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BoberOfDarkness

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-08-26T19:45:40+00:00

Cup

00:01:272 - using finish hitsounds here seems overdone, i would not use that strong hitsound for this song, maybe try with whistles only or some custom hitsounds?

00:10:527 (4,1) - having break in movement might be a bit boring even to newer players and

00:15:547 (1,2,3,4) - transition from (3) to (4) might have better flow if you move 00:15:904 (2) - to x:320 and 00:16:287 (3) - to x:232

00:18:385 (1,2) - ctrl + h of this pattern will make transition of 00:16:957 (5,1) - more clear

00:39:456 (2,1) - you overused left right movement at this part and here you could just placed (1) on the left side of (2) ;;

00:45:527 (3) - ctrl + h for nicer flow and diversify movement

00:56:241 (4,1) - again unnecessary flow stop, add some movement if possible

Salad

00:00:528 (1,2,3) - I don't understand placing jump on (1)>(2) while 00:01:901 (3) - is stronger, also spacing of jump is very overdone

00:06:777 (6,1) - distance seems to be a bit too far from each other

01:03:919 (9,1) - jump might be too tricky as it is connected with spaced stream

Nice mapset, good luck with that!

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-09-29T00:32:40+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Cup

00:01:272 - using finish hitsounds here seems overdone, i would not use that strong hitsound for this song, maybe try with whistles only or some custom hitsounds? - The piano sound is loud so it's fine to use finish hitsound, follow in standard maps.

00:10:527 (4,1) - having break in movement might be a bit boring even to newer players and

00:15:547 (1,2,3,4) - transition from (3) to (4) might have better flow if you move 00:15:904 (2) - to x:320 and 00:16:287 (3) - to x:232 - I think the distance is okay because I like symmetrical distance.

00:18:385 (1,2) - ctrl + h of this pattern will make transition of 00:16:957 (5,1) - more clear - The current pattern is okay, we'll see if someone mention this again.

00:39:456 (2,1) - you overused left right movement at this part and here you could just placed (1) on the left side of (2) ;; - I need to think again but the flow still okay to me.

00:45:527 (3) - ctrl + h for nicer flow and diversify movement - Sorry, it will ruin the flow.

00:56:241 (4,1) - again unnecessary flow stop, add some movement if possible - It is for variety like second mod.

Nice mapset, good luck with that! - Thanks

Thanks for the mod.

Last edited by SYAHME 2017-10-02T14:53:34+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

MBomb

MBomb 2017-09-29T18:51:51+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Salad

00:00:528 (1,2,3) - I don't understand placing jump on (1)>(2) while 00:01:901 (3) - is stronger, also spacing of jump is very overdone - Pitch mapping, and I feel the current distacing shows off nicely that it's a dash without being too difficult.

00:06:777 (6,1) - distance seems to be a bit too far from each other - It's on the edge of walking, so I think it's fine.

01:03:919 (9,1) - jump might be too tricky as it is connected with spaced stream - I specifically made the distancing here slightly weaker to account for the antiflow, I think it's fine.

Nice mapset, good luck with that!

Thanks for the mod!

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-10-15T08:48:58+00:00

hello
check as requested
no kudosu thank

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Gameplay

00:50:884 (4) - How about flipping this horizontally and place it on the original position - x:184? The flow here can be slightly improved by this amendment.
00:58:414 (2,3,1,1,2) - Movement here is quite repetitive. Perhaps you can change a bit here to make the movement different? For instance moving 00:59:456 (1) - to x:392 after flipping it horizontally. Or in a better way, try not to include anti-flow movements.
01:04:098 (1,2) - ^, since it is an easy Cup, I think you can flip the sliders horizontally and place them on their original positions to remove anti-flow movements.

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mbomb's salad]

Gameplay

00:18:028 (7,1) - (7) here can be slanted a bit, so the jump here is easier to hit.
00:24:099 - 00:32:313 - This entire part has no dashes at all, would be too plain. How about adding one at 00:28:384 (1,2) - ? One pattern you may consider: *Screenshot
00:52:491 (6,1) - Same as 00:18:028 (7,1) - . Would be better if 00:52:313 (5,6) - is directing to 00:52:670 (1) - for an easier lift off.

should be it
call me back after the fix

MBomb

MBomb 2017-10-15T17:35:11+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
hello
check as requested
no kudosu thank

[ mbomb's salad]

Gameplay
00:18:028 (7,1) - (7) here can be slanted a bit, so the jump here is easier to hit. - Done.
00:24:099 - 00:32:313 - This entire part has no dashes at all, would be too plain. How about adding one at 00:28:384 (1,2) - ? One pattern you may consider: *Screenshot - Added a dash to 00:29:694 (7,1) - instead.
00:52:491 (6,1) - Same as 00:18:028 (7,1) - . Would be better if 00:52:313 (5,6) - is directing to 00:52:670 (1) - for an easier lift off. - I think the smaller dash distance here makes it fine.

should be it
call me back after the fix

Thanks for the mod!

