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2017-03-04 06:33 Cloudchaser: ok
2017-03-04 06:33 _Meep_: 00:26:562 (5,6) - fuk align these at least ;w;
2017-03-04 06:34 _Meep_: 00:29:238 - vocal here and since vocals are prominent in this part of the song probs should add note
2017-03-04 06:35 _Meep_: 00:33:745 (7) - delete note to imitate/better play the next part 00:36:703 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2017-03-04 06:35 _Meep_: nothing else to say
2017-03-04 06:35 _Meep_: lol
2017-03-04 06:36 Cloudchaser: everything added
Everything else was added!! thanks youKenterz wrote:
M4M hi :3General
- The mp3 file has 320 kbps, so it should be 192 (or less)
- You may need to add the epilepsy warning, because of some passages like 00:21:492 -
Crazy Diamond
nothing in the Normal diff :3
- 00:20:083 (5,6) - A sudden jump is a bit weird here, you should use the same distance snap as before
- 00:23:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is seems like you try to perfectly follow the voice here, but then, in the next patterns, it's not the case. That's a bit disturbing in my opinion, since you want to continue to follow the voice after this 1st pattern as a player
- 00:33:886 (7,8) - You should reverse the position of the circle and the slider (not in position but in time), it follows the voice in a better way I think In my opinion, it is fine. Circle emphasizes much better
- 00:38:393 (5) - I don't understand why there's a 3/4 with a reverse here, it's not the case before, and I don't find that the voice rhythm needs it (plus it avoid the NC on the right posiiton)
- 00:49:097 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This isn't a 1/4 rythm, but it's with 1/6 beats
Good luck \:D/
Todo lo demás fue aplicado. Thanks you <3-Sh1n1- wrote:
Normal
- 00:29:661 (3,4) - aahh me sangran los ojos 5 personas me patearon por esto, ya lo cambié ;_;
- 00:45:717 (1) - trata de hacer que la curva de la cola señale hacia 00:46:844 (2) -, usas demasiados antiflows, por ejemplo 00:16:421 (4) -, es como si no tuviera nada que ver con 00:16:139 (3,5) - ya que le da la espalda a los dos, no es como 00:56:421 (2,3,4) - ya que puede haber antiflow entre 00:56:421 (2,3) - pero la trancision entre 00:56:985 (3,4) - lo compensa.
Hard
- 00:16:421 - buen lugar para agregar un NC no crees?
- 00:23:182 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - me parece demasiado intenso, mucho uso vocal, 00:23:745 (3,4,5) - al menos esto lo podrias cambiar por un slider 1/2 y una nota, algo asi como lo que hiciste en 00:32:759 (4,5) -
- 00:24:731 (7,8) - por estas cosas es que no me gusta seguir vocal, actualmente 00:25:294 (8,1) - me parece algo confuso, talvez sea por la distancia que hay entre 00:24:731 (7,8) -, talvez si le haces un reverse a 00:24:731 (7) - y eliminas 00:25:294 (8) - se vea mas facil. He hecho varios cambios para acomodar esta parte. Sin embargo, no siento que lo que me dices sea mejor que lo que tengo ahora por el simple hecho que estaría quitando un "conector" entre esas notas, que sería el slider. No sé muy bien como explicarlo
- 00:26:985 (6,1) - distance? Se juega mejor como está ahora mismo!
- 00:38:252 - te comiste una nota? intenta agregando algo ahi, noc si se pueda considerar consistencia con 00:33:886 (7,8,1) - pero ahi es algo parecido. Lo arreglé con el mod pasado
wtf que rapida eres, el mod lo habia hecho hace rato pero me habia quedaod dormido xD, ya tu ve >.< It's ready!
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Thanks you for the useful mod!!!!Bakari wrote:
'ello there!
[general][Normal]
- Inconsiostent tags. Pretty sure they are not meant to be this way. Whoops
- You really should add the Slider border colour, as you skin the hitcircleoverlay. You can do it by editing your osu file in the [Colours] part.
