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Good luck!
- 00:28:395 (6) - I think that's pretty weird to have a reverse here, when the middle of the reverse slider is beating on a beat instead of the vocal (because you got focus on vocal in the song.) To be honest, use a long slider, on you can just map a circle instead of a reverse, that would make more sense. The reverse you use here: 00:32:631 (5) - is fitting very well compared to this one.
- 00:35:455 (1,2,3) - That pattern could be less "packed" and less dense. Let's explain my opinion. I think that the new player will just see a big pack of objects and he might not notice the clickable points very well. So I think you could extend your mapping to make it more clear for them.
- 00:39:691 (6) - Delete that reverse, and do something like this. https://i.imgur.com/2YCmshk.png So that would make more sense into clickable points. cause you're missing an important point while using a reverse slider. Also, that would look less dense for the beginner and letting him a small break
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- 00:15:334 (4) - This is weird to not have blanket here, or at least have something that correlate with the symetrical style cause you're using it too. Try making something like this instead. https://i.imgur.com/ySZLQrT.png
- 00:31:042 - Since you're focused on vocal, that feels weird to have this vocal not mapped like others, since I don't see something different compared to other.
- 00:37:573 (5) - Make it more aligned with the previous slider, to make it more beautiful.
- 00:42:162 (3) - Why not making a 1/2 slider instead? I noticed that you made it more than one time in the song and that look pretty weird, I don't think that deserve to be clickable, but at least mapped.
- 00:59:812 (1,1) - I don't think that's worth to map those sound, especially the first one, cause it's not very audible to be mapped. To be consistant, you could try to make this beat: 00:59:988 - clickable instead of this one: 00:59:812 (1) -
- 01:06:519 (1) - Why not making something like this: 01:03:695 (1,2,3) - cause it would be consistant like this since it's the same beat.
- 01:21:522 - I think it's important to make this beat clickable since it's a strong sound here, compared to the one you mapped already.
- To be honest, I personally think that the begining is really fast compared to the intensity of the song. Why not reducing it, to make it more representative of the song? Even in terms of density, there is a lot of triples that is not in the kiai, but the begining is a way more intense than the kiai. Please pay attention to this. I think that the begining should be nerfed a bit, to make it well representative about the song.
- 00:36:867 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand why this pattern is stacked compared of the sounds it cover + compared to the rest of the song, that double feels quite off, since you use a lot of spaced stuffs, and it breaks the flow of the play. I think that on the second kiai, the stacks like you did here fit a way better.
Good luck!