DJ TOTTO feat. Yoshikawa Sunao - Arousing · forum

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-09T15:43:06+00:00

- G I D Z - wrote:
Second post just to mod the insane~

General
Tags conflict in Derpyfork's diff Fixed
BG.jpg missing again .-. I don't see AI mod saying that zz
White or Black not recommended as a combo colour pls change Fixed

Insane
00:15:818 (2) - I think u can stack on 00:15:985 (3) - end cuz the distance right now feels weird I think if I stack these two together , there will be no movement needed and that would be werid since I placed before this was jumps (00:14:980 (3,4,5) - )
00:19:170 (1,2) - I think u can clean up the aesthetics here, maybe like http://puu.sh/xtPok/483b6dce43.jpg ?yes
00:20:510 (5) - This feels too close imo due to how u've increased distance for each note at 00:20:008 (2,3,4) - , I think u can stack it on 00:19:672 (1) - head. ya
00:20:678 (1) - The angle is too sharp imo, move it to the right and down a bit ya
00:21:348 (4) - This feels very close again cuz of the 1/4 kick slider jump earlier, I think u can move the note to 393,181 and then ctrl G 00:21:684 (6,7) - ya
00:23:527 (2) - It's overlapping the head a bit, move it up Fixed
00:25:036 (1) - Why not extend this slider to the blue tick like the prevs ones? ya
00:27:047 (4,5,2,3) - Inconsistencies in spacing the sliders when they have the same rhythmical gaps. I think u should just space 00:28:220 (3) - like 00:27:382 (5) - . http://puu.sh/xtPQh/f4584558da.jpg yes
00:30:064 (5) - This looks really ugly standing out like this, u could try smth like http://puu.sh/xtPSC/4415552f08.jpg Thanks for pic I changed it a little more
00:31:237 (4) - I think using a simple curve would look better here. http://puu.sh/xtPV3/bff8942b7b.jpg Might change this, cuz I used it here aswell 00:41:963 (4) -
01:03:918 (2) - Make this more symmetrical? http://puu.sh/xtQ1i/e32c683d5d.jpg I tried my best
01:06:935 (2,3) - Why suddenly so far lol I dun hear anything in the music that complements this. Just smth simple? http://puu.sh/xtQ5G/4177073fd8.jpg Fixed
01:13:136 (3) - Move this to 471,324 for a better angle for 01:13:304 (1) - ? Moved it a bit more downwards from ur pic
01:13:639 (2,3) - Would change their positions for better flow. http://puu.sh/xtQdh/db60a917d5.jpg Changed
01:20:929 (4) - Why not just stack? xd fine ;w;
01:22:354 (5) - U can move this further imo, 411,348 looks good I think the current one is fine , the angel from 5-6 looks weird if I change it and I don't want the jump to be 2 big
01:25:036 (4) - Move to 140,111? that works
01:27:047 (6,7,8) - Could look better aesthetically imo, http://puu.sh/xtQkv/2c6bbe5f4f.jpg I don't really like notes overlaps with slider ends at least don't look good to me . and if I move 8 upwards it will overlap with 1's sliderhead :ww
01:42:382 (1) - Why not make it like http://puu.sh/xtQmt/3a42685447.jpg ? Fixed

I think overall u can clean up some aesthetics without ruining ur patterns too much and also check for some spacing issues across the map,
it doesnt have to be onsistent for the whole map but maybe between 3 notes or smth.

Edit:Starfy's light Insane: hell remap kds tks /runs

I think this is better tbh https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/IVBlDKe.jpg

tks nishiki

-Nishiki- wrote:
heyo
Insane00:03:583 (1,2,3,4,5) - very messy placement.fix this part up. I think its fine, just following the same distance
00:06:097 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - angle these a bit like this Yes

00:10:790 (3) - rotate this a bit,flat placement looks unpolished. Placed it like this to kinda blanket with 00:09:617 (1) -
00:15:483 (1) - replace this with a beat,there's an important sound on 00:15:650 that's ignored and made a slider end (slider ends are passive,don't use slider ends when a beat is emphasized.) yes
00:18:332 (1,2) - i would add a green tick on the end of these sliders at 5% volume as to silence the slider end's hitsound.forgot these 2
00:19:672 (1) - lengthen this to 3/4 instead of 1/2. I don't see any reason to...
00:21:013 (3) - ^ ^
00:27:047 (4) - there's a beat on 00:27:214 that's completely ignored because the 3/4 slider is in the way.turn the slider into a 1/2 slider. I don't think beat matters here because I'm fully following the vocal
00:29:058 (1,2,3) - this is just weird.clean it up. blanketing that is weird imo

00:34:253 (1) - doesn't make sense to have this shape. Fixed
00:42:466 (2,3,4) - this doesn't match the rhythm of the actual song. Fixed
01:03:918 (2) - this needs a bit of a cleanup. Fixed in gee's mod
01:04:924 (3,4) - move these a bit.they don't fit the flow of the map when they're up there.I blanket 2 with 4
01:06:265 (7) - there is an important beat on the end of this slider.shorten the slider and add a beat where the slider ended before.Fixed
01:18:667 (9) - there should be a slow slider here instead of a normal beat. there was completely no sound after the circle :w;
01:19:672 (3) - blanket maybe with 01:19:002 (1) ? Fixed
01:20:678 (3,4,5) - this is weird.not gimmicky,just weird. stacked them in gee's mod
01:23:360 (5) - nc? no need
01:29:393 (9) - slow slider maybe? ^
01:32:075 (1) - rotate this a bit or maybe blanket on top of 01:32:410 (2) like this:
I wanted it to have circular movement
01:39:449 (5) - nc maybe no need ^^
01:44:980 (2) - maybe flip this around. same sound so noo need I think
mind if i ask to gd? (first 20 sec)

Sorry GD full already maybe next map XD

tks Reynold

Reynolduh wrote:
hihi from my q

General: Change BPM offset to 1,572. Then open AI Mod and snap all objects using the timing section located at the top I think the beatmap offset is correct already since Starfy already told me the right one

Normal: Try not to use sliders with more than 1 reverse in normal diff's. I mean if u used that a lot in the level that's fine but since it's the first one, change to 1/2 slider with one repeat and circle at 01:54:030 - I mean its better to use reverse than spamming circles lol

Insane: 00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nice

NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE LEMME GIVE U A STAR

Thanks ww

Kanzaki H Aria

157 posts

Joined June 2011

Kanzaki H Aria 2017-09-09T17:24:59+00:00

Hello.
[General]

Unused file: sb/black.jpg

[GIDZ's Hard]

SPOILER

01:12:801 (6) - NC?
01:22:857 (3,4) - inconsistency on DS.
01:41:795 (4,5) - ^

[Insane]

SPOILER

00:06:265 (3,5) - two sliders should align with same y-axis.
00:07:438 (1,3) - two sliders should align with same x-axis.
00:15:985 (3,4,5) - maybe uses same DS? just my view, it depend on you.
00:23:192 (1) - sounds weird, the slider should ends on 00:23:360.
00:51:181 (4) - copy 00:50:510 (2) - and uses ctrl + h.
00:55:874 (2,3,4) - maybe uses the same DS?

That's it, good luck.

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-09T18:50:36+00:00

KanpanRin wrote:
[GIDZ's Hard]
SPOILER
01:12:801 (6) - NC? Should have been fixed from last update??
01:22:857 (3,4) - inconsistency on DS.
01:41:795 (4,5) - ^

The DS things are DSed by the editor so I'll just leave it...

