NM From my "Modding Madness!" queue!
Since this map already looks great and plays even better I'll simply be giving you some Aesthetic/Visual advice
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Insane
00:10:287 (1) - Lower SV here so you can both represent the low sound better and decrease it's length so that you can move it a little more up to fit the blanket better.
00:11:293 (1) - This does not fit, not only does it break flow but it does so with high SV even if the sound is a long held one with just increase in pitch, oh and I almost forgot to mention it does a iffy overlap with 00:11:628 (1)
00:20:175 (3,5) 00:20:343 (4,5,1) 00:29:728 (4,5) - Iffy overlaps again, there are a ton of overlaps I'm skipping through but that's because I'm only highlighting the worst offenders haha
00:20:510 (5,1,2) - Questionable rythm choice, what would fit the song best here would be a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:510 (5) that and then a circle on 00:20:678 with a kickslider on 00:20:762 these three ticks.
00:21:013 (1) - I feel like this shouldn't end on a white tick, a drum clap (Slider end) is a louder sound than the Bass (Slider Head)
00:27:047 (3,4) 00:27:885 (6,7) - By far the ugliest overlap because not only does the slider end and head overlap but the bodies as well. I mean this in the most insulting way possible (no i dont lol)
00:29:058 (1) - Fix ze blanket
00:41:628 (2,1) - This overlap isn't ASS bad as the others but why not blanket instead?
00:43:639 (4,1,4,6,7,1) 00:53:862 (1,3,4,1) - Ayy overlap fiesta
01:01:572 00:58:555 - Sound missing under this little slider, should be mapped with 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider, preferably 1/8.
01:05:259 (4) - boi this slider skips over TWO important bass sounds 01:05:427 01:05:594 then ENDS ON NO SOUND 01:05:678 fixerino this.
01:05:762 (1,1) - These two are almost the same as above, but instead both start on non-important vocals and red commits the absolute act of sin by ending on a extremely strong sound 01:06:600 for the blue slider it misses sound on 01:05:929
01:10:455 (2,1) 01:28:723 (4,5) - Fix visual flow leading into the stream.
01:29:393 (1) - New combo here isn't necessary, unless you lower the volume of 01:29:058 (5,6,7,8) because if you listen to the song the last note is the strongest one in terms of volume, so if volume would lead into it it would make more sense to emphasise with new combo.
01:31:237 (7) - Eeeeeeehhhhhhh don't use 3/4th of length, also don't use a slider here at all imo because this sound 01:31:404 is stronger than 01:31:237 this sound.
01:32:075 (3,1) - You should use some additional distinction to these note so that it's easier for players to read the full beat gap.
01:33:248 (2,3) - Don't go from using sharp angles to this wide angle with massive distance and ESPECIALLY not in this case where it leads into a stream.
01:42:382 (1) - Howbow another 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider here
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Starfy's Light Insane
00:01:572 (1,1) - Stack these two slider ends, this looks more visually pleasing and adds some additional distance to the next note which gives more emphasis to the sound.
00:09:449 (2,3,6,7) - For the sake of consistency you should add some distinction between those depending on beatgap, first one looks identical to the second yet one is 1/2 the other is 1/4.
00:09:617 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap fiesta
00:59:728 (4,6) - A little iffy overlap
01:02:745 (2) 01:05:427 (2) - Even if nothing is technically wrong with this, would use double tap or just a jump here instead of this slider, it sounds out of place both starting and ending at important sounds.
01:07:438 (4,2) - Repeat arrows needs to be more visible
01:06:767 (2,4,2) - Have to question your rythm choice, the repeating end of a slider should be considered a passive note yet it's on the most important white ticks of this section. Hitsounding with a clap isn't enough here my man
01:10:957 (5,6) - Another questionable rythm choice, these do not appear to serve any purpose exept vaguely, and I mean vaguely following the vocals, even though the vocal is a held note with just a very SLIGHT change in pitch not warranting these slider jumps and especially not in the middle of a streamy 1/4 section.
01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like these should be formed in some pattern or shape because having them sorta stacked like all your bursts makes it hard to read that it's actually a 1/2 pattern. Also a pattern would add better emphasis to the sounds.
01:32:075 (1,2) - The new combo on 1 has same problem as diff above, and 2 needs to have some sort of destinction so you can easily tell the beat gap.
01:31:739 (3,4) - It would fit with a kickslider here
01:49:170 (6,1) - Maybe fix flow/visual flow to lead better into the stream?
