DJ TOTTO feat. Yoshikawa Sunao - Arousing‬ · forum‬

Petal

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Petal 2017-08-20T17:23:55+00:00

Faygor wrote:
yo
are u still open to GDs

what diffs and how fast :w:

pm me on forums pls

Last edited by Petal 2017-09-19T17:09:55+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-28T21:28:43+00:00

smol mod

Insane

00:02:913 (1) - how it overlaps looks weird af lol if u want u could change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8960964
00:03:918 (2) - maybe make it to 2 notes? cuz there 2 noticable sounds and vocals so it would make sense to make them clickable
00:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - im actually sad that u didnt mapped all the wub noices and no sv changes n shit ;-; but eh thats your mapping style i guess? lol xd
00:19:505 (2) - maybe u could try to emphasize that the music stops completly like for example u could make that u dont move your cursor while music stops that would perfectly emphasize it
00:28:555 (8,1) - well not important but u could do a blanket there
00:32:577 (5,4) - unintended overlap? structure it a bit cleaner lul
00:49:672 (7) - looks a bit odd and the way u stack it is inconsistent with how u stack/overlap it later in that part
01:10:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uh idk if it was intended or not but u can stack that stream on 01:09:952 (1) -
01:40:119 (1,3) - unintended overlap lol

Petal

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Petal 2017-08-29T06:46:25+00:00

tks Moge

Moge-ko wrote:
smol mod
Insane
00:02:913 (1) - how it overlaps looks weird af lol if u want u could change it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8960964 if I do that than players won't have enough time to adjust their aim to the next slider.
00:03:918 (2) - maybe make it to 2 notes? cuz there 2 noticable sounds and vocals so it would make sense to make them clickable Fixed
00:14:309 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - im actually sad that u didnt mapped all the wub noices and no sv changes n shit ;-; but eh thats your mapping style i guess? lol xd Just felt like it wouldn't fit since the sound is so faded
00:19:505 (2) - maybe u could try to emphasize that the music stops completly like for example u could make that u dont move your cursor while music stops that would perfectly emphasize it I think its fine imo
00:28:555 (8,1) - well not important but u could do a blanket there its just following the vocals
00:32:577 (5,4) - unintended overlap? structure it a bit cleaner lul Fixed
00:49:672 (7) - looks a bit odd and the way u stack it is inconsistent with how u stack/overlap it later in that part Fixed
01:10:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uh idk if it was intended or not but u can stack that stream on 01:09:952 (1) - its for players to read better,thats why I don't overlap them
01:40:119 (1,3) - unintended overlap lol Fixed

Sanyi

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Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-08-29T09:14:11+00:00

from my modding queue. Since I am only able to mod osu!catch properly I can just point out a few things:

"normal-sliderslide3.wav" is unused, you can delete that file.
Link's Easy: You've set an timing point and an inherited point at the same time (00:00:902 - ). According to the ranking criteria that's only allowed when you want to change the slider velocity, but you did it to change the volume. Please delete the inherited point and change the volume of the timing point instead.
Normal: 00:13:639 (3,4) - This pattern gives me a headache, it breaks three guidelines at the same time:
1. Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.
2. Avoid 1/2 sliders with multiple reverses. New players are unable to read additional reverses because they are visible for such a short amount of time.
3. Avoid 1/2 hit objects after sliders which appear underneath the previous slider's path. Players at this level fully follow sliders’ paths, so placing a hit object directly after the slider is more intuitive. This also includes stacks underneath slider ends.
I highly suggest you to change the pattern so that it fits better for a Normal difficulty (Maybe just a slider with a special shape to emphasize the music).

Stormiverse

237 posts

Joined July 2016

Stormiverse 2017-08-29T12:23:00+00:00

NM from Q here.

[Link's Easy]

AR can be boosted to 4, since this is a fairly fast map.
I have no idea why there's a kiai at 00:14:309 and 00:19:672, and why you have to cut the kiai at 01:23:946 and 01:34:672.

00:07:606 (3,1) - The reverse arrow on 00:08:947 (1) - is completely obstructed by 00:07:606 (3) - 's slidertail.

SPOILER

Something like this would work just fine.

SPOILER

00:08:947 (1) - There's a really strong vocal on 00:09:617, but you mapped it with a reverse arrow, which is not a very good rhythm choice imo. I would go for something like this instead.

SPOILER

00:10:791 (2) - The red anchor triggers me. (because it's outside the playfield) (doesn't affect gameplay tho, ignore this)
00:33:751 (2,1) - Overlapping should be avoid in Easy difficulty.
01:34:086 (1,1) - 1/4 gap introduced too late in gameplay, would cause difficulty for new players (idk how to fix it tho)
01:43:974 (2) - There's a really strong sound on 01:44:645 which was not mapped. Poor rhythm choice imo. I would go for something like what you did at 01:34:086 (1) - .

SPOILER

01:53:527 (2) - Personally I would change the slider shape into the one with multiple red anchors, like at 01:24:030 (1) - , to represents the strong beats in between.

[Normal]

Same as above, AR can be boosted to 5

00:04:756 (4) - I don't know what you're following here, but I'm gonna assume it's the vocal, because that's what you've been following since the beginning of the map. If you're following vocals, this is poor rhythm choice, since there're vocals on 00:05:091 and 00:05:427 which was not mapped. 1/1 slider with a reverse arrow seems good to me.
00:09:617 (1) - I don't think the slidershape is appropriate. I would rather have this instead.

SPOILER

00:13:639 (3) - 1/4 sliders under any kind should not be used in this difficulty. Could use the slider at 00:09:617 (1) - instead.
00:31:404 (6) - ctrl + H and then move back to where it belongs for aesthetic.
00:33:080 (2,3) - Check AImod for Distance Snapping problems. These two should overlap each other.
00:34:253 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:097 (6,7) - ^
00:43:807 (2,3) - ^
00:44:980 (5,6) - ^
01:10:622 (1,1) - Overlap.
01:20:678 (5) - This is not 1/3. The vocals lands on 01:20:929 and 01:21:181.

[Deppy's Advanced]

01:40:036 (3) - Why the hell is this doing here? This should be on 01:40:119
Wow this is short :/

[GIDZ's Hard]

Holy! Just amazing. Favorite diff in this set.
Mutual me senpai >///<

[Starfy's Light Insane]

OMFG, the GDs in this set, Holy! This is so good, I can't even say anything.

[Insane]

This is why I play osu!, to see masterpieces.

I'ma shoot a Star at this because I want to see this gets ranked.

byd

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Joined May 2015

byd 2017-08-29T14:52:32+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
"normal-sliderslide3.wav" is unused, you can delete that file. it is used in easy diff at 00:18:668 (1) -
Link's Easy: You've set an timing point and an inherited point at the same time (00:00:902 - ). According to the ranking criteria that's only allowed when you want to change the slider velocity, but you did it to change the volume. Please delete the inherited point and change the volume of the timing point instead. fixed

Stormiverse wrote:
NM from Q here.

[Link's Easy]
AR can be boosted to 4, since this is a fairly fast map. i think its fine as it is, ill change if more people mention it as an issue
I have no idea why there's a kiai at 00:14:309 and 00:19:672, and why you have to cut the kiai at 01:23:946 and 01:34:672. i just took the kiai from another diff when i made this zzz
00:07:606 (3,1) - The reverse arrow on 00:08:947 (1) - is completely obstructed by 00:07:606 (3) - 's slidertail. changed that part
SPOILER

Something like this would work just fine.
SPOILER
00:08:947 (1) - There's a really strong vocal on 00:09:617, but you mapped it with a reverse arrow, which is not a very good rhythm choice imo. I would go for something like this instead. changed that part
SPOILER
00:10:791 (2) - The red anchor triggers me. (because it's outside the playfield) (doesn't affect gameplay tho, ignore this) ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
00:33:751 (2,1) - Overlapping should be avoid in Easy difficulty. changed
01:34:086 (1,1) - 1/4 gap introduced too late in gameplay, would cause difficulty for new players (idk how to fix it tho) spacing should be fine as an indicator i think
01:43:974 (2) - There's a really strong sound on 01:44:645 which was not mapped. Poor rhythm choice imo. I would go for something like what you did at 01:34:086 (1) - . idk how to do this without remapping a bunch, ill try to think of a solution
SPOILER
01:53:527 (2) - Personally I would change the slider shape into the one with multiple red anchors, like at 01:24:030 (1) - , to represents the strong beats in between. changed

thanks for mods!

d

osu file format v14

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Rem is my waifu

67 posts

Joined June 2015

Rem is my waifu 2017-08-29T14:52:56+00:00

Yo, I'm from the queue, this is a mod for your Normal difficulty.

00:27:382 (3) - I think that this slider is more appropriate as a 1/2 beat one that reverses like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8965995 it just fits the song better imo.
00:44:477 (4) - a similar case here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966011
01:21:348 (6) - This slider should move up a bit as the previous sliders are overlapping more than it is right now and it should be consistent (see next screenshot). I think you should start a new combo here as well.
01:21:851 (2) - Again, this object should be below the slider tail not above if you want it to be consistent: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966038

There wasn't much that was wrong (as far as I could tell), I hope that this was useful and good luck!

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-29T15:39:26+00:00

Tks Storm

Stormiverse wrote:
[Normal]
Same as above, AR can be boosted to 5 Changed
00:04:756 (4) - I don't know what you're following here, but I'm gonna assume it's the vocal, because that's what you've been following since the beginning of the map. If you're following vocals, this is poor rhythm choice, since there're vocals on 00:05:091 and 00:05:427 which was not mapped. 1/1 slider with a reverse arrow seems good to me. Fixed
00:09:617 (1) - I don't think the slidershape is appropriate. I would rather have this instead. Fixed
SPOILER
00:13:639 (3) - 1/4 sliders under any kind should not be used in this difficulty. Could use the slider at 00:09:617 (1) - instead. Fixed
00:31:404 (6) - ctrl + H and then move back to where it belongs for aesthetic. Changed
00:33:080 (2,3) - Check AImod for Distance Snapping problems. These two should overlap each other. Fixed all
00:34:253 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:097 (6,7) - ^
00:43:807 (2,3) - ^
00:44:980 (5,6) - ^
01:10:622 (1,1) - Overlap.Fixed
01:20:678 (5) - This is not 1/3. The vocals lands on 01:20:929 and 01:21:181.Fixed

Petal

Global Moderator

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-29T15:48:31+00:00

Tks rem waifu

Rem is my waifu wrote:
Yo, I'm from the queue, this is a mod for your Normal difficulty.

00:27:382 (3) - I think that this slider is more appropriate as a 1/2 beat one that reverses like so: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8965995 it just fits the song better imo. yah
00:44:477 (4) - a similar case here. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966011 fixed
01:21:348 (6) - This slider should move up a bit as the previous sliders are overlapping more than it is right now and it should be consistent (see next screenshot). I think you should start a new combo here as well. Yah
01:21:851 (2) - Again, this object should be below the slider tail not above if you want it to be consistent: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8966038 fixed

There wasn't much that was wrong (as far as I could tell), I hope that this was useful and good luck!

RonaldVN

9 posts

Joined August 2017

RonaldVN 2017-08-29T17:24:30+00:00

Feedback

Easy Map:
00:18:668 (1) - Note: Make it more smoother like a ''( Shape''.
Why: It doesn't feel right

01:40:119 (1) - Note: Make it more smoother like a "S or ) Shape''.
Why: It doesn't feel right

Normal Map
01:21:851 (7) - Note: The hit Object is too close, Make more room/space. Like put in more South/West from viewpoint off the last slider.

Advanced map
01:21:181 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo.

00:06:097 (6) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Orange instead.
Why: Because its part a of the orange combo.

00:37:103 (1) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object White instead.
Why: Because its a part of the white combo

01:01:069 (5) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo

01:06:600 (6) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object White instead.
Why: Because its a part of the white combo

Hard map
00:06:097 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Orange instead.
Why: Because its a part of the orange combo

00:08:779 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo

01:50:175 (2) - Note: Place it more visible.
Why: people may not see the hit object.

Light Insane map
01:11:377 (2) - Note: Around here its hard too see what kind of combo it is (not the color). Place it more visible instead.
Why: (It could be a choke point (only if its in the beginning or ending.)) People may be confused.

Insane map
Good endings as always

My opinion
I think you make very good maps with good music too! But I'm not sure with some drum/bass sounds in Easy & Normal because it sounds off, but I'm not sure and I'm not that experienced to say its true or not.

Thank you to be my first costumer in my Queue ! I hope you found it useful. I also hope I would get some feedback or Response back about my ''Modding Skills'' to help me improve. Anyways thank you very much!

With kind regards,

(beginner Mod) RonaldVN

ppy powered 2007-2017

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-29T17:58:13+00:00

Tks Ronald

RonaldVN wrote:
Normal Map
01:21:851 (7) - Note: The hit Object is too close, Make more room/space. Like put in more South/West from viewpoint off the last slider.
cannot do that ;-; its distance snapped lol

Insane map
Good endings as always

(beginner Mod) RonaldVN

if everything seems fine to you that's good , there are still a lot more things you need to learn about mapping in general for example new combo and object placements , but since this is your first mod its fine lol , didn't expect someone to map when they got the game 15 days ago XD . Thanks

Maxylan

242 posts

Joined May 2014

Maxylan 2017-08-29T20:55:44+00:00

NM From my "Modding Madness!" queue!
Since this map already looks great and plays even better I'll simply be giving you some Aesthetic/Visual advice

[]

Insane
00:10:287 (1) - Lower SV here so you can both represent the low sound better and decrease it's length so that you can move it a little more up to fit the blanket better.
00:11:293 (1) - This does not fit, not only does it break flow but it does so with high SV even if the sound is a long held one with just increase in pitch, oh and I almost forgot to mention it does a iffy overlap with 00:11:628 (1)
00:20:175 (3,5) 00:20:343 (4,5,1) 00:29:728 (4,5) - Iffy overlaps again, there are a ton of overlaps I'm skipping through but that's because I'm only highlighting the worst offenders haha
00:20:510 (5,1,2) - Questionable rythm choice, what would fit the song best here would be a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:510 (5) that and then a circle on 00:20:678 with a kickslider on 00:20:762 these three ticks.
00:21:013 (1) - I feel like this shouldn't end on a white tick, a drum clap (Slider end) is a louder sound than the Bass (Slider Head)
00:27:047 (3,4) 00:27:885 (6,7) - By far the ugliest overlap because not only does the slider end and head overlap but the bodies as well. I mean this in the most insulting way possible (no i dont lol)
00:29:058 (1) - Fix ze blanket
00:41:628 (2,1) - This overlap isn't ASS bad as the others but why not blanket instead?
00:43:639 (4,1,4,6,7,1) 00:53:862 (1,3,4,1) - Ayy overlap fiesta
01:01:572 00:58:555 - Sound missing under this little slider, should be mapped with 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider, preferably 1/8.
01:05:259 (4) - boi this slider skips over TWO important bass sounds 01:05:427 01:05:594 then ENDS ON NO SOUND 01:05:678 fixerino this.
01:05:762 (1,1) - These two are almost the same as above, but instead both start on non-important vocals and red commits the absolute act of sin by ending on a extremely strong sound 01:06:600 for the blue slider it misses sound on 01:05:929
01:10:455 (2,1) 01:28:723 (4,5) - Fix visual flow leading into the stream.
01:29:393 (1) - New combo here isn't necessary, unless you lower the volume of 01:29:058 (5,6,7,8) because if you listen to the song the last note is the strongest one in terms of volume, so if volume would lead into it it would make more sense to emphasise with new combo.
01:31:237 (7) - Eeeeeeehhhhhhh don't use 3/4th of length, also don't use a slider here at all imo because this sound 01:31:404 is stronger than 01:31:237 this sound.
01:32:075 (3,1) - You should use some additional distinction to these note so that it's easier for players to read the full beat gap.
01:33:248 (2,3) - Don't go from using sharp angles to this wide angle with massive distance and ESPECIALLY not in this case where it leads into a stream.
01:42:382 (1) - Howbow another 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider here
[]

Starfy's Light Insane
00:01:572 (1,1) - Stack these two slider ends, this looks more visually pleasing and adds some additional distance to the next note which gives more emphasis to the sound.
00:09:449 (2,3,6,7) - For the sake of consistency you should add some distinction between those depending on beatgap, first one looks identical to the second yet one is 1/2 the other is 1/4.
00:09:617 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap fiesta
00:59:728 (4,6) - A little iffy overlap
01:02:745 (2) 01:05:427 (2) - Even if nothing is technically wrong with this, would use double tap or just a jump here instead of this slider, it sounds out of place both starting and ending at important sounds.
01:07:438 (4,2) - Repeat arrows needs to be more visible
01:06:767 (2,4,2) - Have to question your rythm choice, the repeating end of a slider should be considered a passive note yet it's on the most important white ticks of this section. Hitsounding with a clap isn't enough here my man
01:10:957 (5,6) - Another questionable rythm choice, these do not appear to serve any purpose exept vaguely, and I mean vaguely following the vocals, even though the vocal is a held note with just a very SLIGHT change in pitch not warranting these slider jumps and especially not in the middle of a streamy 1/4 section.
01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like these should be formed in some pattern or shape because having them sorta stacked like all your bursts makes it hard to read that it's actually a 1/2 pattern. Also a pattern would add better emphasis to the sounds.
01:32:075 (1,2) - The new combo on 1 has same problem as diff above, and 2 needs to have some sort of destinction so you can easily tell the beat gap.
01:31:739 (3,4) - It would fit with a kickslider here
01:49:170 (6,1) - Maybe fix flow/visual flow to lead better into the stream?
[]

Yo couldn't find much wrong with Starfy's map, I wish I could mod more diffs but judging from what I already wrote you should be able to fine tune the others yourself! I've got a terrible workload from my queue so GL

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-30T06:53:17+00:00

Thanks Maxy

Maxylan wrote:
Insane
00:10:287 (1) - Lower SV here so you can both represent the low sound better and decrease it's length so that you can move it a little more up to fit the blanket better. Fixed
00:11:293 (1) - This does not fit, not only does it break flow but it does so with high SV even if the sound is a long held one with just increase in pitch, oh and I almost forgot to mention it does a iffy overlap with 00:11:628 (1) Fixed
00:20:175 (3,5) 00:20:343 (4,5,1) 00:29:728 (4,5) - Iffy overlaps again, there are a ton of overlaps I'm skipping through but that's because I'm only highlighting the worst offenders haha I think its fine here
00:20:510 (5,1,2) - Questionable rythm choice, what would fit the song best here would be a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:510 (5) that and then a circle on 00:20:678 with a kickslider on 00:20:762 these three ticks. I can reconsider
00:21:013 (1) - I feel like this shouldn't end on a white tick, a drum clap (Slider end) is a louder sound than the Bass (Slider Head) Fixed
00:27:047 (3,4) 00:27:885 (6,7) - By far the ugliest overlap because not only does the slider end and head overlap but the bodies as well. I mean this in the most insulting way possible (no i dont lol) Plays fine in game
00:29:058 (1) - Fix ze blanket Fixed
00:41:628 (2,1) - This overlap isn't ASS bad as the others but why not blanket instead? I think its fine , I did it here too 00:30:902 (1,1) -
00:43:639 (4,1,4,6,7,1) 00:53:862 (1,3,4,1) - Ayy overlap fiesta its not impossible or hard to read, and this is for the asthestic
01:01:572 00:58:555 - Sound missing under this little slider, should be mapped with 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider, preferably 1/8. huh?
01:05:259 (4) - boi this slider skips over TWO important bass sounds 01:05:427 01:05:594 then ENDS ON NO SOUND 01:05:678 fixerino this. its just following the vocals lol
01:05:762 (1,1) - These two are almost the same as above, but instead both start on non-important vocals and red commits the absolute act of sin by ending on a extremely strong sound 01:06:600 for the blue slider it misses sound on 01:05:929 I think its fine
01:10:455 (2,1) 01:28:723 (4,5) - Fix visual flow leading into the stream. Fixed
01:29:393 (1) - New combo here isn't necessary, unless you lower the volume of 01:29:058 (5,6,7,8) because if you listen to the song the last note is the strongest one in terms of volume, so if volume would lead into it it would make more sense to emphasise with new combo.Fixed
01:31:237 (7) - Eeeeeeehhhhhhh don't use 3/4th of length, also don't use a slider here at all imo because this sound 01:31:404 is stronger than 01:31:237 this sound. It is for players to stop completely, since the instruments also stopped
01:32:075 (3,1) - You should use some additional distinction to these note so that it's easier for players to read the full beat gap. Not sure what else to do here lol
01:33:248 (2,3) - Don't go from using sharp angles to this wide angle with massive distance and ESPECIALLY not in this case where it leads into a stream.This whole map is about changing distance 00:21:348 (4,5,6,7) - 01:13:304 (1,2,3,4) -
01:42:382 (1) - Howbow another 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider here I think the slider right now is fine

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

byd 2017-08-30T10:55:46+00:00

RonaldVN wrote:
Feedback

Easy Map:
00:18:668 (1) - Note: Make it more smoother like a ''( Shape''. its fine to me
Why: It doesn't feel right

01:40:119 (1) - Note: Make it more smoother like a "S or ) Shape''. ditto
Why: It doesn't feel right

Azinlen

342 posts

Joined May 2016

Azinlen 2017-08-30T11:16:10+00:00

Hello from My Modding Queue!