Update

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Shunao

1,906 posts

Joined February 2016

Shunao 2017-09-15T17:59:06+00:00

Heyo! sorry i'm late because school :/

NM from Q

Link's Easy

00:35:092 (1) - can you place it somewhere else because it contact with 00:33:081 (1,1)
01:07:941 (3) - touch the drain bar https://puu.sh/xAto1/4797a27250.png
01:34:756 (1,2) - why you don't continue to follow the good flow i mean 01:35:762 (2) - should be better at x:162 x:37 imo

Normal

open aimod
00:19:505 - add a note?
00:37:103 (1,4) - not a perfect stack :/
01:20:008 (3,4) - can you make them similar?
01:24:030 (1,2) - ^
01:53:527 (5) - should be better imo to make something like this it's emphasis better the last beat https://puu.sh/xAtIe/9672f5ba40.png

Insane

00:36:097 (3,9) - should be so much better if they should be stacked tbh
00:16:320 (5,6) - are you sure that they are blanket correctly?
00:19:505 (2,4) - better stack
01:15:650 (1) - remove nc and add it here 01:15:985 (5) - for consistency with the vocals
01:22:522 (6,10) - stack them properly
01:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like i said before about nc remove here 01:26:376 (1) - and add it here 01:26:712 (5)
01:39:449 (5) - nc for vocals
01:44:980 (2,4) - better stack
01:54:030 (4) - nc for this last slider?

Jennifer

349 posts

Joined July 2015

Jennifer 2017-09-16T05:10:36+00:00

as requested from my queue; great map!
somethings might not be to the latest version, sorry about that!!

[insane]

00:14:645 (2,4,1) - could you make them a triangle? i think it would look better since right now 2 and 4 visually look some what cramped (you might have to adjust 5 to the right since it'll be a tiny bit uneven)[url=https://puu.sh/xv8hR/40ae68e63b.jpg]x[/img]
00:20:343 (4,5) - a little bit off the stack
00:41:628 (3) - i think you should unstack this, just like you did for the others. 00:40:455 (6) - possibly here? it does get a little cramped though
00:51:181 (4) - i feel like this would play better ctrl g (i think you're going for a copy paste with 00:56:209 (3,4) - ? the second one is fine, imo the first one plays a bit more comfortable that way. reason for that is majority of these 1/2 pairs have been going opposite ways, i think it should be the same)
01:26:041 (4) - make anchor in middle? it looks more balanced

[normal]
00:19:170 - dont really get the rhythm here, why skip over these two clear sounds? slider + slider + circle + circle maybe? you mapped this for the second part
01:53:527 (5) - is a bit unexpected imo, the whole map havent had 2 repeats yet so would this be a little harsh?

good luck

squirrelpascals

982 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2017-09-17T06:46:03+00:00

Hi, from queue

insane

• 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - I think making this a straight line would just look more structured with your straight slider 4

• 00:15:985 (4,5) - for aesthetic purposes, i would avoid barely touching objects like this (besides for intentional overlaps)

• 00:17:661 - Wouldn't recommend lowering past %20 volume because then it becomes questionably quiet

• 00:20:678 (1,2,3) - this flow is pretty uncomfortable because of the wide agle combined with the drastic spacing change. adjusting to improve one of these will help this

• 00:22:019 (8) - nc to indicate sv reduction here, otherwise its just suprising

• 00:25:036 (1,2,3) - these all have 1/4 gaps but why do you use such different spacing here? connfusing because 2,3 reads as a 1/2 jumps compared to 1,2

• 00:31:907 (3,4,5) - triple really doesn't feel applicable here, i only hear 1/2 rhythm going here

• 00:41:125 (1,2,3,4,1) - lots of varying 1/4 spacing here, make this more visually consistent please. also you have a little bit of room still to the right of 00:41:628 (3) - , why stack this with 2? and also, these are touching 00:41:628 (3,4) -

• 00:47:493 (9,10,11,12) - you have a weird guitar sound here that really changes the sound of what the stream is mapped to, consider reflecting this in the map somehow

• 00:49:002 (5,6) - considering how you mapped vocals at 00:49:337 (7,8,9) -maybe make this a 1/2 slider as well to more fluently map to these vocals?

• 01:21:348 (1) - uneven wave aesthetic here

• 01:26:376 (1,2,3,4) - same as i said about the triple earlier, i dont hear a rhythm in the music for streaming ( it sounds DURING the next slider)

• 01:36:935 (5) - this curves a lot more at the bottom near the corner, can you even this out and make that curve look more rounded

• 01:38:276 (6) - would recommend endding this ont hat white tick even if youre not following drums putting that powerful snare note on a sliderend is a hell of a lot better than complere skipping over it

• 01:45:315 (3,1) - would recommend adding spacing here, more movement would emphasize that impact noise that's here (sounds like a synth or something? idk)

• 01:52:857 (1) - another very uneven wave lolz

~~i expected to have more time for this today but since it's very late it looks like im going to need to stop. I'll do my best to finish this with gero's set tomorrow~~ continuing

starfy

• 00:20:678 (3,4) - should be snapped to 1/3, thats how the wubs are in the music. also do something to show 1/3 change

• 00:36:265 (3) - sounds very weird how you have a snare and a vocal on the slidertail but not that strong of a beat on the sliderhead. a ctrl+g on 00:36:097 (2,3) - for rhythm would work. same thing for 00:37:270 (2) - too with the snare

• 01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels really forced into the map because it ignores the different types of rhythm in the music throughout it. Would recommend looking at this pattern and changing it and try to prioritize making stronger beats clickable

• 01:46:488 (4,5) - same, also snapped to 1/3 in music

cool diff, just some rhythm that can be improved here and there

gidz

• 00:15:650 (1,2) - would be better as a slider imo, it sounds more like one continuous buzzing sound rather than 2 separate beats. same for 00:28:723 (3,4) -

• 00:31:739 (1,2) - ctrl+g for rhythm works well here, otherwise the strong snare + buzz sound at 00:32:075 - just lands on a slidertail. same at 00:42:466 (1,2) -

• 01:28:723 (4,5,6,1) - confusing pattern for hard players, they will probably play 01:29:058 (6,1) - just like 01:28:723 (4,5) - also, the way these objects stack make the doubles touch all the circles around them, maybe break ds by a little bit and space these so that wont happen

• 01:42:801 (1,2,3,4) - 01:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - they way you made these 1/4 repeat patterns here vs. at the beginning (00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - etc) makes them feel pretty cluttered

deppy

• 00:11:628 (1) - use more slider points to make the curve on this slider smoother

• 00:34:253 (1) - moving this to the right so that the slidertail of 00:33:751 (4) - lines up with this sliderhead would be a lot more pleasing

• 00:35:427 - I think it would be a lot simpler to make this clickable rather than the red tick before it, it has a stronger snare beat on it, and in lower diffs white ticks should take more priority over red ticks (generally).

• 00:41:125 - same as before, if you want to make this star pattern work a 1/2 slider at 00:40:957 (4) - would work

• 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - probably really difficult for an advanced diff, a lot of spaced circles in a row. add a slider in ehre somewhere

• 01:54:030 (3) - cool slider!!

normal

• 00:16:991 (2) - 01:22:689 (1) - symmetry on this slider is totally off

• 01:32:745 (1) - considering how you follow vocals at 01:30:734 (3,4,5,6) - , maybe you can move this back to the red tick before it to make this rhythm more fluent?

