recommendation here is to create a difficulty between normal and hard without any 1/4, then add more spacing changes in the hard to even out the gaps.

[Oiso's Normal]
00:31:382 (2) - The tail of 00:29:914 (4) - completely obscures the position of this object which is too complex for the lowest difficulty of this map. Try using placements similar to what you did for 00:34:949 (2,3,4) - .
00:38:306 (2,3,4,5) - The amount of circles here is inappropriate for this difficulty due to both tapping strain and object density. Try using a 1/2 reverse for 2,3,4 instead.
00:50:264 (5) - 00:58:655 (3) - Rhythm density here is way too high for the lowest difficulty of this mapset, I recommend changing this to a circle to provide a break for players here.
01:00:753 - In general the chorus is very unintense compared to the rest of the difficulty due to the low rhythm density. 01:00:753 (1) - Reverses like this are calmer than almost any rhythm introduced before this but could be much more complex, and red ticks like 01:02:222 - 01:03:900 - get skipped when it'd be fitting for them to be mapped as slider ends or even circles. There's also barely any contrast with the second half of the kiai where the drums pick up in intensity significantly at 01:14:180 -.
01:13:340 (4,5,1) - I think stacking all of these in one place would fit the hold effect you're trying to create with the 5,1 stack more appropriately.
01:24:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Well I guess you do represent the intensity, but this is way too overwhelming for players at this level due to the continuous chains of 1/2 without breaks. I would recommend a rhythm like this for 4,5,6,7 since it matches the climax well, and fits the percussion/vocals.
01:53:621 (1) - 02:07:047 (1) - Remove NC since you typically stick to a normal NC structure in this map.
02:58:236 (2,3,4) - 1/2 multiple reverse sliders are completely inappropriate for the lowest difficulty of this mapset due to newbies not being able to react to the secondary reverses quickly enough. Unfortunately you can't fully map the guitar at this difficulty level, but a rhythm like this ties well to the buildup and fits the instrumental, so I think you should try using that.
03:01:592 - It feels really lazy that you decided not to map one of the most intense parts of the song especially when you map the least intense section of the song that comes right after this., so I recommend you try mapping this section despite it being simplified.
03:14:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Even though this is similar to 00:47:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - with what the vocals are doing, this is in a much calmer section and does not warrant such an intense rhythm. I recommend simplifying this by changing 2,3 into a 3/2 reverse slider as well as both 03:16:697 (3) - 03:17:956 (5) - into circles.
03:18:375 (1,2) - With similar reasoning to the above, I recommend using a 3/2 reverse slider here as well.

Most issues I indicated repeat throughout the difficulty several times in some form.

[Imouto-Mon's Hard]
00:21:313 (2) - Try removing this circle, since it takes away focus on the vocals on 00:21:522 (3) - and contrasts poorly with the piano 00:26:347 (2) - .
00:52:152 (4,1) - Swap NC to fit the offbeat instrumental here more appropriately.
00:59:914 (1) - 02:20:473 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:753 (1,2) - This rhythm works alright, but since you used it almost all of the time in the verses, it doesn't stand out well in the chorus. I recommend shortening 1 to a 1/2 slider and placing a circle on the blue tick to represent this rhythm in a more intense way.
03:01:173 (2) - 03:03:690 (2) - Try using two circles instead of a 1/2 sliders to fit the intensity of the guitar more appropriately.
03:08:306 (1,2) - I recommend changing this to a 1/1 slider + circle to represent the change in the guitar here.
03:11:662 (1) - Try changing this to a 1/2 slider + circle, it would probably fit the intensity change a lot better and prepare the player for the triples after this.

[Tearstilla]
00:03:690 (3) - Add NC
00:09:984 (7) - These drums could stand out way more if you used a circle + 1/4 slider rhythm due to the 3/4 clicking gap it would create to the next object, so I suggest trying that out.
00:29:494 (3,4) - I recommend ctrl+g on this rhythm to fit the vocals more appropriately like most of your rhythms in this section.
00:33:900 (5,1) - Swap NC since you don't really do anything with NCs in the middle of the measure anywhere else in the map.
00:35:578 (1) - I think it'd make for better contrast if you had something other than a 3/4 reverse here, since there were so many of those in the section before this. Try using a rhythm like you had for stuff like 00:27:187 (1,2) - instead to make it feel like there's more of a progression between verses.
01:10:403 (7,1,2,3) - I recommend decreasing spacing here since this jump is coming out of a stream, so it appears way stronger than it should.
01:11:662 (7,8) - Due to slider leniency, this is fairly underwhelming to play for an intense guitar part, try something like this instead.
01:14:180 - The song gets a lot more intense from this point on but doesn't really differentiate much from the previous kiai part and actually at times feels less intense. A good way you could differentiate is by having things like 01:14:180 (1,2,3) - with DS instead of stacking, making stuff like 01:15:019 (5) - DS'd triples, using a higher SV for this part, buffing stream spacings like 01:20:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - etc.
01:15:858 (1,2,3,4) - Intensity changes between these two jumps, so I recommend stacking or overlapping 4 with 2 to fit the vocal intensity more appropriately, but you'll also have to move 01:16:697 (5,6,7) -.
03:04:110 (1,3) - I recommend changing these to circles to represent the drums a bit while still fitting the intensity of this guitar section.

Some of the stuff repeats throughout the entire map.

Good luck!
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