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Yo couldn't find much wrong with Starfy's map, I wish I could mod more diffs but judging from what I already wrote you should be able to fine tune the others yourself! I've got a terrible workload from my queue so GL
Since this map already looks great and plays even better I'll simply be giving you some Aesthetic/Visual advice
[]
Insane
00:10:287 (1) - Lower SV here so you can both represent the low sound better and decrease it's length so that you can move it a little more up to fit the blanket better.
00:11:293 (1) - This does not fit, not only does it break flow but it does so with high SV even if the sound is a long held one with just increase in pitch, oh and I almost forgot to mention it does a iffy overlap with 00:11:628 (1)
00:20:175 (3,5) 00:20:343 (4,5,1) 00:29:728 (4,5) - Iffy overlaps again, there are a ton of overlaps I'm skipping through but that's because I'm only highlighting the worst offenders haha
00:20:510 (5,1,2) - Questionable rythm choice, what would fit the song best here would be a 1/4 slider to replace 00:20:510 (5) that and then a circle on 00:20:678 with a kickslider on 00:20:762 these three ticks.
00:21:013 (1) - I feel like this shouldn't end on a white tick, a drum clap (Slider end) is a louder sound than the Bass (Slider Head)
00:27:047 (3,4) 00:27:885 (6,7) - By far the ugliest overlap because not only does the slider end and head overlap but the bodies as well. I mean this in the most insulting way possible (no i dont lol)
00:29:058 (1) - Fix ze blanket
00:41:628 (2,1) - This overlap isn't ASS bad as the others but why not blanket instead?
00:43:639 (4,1,4,6,7,1) 00:53:862 (1,3,4,1) - Ayy overlap fiesta
01:01:572 00:58:555 - Sound missing under this little slider, should be mapped with 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider, preferably 1/8.
01:05:259 (4) - boi this slider skips over TWO important bass sounds 01:05:427 01:05:594 then ENDS ON NO SOUND 01:05:678 fixerino this.
01:05:762 (1,1) - These two are almost the same as above, but instead both start on non-important vocals and red commits the absolute act of sin by ending on a extremely strong sound 01:06:600 for the blue slider it misses sound on 01:05:929
01:10:455 (2,1) 01:28:723 (4,5) - Fix visual flow leading into the stream.
01:29:393 (1) - New combo here isn't necessary, unless you lower the volume of 01:29:058 (5,6,7,8) because if you listen to the song the last note is the strongest one in terms of volume, so if volume would lead into it it would make more sense to emphasise with new combo.
01:31:237 (7) - Eeeeeeehhhhhhh don't use 3/4th of length, also don't use a slider here at all imo because this sound 01:31:404 is stronger than 01:31:237 this sound.
01:32:075 (3,1) - You should use some additional distinction to these note so that it's easier for players to read the full beat gap.
01:33:248 (2,3) - Don't go from using sharp angles to this wide angle with massive distance and ESPECIALLY not in this case where it leads into a stream.
01:42:382 (1) - Howbow another 1/8 or 1/16 kickslider here
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Starfy's Light Insane
00:01:572 (1,1) - Stack these two slider ends, this looks more visually pleasing and adds some additional distance to the next note which gives more emphasis to the sound.
00:09:449 (2,3,6,7) - For the sake of consistency you should add some distinction between those depending on beatgap, first one looks identical to the second yet one is 1/2 the other is 1/4.
00:09:617 (3,4,1,2) - Overlap fiesta
00:59:728 (4,6) - A little iffy overlap
01:02:745 (2) 01:05:427 (2) - Even if nothing is technically wrong with this, would use double tap or just a jump here instead of this slider, it sounds out of place both starting and ending at important sounds.
01:07:438 (4,2) - Repeat arrows needs to be more visible
01:06:767 (2,4,2) - Have to question your rythm choice, the repeating end of a slider should be considered a passive note yet it's on the most important white ticks of this section. Hitsounding with a clap isn't enough here my man
01:10:957 (5,6) - Another questionable rythm choice, these do not appear to serve any purpose exept vaguely, and I mean vaguely following the vocals, even though the vocal is a held note with just a very SLIGHT change in pitch not warranting these slider jumps and especially not in the middle of a streamy 1/4 section.
01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like these should be formed in some pattern or shape because having them sorta stacked like all your bursts makes it hard to read that it's actually a 1/2 pattern. Also a pattern would add better emphasis to the sounds.
01:32:075 (1,2) - The new combo on 1 has same problem as diff above, and 2 needs to have some sort of destinction so you can easily tell the beat gap.
01:31:739 (3,4) - It would fit with a kickslider here
01:49:170 (6,1) - Maybe fix flow/visual flow to lead better into the stream?
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Yo couldn't find much wrong with Starfy's map, I wish I could mod more diffs but judging from what I already wrote you should be able to fine tune the others yourself! I've got a terrible workload from my queue so GL