• 01:42:801 (1) - symmetry here, AAAAAAAA

• 01:44:142 (2,1,2) - very weird rhythm here, mostly because of the 3/2 rythm between the first two. making 01:44:142 (2) - a slider would probably help

• 01:51:851 (1,3,4) - overlap here looks very awkward in general, putting 3 on this sliderhead 01:51:851 (1) - would work fine if you were trying to avoid that

link

• 01:07:941 (3) - off screen, touching hp bar

• 01:48:164 (1) - REALLy uneven wave here, making this symmetric would be a lot more pleasing

good set, top diff just feels rough around the edges for me.
good luck!

Last edited by squirrelpascals 2017-09-17T19:01:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Petal

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Petal 2017-09-17T07:05:45+00:00

tks kanpan

KanpanRin wrote:
Hello.
[General]
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Removed

[Insane]
00:06:265 (3,5) - two sliders should align with same y-axis. I think I fixed what you mean lol
00:07:438 (1,3) - two sliders should align with same x-axis. ^
00:15:985 (3,4,5) - maybe uses same DS? just my view, it depend on you. Nah its fine
00:23:192 (1) - sounds weird, the slider should ends on 00:23:360. actually there is still sound on the blue tick
00:51:181 (4) - copy 00:50:510 (2) - and uses ctrl + h. though ctrl + g would be better
00:55:874 (2,3,4) - maybe uses the same DS? its fine :L

That's it, good luck.

tks shogun

ShogunMoon wrote:
Normal
open aimod all fixed!!
00:19:505 - add a note? good idea
00:37:103 (1,4) - not a perfect stack :/ Fixed when checking DS thank you!
01:20:008 (3,4) - can you make them similar? thanks
01:24:030 (1,2) - ^
01:53:527 (5) - should be better imo to make something like this it's emphasis better the last beat https://puu.sh/xAtIe/9672f5ba40.png
thank you!!

Insane
00:36:097 (3,9) - should be so much better if they should be stacked tbh you are right
00:16:320 (5,6) - are you sure that they are blanket correctly? now it is
00:19:505 (2,4) - better stack ya
01:15:650 (1) - remove nc and add it here 01:15:985 (5) - for consistency with the vocals that's better
01:22:522 (6,10) - stack them properly that's better
01:26:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - like i said before about nc remove here 01:26:376 (1) - and add it here 01:26:712 (5) done
01:39:449 (5) - nc for vocals done
01:44:980 (2,4) - better stack done
01:54:030 (4) - nc for this last slider? done

tks jenngle

Jennglebells wrote:

as requested from my queue; great map!
somethings might not be to the latest version, sorry about that!!

[insane]
00:14:645 (2,4,1) - could you make them a triangle? i think it would look better since right now 2 and 4 visually look some what cramped (you might have to adjust 5 to the right since it'll be a tiny bit uneven)[url=https://puu.sh/xv8hR/40ae68e63b.jpg]x[/img] this is apart of the maps design :0
00:20:343 (4,5) - a little bit off the stack Fixed in prev mod thanks!
00:41:628 (3) - i think you should unstack this, just like you did for the others. 00:40:455 (6) - possibly here? it does get a little cramped though fixed long time ago :L
00:51:181 (4) - i feel like this would play better ctrl g (i think you're going for a copy paste with 00:56:209 (3,4) - ? the second one is fine, imo the first one plays a bit more comfortable that way. reason for that is majority of these 1/2 pairs have been going opposite ways, i think it should be the same) I wanted it to be facing the same direction to express the same sound
01:26:041 (4) - make anchor in middle? it looks more balanced I like the current better because its unique

[normal]
00:19:170 - dont really get the rhythm here, why skip over these two clear sounds? slider + slider + circle + circle maybe? you mapped this for the second part fixed in prev mod
01:53:527 (5) - is a bit unexpected imo, the whole map havent had 2 repeats yet so would this be a little harsh? fixed in prev mod

update the map before modding!!!!!
good luck

I'll reply to squirrelpascals' mod tmr , once he finishes the full mod

thanks everyone

bite you death

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bite you death 2017-09-17T20:28:05+00:00

shogunmoon

ShogunMoon wrote:
Link's Easy
00:35:092 (1) - can you place it somewhere else because it contact with 00:33:081 (1,1)
01:07:941 (3) - touch the drain bar https://puu.sh/xAto1/4797a27250.png
01:34:756 (1,2) - why you don't continue to follow the good flow i mean 01:35:762 (2) - should be better at x:162 x:37 imo

fixed all

squirrelpascals

squirrelpascals wrote:
• 01:07:941 (3) - off screen, touching hp bar

• 01:48:164 (1) - REALLy uneven wave here, making this symmetric would be a lot more pleasing

fixed all

ty for mods

own change: cs 2.5

hello its me

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_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2017-09-19T14:04:36+00:00

Insane

00:09:617 (1,2) - It would fit your current NC pattern a lot more to swap these NCs around
00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would reverse the spacing if I were you with this stream. To me it's more intense in at the start and gets less intense from 00:47:493 (9) -
01:11:293 (9) - suggestion ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126521
01:26:041 (4,5) - would flow better if you did something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126536 You'd get to keep the emphasis on 4 as well just in this case you get spacing emphasis instead of change in flow
01:44:142 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt underwhelming. I expected strong beats as these to have more spacing, especially since you have pauses later 01:44:645 (1,2,3) - so it would be easy to recover

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-19T15:44:35+00:00

tks squirrel

squirrelpascals wrote:
Hi, from q

insane• 00:03:918 (2,3,4) - I think making this a straight line would just look more structured with your straight slider 4 fix

• 00:15:985 (4,5) - for aesthetic purposes, i would avoid barely touching objects like this (besides for intentional overlaps) fix

• 00:17:661 - Wouldn't recommend lowering past %20 volume because then it becomes questionably quiet fix

• 00:20:678 (1,2,3) - this flow is pretty uncomfortable because of the wide agle combined with the drastic spacing change. adjusting to improve one of these will help this lowered spacing

• 00:22:019 (8) - nc to indicate sv reduction here, otherwise its just suprising fix

• 00:25:036 (1,2,3) - these all have 1/4 gaps but why do you use such different spacing here? connfusing because 2,3 reads as a 1/2 jumps compared to 1,2 made spacing consistence here

• 00:31:907 (3,4,5) - triple really doesn't feel applicable here, i only hear 1/2 rhythm going here fix

• 00:41:125 (1,2,3,4,1) - lots of varying 1/4 spacing here, make this more visually consistent please. also you have a little bit of room still to the right of 00:41:628 (3) - , why stack this with 2? and also, these are touching 00:41:628 (3,4) - fix

• 00:47:493 (9,10,11,12) - you have a weird guitar sound here that really changes the sound of what the stream is mapped to, consider reflecting this in the map somehow made the guitar sound a slider

• 00:49:002 (5,6) - considering how you mapped vocals at 00:49:337 (7,8,9) -maybe make this a 1/2 slider as well to more fluently map to these vocals? I think that these are already following the vocals correctly

• 01:21:348 (1) - uneven wave aesthetic here fix

• 01:26:376 (1,2,3,4) - same as i said about the triple earlier, i dont hear a rhythm in the music for streaming ( it sounds DURING the next slider) fixed

• 01:36:935 (5) - this curves a lot more at the bottom near the corner, can you even this out and make that curve look more rounded I think this slider is fine, its the roundest I could do it until it goes off the map

• 01:38:276 (6) - would recommend endding this ont hat white tick even if youre not following drums putting that powerful snare note on a sliderend is a hell of a lot better than complere skipping over it fix

