Great song!
Thanks fur the mod Hobbes! cool avatar btw!Hobbes2 wrote:
[ezek]
You could have gotten away with making the 1/2 not touch
as it is, the objects are at that point where they're just barely overlapping and it doesn't look that good I planned it like this~
00:26:637 (4) - Don't like this, 00:26:868 - should probably be clickable due to vocal k
01:04:021 (6) - would split this into circle+1/2 slider to match vocals k
01:16:499 (2,3,4) - make an equilateral triangle out of these? would be neater k
02:07:021 (4,1,2,3) - shouldnt use different types of stacks (1/1 vs 1/2) so close together in a normal I know this should be kinda like a sin, but I believe I'm doing it right here since the changes in the music are quite noticeable and players should expect something different in the mapping as well~
03:21:329 (5) - feels kinda random to me, why not just map it normally I want to have something special for the last kiai, makes the map more interesting imo~
03:29:636 - clickable for vocal?
Biggest concern is what I said earlier about everything barely overlapping, it woulda been alright for the spread if you spaced em out so that they weren't. But I guess it's fine.
Another concern is that your rhythm in general just felt inconsistent overall, somtimes you'd be mapping vocals but then other times there are sliders where there are important vocals in the middle of the slider that are unmapped. I suggest going through and making sure you're mapping what you want to be.
k I checked on those
Thanks fur the mod!Pachiru wrote:
[ezek's Normal]Pretty neat diff
- 00:08:406 (5) - Why not moving this circle on this one 00:08:637 (6) - to do a stack, because those beats looks similar ! o: I removed the note instead, feels like it follows better the song in some way~
- In my opinion, you should do a small 1/1 break on the begining, because from here: 00:03:791 (4) - to here: 00:24:098 (1) - there is no break for the player, and since it's an Normal diff, that might be quite hard to get so much stamina for a beginner! This diff is not exactly for beginners, I see it as a bit harder than Normal but less hard than an Advanced, and this is for spread concerns that raised, it should be good like this~
- 00:51:791 (4,5,6) - On this pattern, why not doing something like this: https://puu.sh/up4Ft/77f517ad16.png ? I prefer it my way~
- 01:02:637 (4,5,6) - A small overlap, maybe intended?~ yes
- 01:09:115 (2,3,4) - Same here, maybe by putting this slider more down 01:09:346 (3) - you could avoid this I have several overlaps like this, getting rid of one or two them will make the map less consistent and more messy
- 01:13:038 (4) - Move this slider a bit up, so this would do a perfect line oki doki
- 02:35:636 (5,6,7) - On this part, you can clearly see that it's not linear, so I think you should fix it (only if it wasn't voluntary) fixed, yee it looked ugly
- 02:51:790 - Why not mapping this part? I agree with you on the fact that it add a break into a so long but cool song, so if you don't want to map it, let it like that. I guess i have no other choice but to map it since Gero did on the Easy diff xp
- 03:07:482 (2,3,1) - The angle here feels really rude owo why gotta be so ruude♪ nah, I think it's fine like this
- 03:45:098 (8) - To finish the map, I think that would be cool to have a stronger hitsound on this note or adding an NC, no? o: a strong hitsound wouldn't match with the music; however, I do agree with adding NC
iGracias :3iYiyo wrote:
[ezek's]
- 00:25:252 - 00:28:021 - estos espacios vacíos podrías usarlos en la sección previa también (00:16:714 - ) varie el mapping por diferente cantante~
- 00:19:483 - Al igual que hiciste este beat cliqueable, también podrías hacerlo con 00:26:637 - este. Quizás podrías hacer que quede de esta manera? https://puu.sh/upDDE/4427aa9dfe.jpg hecho en un mod previo
- 01:04:021 (6,1) - No sé si estás siguiendo las vocales aquí realmente ya que 01:04:252 - este beat lo soporta tanto vocales como instrumento por lo que se siente un poco raro tbh. Podrías probar haciendo ctrl+g al ritmo, quedaría bastante mejor imo ;o Este tipo de ritmo se repite más en el mapa, por lo que si estás de acuerdo conmigo podrías echarle una mirada a estos.
