00:15:458 (4) - Don't overlap this with 00:16:029 (6)
00:21:744 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I would put a bit of a curve in this stream so it looks nicer.
00:24:886 (2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - These are all sliders, replace some with jumps
00:29:172 (5) - Make this slider go the same speed the stream did
00:40:458 (3,4) - This jump seems a little too brutal
00:45:172 (1,2,1) - Replace some of these patterns where there are sliders on each side of the screen with jumps.
00:48:743 (2,4) - This overlap is't nice
00:53:029 (1,3,4,2) - You didn't overlap previous slider so i also wouldn't overlap these
00:53:886 (4,2) - ^
00:57:886 (2) - Move this one a bit up so there is no overlap
01:04:029 (3,4,5,6) - These jumps are too small beacause the other one were really large
01:07:458 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Since it's not too clear in the music don't space these as much as you did
01:10:743 (3,1) - Overlap
01:11:601 (2,4) - Move one of the 2 so it looks like a mirrored version of 01:11:315 (1,3)
01:14:743 (5,1) - This jump is unnecessarily large
01:15:029 (2,3,4,1) - These also have overlap, if you want to keep the overlap then keep it consistent through the whole map and don't use partial overlap and full overlap both.
01:18:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks way too tame for the rest of the map
01:23:744 (4,5) - Overlap
01:24:886 (8,1) - Both overlap with 01:24:315 (6)
01:25:315 (2,4) - I'm not going too note this patern down everytime but i really dislike it
01:26:315 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Keep spacing equal
01:42:171 (1) - Move this up so spacing between theis and the slider and 01:42:313 (2,3) is the same
01:56:028 (1,4,1) - 3 sliders overlap here
02:06:599 (2,4) - Overlap
02:19:170 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - make this part of the stream smoother and more like a circle
02:24:028 (4,1) - Easy fixable overlap by jiust moving 02:24:599 (1) left
02:24:885 (2,3,4,5) - This spacing is a bit too much
02:26:313 (1,1) - Overlap
02:27:456 (3,4,5) - Not nicely stacked
02:28:599 (3,4,5,6,7) - Keep spacing equal
02:31:456 (1) - Move this one so it doesn't overlap with the stream
02:33:456 (1,2) - ^
02:50:170 (3,5) - Overlap
03:05:885 (6) - Move this one on the same line as 03:05:314 (2,4)
03:10:313 (1) - Move left to avoid overlap with the burst
03:11:027 (3) - Dont overlap this with the stream
03:31:027 (2,3) - This doesn't work
03:31:598 (4,5) - ^
04:02:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Maybe there is a more interesting option here than just stacking them
04:08:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - I see you only want circles there but i would some put some sliders inbetween.
04:18:455 (5,6,7,1,2) - Spacing issues
04:20:598 (1,2) - Don't overlap
04:22:026 (3,1,3) - ^
I can't say anything about the next section until the kiai as i could'nt read any of it.
04:57:269 (8,1) - Spacing seems off
05:07:769 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Wow, Ok
05:40:453 (4) - Make this slider point to 05:40:739 (5)
05:46:882 (2,4) - You have alot of other space on the screen to go to don't go in a cicle and cause overlap
05:52:168 (6,7,8) - Overlap with 05:51:596 (2,3,4)
05:51:882 (5,1) - Overlap
05:53:596 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Don't make streams cross eachother
05:57:311 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream part looks weird, form the 180 angle to a sudden space decrease later
06:10:739 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - That is some insane stream angle change
06:26:596 (5) - Move this up and to the left so flow improves and overlap disaappears
06:33:453 (5,1) - I would tone down this jump a bit
06:38:025 (5,1) - ^
06:38:882 (4,1) - Overlap
06:40:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't place a boring predictable jump pattern like this.
06:43:739 (1,2) - So, if 06:43:739 (1,3) doesn't overlap neither should 06:43:453 (4,2)
06:45:025 (1,2) - Spacing a bit extreem for a "calm" (lol) part of the song
06:49:596 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Jumps looks weird with a sudden large gap at the end, i would start small and buildup not decrease spacing
06:52:453 (5,6,7,8,1) - Insane spacing
06:57:453 (15,1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you wan't to keep this spacing in the stream make it so you dont need a 90 degree angle to start on it and map it more in a circle, it's nearly impossible otherwise