• 01:45:315 (3,1) - would recommend adding spacing here, more movement would emphasize that impact noise that's here (sounds like a synth or something? idk) fix

• 01:52:857 (1) - another very uneven wave lolz I did my best to fix it

normal

• 00:16:991 (2) - 01:22:689 (1) - symmetry on this slider is totally off fix

• 01:32:745 (1) - considering how you follow vocals at 01:30:734 (3,4,5,6) - , maybe you can move this back to the red tick before it to make this rhythm more fluent? Don't really understand you here lol

• 01:42:801 (1) - symmetry here, AAAAAAAA fix

• 01:44:142 (2,1,2) - very weird rhythm here, mostly because of the 3/2 rythm between the first two. making 01:44:142 (2) - a slider would probably help fix

• 01:51:851 (1,3,4) - overlap here looks very awkward in general, putting 3 on this sliderhead 01:51:851 (1) - would work fine if you were trying to avoid that thanks!

good set, top diff just feels rough around the edges for me.
good luck!

thanks kissessssss

Kisses wrote:
Insane
00:09:617 (1,2) - It would fit your current NC pattern a lot more to swap these NCs around I think its fine because its a beginning of another segment
00:46:991 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I would reverse the spacing if I were you with this stream. To me it's more intense in at the start and gets less intense from 00:47:493 (9) - changed from other mod
01:11:293 (9) - suggestion ~ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126521 fix
01:26:041 (4,5) - would flow better if you did something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9126536 You'd get to keep the emphasis on 4 as well just in this case you get spacing emphasis instead of change in flow changed in other mod
01:44:142 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt underwhelming. I expected strong beats as these to have more spacing, especially since you have pauses later 01:44:645 (1,2,3) - so it would be easy to recover increased spacing

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-19T17:39:54+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
gidz
• 00:15:650 (1,2) - would be better as a slider imo, it sounds more like one continuous buzzing sound rather than 2 separate beats. same for 00:28:723 (3,4) - Hmm, I think I like to put more emphasis on the hi-hats as I follow more on the drums

• 00:31:739 (1,2) - ctrl+g for rhythm works well here, otherwise the strong snare + buzz sound at 00:32:075 - just lands on a slidertail. same at 00:42:466 (1,2) - That buzz sound feels more like a sudden release/burst of sound to me than to smth that should be clickable imo thats why I made it as a slider end, urs works too but I wanna keep it consistent to what I'm following

• 01:28:723 (4,5,6,1) - confusing pattern for hard players, they will probably play 01:29:058 (6,1) - just like 01:28:723 (4,5) - also, the way these objects stack make the doubles touch all the circles around them, maybe break ds by a little bit and space these so that wont happen Changed the pattern while still keeping DS consistent

• 01:42:801 (1,2,3,4) - 01:48:164 (1,2,3,4) - they way you made these 1/4 repeat patterns here vs. at the beginning (00:22:354 (1,2,3,4) - etc) makes them feel pretty cluttered Shouldn't be a problem for gameplay tho, it's just visually less appealing xd

Tks.

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Deppyforce

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Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2017-09-19T19:22:59+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
deppy
• 00:11:628 (1) - use more slider points to make the curve on this slider smoother eh this is fine

• 00:34:253 (1) - moving this to the right so that the slidertail of 00:33:751 (4) - lines up with this sliderhead would be a lot more pleasing no cuz then the spacing to next note will look like cancer but now it kinda forms a triangle at http://puu.sh/xDL4h/a3a231d5f1.jpg so its fine to me

• 00:35:427 - I think it would be a lot simpler to make this clickable rather than the red tick before it, it has a stronger snare beat on it, and in lower diffs white ticks should take more priority over red ticks (generally). i prefer how my map follows vocal here rn

• 00:41:125 - same as before, if you want to make this star pattern work a 1/2 slider at 00:40:957 (4) - would work

• 01:23:360 (1,2,3,4) - probably really difficult for an advanced diff, a lot of spaced circles in a row. add a slider in ehre somewhere i guess

• 01:54:030 (3) - cool slider!! thank

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Dailycare

Beatmap Nominator

1,071 posts

Joined May 2012

Dailycare 2017-09-21T07:38:17+00:00

p/6258700

[General]
*I wish White.jpg which starts at 00:03:583 - finished at 00:03:918 - . I think the current effect seems to fade out suddenly.

[Avena's Extreme]
*01:05:594 (6) - Doesn't it seem a little bit distant from the next slider? I guess it isn't strong enough to be emphasized heavily.
*01:11:963 (1) - Consider decreasing the volume. 20 ~ 28% will be better.
*01:21:014 (8) - just a minor suggestion, add a whistle at the end?

[Insane]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? The silence part too.
*00:20:678 (1,2) - I highly recommend changing the snap into 1/6. 1/4 doesn't fit well here.
*00:31:237 (4) - The overlap makes the pattern kinda messy.
*00:33:834 (7) - There's no sound. Actually 00:34:002 - needs a note.
*00:54:700 (7,8) - The distance setting decreased compared to the previous notes. It looks kinda random.
*01:03:248 (9) - Personally I prefer increasing the spacing than the current one.
*01:09:029 (2,3,4) - I think they don't need a clap sound. It seems loud for me.
*01:23:778 (10) - ^. This really doesn't need.
*Well, I can't find any common points on the spacing of whole 3/4 sliders. They seem to be placed random. Some notes are half-stacked, and some notes are separated. It made the map kinda awkward.

[Starfy's Hyper]
*00:17:996 (6) - What about NC for a readability?
*00:32:075 (2) - I think it will be better to finish at 00:32:410 - and add a circle at 00:32:577 - .
*00:42:801 (2) - ^
*00:58:220 (8,9) - What about trying something like this for better flow?
*01:11:460 (3,4) - Even though it's a harder difficulty, doesn't it make players confused?
*01:20:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^, It's pretty creative pattern but still looks kinda hard hm..

[GIDZ's Hard]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds?
*00:18:667 (2,3) - What about changing them to a 1/1 slider? The continuous sound finishs at 00:19:002 - , so slider will express the music well.
*01:44:645 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure of the pattern. Cuz it looks a bit hard for this diff.
*pretty solid

will mod lower diffs later

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Avena 2017-09-21T11:22:54+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6258700
[Avena's Extreme]
*01:05:594 (6) - Doesn't it seem a little bit distant from the next slider? I guess it isn't strong enough to be emphasized heavily. It's perfectly fine rn and yea i wanted a tiny jump. Also it'll ruin the pattern i made.
*01:11:963 (1) - Consider decreasing the volume. 20 ~ 28% will be better. ok
*01:21:014 (8) - just a minor suggestion, add a whistle at the end? ok

ty

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-09-21T23:06:52+00:00

Dailycare wrote:
[GIDZ's Hard]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? I dun think it will suit the beginning as its quiet, but I added a finish on slider head 00:03:583 (1) -
*00:18:667 (2,3) - What about changing them to a 1/1 slider? The continuous sound finishs at 00:19:002 - , so slider will express the music well. 1/1 slider doesn't emphasize the pause I am trying to put here as I want 00:19:002 - to be clickable cuz its a strong bass sound
*01:44:645 (3,4,5) - I'm not sure of the pattern. Cuz it looks a bit hard for this diff.Should be ok but I will see what others asy about this
*pretty solid

Tks Dailycare!!! o///

UPDATE

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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EpilepsyWarning: 1
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. Sunao Yoshikawa
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Version:GIDZ's Hard
Source:jubeat saucer
Tags:REFLEC BEAT colette spring GIDZ Starfy Deppyforce Bite you death Link Deppy Avena Priti
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Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-09-22T10:54:10+00:00

tks dailycare!