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SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-16T12:22:33+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

alienflybot wrote:
hello
check as requested
no kudosu thank

[ mbomb's salad]

Gameplay
00:18:028 (7,1) - (7) here can be slanted a bit, so the jump here is easier to hit. - Done.
00:24:099 - 00:32:313 - This entire part has no dashes at all, would be too plain. How about adding one at 00:28:384 (1,2) - ? One pattern you may consider: *Screenshot - Added a dash to 00:29:694 (7,1) - instead.
00:52:491 (6,1) - Same as 00:18:028 (7,1) - . Would be better if 00:52:313 (5,6) - is directing to 00:52:670 (1) - for an easier lift off. - I think the smaller dash distance here makes it fine.

should be it
call me back after the fix

Thanks for the mod!

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Updated, thanks

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-16T12:38:30+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
hello - Hey
check as requested - Thanks
no kudosu thank - Ok

█ Optional to change --- █ Suggested to change --- █ Unrankable

[ General]

Tags
Add: 'MBomb'. This map cannot be searched by typing this keyword. - Done
Add: 'Laventale'. Some may not type 'L'aventale' with the apostrophe punctuation to search the map. - Done
Add: 'DVSP-0096', 'ntny', 'carmine'. They are related to the album of the song. - Done

[ cup]

Gameplay
00:50:884 (4) - How about flipping this horizontally and place it on the original position - x:184? The flow here can be slightly improved by this amendment. - Okay, for flow improvement.
00:58:414 (2,3,1,1,2) - Movement here is quite repetitive. Perhaps you can change a bit here to make the movement different? For instance moving 00:59:456 (1) - to x:392 after flipping it horizontally. Or in a better way, try not to include anti-flow movements. - Nice, but I slightly moved to x:384.
01:04:098 (1,2) - ^, since it is an easy Cup, I think you can flip the sliders horizontally and place them on their original positions to remove anti-flow movements. - Okay, I fixed the distance too.

should be it
call me back after the fix - Nice, thanks

Thanks for the mod.

autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

1,578 posts

Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-10-16T15:31:56+00:00

quick recheck
there are stuff to clarify before moving onward

[

cup]

Gameplay

01:00:527 (1) - Remove the NC here. The NC patterning here is quite frequent and I think you can group the 2 circles 01:00:527 (1,2) - with 00:59:456 (1) - .

[

mbomb's salad]

Gameplay

00:29:694 (7,1) - 1/6 dashing is probably not allowed in accordance to the Ranking Criteria.

Ranking Criteria (Salad) wrote:
Higher snapped dashes may be used singularly (not in conjunction with other dashes) if the time between the ticks of the desired snapping is 125ms or higher. As an example, 1/3 dashes would be allowed under 160 BPM whereas 1/4 dashes would be allowed under 120 BPM.
Note that 1/3 dashes are allowed under 160 BPM. (so 1/6 dashes are allowed under 80 BPM, which the current song exceeds the BPM limit) Also it is not so recommended to put 1/6 dashing in Salad of such a mild and relaxing song, since this serves as a low-ended Salad.

notify me after, should be fine after the above-mentioned are taken into account

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-17T12:52:44+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
quick recheck
there are stuff to clarify before moving onward - Okay

[ cup]

Gameplay
01:00:527 (1) - Remove the NC here. The NC patterning here is quite frequent and I think you can group the 2 circles 01:00:527 (1,2) - with 00:59:456 (1) - . - Done

notify me after, should be fine after the above-mentioned are taken into account - Thanks

Thanks for the mod.

MBomb

MBomb 2017-10-21T15:14:22+00:00

My bad, didn't realise. I'd rather not add any other dash in that section then, I feel like not having one there would make it strange to have any other in this section.

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:削除
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SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-22T09:48:31+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

My bad, didn't realise. I'd rather not add any other dash in that section then, I feel like not having one there would make it strange to have any other in this section.

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autofanboy

Elite Mapper / osu!trivium Champion

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Joined January 2011

autofanboy 2017-10-22T11:58:40+00:00

sakuzyo is love

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SYAHME

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-22T12:19:51+00:00

alienflybot wrote:
sakuzyo is love

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sakuzyo is love, thanks

-Sh1n1-

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Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2017-10-27T02:42:22+00:00

