[General]
Offset is too early, it should be 8736 (+20). I already talked with Blocko about this.

[EZ]
Thanks lamb meat for helping to fixing the gap issues.

00:17:522 - This part felt awkward that you didn't make trill pattern for repeated synth sound when you actually did it at 00:24:414 (24414|1,24797|0,25180|2,25563|0) - and 00:27:095 (27095|3,27477|2,27860|0,28243|2) - . try http://puu.sh/x5z97/0555b0363e.png

00:31:689 - Think you should stop the LN here, and make new LN to signify the rising sound, combine them is just out of place when in LN pattern before you progressed to change each LN based on new sound appearing.

00:44:708 (44708|2,45091|1) - Switch column between these LN actually help to give hint that you actually already follow secondary different instrument here, as it stands now, The instrument transition kinda a bit confusing to follow as you actually make the pattern similar with 1/1 LN before.

01:06:916 (66916|3,67299|2,67682|1,68065|0) - I know you try to make it the same as 01:03:853 (63853|3,64236|2,64618|1,65001|0) - , but their pitch is actually noticeably different.. the same pitch one is actually with 01:05:384 (65384|3,65767|1,66150|2,66533|0) - , so try to make the pattern at 01:06:916 - and 01:08:447 - the same with 01:05:384 (65384|3,65767|1,66150|2,66533|0) - otherwise you will be kinda inconsistent with structure at 01:16:105 (76105|2,76488|1,76871|3,77254|0,77637|2,78020|1,78403|3,78786|0,79169|2,79551|1,79934|3,80317|0) - where you follow the repeated pitch here with same pattern.

01:22:232 (82232|2,82998|0,83380|3) - Quite sure 4-3-1 will follow the synth pitch more accurately.

01:28:358 (88358|1,89507|3,89698|2) - The LN tail and the note should be 1/3 (since you actually already use 1/3 in this diff, you can't use simplification anymore for the sake of 1/2)

[NM]
So, there's something i wanna talk about the shield LN here.

00:36:284 (36284|1,37050|1,37816|0,39347|0) - This kind of LN (not just this, but entire part in NM diff) is too tricky for the gap, compared it with EZ diff, it only has 1/1 LN without holding multiple object at same time, while NM immediately jump off to actually holding multiple LN while having 1/4 shield which is too dense. It is even more apparent when you look at 00:50:068 (50068|1,51217|1,51600|1) - which i believe shouldn't be happening here. my recommendation will be to erase all the 1/4 and make something like http://puu.sh/x5ySb/e8c6733a84.png for 00:36:284 - and http://puu.sh/x5yUo/e415230ad1.png for 00:39:347 - . It applies on all shield pattern in NM difficulty, so you also need to change them too.

[HD]
00:54:663 - instead of straight stair jack, think you can condense the lower pitch into specific column to signify the synth build-up much better. something like http://puu.sh/x5zKT/49027f05ed.png works.

00:56:961 - The music atmosphere getting more intense at this point, so the 1/4 notes doesn't really express that anymore because it's still the same as pattern before. having small LN here can actually support the ramp up like http://puu.sh/x5zQV/eb4d810f08.jpg

Quite well made map here, after the issues have been fixed, Feel free to have juan recheck the map for re-bubble.

Maxus wrote:

[General]
Offset is too early, it should be 8736 (+20). I already talked with Blocko about this.

[EZ]
Thanks lamb meat for helping to fixing the gap issues.

00:17:522 - This part felt awkward that you didn't make trill pattern for repeated synth sound when you actually did it at 00:24:414 (24414|1,24797|0,25180|2,25563|0) - and 00:27:095 (27095|3,27477|2,27860|0,28243|2) - . try http://puu.sh/x5z97/0555b0363e.png

00:31:689 - Think you should stop the LN here, and make new LN to signify the rising sound, combine them is just out of place when in LN pattern before you progressed to change each LN based on new sound appearing.

00:44:708 (44708|2,45091|1) - Switch column between these LN actually help to give hint that you actually already follow secondary different instrument here, as it stands now, The instrument transition kinda a bit confusing to follow as you actually make the pattern similar with 1/1 LN before. Not really sure what alternative you are suggesting here, but I think it's fine for the most part. It doesn't seem that off-putting imo.