--* Aquí updatié tu diff así que lo anterior puede que esté sinsentido xd *-- exacto, ya no tenia sentido eso :v- 01:05:175 (2) - Quizás si haces de este slider un 1/2 + circle enfatize mejor lo que querías :d me gusta mi manera, + seguir agragando notas 1/2 en el mapa no sea tan buena idea, ya tengo muchas
- 02:01:713 (8,1,6,7) - Podrías deshacer estos stacks para que quede similar a lo que hiciste en la sección anterior. (00:46:252 - ) solo me quite el primero, deje el segundo ya que lo que se aproxima es algo diferente a lo que se aproximaba en el otro patron~
- 02:19:021 (2,3,4) - Este ritmo es bastante distinto al que sueles usar, además de ser poco intuitivo imo. Creo que haciendo de 02:19:713 (3) - un circulo + 1/2 sería mejor. como que es distinto al que uso? de hecho hasta es consistente ejemplos: 01:05:175 (2,3,4) - & 03:05:175 (3,4,5) -
- Como 01:08:291 - y 02:22:136 - no pones ninguna nota, podrías borrarlas y aprovechas de hacer la secciones kiai todas continuas. estas lineas detienen el kiai para luego volverlo a empezar, es un buen efecto para el enfasis y es intencional~
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292,120,201329,2,0,B|240:104|232:44|232:44|200:36|172:8|172:8|144:44|112:48|112:48|124:112|72:144,1,360,6|10,0:3|1:2,0:0:0:0:
44,196,202944,1,6,3:0:0:0:
20,252,203175,6,0,P|76:264|136:252,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,203867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,204098,2,0,P|184:272|192:316,2,90,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,200,205021,2,0,L|376:200,1,120,4|10,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,205713,2,0,P|432:120|420:64,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,12,206405,1,10,0:0:0:0:
344,52,206636,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,92,206867,6,0,B|240:108|240:108|180:92,1,120,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,76,207559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,56,207790,2,0,P|80:112|68:172,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,224,208482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,224,208713,2,0,L|164:240,1,120,4|10,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,209405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,272,209636,2,0,L|268:280,1,60,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,288,210098,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,246,210559,6,0,P|452:190|440:130,1,120,4|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
404,80,211252,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,52,211482,2,0,L|224:32,1,120,4|4,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,48,212175,1,4,0:1:0:0:
176,48,212405,2,0,P|164:100|176:164,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,212,213098,2,0,P|224:264|212:328,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,372,213790,1,4,0:1:0:0:
116,352,214021,1,4,0:1:0:0:
60,332,214252,6,0,P|48:272|60:216,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,108,215175,2,0,B|168:92|168:92|228:108,1,120,4|4,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
272,148,215867,1,4,0:1:0:0:
272,148,216098,2,0,B|332:164|332:164|388:148,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,124,216790,2,0,P|456:180|444:240,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,292,217482,1,4,0:1:0:0:
364,320,217713,1,4,0:3:0:0:
308,340,217944,6,0,L|184:340,1,120,4|8,0:3|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,276,218867,2,0,P|76:216|88:160,1,120,4|4,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
120,108,219559,1,4,0:1:0:0:
120,108,219790,2,0,L|240:88,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,120,220482,2,0,L|408:100,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,221175,1,4,0:1:0:0:
468,180,221405,1,4,0:1:0:0:
468,240,221636,6,0,B|428:284|428:284|368:284,1,120,4|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,244,222329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,204,222559,2,0,B|216:204|216:204|176:248,1,120,4|4,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,292,223252,1,4,0:1:0:0:
136,292,223482,2,0,P|80:280|20:292,1,120,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,352,224175,2,0,L|16:232,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
20,172,224867,1,4,0:1:0:0:
20,172,225098,5,2,0:0:0:0:
Juré haber visto que el 3er kiai lo tenías sin cortes, my bad xdGero wrote:
- 03:08:290 - Al igual que las otras secciones, podrías quitar el kiai en esta línea verde? ¿Por qué?