General

You need 4.2-4.6 star insane!

Link's Easy

Grats!

Normal

Semi-Grats.
I think about its hard for new players.
Looks like Hard.

Deppy's Advanced

00:16:991 (1) - I'm think about its stupid idea,maybe you remake it,and get 4 circles?
This difficulty looks like wired.

GIDZ's Hard

Grats!

Starfy's Light Insane

Looks good.

Insane

Good.

Deppyforce

1,990 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-08-30T13:33:19+00:00

Stormiverse wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]
01:40:036 (3) - Why the hell is this doing here? This should be on 01:40:119 lol im bad
Wow this is short :/

RonaldVN wrote:
Advanced map
01:21:181 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo.

00:06:097 (6) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Orange instead.
Why: Because its part a of the orange combo.

00:37:103 (1) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object White instead.
Why: Because its a part of the white combo

01:01:069 (5) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo

01:06:600 (6) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object White instead.
Why: Because its a part of the white combo

na they are already correct

YashaPlay wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]00:16:991 (1) - I'm think about its stupid idea,maybe you remake it,and get 4 circles? nope
This difficulty looks like wired.

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Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-30T13:38:28+00:00

YashaPlay wrote:
General
You need 4.2-4.6 star insane!

I'm pretty sure this diff spread is no problem

Blan_C

306 posts

Joined March 2016

Blan_C 2017-08-30T15:16:13+00:00

Link Easy

00:33:751 (2,1) - fix this unnoticeable thing

Normal

You have to follow DS on normals strictly - 00:04:589 (3,4) - 00:04:756 (4,5) -00:11:293 (3) - 00:13:639 (3,1) - 00:35:259 (3) - Here are DS errors i found.
00:16:991 (1,2) - Imo these are a bit too quiet. It may confuse normal diffs players
00:23:527 (2,3,4) - As above

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

byd 2017-08-30T15:37:59+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Link Easy
00:33:751 (2,1) - fix this unnoticeable thing blan_cet

b

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SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,108 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2017-08-31T11:23:53+00:00

[I]

00:04:589 (5) - keep consistent spacing with 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - ? no reason for the spacing changed imo
00:19:170 (1,2) - might want to make the spacing larger so the player can read the gap between 00:13:639 (1,2) - and here
00:24:700 - map the sound here would be better cuz i think ur trying to express every weird sound, making a gap here doesnt rly make sense
00:47:494 - lol, isnt it suppose to be like this?
00:49:086 - 00:50:091 - undermapped
00:53:862 (1) - unnecessary NC, should be here 00:54:365 (3) - instead since here is where vocal changed
00:57:214 - lol where is the NC here then, should be 00:57:047 (5) -
01:22:186 (1) - unnecessary NC
01:29:393 (9) - 01:18:667 (1) - inconsistent NC usage
01:32:075 (3) - umm ill make a 3/4 slider to express the vocal instead, like all other similar part 01:31:237 (7,1) - 01:27:885 (1,2) - etc, is weird to make a small pause here, since there isnt any impact
01:32:745 (1,1) - unnecessary NC, id ur NC for structure then u should NC 01:33:415 (3) - either
01:36:097 (5) - NC
01:50:175 (1,2) - the spacing of 1/1 gap here should get larger since its similar to 01:50:846 (1,2) - 1/2 gap
01:52:857 - i thought ull make sth like this lol https://puu.sh/xo10H/e20dbd7905.jpg

[L I]

00:18:499 (2,3) - ur using the sliderend to express the stronger sound which i dont think is a good choice, this should work better https://puu.sh/xo17u/211282ff26.jpg
00:56:712 (4,5) - larger spacing probably? rn it looks like the same spacing as 1/2 gap

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-08-31T12:08:00+00:00

Tks SnowNiNo

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[I]
00:04:589 (5) - keep consistent spacing with 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - ? no reason for the spacing changed imo I think this is what you wanted
00:19:170 (1,2) - might want to make the spacing larger so the player can read the gap betweenFixed 00:13:639 (1,2) - and here I don't think this should be spaced larger cuz the gap in between is not as wide
00:24:700 - map the sound here would be better cuz i think ur trying to express every weird sound, making a gap here doesnt rly make sense Fixed
00:47:494 - lol, isnt it suppose to be like this? yes lol I'm bad xd
00:49:086 - 00:50:091 - undermapped Fixed
00:53:862 (1) - unnecessary NC, should be here 00:54:365 (3) - instead since here is where vocal changed Fixed
00:57:214 - lol where is the NC here then, should be 00:57:047 (5) - Fixed
01:22:186 (1) - unnecessary NC Fixed
01:29:393 (9) - 01:18:667 (1) - inconsistent NC usage Fixed
01:32:075 (3) - umm ill make a 3/4 slider to express the vocal instead, like all other similar part 01:31:237 (7,1) - 01:27:885 (1,2) - etc, is weird to make a small pause here, since there isnt any impact Fixed
01:32:745 (1,1) - unnecessary NC, id ur NC for structure then u should NC 01:33:415 (3) - either Fixed
01:36:097 (5) - NC Fixed
01:50:175 (1,2) - the spacing of 1/1 gap here should get larger since its similar to 01:50:846 (1,2) - 1/2 gap Fixed
01:52:857 - i thought ull make sth like this lol https://puu.sh/xo10H/e20dbd7905.jpg Thanksss!

Tks Blan_C

Blan_C wrote:
Link Easy
00:33:751 (2,1) - fix this unnoticeable thing
Normal
You have to follow DS on normals strictly - 00:04:589 (3,4) - 00:04:756 (4,5) -00:11:293 (3) - 00:13:639 (3,1) - 00:35:259 (3) - Here are DS errors i found. Fixed all DS problems thanks!
00:16:991 (1,2) - Imo these are a bit too quiet. It may confuse normal diffs players I think this is fine, the slider shape is not that hard to understan
00:23:527 (2,3,4) - As above

Last edited by Petal 2017-08-31T15:24:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

PyroBear

144 posts

Joined October 2015

PyroBear 2017-08-31T12:17:10+00:00

[Easy]

00:19:506 (1) - I don't think half beat sliders fit in easy maps
01:34:086 (1,1,2) - 3 consecutive repeat sliders feel weird
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - Same as first point

[Normal]

00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whole part seems too complex for Normal
00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Advanced]

00:16:991 (1) - Even amount of repeats feel weird
00:22:355 (1) - ^
01:05:259 Sound here feels too important to be a sliderend
01:26:712 (1) - Same as first point
01:42:801 (1) - ^ I feel like this should be circles instead of a slider
01:48:164 (1) - Even amount of repeats

[Hard]

01:28:555 (3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, hella confusing
01:53:527 (1,2) - I feel like this part should be more emphasized.

[Light Insane]

00:13:220 There's a distinct sound here that I feel should be mapped
00:56:544 (3) - Looks weird imo maybe move to x: 360 Y: 336
01:20:343 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent stacking compared to 01:22:019 (3,4)
01:20:008 (1,2) - Weird spacing compared to 01:20:343 (3,4)
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:980 (4,5) - Similar spacing to 01:44:980 (4,5) which can be confusing
01:50:175 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]

00:49:672 (7,1) - Can be confused for double (there's quite a few sliders like this, I think you can find it for yourself)

Great map in general. Here's my map for M4M t/528834

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

byd 2017-08-31T13:10:26+00:00

PyroBear wrote:
[Easy]
00:19:506 (1) - I don't think half beat sliders fit in easy maps its fine
01:34:086 (1,1,2) - 3 consecutive repeat sliders feel weird changed
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - Same as first point its fine

ty for mod

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386,67,95762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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324,333,99784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Chihara Minori

1,239 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-09-01T07:49:14+00:00

I think this enough for cookie (maybe will consider more if you add milk at post)

normal
i see that you use hs copier to apply it on normal and advace, which as you can see theres a bunch of unused green lines that clovered such as on slider, no object, etc. so simply try to sweep those unused timing points
00:05:594 (5,8) - its really odd kind of overlapping actually, if it was polished to these days style maybe will be much like https://gyazo.com/1e10d09703664c86dccf6dc95fe7b653. makes it not just more well placed, it also easier to read
00:08:108 (2) - just copy and mirror 00:06:935 (8) - here, the angle not really fit with low beat emphs
00:15:650 (3,1) - is this overlap really necessary? i mean it simply can recognize as unconsist ds usage
00:26:544 - its really clear you try to emph the vocal, but it does make a little awkward since its too sudden. i get a little miss read as well at first. plyrs will prolly wish the intro rhytm more like this https://gyazo.com/9aebb9f1dec04d36854c1faa53e712f4
00:31:069 (5,6) - you still try to take priority on vocal right? so switch the rhytm by simply ctrl+g, the slider will catch the vocal vobration smoothly
01:12:801 (1) - it will actually give more impact to reff intro if it pulled downward instead, where the reverse will give an accelerate feeling to (2)
01:15:147 (6) - this hold just a bit nope for me, since you speratee 01:13:807 (3) - it will feel more natural to catch after section with same pattern which not stacked
01:18:667 (7) - instead of placing it on zero beat where the song get spesificly dropped, just follow the casual rhytm at your earlier section, which supposed to placed 01:18:499 -
01:23:527 (2) - as simple as before to give pulled feel, make like "\" symbol instead
01:25:874 (5,6) - same reason as early stacked at kiai section, i know its flexible but it is preferable
01:34:086 (4) - ctrl+h and replace to current potition, will decreace the solid flow from (3) tho
01:35:259 (2) - since the vocal is vibration you free to use such as light curve actually, where i suggest to add light right curve there
01:37:270 (5) - nothing wrong with this vocal emphs, but i just feel a bit plain to ignore the main rhytm itself, so try this insetead https://gyazo.com/5f9f73ea82b2a49516959a1c5e433fc8, by that you can also keep your hs flowing
01:38:611 (8) - too sharp if you ask me
01:42:801 - try this pattern https://gyazo.com/8dc77e12c0027aa2e5409ad8e2a48e00

insane
00:13:639 (1) - ctrl+h it and replace it to current potition, the angle will give better clutch for those kick sliders
00:15:315 (5) - it does penetrate the flow from (4) but not that smooth when entering the slider, maybe x160 y224 so not only make it entering slider smoothly, it also make (3,4,5) become triangle which pretier to look lol
00:18:332 (1) - this slider deserve left curve, then also mirror it again for (2). so the circular flow keep going on
00:20:510 (5) - why it does even there, try to at least place it on clear point, so it not bothering too much even if the jump get pressed
00:24:700 (1) - actually just a circle slider enough
00:31:572 (1) - since you make trips after why not play with 2 cirlce instead so theres more movement for cusor
00:37:103 (3,4) - ctrl+g? idk it feel a bit boring with stacked circle on slider head especially when it get NCed
01:08:108 (9) - isnt this supposed to NCed?
01:13:807 (3) - idk, its too short from (2) too sharp to (4) maybe put it somewhere else
01:20:929 (8) - welp, i would just stack (9) here instead tho, its a pain on dt
01:44:980 (1) - ctrl+g, just to make variant

afterall I could enjoy the insane from mid to end but the start just feel a bit pushed to fit. maybe some simple pattern will lead it better. goodluck

Affirmation

2,554 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-09-01T11:27:33+00:00

Q

[Insane]
00:07:270 (6,1) - Unstack them? can be better for music.
00:08:946 (6) - NC
00:14:309 (1) - Make bigger DS for emphasize it. this part has strong drum sound.
00:25:371 (1,2,3,4) - DS looks too big many players can read it as 1/2.
00:27:885 (6,7) - make lower DS like others, consistency is more important than blanket.
00:29:058 (1,2) - Yea, too big Ds to read, too.
00:31:739 - make it clickable? for music.
00:41:293 (1,2) - why this part has stack? you didn't try stack at other parts.
00:53:695 (2,3) - Why this part doesn't have antijump? not so good for consistency.
01:14:309 (5,6) - make bigger DS for emphasize.
01:21:013 (9) - stack with 8 for better reading.

GL

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2017-09-01T13:00:56+00:00

RonaldVN

RonaldVN wrote:
Light Insane map
01:11:377 (2) - Note: Around here its hard too see what kind of combo it is (not the color). Place it more visible instead.
Why: (It could be a choke point (only if its in the beginning or ending.)) People may be confused.
I guess it is readable enough but anyway I separated them a bit to increase the readability

Maxylan

Maxylan wrote:
Starfy's Light Insane
00:01:572 (1,1) - Stack these two slider ends, this looks more visually pleasing and adds some additional distance to the next note which gives more emphasis to the sound. I separate them deliberately since it looks more messy if I do so. And I think the current stacking pattern is cool since stacking everything completely is quite boring imo
00:09:449 (2,3,6,7) - For the sake of consistency you should add some distinction between those depending on beatgap, first one looks identical to the second yet one is 1/2 the other is 1/4. The approach rate is able to indicate the distribution of sound clearly, even though they are in different rhythm. This kind of change of distance is really common and I believe players are able to read the pattern. And I also believe that people are able to play Insane, could be able to read the pattern fluently as well
00:09:617 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap fiesta I did the overlap deliberately because the pattern can keep the flow that I constructed before. And due to the lack of space of the playfield, this pattern is able to solve the problem and it will not badly affect the aesthetics
00:59:728 (4,6) - A little iffy overlap The current overlap is okay for me since it is not a complicated shape, and the flow of the slider goes comfortably
01:02:745 (2) 01:05:427 (2) - Even if nothing is technically wrong with this, would use double tap or just a jump here instead of this slider, it sounds out of place both starting and ending at important sounds. I will not consider making jumps or "double tap" here since they are still in the quiet part in the song. It would be really awkward for me to put challenging pattern in slow part since it can not emphasize and represent the feeling of this part well
01:07:438 (4,2) - Repeat arrows needs to be more visible This kind of stacking is acceptable since it is not fully covered. And according to the default skin, the arrow is extremely clear that players can be able to recognise that it is a reverse slider
01:06:767 (2,4,2) - Have to question your rythm choice, the repeating end of a slider should be considered a passive note yet it's on the most important white ticks of this section. Hitsounding with a clap isn't enough here my man My idea is that it is the transition part of the song. The quiet part is rising and going intense. In order to build up the feeling of the transition, I used simple circler and reverse slider pattern to represent that the song is going intense. And starting from 01:09:281 (1) - , the transition is going noticeably and I put large distance and intensive slider here. And the last part, 01:10:622 (1) - , will be the hardest since it is the climax of the transition. In order to achieve the step by step emphasis, I decided to use the current pattern to be the first part to emphasize and start the transition
01:10:957 (5,6) - Another questionable rythm choice, these do not appear to serve any purpose exept vaguely, and I mean vaguely following the vocals, even though the vocal is a held note with just a very SLIGHT change in pitch not warranting these slider jumps and especially not in the middle of a streamy 1/4 section. I explained this in the above point. Since the is the climax part of the transition, I will put harder and intenser rhythm and pattern here. Therefore, the current distance is already cool to emphasize the rhythm since the sound is worth to be emphasized in this distance
01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like these should be formed in some pattern or shape because having them sorta stacked like all your bursts makes it hard to read that it's actually a 1/2 pattern. Also a pattern would add better emphasis to the sounds. The readability is not that low for an Insane difficulty. And I believe that the current pattern is also able to represent the sound well so I'm not going to change the pattern!
01:32:075 (1,2) - The new combo on 1 has same problem as diff above, and 2 needs to have some sort of destinction so you can easily tell the beat gap. But it violates my NC pattern. I add NC every downbeat unless there is any SV change. I will not NC it since there is no any SV change and not in the downbeat
01:31:739 (3,4) - It would fit with a kickslider here But it is an overmapping...
01:49:170 (6,1) - Maybe fix flow/visual flow to lead better into the stream? The distance is already clear enough imo. You can refer to the DS and you will find that the pattern is really clear and consistent

SnowNiNo_

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[L I]
00:18:499 (2,3) - ur using the sliderend to express the stronger sound which i dont think is a good choice, this should work better https://puu.sh/xo17u/211282ff26.jpg I found that putting circle in 00:18:499 (2) - is really hard to play in Light Insane because it required a lot of skills to alternate the fingers. In order to lower the difficulty, the current sound pattern will fit more
00:56:712 (4,5) - larger spacing probably? rn it looks like the same spacing as 1/2 gap The approach rate is already clear that players should be able to read the distance and rhythm

PyroBear

PyroBear wrote:
[Light Insane]
00:13:220 There's a distinct sound here that I feel should be mapped Not really noticeable and worth to be emphasized imo... It sounds awkward and overmapped if I do so
00:56:544 (3) - Looks weird imo maybe move to x: 360 Y: 336 Did some changes here
01:20:343 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent stacking compared to 01:22:019 (3,4)
01:20:008 (1,2) - Weird spacing compared to 01:20:343 (3,4)
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Since they are in different pattern, I used different distance and way to emphasize them independently. Therefore, the distance will be used differently
01:44:980 (4,5) - Similar spacing to 01:44:980 (4,5) which can be confusing
01:50:175 (1,2) - ^
Even though they are stacked, the approach rate is able to indicate the rhythm well. Players should be able to recognise the rhythm by approach circle

Thanks for mod!

Link: http://puu.sh/xoTir/86ff7006c3.rar

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-01T18:05:46+00:00

RonaldVN wrote:
Hard map
00:06:097 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Orange instead.
Why: Because its a part of the orange combo ????

00:08:779 (7) - Note: The color off the hit Object isn't right. Make the hit Object Blue instead.
Why: Because its a part of the blue combo ????

01:50:175 (2) - Note: Place it more visible.
Why: people may not see the hit object. I distance snapped it for consistency so no change~

PyroBear wrote:

[Hard]
01:28:555 (3,4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, hella confusing I dun think so since they are distance snapped lol, I stacked 01:28:890 (5,6,1) - cuz of how the music pauses at 01:29:226 - .
01:53:527 (1,2) - I feel like this part should be more emphasized. I think this emphasizes the ending quite well on a Hard diff lol.

Tks for mods!~

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-02T05:36:29+00:00

Tks Capsule

Time Capsule wrote:
I think this enough for cookie (maybe will consider more if you add milk at post)

normal
i see that you use hs copier to apply it on normal and advace, which as you can see theres a bunch of unused green lines that clovered such as on slider, no object, etc. so simply try to sweep those unused timing points Fixed for normal
00:05:594 (5,8) - its really odd kind of overlapping actually, if it was polished to these days style maybe will be much like https://gyazo.com/1e10d09703664c86dccf6dc95fe7b653. makes it not just more well placed, it also easier to read Fixed
00:08:108 (2) - just copy and mirror 00:06:935 (8) - here, the angle not really fit with low beat emphs Fixed
00:15:650 (3,1) - is this overlap really necessary? i mean it simply can recognize as unconsist ds usage I overlapped it with something else now it should be better to read
00:26:544 - its really clear you try to emph the vocal, but it does make a little awkward since its too sudden. i get a little miss read as well at first. plyrs will prolly wish the intro rhytm more like this https://gyazo.com/9aebb9f1dec04d36854c1faa53e712f4 I think its fine
00:31:069 (5,6) - you still try to take priority on vocal right? so switch the rhytm by simply ctrl+g, the slider will catch the vocal vobration smoothly Fixed
01:12:801 (1) - it will actually give more impact to reff intro if it pulled downward instead, where the reverse will give an accelerate feeling to (2) Fixed
01:15:147 (6) - this hold just a bit nope for me, since you speratee 01:13:807 (3) - it will feel more natural to catch after section with same pattern which not stacked Fixed
01:18:667 (7) - instead of placing it on zero beat where the song get spesificly dropped, just follow the casual rhytm at your earlier section, which supposed to placed 01:18:499 - Fixed
01:23:527 (2) - as simple as before to give pulled feel, make like "\" symbol instead Fixed
01:25:874 (5,6) - same reason as early stacked at kiai section, i know its flexible but it is preferable
01:34:086 (4) - ctrl+h and replace to current potition, will decreace the solid flow from (3) tho Fixed
01:35:259 (2) - since the vocal is vibration you free to use such as light curve actually, where i suggest to add light right curve there Fixed
01:37:270 (5) - nothing wrong with this vocal emphs, but i just feel a bit plain to ignore the main rhytm itself, so try this insetead https://gyazo.com/5f9f73ea82b2a49516959a1c5e433fc8, by that you can also keep your hs flowing -
01:38:611 (8) - too sharp if you ask me hmmm
01:42:801 - try this pattern https://gyazo.com/8dc77e12c0027aa2e5409ad8e2a48e00 failed to do so

insane
00:13:639 (1) - ctrl+h it and replace it to current potition, the angle will give better clutch for those kick sliders I think the current angle is already ok
00:15:315 (5) - it does penetrate the flow from (4) but not that smooth when entering the slider, maybe x160 y224 so not only make it entering slider smoothly, it also make (3,4,5) become triangle which pretier to look lol I did this in many places as well so this is pretty much the point of the map?
00:18:332 (1) - this slider deserve left curve, then also mirror it again for (2). so the circular flow keep going on but these 00:16:991 (1,2,3,4) - are all stright sliders , it would be weird to do a curved one right after those and there are no weird noises to fit it.
00:20:510 (5) - why it does even there, try to at least place it on clear point, so it not bothering too much even if the jump get pressed Fixed
00:24:700 (1) - actually just a circle slider enough Fixed
00:31:572 (1) - since you make trips after why not play with 2 cirlce instead so theres more movement for cusor I think this is fine
00:37:103 (3,4) - ctrl+g? idk it feel a bit boring with stacked circle on slider head especially when it get NCed personally I think the circle behind the stream is better XD
01:08:108 (9) - isnt this supposed to NCed? Fixed
01:13:807 (3) - idk, its too short from (2) too sharp to (4) maybe put it somewhere else I think thje current set is fine
01:20:929 (8) - welp, i would just stack (9) here instead tho, its a pain on dt lol if its stacked its harder to read
01:44:980 (1) - ctrl+g, just to make variant Its the same sound that repeats 3 times so I wanted it to be the same spacing and plays the same.