Cup

00:16:287 (3,4) - they should be closer keeping the current distance between 00:16:600 (4,5) -, take a look to 01:01:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - as a reference.
00:21:242 (1) - can you rotate this one pls? my purpose is to reduce the current distance between 00:21:242 (1,2) -, 00:24:099 - is the beginning of a new section and deserve more enphasis, I don't understand why 00:21:242 (1,2,1) - have the same distance, just rotate a bit the first slider to fix the problem: select 00:21:242 (1) - -> press Ctrl+Shift+R -> Origin: Selection centre -> -10º or -9º
00:42:670 (1,2,3) - 1.30x of distance is too much imo, reconsider that you have 2 antiflow movements in a row, it is not a good "welcome" for newbies, 1.10x os distance between 00:42:670 (1,2) - and 00:44:099 (2,3) - might looks nicer imo.
00:50:884 (4,1) - I think that this is an unconfortable movement for newbies, they are following the slider and then a sudden antiflow movement, I recomend you to change the way of 00:50:884 (4,1) - avoid antiflow at this part please <3

mbomb's salad
Yahallo bro~~

00:41:242 (1,2,3) - jump should be between 00:42:313 (2,3) -, consistency with 00:32:313 (3,1) -
ok I'm fine if you wanna keep the jump between 00:59:813 (4,5) - but reconsider the distance between 00:58:750 (2,3) -, reduce it a bit please, it's hard to catch 01:00:170 (5) - after a the antiflow movement (00:58:750 (2,3,4,5) -)
01:04:098 (1,2) - don't you want to reduce your current distance to keep consistency with 00:18:385 (1,2) -?
I'm not a big fan of slider arts like 00:55:527 (1) - or 00:09:813 (1) -, gj~~

Hey~~ Call me back if you still need me uwu sorry for long delay bro <3

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-27T14:25:02+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Cup
00:16:287 (3,4) - they should be closer keeping the current distance between 00:16:600 (4,5) -, take a look to 01:01:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - as a reference. - Okay, I make 3 & 4 closer to each other.
00:21:242 (1) - can you rotate this one pls? my purpose is to reduce the current distance between 00:21:242 (1,2) -, 00:24:099 - is the beginning of a new section and deserve more enphasis, I don't understand why 00:21:242 (1,2,1) - have the same distance, just rotate a bit the first slider to fix the problem: select 00:21:242 (1) - -> press Ctrl+Shift+R -> Origin: Selection centre -> -10º or -9º - Okay, I rotate to -9º.
00:42:670 (1,2,3) - 1.30x of distance is too much imo, reconsider that you have 2 antiflow movements in a row, it is not a good "welcome" for newbies, 1.10x os distance between 00:42:670 (1,2) - and 00:44:099 (2,3) - might looks nicer imo. - Okay, reduce to 1.10x of distance.
00:50:884 (4,1) - I think that this is an unconfortable movement for newbies, they are following the slider and then a sudden antiflow movement, I recomend you to change the way of 00:50:884 (4,1) - avoid antiflow at this part please <3 - I make the slider completely vertical to make it easy for newbie players to catch the next slider, please recommend different pattern if you think it still not right.

Hey~~ Call me back if you still need me uwu sorry for long delay bro <3 - <3

Thanks for the mod.

MBomb

MBomb 2017-10-28T11:46:33+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
mbomb's salad
Yahallo bro~~
00:41:242 (1,2,3) - jump should be between 00:42:313 (2,3) -, consistency with 00:32:313 (3,1) - - That's quite a different section musically, but in this part, 2 definitely feels like a stronger pitch change and the note on 3 doesn't really feel strong enough to me for a dash of any kind, so I'd rather leave it.
ok I'm fine if you wanna keep the jump between 00:59:813 (4,5) - but reconsider the distance between 00:58:750 (2,3) -, reduce it a bit please, it's hard to catch 01:00:170 (5) - after a the antiflow movement (00:58:750 (2,3,4,5) -) - Done.
01:04:098 (1,2) - don't you want to reduce your current distance to keep consistency with 00:18:385 (1,2) -? - It's a small distance increase that I feel is good for the higher pitch piano also being here, which wasn't on the first section.
I'm not a big fan of slider arts like 00:55:527 (1) - or 00:09:813 (1) -, gj~~

Hey~~ Call me back if you still need me uwu sorry for long delay bro <3

Thanks for the mod!

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SYAHME

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Joined January 2014

Topic Starter

SYAHME 2017-10-28T11:55:19+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:

-Sh1n1- wrote:
mbomb's salad
Yahallo bro~~
00:41:242 (1,2,3) - jump should be between 00:42:313 (2,3) -, consistency with 00:32:313 (3,1) - - That's quite a different section musically, but in this part, 2 definitely feels like a stronger pitch change and the note on 3 doesn't really feel strong enough to me for a dash of any kind, so I'd rather leave it.
ok I'm fine if you wanna keep the jump between 00:59:813 (4,5) - but reconsider the distance between 00:58:750 (2,3) -, reduce it a bit please, it's hard to catch 01:00:170 (5) - after a the antiflow movement (00:58:750 (2,3,4,5) -) - Done.
01:04:098 (1,2) - don't you want to reduce your current distance to keep consistency with 00:18:385 (1,2) -? - It's a small distance increase that I feel is good for the higher pitch piano also being here, which wasn't on the first section.
I'm not a big fan of slider arts like 00:55:527 (1) - or 00:09:813 (1) -, gj~~

Hey~~ Call me back if you still need me uwu sorry for long delay bro <3

Thanks for the mod!

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