[lucky:1337]SliderBorder: 255,255,255[/lucky:1337]
This will keep the deffault white colour, you can play with it by altering the colours. They are RRR,GGG,BBB (so, 0,0,255 would get you pure blue, for example). Also, you can add the slidertrack colour. Thanks you very muchSliderTrackOverride: 0,255,255Example[Colours]
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SliderBorder : 200,70,160
SliderTrackOverride : 140,40,110- Having just two difficulties for a TV-Size song is quite an uncommon thing. It just makes me feel like the song has a lot more room and offers more stuff, an in-between difficulty would fit nicely. I don't insist on it, but I'd love to see it happen. The main reason of why I just mapped 2 difficults it's not because I'm lazy or anything, just... This doesn't feel like mapping an insane because it's slow or an easy difficult because it would be 1/1 slider spam and that's boring as fuck... So, Normal is basically a easier Hard and mid Easy. Everybody's happy with that (I think).
- 00:50:224 - Why not snap the kiai here? It seems to make more sense with the rhythm you choose and the music as well. What the fuck I was thinking for then LOL
[Crazy Diamond]
- 00:43:463 (3,1) - I am not quite sure about these sliders as they as they slow down a player and create a forced feeling of a slowdown. I'd probably just try some softer curve, as there is no need to make them this agressively curved. This is about my style actually. I really like this kind of sliders and probably I wouldn't change for anything else :c They are like my
misshapenbabies.- 00:51:914 (4,5,6) - try selecting those and hit Ctrl+G, it will snap the sliders and their heads on stronger beats, making rhythm more accurate in correlation with drums and vocals. It is actually pretty nice idea, thanks you.
Note: 01:00:928 (4,5,6,7) - same would have to happen here. You'd probably have to tone down the rhythm a bit as to avoid a hard 1/2 chain. I placed a 1/2 slider instead of circles. It will work better, I think.
Pretty decent difficulty, despite a few things that I would like to be improved it still represents the song quite precisely.While each difficulty individually does work well, I feel like there should be either more adjustments or more difficulties as to make them work as a solid mapset.
- 00:14:168 (1,2) -00:18:675 (1,2) - 00:18:675 (1,2,1,2) - you follow the same sounds and use the same rhythm, yet the placement/appearance is considerably different. I'd try to stick to one pattern and repeat it three times instead of bringing extra variety as the intro is pretty repetitive. I agree.
- 00:37:266 (3,4) - there is nothing wrong with the pattern on itself, yet it does feel quite out of the set. The previous difficulty just introduced 1/2, using 1/4 jumps here feels like a bit of an overkill. Perhaps you might want to tone these jumps down if you decide not to map an in-between difficulty. I worked on that pattern. It feels better now if you can take a look x)
- 00:41:210 (1) - you might want to use a 3/4 slider with a repeat just like you ddd with 00:44:027 (3) - to keep the things conssitent. Or you may replace (3) with a 1/1 slider. It works both ways as long as the end result is conssitent. I don't think this is a good idea in this case at least, in my opinion, the 1/1 slider sound "smoother" than the 3/4 slider that you pointed out. Maybe I consider to change it in the future, for now I will keep it unless someone has a doubt with it.
Pretty good.
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Best of luck!
Not answered = applied~Error- wrote:
Hi~
from my queueCrazy Diamond
00:20:928 (1) - this feels pretty odd for me.. It's fine for me. This kind of slider is from my style and I think I use it in all of my maps xD
00:26:280 (4) - stack with 00:26:421 (5) - ? Can't agree. I think a triplet will be more readable than 4 notes stacked at once, that's why (4)
isn't stacked --> for a softer transition
00:29:238 (4) - seems to almost unreadeable It's totally readable ingame o.o
00:37:266 (3,4,5) - fix spacing :3 not realy perfect if you look closely
good luck!
bad mod lmao dont give kds if not helpful
17:20 Cloudchaser: Hello Plaudible! I hope you're fine there :3 Sorry if I come to suddenly but I wanted to ask if you're accepting modding request, since I've read your profile
17:21 Cloudchaser: the mapset is short but i think it's good for some checking
17:21 *Cloudchaser is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/947134 Savage Garden - I Want You [Crazy Diamond]]
17:50 Plaudible: hey :D sorry was eating
17:50 Cloudchaser: Don't worry owo
17:51 Cloudchaser: That reminded me I need to eat x'D
17:52 Plaudible: im a bit worried about the spread here, normal would be nicer around 2 stars
17:52 Cloudchaser: hmm
17:53 Cloudchaser: I tried to make it simple
17:53 Cloudchaser: originally
17:53 Cloudchaser: It was just NH
17:53 Cloudchaser: but talking with some BNs they told me that making ENH would be fine
17:53 Cloudchaser: Normals are my weak point xD
17:53 Plaudible: yee
17:53 Plaudible: hmm
17:54 Plaudible: aa idk if i can get into the song, srry :(
17:54 Plaudible: but yeah definitely get normal a bit stronger here before goin forward
17:55 Plaudible: more 1/2 rhythms and such couldnt hurt, even 1.7 or 1.8 would be better
17:55 Cloudchaser: owo!