afterall I could enjoy the insane from mid to end but the start just feel a bit pushed to fit. maybe some simple pattern will lead it better. goodluck

Tks Neosky

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Insane]
00:07:270 (6,1) - Unstack them? can be better for music. This is because it is the calm part of the music , I did it consistently aswell on that section
00:08:946 (6) - NC Fixed
00:14:309 (1) - Make bigger DS for emphasize it. this part has strong drum sound. Fixed
00:25:371 (1,2,3,4) - DS looks too big many players can read it as 1/2. I think its fine
00:27:885 (6,7) - make lower DS like others, consistency is more important than blanket. yes but the DS is around the same for all three 00:27:885 (6,7,8) -
00:29:058 (1,2) - Yea, too big Ds to read, too. This is fine
00:31:739 - make it clickable? for music. Fixed
00:41:293 (1,2) - why this part has stack? you didn't try stack at other parts. it is because during the kiai time there will be a lot more of them stacked
00:53:695 (2,3) - Why this part doesn't have antijump? not so good for consistency. Just feels better
01:14:309 (5,6) - make bigger DS for emphasize. I think this is fine
01:21:013 (9) - stack with 8 for better reading. it would be weird for stacking it

GL

Tks Pyro

PyroBear wrote:
[Normal]
00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whole part seems too complex for Normal I think its fine
00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Insane]
00:49:672 (7,1) - Can be confused for double (there's quite a few sliders like this, I think you can find it for yourself)If there are a few more like those that means its intentional and after players seeing the first one they will know how to act for the others as well

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,130 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-09-02T05:38:47+00:00

hello~
using english to all gders hope it's ok as i don't know if you guys are available in chinese or not lol
and seems i have posted just after your post so if you have already fixed issues i mentioned in my mod, just ignore them

General
1920x1136 bg exceeds the size limit of bg (<1920x1080). maybe you need to change another one
Unused hitsounds: normal-sliderslide3.wav

Normal
try od4?
many ds are unconsistent (means not between 1.05x and 1.14x), better check them manually (as aimod doesn't tell all of them usually). not sure if you are intentional though
00:06:265 (6,1) - swap nc?
00:08:946 (4,1) - ^
(Generally, your nc setting feels a little bit mess up. I suggest to set nc each two long white lines, that would work much better.)
00:19:002 (4) - you can use a 1/4 slider here so that rhythm here can represent the song better
00:27:382 (3) - rotate 180 degree for a better look (visual ds enter 00:27:382 (3,5) - is not that good now)
00:36:432 (7) - ^ (visual ds enter 00:36:432 (7,1) - is kinda meh) and clockwise rotate 90 degree can solve that problem
01:12:801 (1) - ^ and rotate 180 degree (it can make flow here better too)
00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - way too messy. try not rotate your objects around by a same center when the ar is low (and tbh it's not good to do so too even if the ar is high). my advices:
- anti-clockwise rotate 00:43:807 (2) - for 90 degree
- and rearrange your objects at 00:45:818 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - . heres one of my choice: (main idea is get them out of the "circle" of 00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so no need to strictly follow my advice)

~

01:21:348 (1,2,3) - also a little messy. (01:20:343 (4,1) - touched a little bit) one of my choice (one which is easier to fix):

~

01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - looks cool but a little lack of aesthetic. maybe you can try this one: (once you apply that, adjust the position of 01:52:857 (3,4,5) - too)

~

Deppy
00:13:304 - add a note here? that blank in a small wub part seems kinda empty

GIDZ
01:03:918 (1) - maybe avoid using 1/8 reverse slider in hard is better... you can just use a 3/2 slider with special shape or something here
01:11:293 (6) - ^
soooo many straight sliders aligned in a straight line zzzzzz

Starfy
00:17:996 (6,7,1,2,3) - rhythm is kinda weird. try this one?

~

(here 00:18:164 (8,10) - can represent two wub sounds better)

fk that's so amazing i love it even it seems like a 4.5* insane for me

Insane
nc issue is the same as what i mentioned in normal diff
00:15:985 (2) - ctrl+g for better emphasizing and flow
00:21:851 (7,1) - give it more space? emphasizing seems not enough
00:20:008 (2,3,4,5) - flow here seems a little inexplicable... i have something cool (easier to fix though) for you:

~

01:14:309 (5) - try to give it more space with 01:14:477 (6) - ...... put it at 289|103 or something
01:25:538 (6) - using 3/4 slider+1note just like what you have done at 01:14:812 (7,8) -
01:31:237 (7) - ctrl+g for a better flow
01:32:075 (3) - maybe need to add a nc
01:34:337 (1,1) - and those two ncs can be canceled as here the vocal and the drum beat is a small ensemble

gl :3

ts8zs

2,124 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2017-09-02T10:29:54+00:00

from queue.ts8zs.com
sorry about the delay.
[Insane]
rename to Extra or Expert?
00:03:918 (2,3,4) - make them in a line?
00:24:700 (1) - 1/4 longer
00:26:041 (5) - 1/4 shorter cause of
00:27:214 - I think this drum is too strong for ignore.
00:29:728 (4) - ^
00:34:253 (1) - 1/4 shorter cause the drum and slider end at whiteline is enough for show the vocal,you did this in 00:35:594 (8) -
00:36:767 - remove nc
00:37:103 - swap nc with 00:37:438 -
00:38:443 (7,1) - ^
01:01:069 (9,1) - swap nc and other simmilar places? like 00:24:533 (5,1) -
01:14:309 (5,6) - this distance is too short for an antiflow how about move 01:14:309 (5) - to 268,144
[Starfy]
00:06:097 (5,1) - swap nc and other simmilar parts? like 00:12:801 (4,1) -
00:07:438 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995738 I think this more fits music,it makes a long distance for 00:07:773 - 00:08:443 - vocal
00:32:075 (2) - 1/4 shorter?
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why this pattern?
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why this pattern?
01:34:337 (4) - sv x0.9?
01:55:036 - spinner stop here?
00:41:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think repeats without reason will make confusing,but this is only my opinion.
[GIDZ]
00:06:097 (7,1) - swap nc and other simmilar places like 01:15:818 (6,1) -
00:06:097 (7) - circles instead?
00:14:980 (3,4) - move to 00:15:147 - ?
00:38:946 (2,3) - this may blanket better
01:03:918 (1) - this is not suitable
01:28:555 (3,4,5,6) - unreadable
[Deppy]
00:01:572 (1,2,3) - cause 00:02:233 - 00:02:875 - vocal is not snapped,I don't recomend circle here,use reverse slider like other diffs maybe a good idea
01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - normal?
01:26:712 (1) - remove a reverse and 01:27:717 - a circle
01:27:885 - 1/1 reverse slider
01:52:019 (4) - 104,88
01:53:527 (1) - add a reverse
[Normal]
00:24:700 (6) - 1/2 longer
00:26:376 - to 00:47:829 - follow the drum may better.there are too many long chain.
01:12:801 - ^
[Link]
00:18:668 (1) - remove 3rd and 4th point,they may confusing new players.
01:40:119 (1) - ^
01:38:611 (2) - this could fix better

Petal

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Petal 2017-09-02T16:51:28+00:00

Please redownload!

byd

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byd 2017-09-02T18:59:54+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Link]
00:18:668 (1) - remove 3rd and 4th point,they may confusing new players.
01:40:119 (1) - ^
01:38:611 (2) - this could fix better i think they're all fine.

ty anyway

coco

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coco 2017-09-02T19:03:07+00:00

from q
[Insane]
during the kiai there are a lot of noticeable background beats that u miss cuz u follow vocals. imo if u follow the instruments it would be more fun

01:54:030 (1) - exact same note as 01:53:527 (1,2,3) so y r u emphasizing?
00:19:170 (1,2) - 3/4 all of a sudden is hard to read ik there arent sounds but maybe extend 1 by a tick for readability?
00:53:695 (2) - y no stack like the rest
00:59:058 (2) - ^
00:56:879 (4) - y stacked? note doesnt start on this beat. instead can just do 00:53:695 (2,3)
01:03:248 (8) - sliderend on strong beat
01:14:812 (7,8) and 01:25:538 (6) - same sound differently mapped
01:38:611 (1) - fix stack
01:42:131 (1,1) - i think like this emphasizes more

did this before i updated so there might be some outdated stuff

Faputa

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Faputa 2017-09-03T03:31:06+00:00

From my Queue,

[General]
➱Unused storyboard file: sb\bg.jpg
➱Inconsistency in Kiai time: Fourth kiai in all the difficulties should all start on 01:32:410 and ends at 01:34:589. However, only the insane difficulty ends it at 01:34:672
➱Consider adding "Deppy" and “Link” to all of your tags as well.
➱background image is 1920x1080, but the recommended size is 1024x768.
➱BPM before 00:03:583- may not be consistent with the overall BPM as the second and third sounds by the vocal should be snapped in ⅛ with this BPM.

[Link's Easy]
➱00:38:947 (4) - This one lands in red tick. Will it be confusing considering it is the difficulty for the new players? Why not make it like what you did in 00:30:400 (3) - a 1/1 reverse slider? Or if you want variety, a circle plus a 1/1 slider is also okay.
➱00:41:629 (4) - This one however, I think you can change it so it starts from 00:41:460- and ends at what it currently ends at. So that you can still keep a similar rhythm while making 00:42:299 (1) - more natural to hit.
➱01:02:411 (2) - I recommend changing this slider to a circle at 01:02:242- and a 1/1 slider at 01:02:577- . That way this would not be too awkward and still performing a good rhythm.
➱01:10:288 (3,1) - Fix blanket. Slightly.
➱01:38:611 (2) - Too much turning point is being used. Which makes it actually not a perfect curve. I think something like this is enough:

less turning point version

➱01:51:851 (3,4) - These two sliders’ placement are badly designed when the first three kick sliders are pointing to the left. Consider making it so that 4 can also point in that way.

[Normal]
➱00:04:589 (3,4,5) - The pattern is crowdy for normal difficulty. It can confuse players.
➱00:06:265 (6) - You should better start the NC here instead of 00:07:438 (1) -
➱00:25:036 (7) - Move this so that it forms the angle with (6) just like what the previous two sliders (5) and (6) forms.
➱00:36:432 (7) - consider rotating it using Ctrl+Shift+R, selection centre, 90°. This should make your feature pattern more representative.
➱00:43:807 (2,3,4) - This seems crowded again, and 00:44:477 (4) - is not parallel with 00:43:807 (2) - too, which may make it a bit weird.
➱01:12:801 (1) - consider Ctrl+G this and make it distance snap again. Having the direction of the slider pointing directly opposite to the next note is not recommended for a normal difficulty.
➱01:16:656 (3) - I prefer a curve slider here.
➱01:17:829 (6,7,8) - Crowded pattern just as 00:04:589 (3,4,5) - . Maybe overlay (7) to (8).
➱01:21:348 (1,2,3) - Seriously too crowded.
➱01:27:717 (4,5) - Again, overlay them.
➱01:50:175 (4) - Same as 00:25:036 (7) -
➱01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - Consider changing the design of these.

[Deppy's Advanced]
➱00:09:617 (1,2) - Feel like they can definitely be better placed.
➱00:32:075 (1) - This slider can be done better as well.
➱00:33:751 (4,1) - Very bad overlapping of sliders.
➱00:44:477 (4,1) - Again.
➱01:12:801 (1,2,3) - Too close to the corner?
➱01:15:985 (1) - Make this a 4/1 reverse slider just like what you did in 01:26:712 (1) -
➱01:21:348 (1,2) - Bad overlapping
➱01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - A L-shaped circle quadruple is not good as it looks like 2010, a C-shaped should do.
➱01:28:220 (3,4) - Bad incline angle for (4)
➱01:49:505 (2,3,4) - Move the whole pattern downwards to allow 4 to have the same angle formed by 01:49:505 (2,3) -

[GIDZ's Hard]
➱00:06:265 (1,2) - Make the slider shapes of these to 00:03:583 (1,2) - , or vice versa. It allows to be curved because the vocal swings.
➱00:15:985 (3) - Fix the placement of it.
➱00:47:829 (1) - I feel like you can move this to a lower position.
➱00:50:343 (6,1) - Is there a reason to overlap them? Why not make them as separate as in 00:55:706 (6,1) - ?
➱00:52:522 (5,6,1) - Also here.
➱00:58:220 (6,1) - You should not overlay them as most of the other overlays are 1/2s and 1/4s, but not 1/1.
➱01:09:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it should be better if you do something like:

image

➱01:12:801 (7) - NC this. Keep the NC at 01:13:304 (1) - by the way.
➱01:20:678 (3) - Unsnapped slider end!!
➱01:29:058 (6,1) - Again, you should not overlay them like this.
➱01:32:075 (1,2) - Also here.
➱01:39:449 (4,5) - Why not make (5) just like (4)?

[Starfy's Light Insane]
➱00:02:242 (1,1) - As mentioned on the General part, they should be snapped to ⅛ or just change the BPM.
➱00:32:075 (2) - You should better end this slider at 00:32:577-
➱00:42:801 (2) - Also here.
➱01:16:991 (6,1) - Move (6) lower, or move (1) higher.

That’s all! Thanks for requesting
Good luck with the mapset

Eir_DELETED

Eir_DELETED 2017-09-03T06:42:41+00:00

A n o t h e r　o n e

General

unused hitsound: normal-sliderslide3.wav
unused file: sb\BG.jpg

Link's Easy

In general, NC patterns are randomly a bit. Those patterns should be inserted consistently like lower difficulties. i recommend you try to recheck and replace them at the whole. also would be better to add NC each 2 measures(8 beat).
NC
remove NC: 00:12:969 (1) - 00:18:668 (1) - 00:33:081 (1) - 01:10:623 (1) - 01:34:086 (1) - 01:49:505 (1) -
00:19:506 (1) - i feel kinda weird rhythm since 00:19:672 - 's cymbal should be clickable than 00:19:505 - 's sound and it causes unplayable well for beginners. moreover, you havent been clickable the same sound on 00:19:170 - . i suggest you replace just a circle on 00:19:672 - and dont forget to add NC together.
00:26:377 (1) - why dont you consist with 00:37:103 (1,2) - on the rhythm. well... the best of issue on the diff, there are pretty inconsistency rhythms patterns in my view. the inconsistency rhythms cause randomly NC patterns. you would be better to find more effective mods from mappers or modders.
01:07:941 (3) - should avoid touching HP bar about default skin
01:34:086 (1,1,2,3) - i cant recommend the flow since it's so messy for aesthetics. According to RC's guild line, should avoid the overlap. probably you can make a flow opposite current one.
01:43:974 (2) - dunno what you are following any sounds on 01:44:477 - . try the rhythm below. or if you wanna reduce the density, you would better to remove just a "2" circle.
SPOILER

Normal

Essential mention are same as Easy. i seem the diff has some issues about rhythm, consistency, overlap and NC patterns. i leave out the stuffs for duplication. however if you dont sure what i am indicating the stuffs concretely, please don't hesitate to call me.

GIDZ's Hard

01:11:293 (6) - can you extend the slider to 01:11:963 - or shorten to 01:11:879 - like other diffs?
01:12:801 (7) - add NC? so that i assume it's more suitable for your NC pattern.

Insane

you forget to mute a lot of slider ends. i dont know how the difference of slider ends which are muted and not. if you are lazy to add green lines for muted them, probably you would make sense to remove present green lines for same purpose.
00:37:103 (10,1) - swap NC?
01:42:382 (6) - the slider is kinda gimmicky imo. i recommend you add NC here since players can notice changing sv suddenly.
01:47:829 (5) - plz consistency with 01:42:382 (6) - ,as i hear like they are same sound.

rest diffs are fine in my view
Good Luck

Starfy

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Joined November 2012

Starfy 2017-09-03T10:30:35+00:00

Ryuusei Aika

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Starfy
00:17:996 (6,7,1,2,3) - rhythm is kinda weird. try this one? Cool, fixed
(here 00:18:164 (8,10) - can represent two wub sounds better)

fk that's so amazing i love it even it seems like a 4.5* insane for me Thank you

ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
[Starfy]
00:06:097 (5,1) - swap nc and other simmilar parts? like 00:12:801 (4,1) - But it doesn't match my NC pattern
00:07:438 (1,2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8995738 I think this more fits music,it makes a long distance for 00:07:773 - 00:08:443 - vocal OHH YOU ARE RIGHT, FIXED
00:32:075 (2) - 1/4 shorter? Fixed
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why this pattern? It used for build up the rhythm by beginning with sparse pattern to intense rhythm
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why this pattern? To follow what I did in 01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
01:34:337 (4) - sv x0.9? Not really necessary imo... The sound didn't change dramatically so it seems awkward if I NC it
01:55:036 - spinner stop here? There are some sounds that appear after that sound
00:41:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think repeats without reason will make confusing,but this is only my opinion. It doesn't due to the approach rate

jack1817

jack1817 wrote:
[Starfy's Light Insane]
➱00:02:242 (1,1) - As mentioned on the General part, they should be snapped to ⅛ or just change the BPM. It is acceptable since "offset" should be snapped to the background music instead of vocal. It's really common to say some delays in vocal and it doesn't really significant
➱00:32:075 (2) - You should better end this slider at 00:32:577- Fixed in the previous mod
➱00:42:801 (2) - Also here. Fixed in the previous mod
➱01:16:991 (6,1) - Move (6) lower, or move (1) higher. I did this deliberately to fit the strong sound here

Thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/xqpuS/e321aefccc.rar

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-03T16:10:57+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
hello~
using english to all gders hope it's ok as i don't know if you guys are available in chinese or not lol
and seems i have posted just after your post so if you have already fixed issues i mentioned in my mod, just ignore them :D

General
1920x1136 bg exceeds the size limit of bg (<1920x1080). maybe you need to change another one Fixed BG size to 1920x1080
Unused hitsounds: normal-sliderslide3.wav I think this is used in Easy diff

Normal
try od4? Good idea
many ds are unconsistent (means not between 1.05x and 1.14x), better check them manually (as aimod doesn't tell all of them usually). not sure if you are intentional though Fixed all inconsistent DS
00:06:265 (6,1) - swap nc? Fixed
00:08:946 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
(Generally, your nc setting feels a little bit mess up. I suggest to set nc each two long white lines, that would work much better.) I fixed NCs
00:19:002 (4) - you can use a 1/4 slider here so that rhythm here can represent the song better Fixed
00:27:382 (3) - rotate 180 degree for a better look (visual ds enter 00:27:382 (3,5) - is not that good now) Fixed
00:36:432 (7) - ^ (visual ds enter 00:36:432 (7,1) - is kinda meh) and clockwise rotate 90 degree can solve that problem 01:12:801 (1) - ^ and rotate 180 degree (it can make flow here better too)
00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - way too messy. try not rotate your objects around by a same center when the ar is low (and tbh it's not good to do so too even if the ar is high). my advices:
- anti-clockwise rotate 00:43:807 (2) - for 90 degree
- and rearrange your objects at 00:45:818 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - . heres one of my choice: (main idea is get them out of the "circle" of 00:43:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so no need to strictly follow my advice) I think I made it better now
~
Fixed already
01:21:348 (1,2,3) - also a little messy. (01:20:343 (4,1) - touched a little bit) one of my choice (one which is easier to fix):
~
tks FIxed
01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - looks cool but a little lack of aesthetic. maybe you can try this one: (once you apply that, adjust the position of 01:52:857 (3,4,5) - too)
~
Thanks