Gero wrote:
~MP3 edited by myself~
19:02 Gero: ya estoy xD
19:02 Gero: yo esperando offline si necesitabas que actualizara o alguna cosa jaja
19:03 Natsu: dame link haha
19:03 *Gero is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1083694 Various Artists - drop pop candy (Multi-Language Version)]
19:10 Natsu: en la relaxing no hacen stack las cosas
19:10 Gero: pera le subo el Stack Leniency a 7
19:12 Gero: okay, ya esta
19:13 Natsu: 00:07:252 (1) - whiste te hizo falta
19:14 Gero: añadido
19:15 Natsu: 00:11:175 (5) - NC
19:16 Gero: ahí lo añadí
19:16 Natsu: 00:20:406 (1,2) - CTRL G AL RITMO queda mejor
19:16 Gero: cierto, sigue mejor la voz de esta forma
19:17 Natsu: 00:43:483 (3,4) - el segundo slider debería empezar en tick azul
19:17 Gero: listo
19:19 Natsu: 00:46:021 (8,1) - un triplet suena mejor
19:19 Gero: hice el mismo tipo de patrón para mantener la consistencia y estructura
19:19 Natsu: 01:23:175 (1) - unsnapped
19:19 Gero: ni cuenta me habia dado lol
19:19 Gero: listo
19:20 Natsu: 02:03:790 (3) - se te olvido el nc
19:20 Gero: añadido
19:21 Natsu: 02:07:482 (1) - un zlider suena mejor como en el primer kiai
19:21 Gero: bueno, ahí lo cambio
19:22 Natsu: 03:31:944 (5,1) - q feo overlap
19:22 Gero: hmmm... la verdad a mi en lo personal me gusta, pero ahi lo movi más a la derecha y apile el siguiente circulo debajo del slider
19:23 Natsu: oki
19:23 Natsu: mira y q le hiciste al mp3
19:24 Gero: yo la edite maje
19:24 Gero: osea le añadi diferentes secciones de diferentes covers
19:24 Gero: el video tambien esta editado
19:24 Natsu: ah ok
19:24 Natsu: subilo
19:24 Gero: deje la explicación en la descripción del mapa para evitar algún problema
19:24 Natsu: orale
19:25 Natsu: podes postear el log vos
19:25 Gero: si
19:25 Natsu: q me cuesta sin mouse
19:26 Gero: actualizado
Gracias.Nyukai wrote:
Siempre pidiéndome mods en mapas perfectos Lo único que vi fue esto en la última diff 02:21:559 (1) - (en todos los kiais) que no le veo mucho sentido poner NC ahí pero como deduzco que es por el cambio de intensidad así que está bien así. En efecto, es debido al cambio de intensidad y ademas de que a diferencia de los sliders anteriores este tiene más repeticiones por lo tanto un NC ayuda a deducir que el ritmo es diferente.
En la misma diff también vi esto 03:23:175 (1) - y esto 03:15:789 (1) - lo cual me sorprendió porque creo que no habías usado hasta ahora este spacing, ni siquiera al principio de este kiai... por mi parte convendría reducirlo un poco porque la diff ya es avanzada de por sí y el resto de spacing parece consistente :_ En realidad no afecta mucho en absoluto, ademas de que hay que considerar que el ultimo kiai usa ritmos y otro tipo de spacing.
Por último este ritmo 01:23:076 (7,1,2) - no me convenció, porque aunque la mayoría de triples encajan muy bien, este lo veo innecesario, además de que al tener diferente offset el siguiente timing point pues quizá es algo confuso a la hora de leerlo/clickear D: 03:23:175 (1,2) - Es prácticamente el mismo tipo de ritmo, y acerca del cambio de offset le pregunte a varios BNs acerca de esto y me confirmaron que el cambio no afecta a la jugabilidad y es difícil de notar el cambio por lo tanto no creo que haya problemas o sea confuso al jugarlo.
De todas formas como ya he dicho son cosas puntuales que a mí no me convencen, pero aun así el mapa está bubbled así que como dije está perfecto, solo son sugerencias que quería compartir, siento haber tardado y suerte con el rank ></