Dailycare wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6258700

[General]
*I wish White.jpg which starts at 00:03:583 - finished at 00:03:918 - . I think the current effect seems to fade out suddenly.

[Insane]
*00:01:572 - ~ 00:12:969 - Where are the hitsounds? The silence part too. I added them , gonna let GIDZ check later
*00:20:678 (1,2) - I highly recommend changing the snap into 1/6. 1/4 doesn't fit well here. fix
*00:31:237 (4) - The overlap makes the pattern kinda messy. fix
*00:33:834 (7) - There's no sound. Actually 00:34:002 - needs a note. I don't hear any sound here
*00:54:700 (7,8) - The distance setting decreased compared to the previous notes. It looks kinda random. I thkn it looks fine here
*01:03:248 (9) - Personally I prefer increasing the spacing than the current one. I think increasing the spacing would ruin the pattern
*01:09:029 (2,3,4) - I think they don't need a clap sound. It seems loud for me. Its fine for me and it gives the player a signal that kiai time is coming up
*01:23:778 (10) - ^. This really doesn't need. Fix
*Well, I can't find any common points on the spacing of whole 3/4 sliders. They seem to be placed random. Some notes are half-stacked, and some notes are separated. It made the map kinda awkward. Made all of them more consistence

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-10-04T11:46:16+00:00

hihi
[General]
check aimod
normal-sliderslide3.wav unused

[Link's Easy]

00:16:991 - hitsounds from this part onward just seem completely different to the ones used at 00:14:309 . the music barely differs so try keep them consistent
00:20:008 (2,3) - rhythm priority changes so much from 00:14:310 (1,2,3,4) . skipping beats like 00:22:019 - feels awkward when it was mapped previously
00:26:377 (1) - strongest vocal here is on 00:27:047 - so the 3/2 slider doesnt really fit. other instances have the vocal on red ticks 00:28:220
00:33:081 (1) - nc seems a bit pointless here, should keep ncs every 2 measures
00:35:594 - 00:46:320 - shouldnt have claps, theres no snare here
01:11:963 - should avoid silencing sliderends in lower diffs, low diff players need the additional feedback
01:43:974 (2) - covers too many different sounds making it unclear of what its following. 01:44:142 - 01:44:645 - 01:44:980 - 01:45:315 - are the strongest sounds here so try give priority to these
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - dont think this kinda density is suitable for the lowest diff. the 1/2 sliders are quite fast to comprehend, should just use individiual circles instead

[Normal]

00:14:980 (2) - 00:20:343 (2) - etc. a lot of ur rhythms arent specifically following anything, strong beats are on 00:15:147 - 00:15:315 - so you should try make them clickable and base rhythms around them
00:27:047 - 00:27:885 - should reconsider some clap usage, snares provided in the song are every 2nd beat 00:26:712 - 00:27:382 - 00:28:052 - etc. so you should only use claps in those instances
00:29:058 (7,1) - 00:31:739 (6) - also try have your new combos set on every 2nd combo to group them consistently, most of the map previous follows this 00:19:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:30:399 (3,4,5) - rhythm here is pretty awkward cos you ignore the first vocal on 00:30:566 - so it implies you're following drums, but then switch to vocal later on anyways at 00:30:902 . should try a similar rhythm to 00:27:717 (4,5,6) - imo
00:32:074 (7,8) - can get pretty confusing due to low ar since 00:33:080 (1) - fades in and is closer to the previous object, newer players may click that instead
00:34:253 (1,2,3,4) - should try avoid the overlapping here as it gets pretty cluttered and confusing. also rhythm could be better by letting strong beats like 00:35:594 - be clickable
00:44:309 (3,4) - clicking red tick offbeats seems pretty weird here since theres nothing significant on them, the music is still white tick dominant. maybe try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xPpWC/5e525f95a8.png
01:04:924 (2) - rhythm here shows you're following vocal because you map 01:05:091 - but then 01:05:594 (3,4) - seem to follow the instruments while u skip over the vocal on 01:05:762 . should try commit to the same track https://puu.sh/xPq6C/c3e7792379.png or if u want to map instruments u could ctrl g 01:04:924 (2,3)
01:32:410 - every other instance of this is clickable 01:19:002 - 01:29:728 - so should try make this clickable too
01:42:131 (4,5) - 01:47:494 (4,5) - sliders would be better, as the sound is held and theres nothing significant on 01:42:466 (5)
01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - using objects that point back in on themselves is pretty confusing for normals, beginners rely on time-distance equality but by having the objects this close its hard to comprehend the rhythm
01:53:527 (5,6) - like the only time you use an object stacked on slider end, would definitely be a reading hazard since you introduce it so late into the map, should just do something like 01:38:108 (6,7)

[GIDZ's Hard]

00:14:309 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of the rhythm choice here, just seems too simplified when the music is offering something else https://puu.sh/xPr6c/5756def603.png
00:26:376 - rhythm from here onward seems so much more dense than the previous section yet it feels less intense. i dont think substituting out the 1/2 sliders for two circles is necessary 00:27:047 (3,4) - 00:28:723 (3,4) - etc.
01:03:918 (1) - extended slider just feels so random here, theres nothing unique on 01:04:589 (2) - so should stick to a 3/2 slider
01:22:689 (1,2,3) - white tick triplet is pretty awkward here since you dont use them consistently, kick on 01:22:941 - gets skipped which u'd expect to be mapped since you use red tick triplets everywhere else
01:29:393 (1,2) - most of the patterns like this are circle + slider 01:32:075 (1,2) - should try keep the way u do these consistent

[Starfy's Hyper]

00:18:080 (7) - dont think this needs to be mapped, as using a triplet here gives the emphasis to 00:18:164 (8) - while it should be on 00:17:996 (6) - for the strong snare. something similar to 00:23:360 (6,1) - plays a lot nicer
00:32:075 (2) - 00:42:801 (2) - unrankable cos you cover the repeat slider with the previous circle
01:06:600 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - idk about this, the pattern just feels so forced and doesnt work with the music cos its constantly changing

[Insane]

00:14:980 (3) - starting ur jump patterns on weaker beats feels pretty awkward, since you mix them in with stronger beats 00:15:147 (4,5) - and cause them to lose emphasis
00:15:483 (1,3) - also beats like these have different sounds to 00:15:147 (4,5,2) - could try differentiate the two a bit more by using sliders to make important stuff clickable
00:20:678 (1,2) - snapping seems pretty awkward, sounds like standard 1/3 except slightly off so you could prob simplify it to https://puu.sh/xPKva/99267c1b4b.png that doesnt harm playability
00:27:885 (2) - 00:29:728 (4) - 00:30:566 (2,3,4) - extended slider usage throughout the map isnt the greatest because they skip over strong beats in their track 00:28:052 - 00:29:896 - etc. can still easily map the vocals with 1/2 sliders without giving up too much of the drums
01:00:064 (7,8) - 01:02:745 (7,8) - ctrl g'ing rhythm here could be nice to let kicks 01:00:231 - be clickable
01:25:203 (1) - skipping a really strong downbeat here and in the previous instance u used a 1/2 slider 01:14:477 (2)
01:25:790 - whistle on end here seems pretty unfitting since its an extended slider

should reconsider some of the extended sliders here, a lot of them feel a bit too forced

gl!