Insane
nc issue is the same as what i mentioned in normal diff Fixed in other mod
00:15:985 (2) - ctrl+g for better emphasizing and flow I guess that would work
00:21:851 (7,1) - give it more space? emphasizing seems not enough I think this is okay already
00:20:008 (2,3,4,5) - flow here seems a little inexplicable... i have something cool (easier to fix though) for you:
~
I'm confused here lol
01:14:309 (5) - try to give it more space with 01:14:477 (6) - ...... put it at 289|103 or something I think is okay
01:25:538 (6) - using 3/4 slider+1note just like what you have done at 01:14:812 (7,8) - Fixed
01:31:237 (7) - ctrl+g for a better flow Looks weird when I ctrl g
01:32:075 (3) - maybe need to add a nc Fixed in other mod
01:34:337 (1,1) - and those two ncs can be canceled as here the vocal and the drum beat is a small ensemble Fixed in other mod

gl :3

tks Aika

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-03T16:27:54+00:00

tks ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:
from queue.ts8zs.com
sorry about the delay.
[Insane]
rename to Extra or Expert? its not over 5.2 yet at least I don't think so
00:03:918 (2,3,4) - make them in a line? I think making them in a line is too boring
00:24:700 (1) - 1/4 longer Fixed when you PMed me
00:26:041 (5) - 1/4 shorter cause of I think this is fine
00:27:214 - I think this drum is too strong for ignore. trying to follow the vocal as much as possible
00:29:728 (4) - ^ hmmm
00:34:253 (1) - 1/4 shorter cause the drum and slider end at whiteline is enough for show the vocal,you did this in 00:35:594 (8) - Fixed
00:36:767 - remove nc
00:37:103 - swap nc with 00:37:438 -
00:38:443 (7,1) - ^
01:01:069 (9,1) - swap nc and other simmilar places? like 00:24:533 (5,1) -
01:14:309 (5,6) - this distance is too short for an antiflow how about move 01:14:309 (5) - to 268,144 Good idea
[Normal]
00:24:700 (6) - 1/2 longer Fixed
00:26:376 - to 00:47:829 - follow the drum may better.there are too many long chain. Fixed
01:12:801 - ^ I think the rhythm here is dense enough to follow vocals

BTW TY FOR NC FIXES

tks cococococo

cococolaco wrote:
from q
[Insane]
during the kiai there are a lot of noticeable background beats that u miss cuz u follow vocals. imo if u follow the instruments it would be more fun I think its too late now lol and I like following vocals

01:54:030 (1) - exact same note as 01:53:527 (1,2,3) so y r u emphasizing? because instruments end here 01:55:036 -
00:19:170 (1,2) - 3/4 all of a sudden is hard to read ik there arent sounds but maybe extend 1 by a tick for readability? I made the spacing wider so its not that hard to read
00:53:695 (2) - y no stack like the rest Forgot this one
00:59:058 (2) - ^ because the song is getting more intense
00:56:879 (4) - y stacked? note doesnt start on this beat. instead can just do 00:53:695 (2,3) would be boring
01:03:248 (8) - sliderend on strong beat I don't hear the strong beat
01:14:812 (7,8) and 01:25:538 (6) - same sound differently mapped Fixed in other mod
01:38:611 (1) - fix stack I do this all the time during the map
01:42:131 (1,1) - i think like this emphasizes more I think the current is fine

did this before i updated so there might be some outdated stuff

tks jackkk

jack1817 wrote:
From my Queue,

[General]
➱Unused storyboard file: sb\bg.jpg Fixed
➱Inconsistency in Kiai time: Fourth kiai in all the difficulties should all start on 01:32:410 and ends at 01:34:589. However, only the insane difficulty ends it at 01:34:672 Fixed
➱Consider adding "Deppy" and “Link” to all of your tags as well. yes thank you
➱background image is 1920x1080, but the recommended size is 1024x768. Fixed in earlier mod but thanks!
➱BPM before 00:03:583- may not be consistent with the overall BPM as the second and third sounds by the vocal should be snapped in ⅛ with this BPM. I just followed the timing points on other map and its fine I think

[Normal]
➱00:04:589 (3,4,5) - The pattern is crowdy for normal difficulty. It can confuse players. Fixed
➱00:06:265 (6) - You should better start the NC here instead of 00:07:438 (1) - Fixed in other mod thank~!
➱00:25:036 (7) - Move this so that it forms the angle with (6) just like what the previous two sliders (5) and (6) forms. Completely changed this in other mod!
➱00:36:432 (7) - consider rotating it using Ctrl+Shift+R, selection centre, 90°. This should make your feature pattern more representative. Fixed
➱00:43:807 (2,3,4) - This seems crowded again, and 00:44:477 (4) - is not parallel with 00:43:807 (2) - too, which may make it a bit weird. Completely changed in other mod!
➱01:12:801 (1) - consider Ctrl+G this and make it distance snap again. Having the direction of the slider pointing directly opposite to the next note is not recommended for a normal difficulty.Fixed in other mod too
➱01:16:656 (3) - I prefer a curve slider here. Fixed
➱01:17:829 (6,7,8) - Crowded pattern just as 00:04:589 (3,4,5) - . Maybe overlay (7) to (8). Fixed
➱01:21:348 (1,2,3) - Seriously too crowded. I think I made it better
➱01:27:717 (4,5) - Again, overlay them. Fixed
➱01:50:175 (4) - Same as 00:25:036 (7) - Changed it in other mods
➱01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - Consider changing the design of these. Changed in other mod

tks Joker

joker- wrote:
A n o t h e r　o n e
General
unused hitsound: normal-sliderslide3.wav I think this is used in Easy diff
unused file: sb\BG.jpg
Fixed
Normal
Essential mention are same as Easy. i seem the diff has some issues about rhythm, consistency, overlap and NC patterns. i leave out the stuffs for duplication. however if you dont sure what i am indicating the stuffs concretely, please don't hesitate to call me.
I think I remapped the messy parts and fixed a bit of NCs from other mods I think this should be fine
Insane
you forget to mute a lot of slider ends. i dont know how the difference of slider ends which are muted and not. if you are lazy to add green lines for muted them, probably you would make sense to remove present green lines for same purpose. I added a lot more green lines , the rest are either hitsounded or not muted in the kiai time
00:37:103 (10,1) - swap NC? Fixed
01:42:382 (6) - the slider is kinda gimmicky imo. i recommend you add NC here since players can notice changing sv suddenly. Fixed
01:47:829 (5) - plz consistency with 01:42:382 (6) - ,as i hear like they are same sound. Fixed

rest diffs are fine in my view
Good Luck

Last edited by Petal 2017-09-03T17:15:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

GIDZ

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Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-03T17:11:47+00:00

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
hello~

GIDZ
01:03:918 (1) - maybe avoid using 1/8 reverse slider in hard is better... you can just use a 3/2 slider with special shape or something here
01:11:293 (6) - ^
soooo many straight sliders aligned in a straight line zzzzzz

Both fixed~

ts8zs wrote:
from queue.ts8zs.com
[GIDZ]
00:06:097 (7,1) - swap nc and other simmilar places like 01:15:818 (6,1) - No, that will make my patterns inconsistent
00:06:097 (7) - circles instead? The song does not give the intensity for circles here imo
00:14:980 (3,4) - move to 00:15:147 - ? Why lol, I think the current one makes more sense..
00:38:946 (2,3) - this may blanket better Have to consider the distance snap here so this is the best blanket without making the slider shape too weird
01:03:918 (1) - this is not suitable Fixed in prev mod
01:28:555 (3,4,5,6) - unreadable I think its fine since its spaced evenly

jack1817 wrote:
[GIDZ's Hard]
➱00:06:265 (1,2) - Make the slider shapes of these to 00:03:583 (1,2) - , or vice versa. It allows to be curved because the vocal swings. lol I think straight sliders work too since they are both 1/2s anyways and slow
➱00:15:985 (3) - Fix the placement of it. Moved it down a bit for better flow
➱00:47:829 (1) - I feel like you can move this to a lower position. It's DSed .-.
➱00:50:343 (6,1) - Is there a reason to overlap them? Why not make them as separate as in 00:55:706 (6,1) - ? The flow goes downwards from slider 5, thats why I've placed 00:50:510 (1) - down
➱00:52:522 (5,6,1) - Also here. The overlap is fine imo as long as it's not overlapping the head
➱00:58:220 (6,1) - You should not overlay them as most of the other overlays are 1/2s and 1/4s, but not 1/1. Yea but the music changes here and transitions into a build up, therefore I stacked the note to emphasize that the map patterns are changing like the song
➱01:09:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think it should be better if you do something like: Fixed
image
➱01:12:801 (7) - NC this. Keep the NC at 01:13:304 (1) - by the way. That looks weird to me and I wanna keep my NCs on the downbeat consistent
➱01:20:678 (3) - Unsnapped slider end!! It's 1/3 lmao
➱01:29:058 (6,1) - Again, you should not overlay them like this. Im just trying to emphasize the song transitions by stacking lol
➱01:32:075 (1,2) - Also here. The music suggests a puase here tho..
➱01:39:449 (4,5) - Why not make (5) just like (4)? I want the make the flow go down

joker- wrote:
A n o t h e r　o n e

GIDZ's Hard
01:11:293 (6) - can you extend the slider to 01:11:963 - or shorten to 01:11:879 - like other diffs? I didnt map the other diffs lol so the concepts might differ xd
01:12:801 (7) - add NC? so that i assume it's more suitable for your NC pattern. I wanna keep NC pattern consistent on downbeat :v

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Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2017-09-04T14:55:53+00:00

IRC log

2017-09-04 22:19 - Matha -: hiiii
2017-09-04 22:19 - Matha -: should I remap normal diff lol
2017-09-04 22:19 - Matha -: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1389012 DJ TOTTO feat. Sunao Yoshikawa - Arousing [Normal]]
2017-09-04 22:21 - Matha -: I feel like no good ;w;
2017-09-04 22:22 - Matha -: 跟返drum sound 應該會好啲?
2017-09-04 22:25 - Matha -: 而家好似跟一半vocal跟一半drum sound lol
2017-09-04 22:27 Starfy: ohh hello
2017-09-04 22:30 Starfy: 盡量跟人聲, 有強既Drum/Downbeat先map
2017-09-04 22:30 Starfy: e.g. add a note hereee 00:26:376 -
2017-09-04 22:31 - Matha -: ok
2017-09-04 22:32 Starfy: 00:27:382 (2,3) - try => http://puu.sh/xrleW/8e31bdd32b.jpg
2017-09-04 22:32 Starfy: 00:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
2017-09-04 22:33 Starfy: wait http://puu.sh/xrlid/8a4e3154b2.jpg 呢個好d
2017-09-04 22:34 - Matha -: 00:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for this?
2017-09-04 22:34 Starfy: yes
2017-09-04 22:34 Starfy: kiai個rhythm pattern冇咩問題
2017-09-04 22:35 - Matha -: 重整DS?
2017-09-04 22:36 - Matha -: overlap 好似好難看
2017-09-04 22:36 Starfy: 你指邊到既DS?
2017-09-04 22:37 - Matha -: 00:32:745 (1,2,3,4) - 你唔覺得好似好亂咩？
2017-09-04 22:37 - Matha -: lol
2017-09-04 22:40 Starfy: http://puu.sh/xrlx0/875caf3b22.jpg
2017-09-04 22:40 Starfy: 00:32:745 (1) - cancel NC and NC 00:33:080 (2) - btw
2017-09-04 22:40 Starfy: xd
2017-09-04 22:41 - Matha -: NC here? 00:32:074 (1) -
2017-09-04 22:41 - Matha -: oh nvm
2017-09-04 22:43 - Matha -: should I stack 00:24:198 (4,5) -
2017-09-04 22:44 Starfy: stack好似好睇d :O
2017-09-04 22:44 Starfy: maybe http://puu.sh/xrlGk/2a973963bf.jpg
2017-09-04 22:44 - Matha -: yaya
2017-09-04 22:47 - Matha -: 咁我其他係咪都應該唔放開
2017-09-04 22:47 - Matha -: stack all of them?
2017-09-04 22:49 Starfy: 唔使stack全部,睇情況啦w
2017-09-04 22:49 Starfy: 如果覺得可能有少少亂就stack
2017-09-04 22:49 - Matha -: ok!
2017-09-04 22:49 - Matha -: 明白
2017-09-04 22:50 - Matha -: post on fourm 4 kuds?
2017-09-04 22:50 Starfy: ohh okay xdd

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-04T14:58:41+00:00

hell mod

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-04T15:19:13+00:00

hell mod best mod

Rossi

690 posts

Joined January 2015

Rossi 2017-09-04T15:49:27+00:00

Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue

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I not find too many problem. ~~Did I a noob modder? xD lol~~
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Little Modding :
[Link's Easy]
00:05:930 (4) - I try to delete this object
00:08:946 (1) - change this to circle and without NC. NC will be put at 00:09:617 (2) -
00:18:668 (1) - repair this. Make it more varied
01:18:667 (1,2) - NC at 01:19:002 (2) -
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[Deppy's Advanced]
00:19:002 (3,4,5,1) - Put it more varied
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Good luck~!

coke bottle

271 posts

Joined May 2017

coke bottle 2017-09-05T07:02:45+00:00

hihi from my q

General

Change BPM offset to 1,572. Then open AI Mod and snap all objects using the timing section located at the top

Linkin's Easy

01:53:527 (2) - Alternative: Change to 2 1/2 sliders?

Normal

Try not to use sliders with more than 1 reverse in normal diff's. I mean if u used that a lot in the level that's fine but since it's the first one, change to 1/2 slider with one repeat and circle at 01:54:030 -

GIDZ's Hard

01:10:622 (5) - change to 3 1/ sliders with repeats each cuz there is some map potential in there
01:12:801 (6) - NC this also
01:29:728 (2) - ^

Insane

00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nice

NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE LEMME GIVE U A STAR

Deppyforce

1,990 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-09-05T14:51:26+00:00

PyroBear wrote:
[Advanced]
00:16:991 (1) - Even amount of repeats feel weird doesnt mean its bad and it follows the song properly
00:22:355 (1) - ^
01:05:259 Sound here feels too important to be a sliderend not rly necessary but sure
01:26:712 (1) - Same as first point
01:42:801 (1) - ^ I feel like this should be circles instead of a slider na i prefer this
01:48:164 (1) - Even amount of repeats

Ryuusei Aika wrote:
Deppy
00:13:304 - add a note here? that blank in a small wub part seems kinda empty no

ts8zs wrote:
[Deppy]
00:01:572 (1,2,3) - cause 00:02:233 - 00:02:875 - vocal is not snapped,I don't recomend circle here,use reverse slider like other diffs maybe a good idea na i needed this to introduce the 2/1 rhythm stack usage in the map after
01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - normal? maybe
01:26:712 (1) - remove a reverse and 01:27:717 - a circle no
01:27:885 - 1/1 reverse slider na think current one can emphasize instruments with 01:28:220 - better even tho ik woob thing dont exactly start there i just think this works better
01:52:019 (4) - 104,88 no
01:53:527 (1) - add a reverse no

jack1817 wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]
➱00:09:617 (1,2) - Feel like they can definitely be better placed. its wat i want
➱00:32:075 (1) - This slider can be done better as well. its wat i want
➱00:33:751 (4,1) - Very bad overlapping of sliders. its wat i want
➱00:44:477 (4,1) - Again. its wat i want
➱01:12:801 (1,2,3) - Too close to the corner? its wat i want
➱01:15:985 (1) - Make this a 4/1 reverse slider just like what you did in 01:26:712 (1) - made other one 3/1 instead to emphasize kiai
➱01:21:348 (1,2) - Bad overlapping its wat i want
➱01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - A L-shaped circle quadruple is not good as it looks like 2010, a C-shaped should do. its wat i want
➱01:28:220 (3,4) - Bad incline angle for (4) its wat i want+ revamped pattern
➱01:49:505 (2,3,4) - Move the whole pattern downwards to allow 4 to have the same angle formed by 01:49:505 (2,3) - flow change actualy emphasize sound change on dat better so its fine

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]
00:19:002 (3,4,5,1) - Put it more varied no

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 72801
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.5

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Title:Arousing
TitleUnicode:Arousing
Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. Sunao Yoshikawa
ArtistUnicode:DJ TOTTO feat. 吉河順央
Creator:- Matha -
Version:Deppy's Advanced
Source:jubeat saucer
Tags:REFLEC BEAT colette spring GIDZ Starfy Deppyforce Bite you death Link Deppy
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BeatmapSetID:652525

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.7
OverallDifficulty:5.1
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GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-07T15:49:24+00:00

Reynolduh wrote:
GIDZ's Hard
01:10:622 (5) - change to 3 1/ sliders with repeats each cuz there is some map potential in there I wanna follow the roll in the music but since I cant use 1/6 reverse so I used 1/4s to simplify the rhythm, 3 1/1s are too bland in rhythm imo for this part.
01:12:801 (6) - NC this also ok
01:29:728 (2) - ^ Not this one since there is no pattern or SV change.

Tks for mod~

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GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-07T16:35:52+00:00

Second post just to mod the insane~

General

Tags conflict in Derpyfork's diff
BG.jpg missing again .-.
White or Black not recommended as a combo colour pls change

Insane

00:15:818 (2) - I think u can stack on 00:15:985 (3) - end cuz the distance right now feels weird
00:19:170 (1,2) - I think u can clean up the aesthetics here, maybe like http://puu.sh/xtPok/483b6dce43.jpg ?
00:20:510 (5) - This feels too close imo due to how u've increased distance for each note at 00:20:008 (2,3,4) - , I think u can stack it on 00:19:672 (1) - head.
00:20:678 (1) - The angle is too sharp imo, move it to the right and down a bit
00:21:348 (4) - This feels very close again cuz of the 1/4 kick slider jump earlier, I think u can move the note to 393,181 and then ctrl G 00:21:684 (6,7) -
00:23:527 (2) - It's overlapping the head a bit, move it up
00:25:036 (1) - Why not extend this slider to the blue tick like the prevs ones?
00:27:047 (4,5,2,3) - Inconsistencies in spacing the sliders when they have the same rhythmical gaps. I think u should just space 00:28:220 (3) - like 00:27:382 (5) - . http://puu.sh/xtPQh/f4584558da.jpg
00:30:064 (5) - This looks really ugly standing out like this, u could try smth like http://puu.sh/xtPSC/4415552f08.jpg
00:31:237 (4) - I think using a simple curve would look better here. http://puu.sh/xtPV3/bff8942b7b.jpg
01:03:918 (2) - Make this more symmetrical? http://puu.sh/xtQ1i/e32c683d5d.jpg
01:06:935 (2,3) - Why suddenly so far lol I dun hear anything in the music that complements this. Just smth simple? http://puu.sh/xtQ5G/4177073fd8.jpg
01:13:136 (3) - Move this to 471,324 for a better angle for 01:13:304 (1) - ?
01:13:639 (2,3) - Would change their positions for better flow. http://puu.sh/xtQdh/db60a917d5.jpg
01:20:929 (4) - Why not just stack? xd
01:22:354 (5) - U can move this further imo, 411,348 looks good
01:25:036 (4) - Move to 140,111?
01:27:047 (6,7,8) - Could look better aesthetically imo, http://puu.sh/xtQkv/2c6bbe5f4f.jpg
01:42:382 (1) - Why not make it like http://puu.sh/xtQmt/3a42685447.jpg ?

I think overall u can clean up some aesthetics without ruining ur patterns too much and also check for some spacing issues across the map,
it doesnt have to be onsistent for the whole map but maybe between 3 notes or smth.

Edit:Starfy's light Insane: hell remap kds tks /runs

Last edited by GIDZ 2017-09-07T16:39:21+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Starfy

1,046 posts

Joined November 2012

Starfy 2017-09-07T16:38:20+00:00

Gee's mod

voynich

273 posts

Joined July 2014

voynich 2017-09-08T08:16:39+00:00

heyo

Insane

00:03:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - very messy placement.fix this part up.
00:06:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - angle these a bit like this

00:10:790 (3) - rotate this a bit,flat placement looks unpolished.
00:15:483 (1) - replace this with a beat,there's an important sound on 00:15:650 that's ignored and made a slider end (slider ends are passive,don't use slider ends when a beat is emphasized.)
00:18:332 (1,2) - i would add a green tick on the end of these sliders at 5% volume as to silence the slider end's hitsound.
00:19:672 (1) - lengthen this to 3/4 instead of 1/2.
00:21:013 (3) - ^
00:27:047 (4) - there's a beat on 00:27:214 that's completely ignored because the 3/4 slider is in the way.turn the slider into a 1/2 slider.
00:29:058 (1,2,3) - this is just weird.clean it up.