01:06:916 (66916|3,67299|2,67682|1,68065|0) - I know you try to make it the same as 01:03:853 (63853|3,64236|2,64618|1,65001|0) - , but their pitch is actually noticeably different.. the same pitch one is actually with 01:05:384 (65384|3,65767|1,66150|2,66533|0) - , so try to make the pattern at 01:06:916 - and 01:08:447 - the same with 01:05:384 (65384|3,65767|1,66150|2,66533|0) - otherwise you will be kinda inconsistent with structure at 01:16:105 (76105|2,76488|1,76871|3,77254|0,77637|2,78020|1,78403|3,78786|0,79169|2,79551|1,79934|3,80317|0) - where you follow the repeated pitch here with same pattern.

01:22:232 (82232|2,82998|0,83380|3) - Quite sure 4-3-1 will follow the synth pitch more accurately.

01:28:358 (88358|1,89507|3,89698|2) - The LN tail and the note should be 1/3 (since you actually already use 1/3 in this diff, you can't use simplification anymore for the sake of 1/2) also not really sure what you mean here, these notes are snapped to 1/8th which is as accurate as I think it's gonna get honestly.

[NM]
So, there's something i wanna talk about the shield LN here.

00:36:284 (36284|1,37050|1,37816|0,39347|0) - This kind of LN (not just this, but entire part in NM diff) is too tricky for the gap, compared it with EZ diff, it only has 1/1 LN without holding multiple object at same time, while NM immediately jump off to actually holding multiple LN while having 1/4 shield which is too dense. It is even more apparent when you look at 00:50:068 (50068|1,51217|1,51600|1) - which i believe shouldn't be happening here. my recommendation will be to erase all the 1/4 and make something like http://puu.sh/x5ySb/e8c6733a84.png for 00:36:284 - and http://puu.sh/x5yUo/e415230ad1.png for 00:39:347 - . It applies on all shield pattern in NM difficulty, so you also need to change them too.

[HD]
00:54:663 - instead of straight stair jack, think you can condense the lower pitch into specific column to signify the synth build-up much better. something like http://puu.sh/x5zKT/49027f05ed.png works.

00:56:961 - The music atmosphere getting more intense at this point, so the 1/4 notes doesn't really express that anymore because it's still the same as pattern before. having small LN here can actually support the ramp up like http://puu.sh/x5zQV/eb4d810f08.jpg

Quite well made map here, after the issues have been fixed, Feel free to have juan recheck the map for re-bubble.

Everything else was applied, thank you so much!

Dont do minijacks, minijacks are bad.

[NM]
00:57:746 - and 01:09:999 - Somehow the beginning of first and second kiai felt out of place and empty since you basically rearrange them to only notes here when the main theme of the map is Long notes. So I suggest to rearrange them to having similar pattern with your previous easy diff. something like https://puu.sh/xd7JN/cc3f106e26.png i mean.

Will qualify after this.

Updated.

boom

I fucked up. The minijacks in the HD were supposed to be replaced with 4/3 sliders as per my IRC with Juan.

Should be fixed now.

Hello.

I disqualify this beatmap on request by the creator.
Seems he wants to change some pattern.

Okay, Good luck.

my only last concern is this notes here 01:09:233 - being 1/4 instead of1/3s 1/2s. I dont remember the reason why, tell me about it and we get this done.

normal notes are suck

Hello! I'm sorry for being pretty late here, but could you provide an official reference for the romanisation?

I failed to find any references, so did alacat. All I could find are the booklets of the OST albums http://media.vgm.io/albums/12/721/721-1244812378.jpg and http://media.vgm.io/albums/36/3463/3463-1227717322.jpg which only contain the Japanese titles.

I tried searching the composer's websites but I could find nothing about this track.

If you have any reference, please provide it on this thread. Thanks!

While I don't have any official source, I grabbed the romanization from http://vgmdb.net/album/721, the same place I (begrudgingly) got my romanized title for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/561762.

vgmdb itself is not official. The Jimmy and Tommy thing has a booklet which contains the romanised titles too, and we that's probably the only thing we can use within that website.

If you cannot find more, I'll disqualify this map since none of us found any official references.

sure

I don't know how to read this, so I asked alacat, and got "Tenshi no Osore".

Also, don't use a space on the artist. Use 菊田裕樹

updated

Doyak should insta requalify this owo

lol please just wait

I was not even be able to login ingame yesterday, and I'll be available since later today. I'll definitely recheck then.

Nice, back~

Much appreciated!