17:55 Cloudchaser: I can fix it ofc
17:55 Cloudchaser: I just want some feedback
17:55 Cloudchaser: thanks u vu
17:56 Plaudible: o well in that case uhh
17:56 Plaudible: i'll glance at topdiff real quick
17:56 Cloudchaser: Sure thing
17:56 Cloudchaser: I kinda give up ranking
17:56 Cloudchaser: becasue it's too hard nowadays
17:56 Cloudchaser: I just want to make good maps
17:57 Cloudchaser: and try to people enjoy it somehow
17:57 Plaudible: well this looks pretty fun so i think you succeeded there :v
17:57 Plaudible: so with your triples in the beginning
17:57 Plaudible: with the kicksliders and triples
17:57 Plaudible: you use kicksliders 3 times, triples once
17:57 Plaudible: could you do 2 and 2 maybe?
17:58 Plaudible: maybe triples mapped out in circles at 00:17:548 (3,4,3,4) -
17:58 Cloudchaser: how's so
17:58 Plaudible: then sliders at 00:15:294 (3,4,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
17:58 Cloudchaser: o
17:58 Cloudchaser: lemem see
17:59 Cloudchaser: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8496341
17:59 Cloudchaser: like this?
17:59 Cloudchaser: or slider+circle?
18:00 Plaudible: Yee like that
18:00 Plaudible: im just asking you to alternate between a slider + 3 note stack a little more evenly
18:01 Cloudchaser: 00:19:801 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and this?
18:01 Plaudible: assuming you do slider, triple, slider, triple, that'd be slider ;v
18:02 Cloudchaser: naisu
18:02 Cloudchaser: gureito
18:03 Plaudible: 00:23:182 (1,2,3,4) - little concerning cause you dont follow vocals this strongly anywhere else, like at 00:29:942 (1,2) - for example
18:04 Cloudchaser: Fixed
18:05 Cloudchaser: i extended the slider so it emphasize better the whistle
18:05 Cloudchaser: x)
18:05 Plaudible: kk
18:05 Plaudible: 00:25:999 (2,3,4,5) - wouldnt it be better to map this as a stream? bit confusing to read
18:06 Cloudchaser: how can I make streams for low bpm?
18:06 Cloudchaser: i mean
18:06 Cloudchaser: look good aesthetically
18:06 Cloudchaser: xD
18:07 Plaudible: it does, but for people who play at this level
18:07 Plaudible: they wont read it as constant 1/4
18:07 Plaudible: but they'll see it as a triple then a single and single, etc.
18:07 Cloudchaser: No no
18:07 Cloudchaser: I mean
18:07 Plaudible: something like http://puu.sh/wA74f/d7726ef9ed.jpg but less spaced + nicer maybe
18:07 Plaudible: or use slider rhythms nistead
18:09 Cloudchaser: I used some sliders
18:09 Plaudible: o7
18:09 Plaudible: sounds good
18:10 Cloudchaser: slider00:28:816 (3,4) -
18:10 Cloudchaser: like this one
18:10 Plaudible: 00:35:576 (3,4) - ctrl+g this rhythm maybe?