00:34:253 (1) - doesn't make sense to have this shape.
00:42:466 (2,3,4) - this doesn't match the rhythm of the actual song.
01:03:918 (2) - this needs a bit of a cleanup.
01:04:924 (3,4) - move these a bit.they don't fit the flow of the map when they're up there.
01:06:265 (7) - there is an important beat on the end of this slider.shorten the slider and add a beat where the slider ended before.
01:18:667 (9) - there should be a slow slider here instead of a normal beat.
01:19:672 (3) - blanket maybe with 01:19:002 (1) ?
01:20:678 (3,4,5) - this is weird.not gimmicky,just weird.
01:23:360 (5) - nc?
01:29:393 (9) - slow slider maybe?
01:32:075 (1) - rotate this a bit or maybe blanket on top of 01:32:410 (2) like this:

01:39:449 (5) - nc maybe
01:44:980 (2) - maybe flip this around.
mind if i ask to gd? (first 20 sec)

good map,good storyboard,good moves ethan keep it up proud of you

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-09T15:43:06+00:00

tks gee

- G I D Z - wrote:
Second post just to mod the insane~

General
Tags conflict in Derpyfork's diff Fixed
BG.jpg missing again .-. I don't see AI mod saying that zz
White or Black not recommended as a combo colour pls change Fixed

Insane
00:15:818 (2) - I think u can stack on 00:15:985 (3) - end cuz the distance right now feels weird I think if I stack these two together , there will be no movement needed and that would be werid since I placed before this was jumps (00:14:980 (3,4,5) - )
00:19:170 (1,2) - I think u can clean up the aesthetics here, maybe like http://puu.sh/xtPok/483b6dce43.jpg ?yes
00:20:510 (5) - This feels too close imo due to how u've increased distance for each note at 00:20:008 (2,3,4) - , I think u can stack it on 00:19:672 (1) - head. ya
00:20:678 (1) - The angle is too sharp imo, move it to the right and down a bit ya
00:21:348 (4) - This feels very close again cuz of the 1/4 kick slider jump earlier, I think u can move the note to 393,181 and then ctrl G 00:21:684 (6,7) - ya
00:23:527 (2) - It's overlapping the head a bit, move it up Fixed
00:25:036 (1) - Why not extend this slider to the blue tick like the prevs ones? ya
00:27:047 (4,5,2,3) - Inconsistencies in spacing the sliders when they have the same rhythmical gaps. I think u should just space 00:28:220 (3) - like 00:27:382 (5) - . http://puu.sh/xtPQh/f4584558da.jpg yes
00:30:064 (5) - This looks really ugly standing out like this, u could try smth like http://puu.sh/xtPSC/4415552f08.jpg Thanks for pic I changed it a little more
00:31:237 (4) - I think using a simple curve would look better here. http://puu.sh/xtPV3/bff8942b7b.jpg Might change this, cuz I used it here aswell 00:41:963 (4) -
01:03:918 (2) - Make this more symmetrical? http://puu.sh/xtQ1i/e32c683d5d.jpg I tried my best
01:06:935 (2,3) - Why suddenly so far lol I dun hear anything in the music that complements this. Just smth simple? http://puu.sh/xtQ5G/4177073fd8.jpg Fixed
01:13:136 (3) - Move this to 471,324 for a better angle for 01:13:304 (1) - ? Moved it a bit more downwards from ur pic
01:13:639 (2,3) - Would change their positions for better flow. http://puu.sh/xtQdh/db60a917d5.jpg Changed
01:20:929 (4) - Why not just stack? xd fine ;w;
01:22:354 (5) - U can move this further imo, 411,348 looks good I think the current one is fine , the angel from 5-6 looks weird if I change it and I don't want the jump to be 2 big
01:25:036 (4) - Move to 140,111? that works
01:27:047 (6,7,8) - Could look better aesthetically imo, http://puu.sh/xtQkv/2c6bbe5f4f.jpg I don't really like notes overlaps with slider ends at least don't look good to me . and if I move 8 upwards it will overlap with 1's sliderhead :ww
01:42:382 (1) - Why not make it like http://puu.sh/xtQmt/3a42685447.jpg ? Fixed

I think overall u can clean up some aesthetics without ruining ur patterns too much and also check for some spacing issues across the map,
it doesnt have to be onsistent for the whole map but maybe between 3 notes or smth.

Edit:Starfy's light Insane: hell remap kds tks /runs

I think this is better tbh https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/IVBlDKe.jpg

tks nishiki

-Nishiki- wrote:
heyo
Insane00:03:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - very messy placement.fix this part up. I think its fine, just following the same distance
00:06:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - angle these a bit like this Yes

00:10:790 (3) - rotate this a bit,flat placement looks unpolished. Placed it like this to kinda blanket with 00:09:617 (1) -
00:15:483 (1) - replace this with a beat,there's an important sound on 00:15:650 that's ignored and made a slider end (slider ends are passive,don't use slider ends when a beat is emphasized.) yes
00:18:332 (1,2) - i would add a green tick on the end of these sliders at 5% volume as to silence the slider end's hitsound.forgot these 2
00:19:672 (1) - lengthen this to 3/4 instead of 1/2. I don't see any reason to...
00:21:013 (3) - ^ ^
00:27:047 (4) - there's a beat on 00:27:214 that's completely ignored because the 3/4 slider is in the way.turn the slider into a 1/2 slider. I don't think beat matters here because I'm fully following the vocal
00:29:058 (1,2,3) - this is just weird.clean it up. blanketing that is weird imo

00:34:253 (1) - doesn't make sense to have this shape. Fixed
00:42:466 (2,3,4) - this doesn't match the rhythm of the actual song. Fixed
01:03:918 (2) - this needs a bit of a cleanup. Fixed in gee's mod
01:04:924 (3,4) - move these a bit.they don't fit the flow of the map when they're up there.I blanket 2 with 4
01:06:265 (7) - there is an important beat on the end of this slider.shorten the slider and add a beat where the slider ended before.Fixed
01:18:667 (9) - there should be a slow slider here instead of a normal beat. there was completely no sound after the circle :w;
01:19:672 (3) - blanket maybe with 01:19:002 (1) ? Fixed
01:20:678 (3,4,5) - this is weird.not gimmicky,just weird. stacked them in gee's mod
01:23:360 (5) - nc? no need
01:29:393 (9) - slow slider maybe? ^
01:32:075 (1) - rotate this a bit or maybe blanket on top of 01:32:410 (2) like this:
I wanted it to have circular movement
01:39:449 (5) - nc maybe no need ^^
01:44:980 (2) - maybe flip this around. same sound so noo need I think
mind if i ask to gd? (first 20 sec)

Sorry GD full already maybe next map XD

tks Reynold

Reynolduh wrote:
hihi from my q

General: Change BPM offset to 1,572. Then open AI Mod and snap all objects using the timing section located at the top I think the beatmap offset is correct already since Starfy already told me the right one

Normal: Try not to use sliders with more than 1 reverse in normal diff's. I mean if u used that a lot in the level that's fine but since it's the first one, change to 1/2 slider with one repeat and circle at 01:54:030 - I mean its better to use reverse than spamming circles lol

Insane: 00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nice

NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE LEMME GIVE U A STAR

Thanks ww

Kanzaki H Aria

157 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanzaki H Aria 2017-09-09T17:24:59+00:00

Hello.
[General]

Unused file: sb/black.jpg

[GIDZ's Hard]

SPOILER

01:12:801 (6) - NC?
01:22:857 (3,4) - inconsistency on DS.
01:41:795 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:06:265 (3,5) - two sliders should align with same y-axis.
00:07:438 (1,3) - two sliders should align with same x-axis.
00:15:985 (3,4,5) - maybe uses same DS? just my view, it depend on you.
00:23:192 (1) - sounds weird, the slider should ends on 00:23:360.
00:51:181 (4) - copy 00:50:510 (2) - and uses ctrl + h.
00:55:874 (2,3,4) - maybe uses the same DS?

That's it, good luck.

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-09T18:50:36+00:00

KanpanRin wrote:
[GIDZ's Hard]
SPOILER
01:12:801 (6) - NC? Should have been fixed from last update??
01:22:857 (3,4) - inconsistency on DS.
01:41:795 (4,5) - ^

The DS things are DSed by the editor so I'll just leave it...

Update

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Shunao

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Shunao 2017-09-15T17:59:06+00:00

Heyo! sorry i'm late because school :/

NM from Q

Link's Easy

00:35:092 (1) - can you place it somewhere else because it contact with 00:33:081 (1,1)
01:07:941 (3) - touch the drain bar https://puu.sh/xAto1/4797a27250.png
01:34:756 (1,2) - why you don't continue to follow the good flow i mean 01:35:762 (2) - should be better at x:162 x:37 imo

Normal

open aimod
00:19:505 - add a note?
00:37:103 (1,4) - not a perfect stack :/
01:20:008 (3,4) - can you make them similar?
01:24:030 (1,2) - ^
01:53:527 (5) - should be better imo to make something like this it's emphasis better the last beat https://puu.sh/xAtIe/9672f5ba40.png

Insane

00:36:097 (3,9) - should be so much better if they should be stacked tbh
00:16:320 (5,6) - are you sure that they are blanket correctly?
00:19:505 (2,4) - better stack
01:15:650 (1) - remove nc and add it here 01:15:985 (5) - for consistency with the vocals
01:22:522 (6,10) - stack them properly
01:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like i said before about nc remove here 01:26:376 (1) - and add it here 01:26:712 (5)
01:39:449 (5) - nc for vocals
01:44:980 (2,4) - better stack
01:54:030 (4) - nc for this last slider?

Jennifer

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Jennifer 2017-09-16T05:10:36+00:00

as requested from my queue; great map!
somethings might not be to the latest version, sorry about that!!

[insane]

00:14:645 (2,4,1) - could you make them a triangle? i think it would look better since right now 2 and 4 visually look some what cramped (you might have to adjust 5 to the right since it'll be a tiny bit uneven)[url=https://puu.sh/xv8hR/40ae68e63b.jpg]x[/img]
00:20:343 (4,5) - a little bit off the stack
00:41:628 (3) - i think you should unstack this, just like you did for the others. 00:40:455 (6) - possibly here? it does get a little cramped though
00:51:181 (4) - i feel like this would play better ctrl g (i think you're going for a copy paste with 00:56:209 (3,4) - ? the second one is fine, imo the first one plays a bit more comfortable that way. reason for that is majority of these 1/2 pairs have been going opposite ways, i think it should be the same)
01:26:041 (4) - make anchor in middle? it looks more balanced

[normal]
00:19:170 - dont really get the rhythm here, why skip over these two clear sounds? slider + slider + circle + circle maybe? you mapped this for the second part
01:53:527 (5) - is a bit unexpected imo, the whole map havent had 2 repeats yet so would this be a little harsh?

good luck

squirrelpascals

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Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-09-17T06:46:03+00:00

Hi, from queue

insane

• 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - I think making this a straight line would just look more structured with your straight slider 4

• 00:15:985 (4,5) - for aesthetic purposes, i would avoid barely touching objects like this (besides for intentional overlaps)

• 00:17:661 - Wouldn't recommend lowering past %20 volume because then it becomes questionably quiet

• 00:20:678 (1,2,3) - this flow is pretty uncomfortable because of the wide agle combined with the drastic spacing change. adjusting to improve one of these will help this

• 00:22:019 (8) - nc to indicate sv reduction here, otherwise its just suprising

• 00:25:036 (1,2,3) - these all have 1/4 gaps but why do you use such different spacing here? connfusing because 2,3 reads as a 1/2 jumps compared to 1,2

• 00:31:907 (3,4,5) - triple really doesn't feel applicable here, i only hear 1/2 rhythm going here

• 00:41:125 (1,2,3,4,1) - lots of varying 1/4 spacing here, make this more visually consistent please. also you have a little bit of room still to the right of 00:41:628 (3) - , why stack this with 2? and also, these are touching 00:41:628 (3,4) -

• 00:47:493 (9,10,11,12) - you have a weird guitar sound here that really changes the sound of what the stream is mapped to, consider reflecting this in the map somehow

• 00:49:002 (5,6) - considering how you mapped vocals at 00:49:337 (7,8,9) -maybe make this a 1/2 slider as well to more fluently map to these vocals?

• 01:21:348 (1) - uneven wave aesthetic here

• 01:26:376 (1,2,3,4) - same as i said about the triple earlier, i dont hear a rhythm in the music for streaming ( it sounds DURING the next slider)

• 01:36:935 (5) - this curves a lot more at the bottom near the corner, can you even this out and make that curve look more rounded

• 01:38:276 (6) - would recommend endding this ont hat white tick even if youre not following drums putting that powerful snare note on a sliderend is a hell of a lot better than complere skipping over it

• 01:45:315 (3,1) - would recommend adding spacing here, more movement would emphasize that impact noise that's here (sounds like a synth or something? idk)

• 01:52:857 (1) - another very uneven wave lolz

~~i expected to have more time for this today but since it's very late it looks like im going to need to stop. I'll do my best to finish this with gero's set tomorrow~~ continuing

starfy

• 00:20:678 (3,4) - should be snapped to 1/3, thats how the wubs are in the music. also do something to show 1/3 change

• 00:36:265 (3) - sounds very weird how you have a snare and a vocal on the slidertail but not that strong of a beat on the sliderhead. a ctrl+g on 00:36:097 (2,3) - for rhythm would work. same thing for 00:37:270 (2) - too with the snare

• 01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels really forced into the map because it ignores the different types of rhythm in the music throughout it. Would recommend looking at this pattern and changing it and try to prioritize making stronger beats clickable

• 01:46:488 (4,5) - same, also snapped to 1/3 in music

cool diff, just some rhythm that can be improved here and there

gidz

• 00:15:650 (1,2) - would be better as a slider imo, it sounds more like one continuous buzzing sound rather than 2 separate beats. same for 00:28:723 (3,4) -

• 00:31:739 (1,2) - ctrl+g for rhythm works well here, otherwise the strong snare + buzz sound at 00:32:075 - just lands on a slidertail. same at 00:42:466 (1,2) -

• 01:28:723 (4,5,6,1) - confusing pattern for hard players, they will probably play 01:29:058 (6,1) - just like 01:28:723 (4,5) - also, the way these objects stack make the doubles touch all the circles around them, maybe break ds by a little bit and space these so that wont happen

• 01:42:801 (1,2,3,4) - 01:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - they way you made these 1/4 repeat patterns here vs. at the beginning (00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - etc) makes them feel pretty cluttered

deppy

• 00:11:628 (1) - use more slider points to make the curve on this slider smoother

• 00:34:253 (1) - moving this to the right so that the slidertail of 00:33:751 (4) - lines up with this sliderhead would be a lot more pleasing

• 00:35:427 - I think it would be a lot simpler to make this clickable rather than the red tick before it, it has a stronger snare beat on it, and in lower diffs white ticks should take more priority over red ticks (generally).

• 00:41:125 - same as before, if you want to make this star pattern work a 1/2 slider at 00:40:957 (4) - would work

• 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - probably really difficult for an advanced diff, a lot of spaced circles in a row. add a slider in ehre somewhere

• 01:54:030 (3) - cool slider!!

normal

• 00:16:991 (2) - 01:22:689 (1) - symmetry on this slider is totally off

• 01:32:745 (1) - considering how you follow vocals at 01:30:734 (3,4,5,6) - , maybe you can move this back to the red tick before it to make this rhythm more fluent?

• 01:42:801 (1) - symmetry here, AAAAAAAA

• 01:44:142 (2,1,2) - very weird rhythm here, mostly because of the 3/2 rythm between the first two. making 01:44:142 (2) - a slider would probably help

• 01:51:851 (1,3,4) - overlap here looks very awkward in general, putting 3 on this sliderhead 01:51:851 (1) - would work fine if you were trying to avoid that

link

• 01:07:941 (3) - off screen, touching hp bar

• 01:48:164 (1) - REALLy uneven wave here, making this symmetric would be a lot more pleasing

good set, top diff just feels rough around the edges for me.
good luck!

Last edited by squirrelpascals 2017-09-17T19:01:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Petal

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Petal 2017-09-17T07:05:45+00:00

tks kanpan

KanpanRin wrote:
Hello.
[General]
Unused file: sb/black.jpg
Removed

[Insane]
00:06:265 (3,5) - two sliders should align with same y-axis. I think I fixed what you mean lol
00:07:438 (1,3) - two sliders should align with same x-axis. ^
00:15:985 (3,4,5) - maybe uses same DS? just my view, it depend on you. Nah its fine
00:23:192 (1) - sounds weird, the slider should ends on 00:23:360. actually there is still sound on the blue tick
00:51:181 (4) - copy 00:50:510 (2) - and uses ctrl + h. though ctrl + g would be better
00:55:874 (2,3,4) - maybe uses the same DS? its fine :L

That's it, good luck.

tks shogun

ShogunMoon wrote:
Normal
open aimod all fixed!!
00:19:505 - add a note? good idea
00:37:103 (1,4) - not a perfect stack :/ Fixed when checking DS thank you!
01:20:008 (3,4) - can you make them similar? thanks
01:24:030 (1,2) - ^
01:53:527 (5) - should be better imo to make something like this it's emphasis better the last beat https://puu.sh/xAtIe/9672f5ba40.png
thank you!!

Insane
00:36:097 (3,9) - should be so much better if they should be stacked tbh you are right
00:16:320 (5,6) - are you sure that they are blanket correctly? now it is
00:19:505 (2,4) - better stack ya
01:15:650 (1) - remove nc and add it here 01:15:985 (5) - for consistency with the vocals that's better
01:22:522 (6,10) - stack them properly that's better
01:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like i said before about nc remove here 01:26:376 (1) - and add it here 01:26:712 (5) done
01:39:449 (5) - nc for vocals done
01:44:980 (2,4) - better stack done
01:54:030 (4) - nc for this last slider? done

tks jenngle

Jennglebells wrote:

as requested from my queue; great map!
somethings might not be to the latest version, sorry about that!!

[insane]
00:14:645 (2,4,1) - could you make them a triangle? i think it would look better since right now 2 and 4 visually look some what cramped (you might have to adjust 5 to the right since it'll be a tiny bit uneven)[url=https://puu.sh/xv8hR/40ae68e63b.jpg]x[/img] this is apart of the maps design :0
00:20:343 (4,5) - a little bit off the stack Fixed in prev mod thanks!
00:41:628 (3) - i think you should unstack this, just like you did for the others. 00:40:455 (6) - possibly here? it does get a little cramped though fixed long time ago :L
00:51:181 (4) - i feel like this would play better ctrl g (i think you're going for a copy paste with 00:56:209 (3,4) - ? the second one is fine, imo the first one plays a bit more comfortable that way. reason for that is majority of these 1/2 pairs have been going opposite ways, i think it should be the same) I wanted it to be facing the same direction to express the same sound
01:26:041 (4) - make anchor in middle? it looks more balanced I like the current better because its unique

[normal]
00:19:170 - dont really get the rhythm here, why skip over these two clear sounds? slider + slider + circle + circle maybe? you mapped this for the second part fixed in prev mod
01:53:527 (5) - is a bit unexpected imo, the whole map havent had 2 repeats yet so would this be a little harsh? fixed in prev mod

update the map before modding!!!!!
good luck

I'll reply to squirrelpascals' mod tmr , once he finishes the full mod

thanks everyone

byd

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byd 2017-09-17T20:28:05+00:00

shogunmoon

ShogunMoon wrote:
Link's Easy
00:35:092 (1) - can you place it somewhere else because it contact with 00:33:081 (1,1)
01:07:941 (3) - touch the drain bar https://puu.sh/xAto1/4797a27250.png
01:34:756 (1,2) - why you don't continue to follow the good flow i mean 01:35:762 (2) - should be better at x:162 x:37 imo

fixed all

squirrelpascals

squirrelpascals wrote:
• 01:07:941 (3) - off screen, touching hp bar

• 01:48:164 (1) - REALLy uneven wave here, making this symmetric would be a lot more pleasing

fixed all

ty for mods

own change: cs 2.5

hello its me

osu file format v14

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-19T14:04:36+00:00

Insane

00:09:617 (1,2) - It would fit your current NC pattern a lot more to swap these NCs around
00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would reverse the spacing if I were you with this stream. To me it's more intense in at the start and gets less intense from 00:47:493 (9) -
01:11:293 (9) - suggestion ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126521
01:26:041 (4,5) - would flow better if you did something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126536 You'd get to keep the emphasis on 4 as well just in this case you get spacing emphasis instead of change in flow
01:44:142 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt underwhelming. I expected strong beats as these to have more spacing, especially since you have pauses later 01:44:645 (1,2,3) - so it would be easy to recover

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-19T15:44:35+00:00

tks squirrel

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi, from q

insane• 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - I think making this a straight line would just look more structured with your straight slider 4 fix

• 00:15:985 (4,5) - for aesthetic purposes, i would avoid barely touching objects like this (besides for intentional overlaps) fix

• 00:17:661 - Wouldn't recommend lowering past %20 volume because then it becomes questionably quiet fix

• 00:20:678 (1,2,3) - this flow is pretty uncomfortable because of the wide agle combined with the drastic spacing change. adjusting to improve one of these will help this lowered spacing

• 00:22:019 (8) - nc to indicate sv reduction here, otherwise its just suprising fix

• 00:25:036 (1,2,3) - these all have 1/4 gaps but why do you use such different spacing here? connfusing because 2,3 reads as a 1/2 jumps compared to 1,2 made spacing consistence here

• 00:31:907 (3,4,5) - triple really doesn't feel applicable here, i only hear 1/2 rhythm going here fix

• 00:41:125 (1,2,3,4,1) - lots of varying 1/4 spacing here, make this more visually consistent please. also you have a little bit of room still to the right of 00:41:628 (3) - , why stack this with 2? and also, these are touching 00:41:628 (3,4) - fix

• 00:47:493 (9,10,11,12) - you have a weird guitar sound here that really changes the sound of what the stream is mapped to, consider reflecting this in the map somehow made the guitar sound a slider

• 00:49:002 (5,6) - considering how you mapped vocals at 00:49:337 (7,8,9) -maybe make this a 1/2 slider as well to more fluently map to these vocals? I think that these are already following the vocals correctly

• 01:21:348 (1) - uneven wave aesthetic here fix

• 01:26:376 (1,2,3,4) - same as i said about the triple earlier, i dont hear a rhythm in the music for streaming ( it sounds DURING the next slider) fixed

• 01:36:935 (5) - this curves a lot more at the bottom near the corner, can you even this out and make that curve look more rounded I think this slider is fine, its the roundest I could do it until it goes off the map

• 01:38:276 (6) - would recommend endding this ont hat white tick even if youre not following drums putting that powerful snare note on a sliderend is a hell of a lot better than complere skipping over it fix

• 01:45:315 (3,1) - would recommend adding spacing here, more movement would emphasize that impact noise that's here (sounds like a synth or something? idk) fix

• 01:52:857 (1) - another very uneven wave lolz I did my best to fix it

normal

• 00:16:991 (2) - 01:22:689 (1) - symmetry on this slider is totally off fix

• 01:32:745 (1) - considering how you follow vocals at 01:30:734 (3,4,5,6) - , maybe you can move this back to the red tick before it to make this rhythm more fluent? Don't really understand you here lol

• 01:42:801 (1) - symmetry here, AAAAAAAA fix

• 01:44:142 (2,1,2) - very weird rhythm here, mostly because of the 3/2 rythm between the first two. making 01:44:142 (2) - a slider would probably help fix

• 01:51:851 (1,3,4) - overlap here looks very awkward in general, putting 3 on this sliderhead 01:51:851 (1) - would work fine if you were trying to avoid that thanks!

good set, top diff just feels rough around the edges for me.
good luck!

thanks kissessssss

Kisses wrote:
Insane
00:09:617 (1,2) - It would fit your current NC pattern a lot more to swap these NCs around I think its fine because its a beginning of another segment
00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would reverse the spacing if I were you with this stream. To me it's more intense in at the start and gets less intense from 00:47:493 (9) - changed from other mod
01:11:293 (9) - suggestion ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126521 fix
01:26:041 (4,5) - would flow better if you did something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126536 You'd get to keep the emphasis on 4 as well just in this case you get spacing emphasis instead of change in flow changed in other mod
01:44:142 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt underwhelming. I expected strong beats as these to have more spacing, especially since you have pauses later 01:44:645 (1,2,3) - so it would be easy to recover increased spacing

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-19T17:39:54+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
gidz
• 00:15:650 (1,2) - would be better as a slider imo, it sounds more like one continuous buzzing sound rather than 2 separate beats. same for 00:28:723 (3,4) - Hmm, I think I like to put more emphasis on the hi-hats as I follow more on the drums

• 00:31:739 (1,2) - ctrl+g for rhythm works well here, otherwise the strong snare + buzz sound at 00:32:075 - just lands on a slidertail. same at 00:42:466 (1,2) - That buzz sound feels more like a sudden release/burst of sound to me than to smth that should be clickable imo thats why I made it as a slider end, urs works too but I wanna keep it consistent to what I'm following

• 01:28:723 (4,5,6,1) - confusing pattern for hard players, they will probably play 01:29:058 (6,1) - just like 01:28:723 (4,5) - also, the way these objects stack make the doubles touch all the circles around them, maybe break ds by a little bit and space these so that wont happen Changed the pattern while still keeping DS consistent

• 01:42:801 (1,2,3,4) - 01:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - they way you made these 1/4 repeat patterns here vs. at the beginning (00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - etc) makes them feel pretty cluttered Shouldn't be a problem for gameplay tho, it's just visually less appealing xd

Tks.