bite you death

Beatmap Nominator

654 posts

Joined May 2015

bite you death 2017-10-04T14:48:07+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hihi
[General]
check aimod
normal-sliderslide3.wav unused it is not, 00:18:668 (1) - in easy diff

[Link's Easy]
00:16:991 - hitsounds from this part onward just seem completely different to the ones used at 00:14:309 . the music barely differs so try keep them consistent i couldve swore there was a green line to change hs here, oh well, fixed
00:20:008 (2,3) - rhythm priority changes so much from 00:14:310 (1,2,3,4) . skipping beats like 00:22:019 - feels awkward when it was mapped previously changed the thing you mentioned
00:26:377 (1) - strongest vocal here is on 00:27:047 - so the 3/2 slider doesnt really fit. other instances have the vocal on red ticks 00:28:220 changed a bunch of them
00:33:081 (1) - nc seems a bit pointless here, should keep ncs every 2 measures k
00:35:594 - 00:46:320 - shouldnt have claps, theres no snare here k
01:11:963 - should avoid silencing sliderends in lower diffs, low diff players need the additional feedback increased volume
01:43:974 (2) - covers too many different sounds making it unclear of what its following. 01:44:142 - 01:44:645 - 01:44:980 - 01:45:315 - are the strongest sounds here so try give priority to these a lot of circles now
01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - dont think this kinda density is suitable for the lowest diff. the 1/2 sliders are quite fast to comprehend, should just use individiual circles instead k

ty for mod, ill probably remap this if it gets more complaints

diff

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note to self:

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fix 00:36:433 (4,2) -

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2017-10-08T16:56:56+00:00

thanks pentori

Pentori wrote:
hihi

[Normal]
00:14:980 (2) - 00:20:343 (2) - etc. a lot of ur rhythms arent specifically following anything, strong beats are on 00:15:147 - 00:15:315 - so you should try make them clickable and base rhythms around them
00:27:047 - 00:27:885 - should reconsider some clap usage, snares provided in the song are every 2nd beat 00:26:712 - 00:27:382 - 00:28:052 - etc. so you should only use claps in those instances
00:29:058 (7,1) - 00:31:739 (6) - also try have your new combos set on every 2nd combo to group them consistently, most of the map previous follows this 00:19:672 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
00:30:399 (3,4,5) - rhythm here is pretty awkward cos you ignore the first vocal on 00:30:566 - so it implies you're following drums, but then switch to vocal later on anyways at 00:30:902 . should try a similar rhythm to 00:27:717 (4,5,6) - imo
00:32:074 (7,8) - can get pretty confusing due to low ar since 00:33:080 (1) - fades in and is closer to the previous object, newer players may click that instead
00:34:253 (1,2,3,4) - should try avoid the overlapping here as it gets pretty cluttered and confusing. also rhythm could be better by letting strong beats like 00:35:594 - be clickable
00:44:309 (3,4) - clicking red tick offbeats seems pretty weird here since theres nothing significant on them, the music is still white tick dominant. maybe try a rhythm like https://puu.sh/xPpWC/5e525f95a8.png
01:04:924 (2) - rhythm here shows you're following vocal because you map 01:05:091 - but then 01:05:594 (3,4) - seem to follow the instruments while u skip over the vocal on 01:05:762 . should try commit to the same track https://puu.sh/xPq6C/c3e7792379.png or if u want to map instruments u could ctrl g 01:04:924 (2,3)
01:32:410 - every other instance of this is clickable 01:19:002 - 01:29:728 - so should try make this clickable too
01:42:131 (4,5) - 01:47:494 (4,5) - sliders would be better, as the sound is held and theres nothing significant on 01:42:466 (5)
01:50:846 (1,2,1,2) - using objects that point back in on themselves is pretty confusing for normals, beginners rely on time-distance equality but by having the objects this close its hard to comprehend the rhythm
01:53:527 (5,6) - like the only time you use an object stacked on slider end, would definitely be a reading hazard since you introduce it so late into the map, should just do something like 01:38:108 (6,7)
I think I will be remapping this whole map lol

[Insane]
00:14:980 (3) - starting ur jump patterns on weaker beats feels pretty awkward, since you mix them in with stronger beats 00:15:147 (4,5) - and cause them to lose emphasis lowered the spacing of 3 and 4
00:15:483 (1,3) - also beats like these have different sounds to 00:15:147 (4,5,2) - could try differentiate the two a bit more by using sliders to make important stuff clickable I changed 1 to a 1/4 slider for the wave sound
00:20:678 (1,2) - snapping seems pretty awkward, sounds like standard 1/3 except slightly off so you could prob simplify it to https://puu.sh/xPKva/99267c1b4b.png that doesnt harm playability I see what you mean, I've changed it to that
00:27:885 (2) - 00:29:728 (4) - 00:30:566 (2,3,4) - extended slider usage throughout the map isnt the greatest because they skip over strong beats in their track 00:28:052 - 00:29:896 - etc. can still easily map the vocals with 1/2 sliders without giving up too much of the drums Still need more time thinking what can I change here
01:00:064 (7,8) - 01:02:745 (7,8) - ctrl g'ing rhythm here could be nice to let kicks 01:00:231 - be clickable Fixed
01:25:203 (1) - skipping a really strong downbeat here and in the previous instance u used a 1/2 slider 01:14:477 (2) Fixed
01:25:790 - whistle on end here seems pretty unfitting since its an extended slider Fixed
should reconsider some of the extended sliders here, a lot of them feel a bit too forced I know what you mean , I'll try to fix this but need more time still

gl!

GIDZ

1,002 posts

Joined January 2013

GIDZ 2017-10-21T11:52:50+00:00

Pentori wrote:
hihi
[GIDZ's Hard]
00:14:309 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of the rhythm choice here, just seems too simplified when the music is offering something else https://puu.sh/xPr6c/5756def603.png 00:14:309 (1) - is following the strong electronic beat which is 1/1 long and also I wanna emphasize the bass sound by making it clickable on 00:14:980 - so no change here.
00:26:376 - rhythm from here onward seems so much more dense than the previous section yet it feels less intense. i dont think substituting out the 1/2 sliders for two circles is necessary 00:27:047 (3,4) - 00:28:723 (3,4) - etc. There are more vocals and I also wanna vary things up a bit lol.
Also it makes a good contrast with the next section at 00:47:829 -
01:03:918 (1) - extended slider just feels so random here, theres nothing unique on 01:04:589 (2) - so should stick to a 3/2 slider Fixed
01:22:689 (1,2,3) - white tick triplet is pretty awkward here since you dont use them consistently, kick on 01:22:941 - gets skipped which u'd expect to be mapped since you use red tick triplets everywhere else Fixed
01:29:393 (1,2) - most of the patterns like this are circle + slider 01:32:075 (1,2) - should try keep the way u do these consistent Dun think consistency is a big issue here since the music is different everytime beafore the pause, so the map is intended to be mapped differerently, what I think is important is just to emphasize the pause no matter the pattern before it.

Tks!