18:10 Plaudible: that works fine :thumbsup:
18:10 Plaudible: or
18:10 Plaudible: maybe try this rhythm
18:10 Plaudible: http://puu.sh/wA7be/3bf5a33e48.jpg
18:11 Cloudchaser: i like more the first one
18:11 Cloudchaser: cuz it feels better the vocals
18:11 Cloudchaser: and goes better with my patterns
18:12 Plaudible: kk
18:12 Plaudible: 00:50:787 (2) - why snap this 1/6 o-o
18:13 Cloudchaser: whoops
18:13 Cloudchaser: that was a mistake
18:13 Plaudible: i like this rhythm 00:54:731 (1,2,3) -
18:13 Cloudchaser: didn't see
18:13 Cloudchaser: gfkgjf
18:13 Cloudchaser: me too
18:13 Cloudchaser: it goes well with
18:13 Cloudchaser: "Uhh I like to find it out"
18:13 Cloudchaser: i'd die*
18:13 Cloudchaser: dfkjg}
18:13 Plaudible: yee
18:14 Plaudible: uhh last, compare 00:53:041 (2,3,4) - to 01:02:055 (2) - , these rhythms should be the same
18:14 Plaudible: and that's all i got \o/
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yare yare dazeezek wrote:
🍒~Chica cherry cola~🍒
que batallosa eres >.>
luchona de la vida (?)ezek wrote:
🍒~Chica cherry cola~🍒
que batallosa eres >.>
junto a la vendisuoneMoodyRPG wrote:
luchona de la vida (?)ezek wrote:
🍒~Chica cherry cola~🍒
que batallosa eres >.>
ezek wrote:
Aplicale el mod mija~~Gero wrote:
Hola. yahallo~~
Sh1n1's EasyGracias Gerin~~
- Buen trabajo.
No respondido = aplicado.Gero wrote:
Hola.
GeneralSh1n1's Easy
- 00:41:210 (1) - Yo añadiria un whislte normal en el cuerpo del slider en todas las dificultades para seguir mejor la instrumental de la cancion.
- ¿No hay algún mejor mp3 que puedas conseguir? el fade out del final se escucha muy mal. Realmente lo corté a la mala pero no creo que sea tan relevante del todo.
Normal
- Buen trabajo.
Crazy Diamond
- 00:47:970 (3) - Considera cambiarlo a soft, debido a que en ninguna de las 3 dificultades haz usado un whistle normal específicamente en este punto.
- 00:49:661 - No olvides añadir un clap aquí.
- 00:53:041 - Whistle?
Como lo he mencionado anteriormente siento que la ultima dificultad necesita un poco mas de trabajo antes de considerar moverlo a la sección de calificados, considera aplicar lo antes mencionado. Cuando hayas conseguido Rebubbled llámame. Otra cosa acerca de los hitsounds, entiendo que la dificultad de Sh1n1 tenga una diferencia entre los tuyos a los de el, pero porque la Normal es demasiado diferente a la Hard? Honestamente creo que podrías haberlos copiado con el Hitsounds Copier o al menos hacer que sean parecidos.
- 00:19:238 (2,1) - Checa la distancia que hay entre estos dos objetos, ya que es un tanto extraño el hecho de que de un momento a otro hayas cambiado a 1.00x cuando haz usado un espacio consistente de 1.50x.
- 00:23:182 (1,2) - Honestamente no entiendo la consistencia de los ritmos que haz usado desde 00:23:182 - aquí hasta 00:41:210 - acá, es bastante extraño porque es básicamente el mismo tipo de tonada en la vocal y en algunas secciones optaste por seguirla y en otras simplemente usaste un slider 1/4 de tick blanco al azul. Por lo tanto me gustaría que trabajaras un poco en esta parte, para hacerla mas consistente entre si. Yo sugeriría hacer esto para evitar el remapear mucho. Podrías mandar el screenshot de nuevo? es que no entiendo mucho lo que quieres señalar.
- 00:24:308 (5,6) - ¿Cual es el sentido de añadir un jump aquí? Realmente no hay nada que enfatizar en absoluto.
- 00:32:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - Aquí aplica lo mismo.
- 00:23:745 (3,4,5) - Sliders y con repeticiones mientras que 00:32:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - aquí hiciste algo completamente diferente. Lo ajusté para que quedara parecido.
- 00:35:718 (4,5) - A pesar de que estas siguiendo de alguna manera la voz en esta parte, yo sugerirá cambiar los sliders a ticks blancos/rojos, es decir, básicamente esto en su lugar, ya que de esta forma se siente menos forzado a la hora de cambiar a un ritmo 1/4 en azul debido a que la mayoría de las notas se encuentran en blanco/rojo.
- 00:47:970 (1,2,3) - Bastante difícil de leer, en primera esto parece como si fuera un simple circulo 1/2 con el mismo spacing que usaste en los sliders que si son 1/2. Así que considera reducir la distancia para evitar posibles confusiones después de calificarlo.
- 00:51:351 (3,4) - En comparación a 00:59:801 (2,3,4) - El mismo problema.
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