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Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-09-19T19:22:59+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
deppy
• 00:11:628 (1) - use more slider points to make the curve on this slider smoother eh this is fine

• 00:34:253 (1) - moving this to the right so that the slidertail of 00:33:751 (4) - lines up with this sliderhead would be a lot more pleasing no cuz then the spacing to next note will look like cancer but now it kinda forms a triangle at http://puu.sh/xDL4h/a3a231d5f1.jpg so its fine to me

• 00:35:427 - I think it would be a lot simpler to make this clickable rather than the red tick before it, it has a stronger snare beat on it, and in lower diffs white ticks should take more priority over red ticks (generally). i prefer how my map follows vocal here rn

• 00:41:125 - same as before, if you want to make this star pattern work a 1/2 slider at 00:40:957 (4) - would work

• 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - probably really difficult for an advanced diff, a lot of spaced circles in a row. add a slider in ehre somewhere i guess

• 01:54:030 (3) - cool slider!! thank

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,100 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2017-09-21T07:38:17+00:00

p/6258700

[General]
*I wish White.jpg which starts at 00:03:583 - finished at 00:03:918 - . I think the current effect seems to fade out suddenly.

[Avena's Extreme]
*01:05:594 (6) - Doesn't it seem a little bit distant from the next slider? I guess it isn't strong enough to be emphasized heavily.
*01:11:963 (1) - Consider decreasing the volume. 20 ~ 28% will be better.
*01:21:014 (8) - just a minor suggestion, add a whistle at the end?

[Insane]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? The silence part too.
*00:20:678 (1,2) - I highly recommend changing the snap into 1/6. 1/4 doesn't fit well here.
*00:31:237 (4) - The overlap makes the pattern kinda messy.
*00:33:834 (7) - There's no sound. Actually 00:34:002 - needs a note.
*00:54:700 (7,8) - The distance setting decreased compared to the previous notes. It looks kinda random.
*01:03:248 (9) - Personally I prefer increasing the spacing than the current one.
*01:09:029 (2,3,4) - I think they don't need a clap sound. It seems loud for me.
*01:23:778 (10) - ^. This really doesn't need.
*Well, I can't find any common points on the spacing of whole 3/4 sliders. They seem to be placed random. Some notes are half-stacked, and some notes are separated. It made the map kinda awkward.

[Starfy's Hyper]
*00:17:996 (6) - What about NC for a readability?
*00:32:075 (2) - I think it will be better to finish at 00:32:410 - and add a circle at 00:32:577 - .
*00:42:801 (2) - ^
*00:58:220 (8,9) - What about trying something like this for better flow?
*01:11:460 (3,4) - Even though it's a harder difficulty, doesn't it make players confused?
*01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^, It's pretty creative pattern but still looks kinda hard hm..

[GIDZ's Hard]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds?
*00:18:667 (2,3) - What about changing them to a 1/1 slider? The continuous sound finishs at 00:19:002 - , so slider will express the music well.
*01:44:645 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure of the pattern. Cuz it looks a bit hard for this diff.
*pretty solid

will mod lower diffs later

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Avena 2017-09-21T11:22:54+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6258700
[Avena's Extreme]
*01:05:594 (6) - Doesn't it seem a little bit distant from the next slider? I guess it isn't strong enough to be emphasized heavily. It's perfectly fine rn and yea i wanted a tiny jump. Also it'll ruin the pattern i made.
*01:11:963 (1) - Consider decreasing the volume. 20 ~ 28% will be better. ok
*01:21:014 (8) - just a minor suggestion, add a whistle at the end? ok

ty

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-21T23:06:52+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[GIDZ's Hard]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? I dun think it will suit the beginning as its quiet, but I added a finish on slider head 00:03:583 (1) -
*00:18:667 (2,3) - What about changing them to a 1/1 slider? The continuous sound finishs at 00:19:002 - , so slider will express the music well. 1/1 slider doesn't emphasize the pause I am trying to put here as I want 00:19:002 - to be clickable cuz its a strong bass sound
*01:44:645 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure of the pattern. Cuz it looks a bit hard for this diff.Should be ok but I will see what others asy about this
*pretty solid

Tks Dailycare!!! o///

UPDATE

osu file format v14

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Source:jubeat saucer
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Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

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Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-22T10:54:10+00:00

tks dailycare!

Dailycare wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6258700

[General]
*I wish White.jpg which starts at 00:03:583 - finished at 00:03:918 - . I think the current effect seems to fade out suddenly.

[Insane]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? The silence part too. I added them , gonna let GIDZ check later
*00:20:678 (1,2) - I highly recommend changing the snap into 1/6. 1/4 doesn't fit well here. fix
*00:31:237 (4) - The overlap makes the pattern kinda messy. fix
*00:33:834 (7) - There's no sound. Actually 00:34:002 - needs a note. I don't hear any sound here
*00:54:700 (7,8) - The distance setting decreased compared to the previous notes. It looks kinda random. I thkn it looks fine here
*01:03:248 (9) - Personally I prefer increasing the spacing than the current one. I think increasing the spacing would ruin the pattern
*01:09:029 (2,3,4) - I think they don't need a clap sound. It seems loud for me. Its fine for me and it gives the player a signal that kiai time is coming up
*01:23:778 (10) - ^. This really doesn't need. Fix
*Well, I can't find any common points on the spacing of whole 3/4 sliders. They seem to be placed random. Some notes are half-stacked, and some notes are separated. It made the map kinda awkward. Made all of them more consistence

Pentori

1,158 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-10-04T11:46:16+00:00

hihi
[General]
check aimod
normal-sliderslide3.wav unused

[Link's Easy]

00:16:991 - hitsounds from this part onward just seem completely different to the ones used at 00:14:309 . the music barely differs so try keep them consistent
00:20:008 (2,3) - rhythm priority changes so much from 00:14:310 (1,2,3,4) . skipping beats like 00:22:019 - feels awkward when it was mapped previously
00:26:377 (1) - strongest vocal here is on 00:27:047 - so the 3/2 slider doesnt really fit. other instances have the vocal on red ticks 00:28:220
00:33:081 (1) - nc seems a bit pointless here, should keep ncs every 2 measures
00:35:594 - 00:46:320 - shouldnt have claps, theres no snare here
01:11:963 - should avoid silencing sliderends in lower diffs, low diff players need the additional feedback
01:43:974 (2) - covers too many different sounds making it unclear of what its following. 01:44:142 - 01:44:645 - 01:44:980 - 01:45:315 - are the strongest sounds here so try give priority to these
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - dont think this kinda density is suitable for the lowest diff. the 1/2 sliders are quite fast to comprehend, should just use individiual circles instead

[Normal]

00:14:980 (2) - 00:20:343 (2) - etc. a lot of ur rhythms arent specifically following anything, strong beats are on 00:15:147 - 00:15:315 - so you should try make them clickable and base rhythms around them
00:27:047 - 00:27:885 - should reconsider some clap usage, snares provided in the song are every 2nd beat 00:26:712 - 00:27:382 - 00:28:052 - etc. so you should only use claps in those instances
00:29:058 (7,1) - 00:31:739 (6) - also try have your new combos set on every 2nd combo to group them consistently, most of the map previous follows this 00:19:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:30:399 (3,4,5) - rhythm here is pretty awkward cos you ignore the first vocal on 00:30:566 - so it implies you're following drums, but then switch to vocal later on anyways at 00:30:902 . should try a similar rhythm to 00:27:717 (4,5,6) - imo
00:32:074 (7,8) - can get pretty confusing due to low ar since 00:33:080 (1) - fades in and is closer to the previous object, newer players may click that instead
00:34:253 (1,2,3,4) - should try avoid the overlapping here as it gets pretty cluttered and confusing. also rhythm could be better by letting strong beats like 00:35:594 - be clickable
00:44:309 (3,4) - clicking red tick offbeats seems pretty weird here since theres nothing significant on them, the music is still white tick dominant. maybe try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xPpWC/5e525f95a8.png
01:04:924 (2) - rhythm here shows you're following vocal because you map 01:05:091 - but then 01:05:594 (3,4) - seem to follow the instruments while u skip over the vocal on 01:05:762 . should try commit to the same track https://puu.sh/xPq6C/c3e7792379.png or if u want to map instruments u could ctrl g 01:04:924 (2,3)
01:32:410 - every other instance of this is clickable 01:19:002 - 01:29:728 - so should try make this clickable too
01:42:131 (4,5) - 01:47:494 (4,5) - sliders would be better, as the sound is held and theres nothing significant on 01:42:466 (5)
01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - using objects that point back in on themselves is pretty confusing for normals, beginners rely on time-distance equality but by having the objects this close its hard to comprehend the rhythm
01:53:527 (5,6) - like the only time you use an object stacked on slider end, would definitely be a reading hazard since you introduce it so late into the map, should just do something like 01:38:108 (6,7)

[GIDZ's Hard]

00:14:309 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of the rhythm choice here, just seems too simplified when the music is offering something else https://puu.sh/xPr6c/5756def603.png
00:26:376 - rhythm from here onward seems so much more dense than the previous section yet it feels less intense. i dont think substituting out the 1/2 sliders for two circles is necessary 00:27:047 (3,4) - 00:28:723 (3,4) - etc.
01:03:918 (1) - extended slider just feels so random here, theres nothing unique on 01:04:589 (2) - so should stick to a 3/2 slider
01:22:689 (1,2,3) - white tick triplet is pretty awkward here since you dont use them consistently, kick on 01:22:941 - gets skipped which u'd expect to be mapped since you use red tick triplets everywhere else
01:29:393 (1,2) - most of the patterns like this are circle + slider 01:32:075 (1,2) - should try keep the way u do these consistent

[Starfy's Hyper]

00:18:080 (7) - dont think this needs to be mapped, as using a triplet here gives the emphasis to 00:18:164 (8) - while it should be on 00:17:996 (6) - for the strong snare. something similar to 00:23:360 (6,1) - plays a lot nicer
00:32:075 (2) - 00:42:801 (2) - unrankable cos you cover the repeat slider with the previous circle
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk about this, the pattern just feels so forced and doesnt work with the music cos its constantly changing

[Insane]

00:14:980 (3) - starting ur jump patterns on weaker beats feels pretty awkward, since you mix them in with stronger beats 00:15:147 (4,5) - and cause them to lose emphasis
00:15:483 (1,3) - also beats like these have different sounds to 00:15:147 (4,5,2) - could try differentiate the two a bit more by using sliders to make important stuff clickable
00:20:678 (1,2) - snapping seems pretty awkward, sounds like standard 1/3 except slightly off so you could prob simplify it to https://puu.sh/xPKva/99267c1b4b.png that doesnt harm playability
00:27:885 (2) - 00:29:728 (4) - 00:30:566 (2,3,4) - extended slider usage throughout the map isnt the greatest because they skip over strong beats in their track 00:28:052 - 00:29:896 - etc. can still easily map the vocals with 1/2 sliders without giving up too much of the drums
01:00:064 (7,8) - 01:02:745 (7,8) - ctrl g'ing rhythm here could be nice to let kicks 01:00:231 - be clickable
01:25:203 (1) - skipping a really strong downbeat here and in the previous instance u used a 1/2 slider 01:14:477 (2)
01:25:790 - whistle on end here seems pretty unfitting since its an extended slider

should reconsider some of the extended sliders here, a lot of them feel a bit too forced

gl!

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

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byd 2017-10-04T14:48:07+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hihi
[General]
check aimod
normal-sliderslide3.wav unused it is not, 00:18:668 (1) - in easy diff

[Link's Easy]
00:16:991 - hitsounds from this part onward just seem completely different to the ones used at 00:14:309 . the music barely differs so try keep them consistent i couldve swore there was a green line to change hs here, oh well, fixed
00:20:008 (2,3) - rhythm priority changes so much from 00:14:310 (1,2,3,4) . skipping beats like 00:22:019 - feels awkward when it was mapped previously changed the thing you mentioned
00:26:377 (1) - strongest vocal here is on 00:27:047 - so the 3/2 slider doesnt really fit. other instances have the vocal on red ticks 00:28:220 changed a bunch of them
00:33:081 (1) - nc seems a bit pointless here, should keep ncs every 2 measures k
00:35:594 - 00:46:320 - shouldnt have claps, theres no snare here k
01:11:963 - should avoid silencing sliderends in lower diffs, low diff players need the additional feedback increased volume
01:43:974 (2) - covers too many different sounds making it unclear of what its following. 01:44:142 - 01:44:645 - 01:44:980 - 01:45:315 - are the strongest sounds here so try give priority to these a lot of circles now
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - dont think this kinda density is suitable for the lowest diff. the 1/2 sliders are quite fast to comprehend, should just use individiual circles instead k

ty for mod, ill probably remap this if it gets more complaints

diff

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note to self:

SPOILER

fix 00:36:433 (4,2) -

Petal

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Petal 2017-10-08T16:56:56+00:00

thanks pentori

Pentori wrote:
hihi

[Normal]
00:14:980 (2) - 00:20:343 (2) - etc. a lot of ur rhythms arent specifically following anything, strong beats are on 00:15:147 - 00:15:315 - so you should try make them clickable and base rhythms around them
00:27:047 - 00:27:885 - should reconsider some clap usage, snares provided in the song are every 2nd beat 00:26:712 - 00:27:382 - 00:28:052 - etc. so you should only use claps in those instances
00:29:058 (7,1) - 00:31:739 (6) - also try have your new combos set on every 2nd combo to group them consistently, most of the map previous follows this 00:19:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:30:399 (3,4,5) - rhythm here is pretty awkward cos you ignore the first vocal on 00:30:566 - so it implies you're following drums, but then switch to vocal later on anyways at 00:30:902 . should try a similar rhythm to 00:27:717 (4,5,6) - imo
00:32:074 (7,8) - can get pretty confusing due to low ar since 00:33:080 (1) - fades in and is closer to the previous object, newer players may click that instead
00:34:253 (1,2,3,4) - should try avoid the overlapping here as it gets pretty cluttered and confusing. also rhythm could be better by letting strong beats like 00:35:594 - be clickable
00:44:309 (3,4) - clicking red tick offbeats seems pretty weird here since theres nothing significant on them, the music is still white tick dominant. maybe try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xPpWC/5e525f95a8.png
01:04:924 (2) - rhythm here shows you're following vocal because you map 01:05:091 - but then 01:05:594 (3,4) - seem to follow the instruments while u skip over the vocal on 01:05:762 . should try commit to the same track https://puu.sh/xPq6C/c3e7792379.png or if u want to map instruments u could ctrl g 01:04:924 (2,3)
01:32:410 - every other instance of this is clickable 01:19:002 - 01:29:728 - so should try make this clickable too
01:42:131 (4,5) - 01:47:494 (4,5) - sliders would be better, as the sound is held and theres nothing significant on 01:42:466 (5)
01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - using objects that point back in on themselves is pretty confusing for normals, beginners rely on time-distance equality but by having the objects this close its hard to comprehend the rhythm
01:53:527 (5,6) - like the only time you use an object stacked on slider end, would definitely be a reading hazard since you introduce it so late into the map, should just do something like 01:38:108 (6,7)
I think I will be remapping this whole map lol

[Insane]
00:14:980 (3) - starting ur jump patterns on weaker beats feels pretty awkward, since you mix them in with stronger beats 00:15:147 (4,5) - and cause them to lose emphasis lowered the spacing of 3 and 4
00:15:483 (1,3) - also beats like these have different sounds to 00:15:147 (4,5,2) - could try differentiate the two a bit more by using sliders to make important stuff clickable I changed 1 to a 1/4 slider for the wave sound
00:20:678 (1,2) - snapping seems pretty awkward, sounds like standard 1/3 except slightly off so you could prob simplify it to https://puu.sh/xPKva/99267c1b4b.png that doesnt harm playability I see what you mean, I've changed it to that
00:27:885 (2) - 00:29:728 (4) - 00:30:566 (2,3,4) - extended slider usage throughout the map isnt the greatest because they skip over strong beats in their track 00:28:052 - 00:29:896 - etc. can still easily map the vocals with 1/2 sliders without giving up too much of the drums Still need more time thinking what can I change here
01:00:064 (7,8) - 01:02:745 (7,8) - ctrl g'ing rhythm here could be nice to let kicks 01:00:231 - be clickable Fixed
01:25:203 (1) - skipping a really strong downbeat here and in the previous instance u used a 1/2 slider 01:14:477 (2) Fixed
01:25:790 - whistle on end here seems pretty unfitting since its an extended slider Fixed
should reconsider some of the extended sliders here, a lot of them feel a bit too forced I know what you mean , I'll try to fix this but need more time still

gl!

GIDZ

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GIDZ 2017-10-21T11:52:50+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hihi
[GIDZ's Hard]
00:14:309 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of the rhythm choice here, just seems too simplified when the music is offering something else https://puu.sh/xPr6c/5756def603.png 00:14:309 (1) - is following the strong electronic beat which is 1/1 long and also I wanna emphasize the bass sound by making it clickable on 00:14:980 - so no change here.
00:26:376 - rhythm from here onward seems so much more dense than the previous section yet it feels less intense. i dont think substituting out the 1/2 sliders for two circles is necessary 00:27:047 (3,4) - 00:28:723 (3,4) - etc. There are more vocals and I also wanna vary things up a bit lol.
Also it makes a good contrast with the next section at 00:47:829 -
01:03:918 (1) - extended slider just feels so random here, theres nothing unique on 01:04:589 (2) - so should stick to a 3/2 slider Fixed
01:22:689 (1,2,3) - white tick triplet is pretty awkward here since you dont use them consistently, kick on 01:22:941 - gets skipped which u'd expect to be mapped since you use red tick triplets everywhere else Fixed
01:29:393 (1,2) - most of the patterns like this are circle + slider 01:32:075 (1,2) - should try keep the way u do these consistent Dun think consistency is a big issue here since the music is different everytime beafore the pause, so the map is intended to be mapped differerently, what I think is important is just to emphasize the pause no matter the pattern before it.

Tks!