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-10-28T20:12:31+00:00

place for m4m return. gonna mod tomorrow

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-11-02T07:54:19+00:00

This set was used as the basis of the osu mentorship's practice modding, where we got together and modded a map. We gave constructive criticism on how we modded. Sergio forgot to post the mod here, so some of the stuff is outdated. Note that the mod is super unbalanced on what diffs we did, sorry link :/

box

Link's Easy:
- AyanokoRin: 00:01:572 (1) - isn't this over the top (maybe define it better xD)
- IceKalt: 00:16:321 (4,1) - better blanket
- Mun: 00:11:629 (1,1,2,3) - this curve could really use some work (image can be added)
- IceKalt: 00:31:739 (1) - idk about this rythm choice here (reason needed

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Mir: i feel like since the vocal is on 00:31:572 - which isn't clickable to begin with, shifting focus to the instruments with a rhythm like this https://i.imgur.com/yJpCUcw.png would make a lot more sense
- -Rmdy: 00:41:126 (3) - maybe put 1/2 slider instead of circle. 1/2 slider had been used anyway, and this follows song anyway (kinda vague)
- AyanokoRin: 00:03:584 (1) - this feels out of place within the map (more details needed

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- Sinnoh: 00:58:556 (1) - This 2/1 repeat slider doesn't match the object density in the rest of the section, either remove this slider or add one elsewhere. I'd go with first one (this looks nice)
- gottagof4st: 01:47:493 (4) - this slider should be differentiated a bit from the others imo, currently it fits is way too much but it's a completely different sound (maybe additional suggestion on how to do it would be nice)
- IceKalt: 00:38:109 (2,3,4) - on 2,3 he concentrates on drums but on 4 he starts the slider on a vocal instead of a drum - would put slider on white tick
- IceKalt: 00:41:126 (3,4) - same as above what i said
- Mir: 01:44:645 - WHEN U SKIP THE SONG ACCENTUATION rhythm suggestion: https://i.imgur.com/t3zMohy.png ty pls apply the 1/2 gap is passive as well and after a 1/1 reverse so it should be g considering 01:34:086 (1) - which is already questionable
- Monarch: 00:44:478 (4,1) - blanket is off smh
- Mir: 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - not in an easy diff tbh, too fast and too many in quick succession plus switching polarity way too often
- IceKalt: 00:45:147 - would make this clickable(edited)

- -Rmdy: 01:38:611 (2,3,1) - I think it may be a problem for beginners, since they see 2 sircle near (2)
- Shiguma: 01:13:974 (2) - 01:17:326 (3) - i would replace these sliders, need more dense rhythm in kiai
- Maffe: 00:38:947 (4) - Following offbeat vocals here but not 00:28:220 - here. No reason for completely changing rhythm and focus in repeating sections like this.
- -Rmdy: 01:43:974 (2) - I think it was said already. Very confusing
- Swell: 01:20:008 (3,4) - on that same note shigu these sliders would probably be better off as clickable 1/1 imo
- Sinnoh: 01:43:974 (2) - This slider skips over some really important beats, + makes 01:45:314 (3) - harder to read since there's a sound here. Follow the snares instead to have a clearer rhythm to follow, they're on 1/1 so should be more readable
- IceKalt: 01:22:354 - the part is way to intense that there is no object
- Shiguma: 00:37:103 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like it begins with it being mapped to the drums but then ends with it being mapped to the vocals, seems misleading
- -Rmdy: 01:53:527 (2) - since he considered following those 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - drums, it would be cool to do this http://puu.sh/xHN4O/adcb9530c7.jpg
- Shiguma: 01:53:527 (2) - if you're gonna map the rhythm before it, this should have clickable notes too
- Swell: 01:22:354 - missing object here lol(edited)

Avena's Extra:
- IceKalt: 00:23:192 (3,1,2,1) - hardly readable. Consider moving 00:23:527 (2) - so it becomes more visible
- IceKalt: 00:33:583 (1) - its not making really sense to emphazise this cause there isnt a major sound nor the vocals are changing (this looks more like map to pattern than to music) (whole section here)
- Swell: 01:14:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - actually i think priti should just invert this entire pattern. they way everything moves from the center outwards is really makes emphasis and play feel lacking. So instead by making everything move from the outside towards the center i feel like it would emphasize and play much better while still keeping the same kind of visual structure.: https://puu.sh/xHPAq/2f030983b7.jpg https://puu.sh/xHPAx/357e38aaab.jpg https://puu.sh/xHPAV/300287aefd.jpg
- Okorin: 00:20:678 (1) - seems retarded but seems better as https://puu.sh/xHOTk/0a6d8be194.png as far as wobbles are concerned
- Okorin: 01:11:963 (1) - priti pls i dont think there's anything the way you mapped that lool
- Okorin: 01:46:153 (1,1) - 1 covers reverse
- My Angel Kanan: 00:01:572 (1,2,3) isn't the spacing here to huge considering that Nothing noticeable happens in the music. Notice how 00:03:583 (1,2,3,4) - is more intense in the song yet more spaced

General
00:12:969 (1) - Your storyboard flashes are too fast, they're just annoying. Lower the maximum brightness of them. The stuff at 01:13:304 (1) - is fine
There are no hitsounds for the first 12 seconds on some diffs. I'd suggest adding some samples that are slightly muted, they'd match the song and would give feedback.
Your storyboard could be more interesting, some basic things like particle effects could be used to enhance it a lot.

I won't mod link or avena's diff, I've already said what I wanted above.

Normal
01:17:158 (4) - There is so much false feedback from these hitsounds
01:20:343 (4) - Incorrect hitsound
01:20:343 (4,5,1) - Don't overlap 1 on 4's tail. This causes reading issues for new players. There isn't enough time between them as 5 is a 3/4 slider.
01:22:689 (1,2,1) - same issue
01:38:108 (6) - Hitsound tail
01:50:846 (1,2) - Positioning slider tails really close to each other will make it difficult to read. Change arrangement so that tails are further apart.
01:53:527 (5,6) - Do not have objects stacked under a slider tail on normal.
I'd suggesting reading the ranking criteria's section on normal diffs

Advanced
There are missing hitsounds everywhere
00:30:231 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like that there's only circles here, there are plenty of held vocals so would make more sense to me to use sliders.
00:33:751 (4,1,2) - These overlaps are really messy without any reason for them
01:03:918 (2,1,2,3) - This is only going to cause confusion and really hurts my head to look at. Can you use an alternative structure here.
yeah not a fan of this

Hard
00:16:991 (1) - 01:42:801 (1) - 01:48:164 (1) - These can be spaced a little further apart from each other so it's easier to read what is going on.
few objective issues here, gj

hmm idk. The lower diffs are kind of putting me off here, I also really don't like this song so probably won't recheck

If you get a couple more mods I'm certain this could be ranked in the future, keep at it.

bite you death

Beatmap Nominator

654 posts

Joined May 2015

bite you death 2017-11-02T16:01:43+00:00

what in the

ok im remappng fuk this

sidenote to everyone else involved in the set; od spread is meh, it goes: 5.1-7-7-7-9.5

edit:

remap done, no hs. apply yourself and change diffname to byd's Easy, ty

osu file format v14

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Source:jubeat saucer
Tags:REFLEC BEAT colette spring GIDZ Starfy Deppyforce Bite you death Link Deppy Avena Priti - G I D Z -
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i'll try to reply anyway just cause mentorship

