Still sick but w/e
Bg makes me blind I need fluffy stuff
Artist is probably wrong. Japanese names contain no spaces I think.
Red and pink is too similar. combo 3 and 4
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00:00:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - several problems
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Bg makes me blind I need fluffy stuff
Artist is probably wrong. Japanese names contain no spaces I think.
Red and pink is too similar. combo 3 and 4
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00:00:382 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - several problems
- a bit disturbed that this is just the intro and you're spacing this pattern equally/more than the kiai
- 00:01:543 (7) - as it stands rn is a weird spacing drop and goes against the overall acceleration of the pattern. You can try something like reducing the spacing on beats that lack the main melody --> 00:01:543 (7,9,3) -
- 00:02:511 (3,4) - uhh welp I don't rly agree with this one lol. Is (4) that important to be spaced that far? rn it's on par with 00:35:995 (6,1) - for some reason I don't know
- 00:05:221 (1) - has an echo on it. You can either highlight this difference by replacing this with 2 circles but either way is fine for me
- 00:35:092 (2,3) - those are definitely 1/8s lol
- 00:15:866 (4,5,6) - and these are definitely 1/4s
- 00:19:027 (6,7) - and these are 1/8s
- 00:22:124 (6,7) - 1/8s
- 00:30:769 (5,6,7) - 00:32:317 (5,6,7) - explain the difference between these two pls
- 00:30:382 (3) - spacing drop is too harsh to be considered as spacing variation
- 00:33:092 (1,2) - 00:39:285 (1,2) - 00:37:350 (7,8) - 00:31:156 (7,8) - these stacks seem to be at the points where the main melody isn't playing is it? I mean it's the only justification I can think of xd. However, these bring us back to the consistency between these stacks and 00:30:769 (5,6,7) - 00:38:898 (7) - 00:36:963 (5,6,7) - . Shouldn't they be less emphasized because of the lack of main melody like the stacks?
- 00:40:446 (5,1,2) - how am I supposed to tell that one is 1/2 and the other one is 1/4 lol
- also compare 00:40:059 (4,5) - 00:45:672 (2,3,4) - . Why is the spacing reduced on 00:46:253 (4) -
- a bit sad that the verses look a bit like jump practice xd. I can't really find the correlation between the map and the song much. A bit here and there but they aren't consistent
- Combos feel a bit too long for me
- 00:02:124 (7) - use this rhythm please i beg you 00:01:156 (4,5) -
- 00:09:092 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - R u SurE YOu wANt TO maP TheSe WEaK iNSecTS wItH CirCLeS maTe? RrrrRRRrRRrrrRrRRrRR wHy dOnT YOu dO tHiS On thE maIn MeLOdY?
- 00:14:511 (1,2,3) - 10/10 aesthetics. Perfect symmetry. Excellent blanket. Marvelous.
- 00:20:705 (1) - at least a reversing 1/2 slider please? fits with both the main melody and the thing you're following if you ask me
- 00:39:672 (2,3,4) - is it just me or the angles are a bit weird here lol
- 00:01:350 (3,4) - why are they not 1/1 and 1/2 reverse respectively instead lol. You tell me
- 00:35:414 (5) - 1 circle should be enough. Emphasis on 00:35:801 (6) - . Or reduce 00:35:801 (6) - to one circle idk. Rn they feel a bit all over the place with no emphasis at all
- 00:45:479 (1) - Rly? a break? lol map eeeet
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