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-10-28T20:12:31+00:00

place for m4m return. gonna mod tomorrow

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,967 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-11-02T07:54:19+00:00

This set was used as the basis of the osu mentorship's practice modding, where we got together and modded a map. We gave constructive criticism on how we modded. Sergio forgot to post the mod here, so some of the stuff is outdated. Note that the mod is super unbalanced on what diffs we did, sorry link :/

box

Link's Easy:
- AyanokoRin: 00:01:572 (1) - isn't this over the top (maybe define it better xD)
- IceKalt: 00:16:321 (4,1) - better blanket
- Mun: 00:11:629 (1,1,2,3) - this curve could really use some work (image can be added)
- IceKalt: 00:31:739 (1) - idk about this rythm choice here (reason needed

)
Mir: i feel like since the vocal is on 00:31:572 - which isn't clickable to begin with, shifting focus to the instruments with a rhythm like this https://i.imgur.com/yJpCUcw.png would make a lot more sense
- -Rmdy: 00:41:126 (3) - maybe put 1/2 slider instead of circle. 1/2 slider had been used anyway, and this follows song anyway (kinda vague)
- AyanokoRin: 00:03:584 (1) - this feels out of place within the map (more details needed

)
- Sinnoh: 00:58:556 (1) - This 2/1 repeat slider doesn't match the object density in the rest of the section, either remove this slider or add one elsewhere. I'd go with first one (this looks nice)
- gottagof4st: 01:47:493 (4) - this slider should be differentiated a bit from the others imo, currently it fits is way too much but it's a completely different sound (maybe additional suggestion on how to do it would be nice)
- IceKalt: 00:38:109 (2,3,4) - on 2,3 he concentrates on drums but on 4 he starts the slider on a vocal instead of a drum - would put slider on white tick
- IceKalt: 00:41:126 (3,4) - same as above what i said
- Mir: 01:44:645 - WHEN U SKIP THE SONG ACCENTUATION rhythm suggestion: https://i.imgur.com/t3zMohy.png ty pls apply the 1/2 gap is passive as well and after a 1/1 reverse so it should be g considering 01:34:086 (1) - which is already questionable
- Monarch: 00:44:478 (4,1) - blanket is off smh
- Mir: 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - not in an easy diff tbh, too fast and too many in quick succession plus switching polarity way too often
- IceKalt: 00:45:147 - would make this clickable(edited)

- -Rmdy: 01:38:611 (2,3,1) - I think it may be a problem for beginners, since they see 2 sircle near (2)
- Shiguma: 01:13:974 (2) - 01:17:326 (3) - i would replace these sliders, need more dense rhythm in kiai
- Maffe: 00:38:947 (4) - Following offbeat vocals here but not 00:28:220 - here. No reason for completely changing rhythm and focus in repeating sections like this.
- -Rmdy: 01:43:974 (2) - I think it was said already. Very confusing
- Swell: 01:20:008 (3,4) - on that same note shigu these sliders would probably be better off as clickable 1/1 imo
- Sinnoh: 01:43:974 (2) - This slider skips over some really important beats, + makes 01:45:314 (3) - harder to read since there's a sound here. Follow the snares instead to have a clearer rhythm to follow, they're on 1/1 so should be more readable
- IceKalt: 01:22:354 - the part is way to intense that there is no object
- Shiguma: 00:37:103 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like it begins with it being mapped to the drums but then ends with it being mapped to the vocals, seems misleading
- -Rmdy: 01:53:527 (2) - since he considered following those 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - drums, it would be cool to do this http://puu.sh/xHN4O/adcb9530c7.jpg
- Shiguma: 01:53:527 (2) - if you're gonna map the rhythm before it, this should have clickable notes too
- Swell: 01:22:354 - missing object here lol(edited)

Avena's Extra:
- IceKalt: 00:23:192 (3,1,2,1) - hardly readable. Consider moving 00:23:527 (2) - so it becomes more visible
- IceKalt: 00:33:583 (1) - its not making really sense to emphazise this cause there isnt a major sound nor the vocals are changing (this looks more like map to pattern than to music) (whole section here)
- Swell: 01:14:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - actually i think priti should just invert this entire pattern. they way everything moves from the center outwards is really makes emphasis and play feel lacking. So instead by making everything move from the outside towards the center i feel like it would emphasize and play much better while still keeping the same kind of visual structure.: https://puu.sh/xHPAq/2f030983b7.jpg https://puu.sh/xHPAx/357e38aaab.jpg https://puu.sh/xHPAV/300287aefd.jpg
- Okorin: 00:20:678 (1) - seems retarded but seems better as https://puu.sh/xHOTk/0a6d8be194.png as far as wobbles are concerned
- Okorin: 01:11:963 (1) - priti pls i dont think there's anything the way you mapped that lool
- Okorin: 01:46:153 (1,1) - 1 covers reverse
- My Angel Kanan: 00:01:572 (1,2,3) isn't the spacing here to huge considering that Nothing noticeable happens in the music. Notice how 00:03:583 (1,2,3,4) - is more intense in the song yet more spaced

General
00:12:969 (1) - Your storyboard flashes are too fast, they're just annoying. Lower the maximum brightness of them. The stuff at 01:13:304 (1) - is fine
There are no hitsounds for the first 12 seconds on some diffs. I'd suggest adding some samples that are slightly muted, they'd match the song and would give feedback.
Your storyboard could be more interesting, some basic things like particle effects could be used to enhance it a lot.

I won't mod link or avena's diff, I've already said what I wanted above.

Normal
01:17:158 (4) - There is so much false feedback from these hitsounds
01:20:343 (4) - Incorrect hitsound
01:20:343 (4,5,1) - Don't overlap 1 on 4's tail. This causes reading issues for new players. There isn't enough time between them as 5 is a 3/4 slider.
01:22:689 (1,2,1) - same issue
01:38:108 (6) - Hitsound tail
01:50:846 (1,2) - Positioning slider tails really close to each other will make it difficult to read. Change arrangement so that tails are further apart.
01:53:527 (5,6) - Do not have objects stacked under a slider tail on normal.
I'd suggesting reading the ranking criteria's section on normal diffs

Advanced
There are missing hitsounds everywhere
00:30:231 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like that there's only circles here, there are plenty of held vocals so would make more sense to me to use sliders.
00:33:751 (4,1,2) - These overlaps are really messy without any reason for them
01:03:918 (2,1,2,3) - This is only going to cause confusion and really hurts my head to look at. Can you use an alternative structure here.
yeah not a fan of this

Hard
00:16:991 (1) - 01:42:801 (1) - 01:48:164 (1) - These can be spaced a little further apart from each other so it's easier to read what is going on.
few objective issues here, gj

hmm idk. The lower diffs are kind of putting me off here, I also really don't like this song so probably won't recheck

If you get a couple more mods I'm certain this could be ranked in the future, keep at it.

byd

Nomination Assessment Team

665 posts

Joined May 2015

byd 2017-11-02T16:01:43+00:00

what in the

ok im remappng fuk this

sidenote to everyone else involved in the set; od spread is meh, it goes: 5.1-7-7-7-9.5

edit:

remap done, no hs. apply yourself and change diffname to byd's Easy, ty

osu file format v14

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Title:Arousing
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Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. Sunao Yoshikawa
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Source:jubeat saucer
Tags:REFLEC BEAT colette spring GIDZ Starfy Deppyforce Bite you death Link Deppy Avena Priti - G I D Z -
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BeatmapSetID:-1

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CircleSize:2.5
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3.5
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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i'll try to reply anyway just cause mentorship

Sinnoh wrote:
This set was used as the basis of the osu mentorship's practice modding, where we got together and modded a map. We gave constructive criticism on how we modded. Sergio forgot to post the mod here, so some of the stuff is outdated. Note that the mod is super unbalanced on what diffs we did, sorry link :/
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Link's Easy:
- AyanokoRin: 00:01:572 (1) - isn't this over the top (maybe define it better xD) dont remember what this was before
- IceKalt: 00:16:321 (4,1) - better blanket ya sure
- Mun: 00:11:629 (1,1,2,3) - this curve could really use some work (image can be added) dont remember this either
- IceKalt: 00:31:739 (1) - idk about this rythm choice here (reason needed ) dont remember
Mir: i feel like since the vocal is on 00:31:572 - which isn't clickable to begin with, shifting focus to the instruments with a rhythm like this https://i.imgur.com/yJpCUcw.png would make a lot more sense i'm following the vocals i can follow without making it too hard/dense
- -Rmdy: 00:41:126 (3) - maybe put 1/2 slider instead of circle. 1/2 slider had been used anyway, and this follows song anyway (kinda vague) 1/2s in easy are frowned upon/unrankable even (i think)
- AyanokoRin: 00:03:584 (1) - this feels out of place within the map (more details needed ) not imo
- Sinnoh: 00:58:556 (1) - This 2/1 repeat slider doesn't match the object density in the rest of the section, either remove this slider or add one elsewhere. I'd go with first one (this looks nice) ya i fixed that earlier
- gottagof4st: 01:47:493 (4) - this slider should be differentiated a bit from the others imo, currently it fits is way too much but it's a completely different sound (maybe additional suggestion on how to do it would be nice) hm, imo the current one is fine, cant remember old
- IceKalt: 00:38:109 (2,3,4) - on 2,3 he concentrates on drums but on 4 he starts the slider on a vocal instead of a drum - would put slider on white tick
- IceKalt: 00:41:126 (3,4) - same as above what i said would fix both
- Mir: 01:44:645 - WHEN U SKIP THE SONG ACCENTUATION rhythm suggestion: https://i.imgur.com/t3zMohy.png ty pls apply the 1/2 gap is passive as well and after a 1/1 reverse so it should be g considering 01:34:086 (1) - which is already questionable long sentence but yea i did something here
- Monarch: 00:44:478 (4,1) - blanket is off smh good enough
- Mir: 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - not in an easy diff tbh, too fast and too many in quick succession plus switching polarity way too often yea removed
- IceKalt: 00:45:147 - would make this clickable(edited) i wouldn't; the sound at 00:44:980 - is much more major and i'd prefer to disinclude a lot of 1/2s if possible

- -Rmdy: 01:38:611 (2,3,1) - I think it may be a problem for beginners, since they see 2 sircle near (2) yea sure
- Shiguma: 01:13:974 (2) - 01:17:326 (3) - i would replace these sliders, need more dense rhythm in kiai 3/2 gaps in easy are cancer, i've learned
- Maffe: 00:38:947 (4) - Following offbeat vocals here but not 00:28:220 - here. No reason for completely changing rhythm and focus in repeating sections like this. they're the same..? might've been different in past idk
- -Rmdy: 01:43:974 (2) - I think it was said already. Very confusing changed
- Swell: 01:20:008 (3,4) - on that same note shigu these sliders would probably be better off as clickable 1/1 imo did that
- Sinnoh: 01:43:974 (2) - This slider skips over some really important beats, + makes 01:45:314 (3) - harder to read since there's a sound here. Follow the snares instead to have a clearer rhythm to follow, they're on 1/1 so should be more readable ^
- IceKalt: 01:22:354 - the part is way to intense that there is no object added in remap
- Shiguma: 00:37:103 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like it begins with it being mapped to the drums but then ends with it being mapped to the vocals, seems misleading prob changed this, dk what u mean
- -Rmdy: 01:53:527 (2) - since he considered following those 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - drums, it would be cool to do this http://puu.sh/xHN4O/adcb9530c7.jpg that is unrankable; sliders with multiple reverses are unrankable in easy difficulty, im 99% certain
- Shiguma: 01:53:527 (2) - if you're gonna map the rhythm before it, this should have clickable notes too did before
- Swell: 01:22:354 - missing object here lol(edited)adressed before

yea this is quite outdated, i barely remember half of it. thanks for modding, nonetheless!

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2017-11-19T04:59:06+00:00

Just passing by to say I love the Insane

lit120

3,276 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2018-01-04T03:32:56+00:00

you're asking me to mod insane, so...

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - in aes, the blanket isn't perfect
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - minor, but can be perfect symmetrical (flow fix) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9925640 example ((1) should be in middle, 256 X)
00:27:717 (4) - 00:29:058 (1) -00:31:739 (6) - mind about NC here?
00:41:125 (4,1) - too
00:42:298 (4) - NCing here will work for vocal's emphasize. i think i won't mention all of them that are the same as this
00:49:002 (4) - here works for NC + 00:49:840 (1) - remove NC. the same as 00:51:684 (5,1) - 00:54:365 (5,1) -
01:11:293 (1,2) - some players might get confused reading this. would suggest spacing it out a bit, like stack 01:11:628 (2) - tail on 01:10:622 (3) -
01:19:505 (3,6) - see these sliders here? i'd just use the same slider and stack them perfectly for view
01:38:946 (2) - would like to stack it here
01:39:951 (1) - this NC here doesn't seem necessary here, as 01:40:119 (1) - should be for its emphasize vocal + downbeat
01:54:030 (4) - i heard that the end should be at 01:55:077 -

lacks of NCs around. usually NCs will be used on red or white tick, depending on what its emphasized there, such as vocals, downbeats, rhythm stuff, etc.

gl

Suisei Hosimati

3,049 posts

Joined March 2013

Suisei Hosimati 2018-01-08T15:42:39+00:00

Modding insane as requested

00:09:617 (1,2) - blanket
00:10:287 (3) - nazi，但係同 00:09:617 (1) - 00:10:790 (4) - 配起來嚮美觀上唔係幾夾，如果係同兩個slider都係純彎嘅會好啲
00:16:488 (3,4) - 個人覺得個slider都係嚮 00:16:656 - 好啲，重音unclickable反而係比較靜嘅音click咗感覺唔舒服，或者好似 00:22:019 (1) - 一樣跟電音都可以
00:20:678 (1) - 加快SV？來強調wub， 01:46:488 (1) - 都係
00:47:494 (1) - remove NC？一或係加快SV嚟強調結他riff
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - 跟wub嘅話好似唔係嚮白線開始，佢係後咗一條藍線
01:11:628 (2) - 個人覺得1/8會跟個buildup好啲
01:34:337 (1) - 可以remove NC，反而只係 01:34:589 (1) - 好啲，咁樣玩家可以讀到第三個slider係1/4，不過呢個你自己決定啦
01:39:951 (1) - 感覺NC比較多餘

good luck

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-09T12:57:59+00:00

lit120 wrote:
you're asking me to mod insane, so...

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - in aes, the blanket isn't perfect I tried my best fixing it
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - minor, but can be perfect symmetrical (flow fix) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9925640 example ((1) should be in middle, 256 X) yeahh
00:27:717 (4) - 00:29:058 (1) -00:31:739 (6) - mind about NC here? fixed
00:41:125 (4,1) - too fixed
00:42:298 (4) - NCing here will work for vocal's emphasize. i think i won't mention all of them that are the same as this fixed all I could spot
00:49:002 (4) - here works for NC + 00:49:840 (1) - remove NC. the same as 00:51:684 (5,1) - 00:54:365 (5,1) - I think yeah
01:11:293 (1,2) - some players might get confused reading this. would suggest spacing it out a bit, like stack 01:11:628 (2) - tail on 01:10:622 (3) - I think this is fine since it is turning towards the clockwise as well as the stream
01:19:505 (3,6) - see these sliders here? i'd just use the same slider and stack them perfectly for view eyah I messed up here
01:38:946 (2) - would like to stack it here ok
01:39:951 (1) - this NC here doesn't seem necessary here, as 01:40:119 (1) - should be for its emphasize vocal + downbeat agree/color]
01:54:030 (4) - i heard that the end should be at 01:55:077 -
lacks of NCs around. usually NCs will be used on red or white tick, depending on what its emphasized there, such as vocals, downbeats, rhythm stuff, etc.

gl

Thanks for modding!!!

Firis Mistlud wrote:
Modding insane as requested

00:09:617 (1,2) - blanket
00:10:287 (3) - nazi，但係同 00:09:617 (1) - 00:10:790 (4) - 配起來嚮美觀上唔係幾夾，如果係同兩個slider都係純彎嘅會好啲都係唔好啦，我改返三做彎算啦
00:16:488 (3,4) - 個人覺得個slider都係嚮 00:16:656 - 好啲，重音unclickable反而係比較靜嘅音click咗感覺唔舒服，或者好似 00:22:019 (1) - 一樣跟電音都可以 OK改返做重音係clickable
00:20:678 (1) - 加快SV？來強調wub， 01:46:488 (1) - 都係OK
00:47:494 (1) - remove NC？一或係加快SV嚟強調結他riff OK
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - 跟wub嘅話好似唔係嚮白線開始，佢係後咗一條藍線我都發現，但係呢度始終都係跟緊鼓聲>.<
01:11:628 (2) - 個人覺得1/8會跟個buildup好啲同意
01:34:337 (1) - 可以remove NC，反而只係 01:34:589 (1) - 好啲，咁樣玩家可以讀到第三個slider係1/4，不過呢個你自己決定啦我覺得三個音都要強調所以就NC了 >.<
01:39:951 (1) - 感覺NC比較多餘OK
good luck

謝謝神mod

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2018-01-11T00:28:46+00:00

did I forgot to return mod for this? ah, i'm so sorry
anyway, here's the m4m return after a long time

modding 3 diffs to be fair with drain time

[normal]
00:34:253 (1,3,4) - avoid stacking in normals, this is not visible too much and may confuse new players
01:27:047 (2) - ^
01:54:030 (6) - again, try to not stack it

[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c

[hard]
00:13:639 (2) - you can make a 1/4 slider instead
00:53:192 (1) - ctrl+h? it improves the flow a bit and also blanks the previous circle
01:54:030 (2) - move to x:197 y:285 maybe

sorry for not modding higher diffs, but i hope this mod helps

gl~

Petal

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-11T16:56:57+00:00

ok I gave up so I remapped normal diff kek

Seolv

847 posts

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Seolv 2018-01-14T20:12:03+00:00

owob from queue

[- -

Normal - -]

00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits
00:44:979 (6) - NC here
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense

[- -

Insane - -]

00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders?
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - )
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there

ok done

Petal

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Petal 2018-01-16T18:56:18+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
owob from queue

[- - Normal - -]
00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits done
00:44:979 (6) - NC here ok
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point yea
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before fixed
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense oik fixed all

[- - Insane - -]
00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal just wanted to emphasize the NC
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here fixed
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller I think its fine since this is a small build up climax ish thing
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced well this is following the drum and the wave sound at the same time , and the wave sound is not gone , just fading away but the drum isnt
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap 00:19:337 - in this part is complete silence so I think that cancels out large movements needed from players , thats why I put them so close to each other , also I've been doing this consistently as well 01:44:645 (1,1,1) -
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better Fixed
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders? because the clap sound is different from the jumps and also to emphasize 00:34:253 (1) - 's release
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else holy how did you spot this lol ok fixed
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - ) yeah I noticed but I wanted to map the drums as well
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there yeah ur right

ok done

thanks for mod

Kawashiro

Musical Architect

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Kawashiro 2018-01-17T07:55:51+00:00

from my q

[Insane]

00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc?
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo.
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this?

Done

GL

Petal

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Petal 2018-01-20T15:19:39+00:00

Kawashiro wrote:
from my q

[Insane]
00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo I'll take your first suggestion but I think the rest after that is fine since I wanted to emphasize on the vocals as well
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc? I don't agree because this is a downbeat , but instead I removed NC on this 00:09:617 (3) - instead , seems resonable
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo. I changed the SV on that because I wanted to emphasize 00:11:628 (1) - , well sometimes I just wanted to do something to express the vocals
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo I don't get what you mean ;w; I assume ur telling me to stack 2 on 1's tail but I didn't introduce doing that at eariler stages of the map so maybe not ;w;
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this? because I think the hit window on 01:11:293 (1,1) - is too small so I don't want it to be spaced out so much
Done

GL

thank you for mod!~!!@

Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2018-01-21T09:57:45+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Advanced
There are missing hitsounds everywhere fix
00:30:231 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like that there's only circles here, there are plenty of held vocals so would make more sense to me to use sliders. i prefer this way because the next slider 00:32:075 (1) - have better impact
00:33:751 (4,1,2) - These overlaps are really messy without any reason for them they look fine lol
01:03:918 (2,1,2,3) - This is only going to cause confusion and really hurts my head to look at. Can you use an alternative structure here. placed 2nd circle other side. should be more readable now
yeah not a fan of this too bad but no one like my maps anyway

Underforest wrote:
[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c theyre readable tho lol

th a nk

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fieryrage

Former osu! Champion: 2023 / Mapping Architect

1,424 posts

Joined November 2013

fieryrage 2018-01-31T04:58:24+00:00

o/

priti Avena stop name changing

od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally

00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well?
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat

insane

od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff

00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so)
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else

gl!

Petal

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Petal 2018-02-08T01:46:29+00:00

Redownload for New SB , btw I'm taking over arena's diff since he's gone for over 2 months without sign of returning lol

Last edited by Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Petal

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Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:38+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
o/

priti Avena stop name changing
od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally ok
00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well? yes
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry aw come on this is barely noticeable fixed
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing agreed
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat need to look into this
insane
od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff yea
00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so) fix
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps same reason when I replied to Lukas' mod
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one ok
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically but its cool :/
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend fixed
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else yeah fixed
gl!

thank you

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2018-02-16T01:32:48+00:00

Hi there! Modding from my queue!

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good.
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean.
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map.

- Nice difficulty! Great job!

[Normal]

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good.
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these.
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger.
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please.
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here.
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?

- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that.

