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Kibbleru wrote:
IRCSPOILER09:02 krykson: Hello! Can you pls look at my map and tell me if there is something that i need to change? It is my first attempt to do a decent map.
09:48 Kibbleru: hi
09:48 Kibbleru: ok
09:48 krykson: thanks
09:48 *krykson is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1391947 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Piste SMILE Non-stop!!]
09:49 krykson: smile! diff
09:52 Kibbleru: 9.22 stars
09:52 krykson: noo
09:52 krykson: this is test
09:54 Kibbleru: lets seee
09:54 Kibbleru: where to start
09:55 Kibbleru: spacing across the song is like the same
09:55 Kibbleru: when u gotta try to lower it in calmer parts
09:55 Kibbleru: rhythm is kinda fukd
09:55 krykson: you mean parts like this? 00:10:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
09:56 Kibbleru: 00:44:068 - although cool, doesn't really fit the music I left it as it was
09:56 Kibbleru: motion wise
09:56 Kibbleru: just feels off from the rest of the map
09:56 Kibbleru: cuz everything else is really jumpy
09:56 Kibbleru: and that part just has alot of stopping motion
09:56 krykson: i didn't know what to do here, because there is nothing in music
09:56 Kibbleru: 00:10:106 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - looks like u were trying to do some structured stuff with the symmetry Fixed spacing
09:57 Kibbleru: 00:12:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - but then u dont keep it up Spacing is the same as ^
09:57 Kibbleru: and then do something on ur own
09:57 krykson: ds is the same
09:57 Kibbleru: 00:07:276 (6,7) - anticlimatic imo Changed
09:58 krykson: or no sorry it isnt, my bad
09:58 Kibbleru: 00:09:681 (8) - slider + circle imo would work better Changed
09:58 Kibbleru: also you shouldn't look at DS as a number but rather a guideline
09:58 Kibbleru: 00:17:181 - supposively should be a calmer section
09:58 krykson: i know, i tried to emphasize vocal
09:59 Kibbleru: but u still have huge jumps like 00:23:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
09:59 Kibbleru: 00:28:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this really inconsistent with the above ^
09:59 Kibbleru: music is same but map is structured differently
09:59 Kibbleru: 00:36:710 (4) - why does this go all the way to the red tick and not just stop 00:36:993 - Fixed
10:00 krykson: 00:28:219 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - i left this because fartownik told me that it is very good
10:00 Kibbleru: 00:50:861 (4) - suggest NC
10:00 Kibbleru: its fine that u leave it but make it consistent
10:01 Kibbleru: so do it here 00:23:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yup and 00:19:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - here too Nah
10:01 Kibbleru: 00:21:144 (6,7) - rhythm should be ctrl g'd here imo Done
10:01 krykson: but is using the same pattern over and over good?
10:02 Kibbleru: u should at least attempt to do something similar.
10:02 Kibbleru: consistency is important
10:02 krykson: 00:21:144 (6) - done
10:02 krykson: hmm, ok
10:02 Kibbleru: u tend to undermap alot of drums and streams and stuff
10:03 krykson: a lot of people told me that they were overmapped
10:03 krykson: i had a lot more streams there
10:03 Kibbleru: 00:34:445 (4,5) - like here remapped
10:03 Kibbleru: 00:42:936 (4,5,6,7,8) - remapped
10:03 krykson: make it as a stream? 00:34:445 (4,5) -
10:04 Kibbleru: maybe some parts are overmapped
10:04 Kibbleru: but at least those parts i pointed out i can say is undermapped.
10:04 Kibbleru: 00:37:842 - Changed just a bit
10:04 krykson: so you suggest me to use streams there 00:34:445 (4,5) - and there 00:42:936 (4,5,6,7,8) - ?
10:04 Kibbleru: 00:38:408 (8) - really not a big fan of doing a long slider over a bunch of percussions here just to follow vocals It is like final slow down moment so i left it
10:05 Kibbleru: not worth skipping all those
10:05 Kibbleru: no theres alot of parts imo you can put a stream
10:05 Kibbleru: just listen when there is a 1/4 drum track lol
10:05 Kibbleru: 01:03:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - what people said were overmapped was probably this
10:06 Kibbleru: gotta listen carefully to the music :d
10:06 Kibbleru: 01:05:861 (11) - same as the point before My heart idk what to do, will think about it.
10:06 Kibbleru: skipping a bunch of stuff for the vocals
10:06 Kibbleru: pls no
10:06 Kibbleru: 01:07:699 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - overmapped
10:06 krykson: 01:03:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - so this is overmap or no?
10:07 Kibbleru: what people said were overmapped are probably 01:12:370 - 01:14:634 - 01:16:898 - 01:19:162 -
10:07 Kibbleru: if you cant tell whether its 1/4 or 1/2 u can lower the playback rate
10:07 krykson: yup, these ones at most, burt i think that they are ok
10:08 krykson: as i use it as a pattern
10:08 Kibbleru: jeesus is this quaver xd
10:08 *Kibbleru is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1393981 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Piste SMILE Non-stop!! [test]]
10:08 krykson: no pls xD
10:08 krykson: i was just testing pp system
10:08 Kibbleru: ur right
10:08 Kibbleru: quaver is only 7 stars
10:08 Kibbleru: urs is 9 stars
10:09 Kibbleru: :^)
10:09 krykson: ok, so i have some questions and you are free
10:09 krykson: if you finished whole diff
10:09 Kibbleru: yea
10:09 krykson: 00:07:276 (6,7) - done
10:10 krykson: what should i do with this?
10:10 Kibbleru: http://i.imgur.com/sAcXVXf.png ?
10:11 krykson: hmm, ok
10:11 krykson: and these undermapped sections that you pointed out
10:12 krykson: 00:34:445 (4,5) - 00:42:936 (4,5,6,7,8) -
10:13 Kibbleru: there's probably more
10:13 Kibbleru: i want u to try to fix them though
10:14 krykson: ok, i will.
10:14 krykson: So if i will polsih everything and fix undermapping, is this good enough?
10:14 krykson: polish*
10:15 Kibbleru: what do u mean by *good enough*
10:15 krykson: to be considered as rankable
10:15 Kibbleru: wait leme post the log first