[Deppy's Advanced]

00:33:751 (4,1,2) - 00:44:477 (4,1,2) - I know, these overlaps are intentional but are they really necessary? I think you're trying something different in your map but sincerely it doesn't look really neat. You can maybe find other way to don't have these overlaps, I'm sure you can do that much better.
00:40:287 (2,3) - 01:47:326 (5,6) - Minor stuff, stack them properly. You used quite a lot stacks in this difficulty and all of them are well stacked except for these.
01:19:840 (x) - I really missed a beat here, it sounds really empty without it. Would be better to add an object (or at least a slider end) here, you can leave without objects 01:20:510 - , in my personal point of view this is less important.
01:36:600 (5,6,7) - This pattern sounds a bit weird, I think you can represent much better the music here. I tried this rhythmical patterns, I think it'll cover better vocals and instrumentals.
01:55:036 (T) - Can you reduce the volume in this inherited timing point? Actually, it sounds loud to the end of the song, try using around 20% instead and you'll find a better effect.

- Not bad. Maybe not the best difficulty in terms of aesthetic but it flows well in general. Good job!

[GIDZ'S Hard]

01:19:002 (2) - 01:29:728 (2) - 01:32:410 (2) - I'd add New Combos in all these objects, to emphasize the music pitch and those flash kiai that you decided to use.
01:44:645 (3,4,5) - Try reducing a bit the volume in those slider ends mainly, they don't fit really well to the song. In addition, I didn't like to see this pattern stacked, it doesn't flow really well comparing with the whole difficulty, I think you can unstack them as well.

- Good rhythm + Constant spacing = There isn't much more things to mod here

[Starfy's Hyper]

00:31:739 (1,2) - 00:42:466 (1,2) - I prefer to see them unstacked, or at least a bit more separated so players can notice this 1/8 slider. When you play the map, the repetition is not really simple to notice it and it looks like a simple note. Try to make those repetitions more noticeable, so players can expect this pattern much better.
01:20:343 (3,4,1) - 01:21:013 (3,4,1) - 01:31:069 (3,4,1) - 01:31:739 (3,4,1) - Can you rearrange a bit the combo'ing here and transform those antijumps into (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) - (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) respectively? You generally used compressed streams in this kiai section but the usage of those antijumps are understandable here as well, but if you don't make something to make these pattern easier to read, player will probably think this is a simple 1/4. Yeah, you can probably say "players who play this difficulty are not noob to read that" but sometimes they need something like that for a better playability. I'm telling you that because I had a experience in one of my maps in the past, with a similar pattern and some pro players told me to represent better that kind of things and I personally think that makes sense.
01:54:198 (1) - What do you think about ending this slider 1/4 or 1/2 earlier? If you listen the music in 25% playback rate, I think the music stop there.

- Cool. I liked the structure of this difficulty

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here.
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental.
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.

- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - .
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object.
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future.
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3

- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

byd

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byd 2018-02-17T15:13:39+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue! hey hey

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good. ye i just copied hs from my old shitty diff and it had a different rhyhm, will fix hs things
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). eh, doesnt touch hp bar or score bar for me so i think its fine, but if you provide a screenshot or something where it touches it on a different resolution i can change it
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean. ye
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). ye moved it down a bit
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map. tough one, as it follows the song. but i guess keeping it consistent would be better, so changed
- Nice difficulty! Great job! ty :d

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere. i believe the metadata is taken from a ranked set, but there was some arguing about surname first, here's the metadata links and you can decide which is better xd
http://sooopiyo.pw/
https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/p/a ... totto.html
Lanturn wrote:
Lots of Japanese artists use Given / Family order on their websites when writing in Romanization.
http://nbcuni-music.com/maon/
http://www.tomatsuharuka.com/
http://www.mizukinana.jp/
http://minori-smiledays.jugem.jp/

even CDs do this
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-wj5Sd3aZFus/U ... IGNITE.jpg
http://www.generasia.com/w/images/thumb ... N_2003.jpg
http://blog-imgs-45.fc2.com/a/r/t/artw0 ... _q90v2.jpg

add these hs for me @matha https://puu.sh/zpKdU.wav (soft-sliderslide4) https://puu.sh/zpKei.wav (normal-sliderslide5)

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Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-02-22T16:59:25+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue!

Normal

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example omg fixed thank you~
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good. agreed
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these. okay
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger. ok
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please. I think I fixed the problem
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here. ok
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?ok
- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that. Fixed

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.okay I didn't relise how bad this was until now
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here. having this to be a slider just feels nicer , I feel like if it was a spinner it would be too short to bring out any emphasis to the song
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here I was trying to emphasize the sound behind the drums , it would be weird if I were to space these out imo because the noise in the background is fading away , that takes away a reason for a sudden jump/DS increase in the map even though there is a drum sound there
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental. ok
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.one of the reasons that I increased the SV on this slider is because I wanted to bring out 00:25:036 (1) - 's hard downbeat , but currently with your method replacing it with a 1/4 slider and circles won't bring the same effect that I wanted it to
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.good idea
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.fixed , I misclicked here
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.fixed
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this don't really like sliders ending on blue tick because it will ignore the drum sound on the red , but I do agree that this need to change so I did a few adjustments
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.
same reason as above ><
- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - . fixed
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object. it kinda feels weird to have a triple in the calm part , I understand that placing a note there is reasonable but I just personally don't like it
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.ok
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.ok
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future. fixed
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3
I didn't get this either but I mean he must have his own reason right?
- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

Deppyforce

1,990 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2018-03-01T12:32:35+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[Deppy's Advanced]

00:33:751 (4,1,2) - 00:44:477 (4,1,2) - I know, these overlaps are intentional but are they really necessary? I think you're trying something different in your map but sincerely it doesn't look really neat. You can maybe find other way to don't have these overlaps, I'm sure you can do that much better. they are intentional though, you even said it yourself!!
00:40:287 (2,3) - 01:47:326 (5,6) - Minor stuff, stack them properly. You used quite a lot stacks in this difficulty and all of them are well stacked except for these. ok
01:19:840 (x) - I really missed a beat here, it sounds really empty without it. Would be better to add an object (or at least a slider end) here, you can leave without objects 01:20:510 - , in my personal point of view this is less important. but that one has drums, so i think it should be prioritized more imo
01:36:600 (5,6,7) - This pattern sounds a bit weird, I think you can represent much better the music here. I tried this rhythmical patterns, I think it'll cover better vocals and instrumentals. again, im mapping drums!
01:55:036 (T) - Can you reduce the volume in this inherited timing point? Actually, it sounds loud to the end of the song, try using around 20% instead and you'll find a better effect. yes ok
- Not bad. Maybe not the best difficulty in terms of aesthetic but it flows well in general. Good job! thanks

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GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2018-03-02T19:32:29+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Hard
00:16:991 (1) - 01:42:801 (1) - 01:48:164 (1) - These can be spaced a little further apart from each other so it's easier to read what is going on. 1.2x DSed them properly

Underforest wrote:
[hard]
00:13:639 (2) - you can make a 1/4 slider instead why, the music here suggests 1/2 as the strong sounds are at white and red tick
00:53:192 (1) - ctrl+h? it improves the flow a bit and also blanks the previous circle nop, Im following DS consistency for my Hard diffs
01:54:030 (2) - move to x:197 y:285 maybe 01:53:192 (6) - Is on that side so I wanna make my pattern go the other way lol

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
[GIDZ'S Hard]

01:19:002 (2) - 01:29:728 (2) - 01:32:410 (2) - I'd add New Combos in all these objects, to emphasize the music pitch and those flash kiai that you decided to use. Agreed, applied~
01:44:645 (3,4,5) - Try reducing a bit the volume in those slider ends mainly, they don't fit really well to the song. In addition, I didn't like to see this pattern stacked, it doesn't flow really well comparing with the whole difficulty, I think you can unstack them as well.Lowered the volume for this part. The reason why I stacked them is cuz the music pauses every 1/2 rhythm here which in turn I have emphasized visually, therefore flow isn't of my concern here but rather music to visual emphasis
- Good rhythm + Constant spacing = There isn't much more things to mod here Thanks!

UPDATE

osu file format v14

[General]
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PreviewTime: 72801
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

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TitleUnicode:Arousing
Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. Sunao Yoshikawa
ArtistUnicode:DJ TOTTO feat. 吉河順央
Creator:- Matha -
Version:GIDZ'S Hard
Source:jubeat saucer
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[Difficulty]
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Yugu

Elite Mapper

1,006 posts

Joined August 2013

Yugu 2018-03-07T16:47:27+00:00

m4m from your q

Avena's Extreme

01:02:577 (1) - i think it s not good to suddenly increase three times SV in quiet part , although have special sound here and you want to show it . i still think it s easy slider break when player play it first time . nerf some SV maybe better :3
00:23:527 (2) - seems overlap so much to hard to read this slider very well . also it s 2.00x SV so maybe easy get 100 . how about adjusting the angle and stack 00:23:527 (2) - on 00:23:192 (3) - 's slider end ?
01:17:662 (1,2,3) - the drum is not strong enough to support this huge ds imo . this part of the durm 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - is stronger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - , but its ds not bigger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - . i think it should nerf some ds .
01:17:662 (1,2) - can make same overlap pattern like 01:17:326 (1,2) -
01:54:030 (1) - maybe increase some SV or spacing to make player perceive it will be better ? you used high speed sliders in the end part especially here 01:53:527 (1,2,3) - , it also have huge ds . decrease SV suddenly maybe not good .

Insane

01:22:941 (7,8,9,1) - try to make them like this ? some player (newplayer) maybe can t play four notes streams . make them looks like triple can help them to distinguish rhythm .
01:23:527 (3) - change become 1/4 slider ? cuz 01:23:611 - have drum sound

i tried my best

hope it's helpful
gl!

Kyle Y

1,210 posts

Joined November 2013

Kyle Y 2018-03-07T19:18:45+00:00

hi, Starfy.

#in-game M4M request

Top 2 diff ... molamola

Insane

前面intro (~00:12:633 - ) 對ranking 黎講問題不太, 不過我覺得可以再好少少
00:04:253 (4) - 00:06:935 - strong beat 希望加反少少jump. 如果講rhythm 既話...個人喜好鐘意咁處理 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418503|
00:08:276 - missing strong beat, inconsistent with strong beat sound 00:04:253 - 00:05:594 - 00:06:935 - 00:09:617 - etc. Please use clickable object here.
00:20:678 (1) - reverse 位冇1/8 sound, 我聽到既係1/2 同1/4 sound
張圖太多nc... 好colorful, please remove unnecessary nc:
00:13:974 (1) - 因為前面combo chain 00:13:639 (1,2,3,4) - 冇slider ... 咁唔需要加nc 去顯示SV change.
00:19:170 (1) - 依條slider snapping 同前面一樣,都唔需要加nc , 00:19:505 (1) - 先要
00:23:192 (1) - 唔洗加... 但係00:23:527 (2) - 要加因為 00:23:527 - 每小節既strong beat.
00:26:041 (1) - 冇SV change
仲有好多slider nc 問題
00:19:505 (1) - suggest ctrl+g, separate more from 00:19:170 (5) - because 00:19:170 (5,1) - is quite misleading. ctrl+g to meet flowing to 00:19:672 (1) -
00:28:555 (4,5) - and 00:31:237 (4,5) - consistence?
no sound at 01:02:689 - but 01:02:633 -
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - 其實要用slider map beat sound 既話唔係用1/8 snapped 咩 ...一黎分開1/4 slider 二黎1/8 仲有beat 既感覺
01:51:013 (2,1) - 建議 overlap or stacking. 因為player 未必可以馬上從1/2 rhtyhm 轉到1/1. (視覺距離相近)
00:25:036 (1) - 個SB effect 好正
張圖入面既flowing 有待改善... 各部份之間flow 不太連貫可理解為emphasize.. 但各部份入面flowing 唔好就好奇怪.. 有冇咁多野比你強調
再講啦, emphasize 其實都係一個對比所形成, 你全部break flow 只會比人覺得flowing 唔好(00:26:879 (3,1) - 00:29:561 (3,1) - 00:31:237 (4,5) - 01:16:488 (3,1) - )
01:20:008 (4,5,6) - 依種flowing 可接受
about looking:
我估你都懶得改.. 同埋又真係好主觀..不過都講左先
直接比圖算:
00:15:985 (2,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418570
00:04:756 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418735 (fit vocal)
01:05:929 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/N352HYl.png
etc. (我都懶)

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Avana's Extreme

00:03:583 - strong beat here, why should be emphasized by a jump or whatever?
00:19:170 (1) - This is mapped for that beat sound, and Insane diff use 1/4 slider
00:13:639 - This SV change is too sudden.
00:20:678 (1) - I cannot hear any sound at 00:20:804 - but 00:20:846 - and 00:20:929 -
00:23:527 (2) - could you ake it more visible?
00:33:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is not a good pattern here, because jumping (00:33:415 (3,1) - ) in not based on anything. Following beat, it should be 00:33:415 - , 00:33:751 - and 00:34:086 - . Following vocal, it should be 00:33:751 - and 00:34:253 - . 00:33:583 (1) - This beat is not that strong to have a jump here.
01:09:281 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is getting stronger and stronger, so I suggest you can use this pattern :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10423078
01:51:013 (2) - missing strong beat 01:51:181 - . I think it is not suitable to use extented slider here, it is be what you did at 01:52:354 (1,2) - , because 01:51:013 - this beat is really strong, if slider is too long, the feel seems become weaker. (01:51:348 (1,2,1,2) - as well) 01:50:175 (1) - 01:52:857 (1) - this two slider should be extented.
I am not that familiar with SV-change mapping, but I think you can draw more beautiful slider if the slider is such long, and it can give the feel like "you are well-organizing those slider", rather than just using straight sliders. But.... aesthetics is quite objective.

Petal

Global Moderator

1,184 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-03-08T17:49:20+00:00

Yugu wrote:
m4m from your q

Avena's Extreme

01:02:577 (1) - i think it s not good to suddenly increase three times SV in quiet part , although have special sound here and you want to show it . i still think it s easy slider break when player play it first time . nerf some SV maybe better :3 I actually agree here for using 3x SV because no only there is a special sound there but also to emphasize the slider after wards 01:03:415 (2) - I hope you get what I mean
00:23:527 (2) - seems overlap so much to hard to read this slider very well . also it s 2.00x SV so maybe easy get 100 . how about adjusting the angle and stack 00:23:527 (2) - on 00:23:192 (3) - 's slider end ?fixed it another way
01:17:662 (1,2,3) - the drum is not strong enough to support this huge ds imo . this part of the durm 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - is stronger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - , but its ds not bigger than 01:17:662 (1,2,3) - . i think it should nerf some ds . imo hes just trying to make this special by having large DS because unlike other streams , this has only 4 notes so I think that hes trying to emphasize that
01:17:662 (1,2) - can make same overlap pattern like 01:17:326 (1,2) - too hard to read x.x
01:54:030 (1) - maybe increase some SV or spacing to make player perceive it will be better ? you used high speed sliders in the end part especially here 01:53:527 (1,2,3) - , it also have huge ds . decrease SV suddenly maybe not good .its fine since theres an NC there

Insane

01:22:941 (7,8,9,1) - try to make them like this ? some player (newplayer) maybe can t play four notes streams . make them looks like triple can help them to distinguish rhythm .I don't really want to do this because I haven't implemented nor introduce this yet into the map , so I don't want to mess it up here xd
01:23:527 (3) - change become 1/4 slider ? cuz 01:23:611 - have drum sound good catch

i tried my best
hope it's helpful
gl!

Starfy

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Starfy 2018-03-18T10:47:01+00:00

Sorry for being extremely late due to the computer issue :<

Pentori

Pentori wrote:
[Starfy's Hyper]
00:18:080 (7) - dont think this needs to be mapped, as using a triplet here gives the emphasis to 00:18:164 (8) - while it should be on 00:17:996 (6) - for the strong snare. something similar to 00:23:360 (6,1) - plays a lot nicer It sounds smoother if the sounds is mapped. Also in terms of playability, it plays a lot more comfortable!
00:32:075 (2) - 00:42:801 (2) - unrankable cos you cover the repeat slider with the previous circle Fixed
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk about this, the pattern just feels so forced and doesnt work with the music cos its constantly changing I guess the pattern would work since the pattern can bring up and emphasise the sounds well imo

mancuso_JM_

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[Starfy's Hyper]

00:31:739 (1,2) - 00:42:466 (1,2) - I prefer to see them unstacked, or at least a bit more separated so players can notice this 1/8 slider. When you play the map, the repetition is not really simple to notice it and it looks like a simple note. Try to make those repetitions more noticeable, so players can expect this pattern much better. Fixed
01:20:343 (3,4,1) - 01:21:013 (3,4,1) - 01:31:069 (3,4,1) - 01:31:739 (3,4,1) - Can you rearrange a bit the combo'ing here and transform those antijumps into (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) - (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) respectively? You generally used compressed streams in this kiai section but the usage of those antijumps are understandable here as well, but if you don't make something to make these pattern easier to read, player will probably think this is a simple 1/4. Yeah, you can probably say "players who play this difficulty are not noob to read that" but sometimes they need something like that for a better playability. I'm telling you that because I had a experience in one of my maps in the past, with a similar pattern and some pro players told me to represent better that kind of things and I personally think that makes sense. Rearrange the combo pattern to increase readability
01:54:198 (1) - What do you think about ending this slider 1/4 or 1/2 earlier? If you listen the music in 25% playback rate, I think the music stop there. Placing spinner would be appropriate since the sound is not really noticeable to be emphasised separately.
- Cool. I liked the structure of this difficulty Thanks! It's glad to hear that

Thanks for mod!

http://puu.sh/zKbLE/43cd91cd47.rar

Petal

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Petal 2018-03-20T15:35:20+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
hi, Starfy.

#in-game M4M request

Top 2 diff ... molamola

Insane
前面intro (~00:12:633 - ) 對ranking 黎講問題不太, 不過我覺得可以再好少少
00:04:253 (4) - 00:06:935 - strong beat 希望加反少少jump. 如果講rhythm 既話...個人喜好鐘意咁處理 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418503|
00:08:276 - missing strong beat, inconsistent with strong beat sound 00:04:253 - 00:05:594 - 00:06:935 - 00:09:617 - etc. Please use clickable object here.
00:20:678 (1) - reverse 位冇1/8 sound, 我聽到既係1/2 同1/4 sound
張圖太多nc... 好colorful, please remove unnecessary nc:
00:13:974 (1) - 因為前面combo chain 00:13:639 (1,2,3,4) - 冇slider ... 咁唔需要加nc 去顯示SV change.
00:19:170 (1) - 依條slider snapping 同前面一樣,都唔需要加nc , 00:19:505 (1) - 先要
00:23:192 (1) - 唔洗加... 但係00:23:527 (2) - 要加因為 00:23:527 - 每小節既strong beat.
00:26:041 (1) - 冇SV change
仲有好多slider nc 問題
00:19:505 (1) - suggest ctrl+g, separate more from 00:19:170 (5) - because 00:19:170 (5,1) - is quite misleading. ctrl+g to meet flowing to 00:19:672 (1) -
00:28:555 (4,5) - and 00:31:237 (4,5) - consistence?
no sound at 01:02:689 - but 01:02:633 -
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - 其實要用slider map beat sound 既話唔係用1/8 snapped 咩 ...一黎分開1/4 slider 二黎1/8 仲有beat 既感覺
01:51:013 (2,1) - 建議 overlap or stacking. 因為player 未必可以馬上從1/2 rhtyhm 轉到1/1. (視覺距離相近)
00:25:036 (1) - 個SB effect 好正
張圖入面既flowing 有待改善... 各部份之間flow 不太連貫可理解為emphasize.. 但各部份入面flowing 唔好就好奇怪.. 有冇咁多野比你強調
再講啦, emphasize 其實都係一個對比所形成, 你全部break flow 只會比人覺得flowing 唔好(00:26:879 (3,1) - 00:29:561 (3,1) - 00:31:237 (4,5) - 01:16:488 (3,1) - )
01:20:008 (4,5,6) - 依種flowing 可接受
about looking:
我估你都懶得改.. 同埋又真係好主觀..不過都講左先
直接比圖算:
00:15:985 (2,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418570
00:04:756 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10418735 (fit vocal)
01:05:929 (1) - https://i.imgur.com/N352HYl.png
etc. (我都懶)

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Avana's Extreme
00:03:583 - strong beat here, why should be emphasized by a jump or whatever?
00:19:170 (1) - This is mapped for that beat sound, and Insane diff use 1/4 slider
00:13:639 - This SV change is too sudden.
00:20:678 (1) - I cannot hear any sound at 00:20:804 - but 00:20:846 - and 00:20:929 -
00:23:527 (2) - could you ake it more visible?
00:33:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is not a good pattern here, because jumping (00:33:415 (3,1) - ) in not based on anything. Following beat, it should be 00:33:415 - , 00:33:751 - and 00:34:086 - . Following vocal, it should be 00:33:751 - and 00:34:253 - . 00:33:583 (1) - This beat is not that strong to have a jump here.
01:09:281 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is getting stronger and stronger, so I suggest you can use this pattern :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10423078
01:51:013 (2) - missing strong beat 01:51:181 - . I think it is not suitable to use extented slider here, it is be what you did at 01:52:354 (1,2) - , because 01:51:013 - this beat is really strong, if slider is too long, the feel seems become weaker. (01:51:348 (1,2,1,2) - as well) 01:50:175 (1) - 01:52:857 (1) - this two slider should be extented.
I am not that familiar with SV-change mapping, but I think you can draw more beautiful slider if the slider is such long, and it can give the feel like "you are well-organizing those slider", rather than just using straight sliders. But.... aesthetics is quite objective.

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