Sinnoh wrote:
This set was used as the basis of the osu mentorship's practice modding, where we got together and modded a map. We gave constructive criticism on how we modded. Sergio forgot to post the mod here, so some of the stuff is outdated. Note that the mod is super unbalanced on what diffs we did, sorry link :/
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Link's Easy:
- AyanokoRin: 00:01:572 (1) - isn't this over the top (maybe define it better xD) dont remember what this was before
- IceKalt: 00:16:321 (4,1) - better blanket ya sure
- Mun: 00:11:629 (1,1,2,3) - this curve could really use some work (image can be added) dont remember this either
- IceKalt: 00:31:739 (1) - idk about this rythm choice here (reason needed ) dont remember
Mir: i feel like since the vocal is on 00:31:572 - which isn't clickable to begin with, shifting focus to the instruments with a rhythm like this https://i.imgur.com/yJpCUcw.png would make a lot more sense i'm following the vocals i can follow without making it too hard/dense
- -Rmdy: 00:41:126 (3) - maybe put 1/2 slider instead of circle. 1/2 slider had been used anyway, and this follows song anyway (kinda vague) 1/2s in easy are frowned upon/unrankable even (i think)
- AyanokoRin: 00:03:584 (1) - this feels out of place within the map (more details needed ) not imo
- Sinnoh: 00:58:556 (1) - This 2/1 repeat slider doesn't match the object density in the rest of the section, either remove this slider or add one elsewhere. I'd go with first one (this looks nice) ya i fixed that earlier
- gottagof4st: 01:47:493 (4) - this slider should be differentiated a bit from the others imo, currently it fits is way too much but it's a completely different sound (maybe additional suggestion on how to do it would be nice) hm, imo the current one is fine, cant remember old
- IceKalt: 00:38:109 (2,3,4) - on 2,3 he concentrates on drums but on 4 he starts the slider on a vocal instead of a drum - would put slider on white tick
- IceKalt: 00:41:126 (3,4) - same as above what i said would fix both
- Mir: 01:44:645 - WHEN U SKIP THE SONG ACCENTUATION rhythm suggestion: https://i.imgur.com/t3zMohy.png ty pls apply the 1/2 gap is passive as well and after a 1/1 reverse so it should be g considering 01:34:086 (1) - which is already questionable long sentence but yea i did something here
- Monarch: 00:44:478 (4,1) - blanket is off smh good enough
- Mir: 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - not in an easy diff tbh, too fast and too many in quick succession plus switching polarity way too often yea removed
- IceKalt: 00:45:147 - would make this clickable(edited) i wouldn't; the sound at 00:44:980 - is much more major and i'd prefer to disinclude a lot of 1/2s if possible

- -Rmdy: 01:38:611 (2,3,1) - I think it may be a problem for beginners, since they see 2 sircle near (2) yea sure
- Shiguma: 01:13:974 (2) - 01:17:326 (3) - i would replace these sliders, need more dense rhythm in kiai 3/2 gaps in easy are cancer, i've learned
- Maffe: 00:38:947 (4) - Following offbeat vocals here but not 00:28:220 - here. No reason for completely changing rhythm and focus in repeating sections like this. they're the same..? might've been different in past idk
- -Rmdy: 01:43:974 (2) - I think it was said already. Very confusing changed
- Swell: 01:20:008 (3,4) - on that same note shigu these sliders would probably be better off as clickable 1/1 imo did that
- Sinnoh: 01:43:974 (2) - This slider skips over some really important beats, + makes 01:45:314 (3) - harder to read since there's a sound here. Follow the snares instead to have a clearer rhythm to follow, they're on 1/1 so should be more readable ^
- IceKalt: 01:22:354 - the part is way to intense that there is no object added in remap
- Shiguma: 00:37:103 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds like it begins with it being mapped to the drums but then ends with it being mapped to the vocals, seems misleading prob changed this, dk what u mean
- -Rmdy: 01:53:527 (2) - since he considered following those 01:50:846 (1,2,3,4) - drums, it would be cool to do this http://puu.sh/xHN4O/adcb9530c7.jpg that is unrankable; sliders with multiple reverses are unrankable in easy difficulty, im 99% certain
- Shiguma: 01:53:527 (2) - if you're gonna map the rhythm before it, this should have clickable notes too did before
- Swell: 01:22:354 - missing object here lol(edited)adressed before

yea this is quite outdated, i barely remember half of it. thanks for modding, nonetheless!

Nakano Itsuki

1,218 posts

Joined July 2014

Nakano Itsuki 2017-11-19T04:59:06+00:00

Just passing by to say I love the Insane

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2018-01-04T03:32:56+00:00

you're asking me to mod insane, so...

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - in aes, the blanket isn't perfect
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - minor, but can be perfect symmetrical (flow fix) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9925640 example ((1) should be in middle, 256 X)
00:27:717 (4) - 00:29:058 (1) -00:31:739 (6) - mind about NC here?
00:41:125 (4,1) - too
00:42:298 (4) - NCing here will work for vocal's emphasize. i think i won't mention all of them that are the same as this
00:49:002 (4) - here works for NC + 00:49:840 (1) - remove NC. the same as 00:51:684 (5,1) - 00:54:365 (5,1) -
01:11:293 (1,2) - some players might get confused reading this. would suggest spacing it out a bit, like stack 01:11:628 (2) - tail on 01:10:622 (3) -
01:19:505 (3,6) - see these sliders here? i'd just use the same slider and stack them perfectly for view
01:38:946 (2) - would like to stack it here
01:39:951 (1) - this NC here doesn't seem necessary here, as 01:40:119 (1) - should be for its emphasize vocal + downbeat
01:54:030 (4) - i heard that the end should be at 01:55:077 -

lacks of NCs around. usually NCs will be used on red or white tick, depending on what its emphasized there, such as vocals, downbeats, rhythm stuff, etc.

gl

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2018-01-08T15:42:39+00:00

Modding insane as requested

00:09:617 (1,2) - blanket
00:10:287 (3) - nazi，但係同 00:09:617 (1) - 00:10:790 (4) - 配起來嚮美觀上唔係幾夾，如果係同兩個slider都係純彎嘅會好啲
00:16:488 (3,4) - 個人覺得個slider都係嚮 00:16:656 - 好啲，重音unclickable反而係比較靜嘅音click咗感覺唔舒服，或者好似 00:22:019 (1) - 一樣跟電音都可以
00:20:678 (1) - 加快SV？來強調wub， 01:46:488 (1) - 都係
00:47:494 (1) - remove NC？一或係加快SV嚟強調結他riff
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - 跟wub嘅話好似唔係嚮白線開始，佢係後咗一條藍線
01:11:628 (2) - 個人覺得1/8會跟個buildup好啲
01:34:337 (1) - 可以remove NC，反而只係 01:34:589 (1) - 好啲，咁樣玩家可以讀到第三個slider係1/4，不過呢個你自己決定啦
01:39:951 (1) - 感覺NC比較多餘

good luck

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-09T12:57:59+00:00

lit120 wrote:
you're asking me to mod insane, so...

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - in aes, the blanket isn't perfect I tried my best fixing it
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - minor, but can be perfect symmetrical (flow fix) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9925640 example ((1) should be in middle, 256 X) yeahh
00:27:717 (4) - 00:29:058 (1) -00:31:739 (6) - mind about NC here? fixed
00:41:125 (4,1) - too fixed
00:42:298 (4) - NCing here will work for vocal's emphasize. i think i won't mention all of them that are the same as this fixed all I could spot
00:49:002 (4) - here works for NC + 00:49:840 (1) - remove NC. the same as 00:51:684 (5,1) - 00:54:365 (5,1) - I think yeah
01:11:293 (1,2) - some players might get confused reading this. would suggest spacing it out a bit, like stack 01:11:628 (2) - tail on 01:10:622 (3) - I think this is fine since it is turning towards the clockwise as well as the stream
01:19:505 (3,6) - see these sliders here? i'd just use the same slider and stack them perfectly for view eyah I messed up here
01:38:946 (2) - would like to stack it here ok
01:39:951 (1) - this NC here doesn't seem necessary here, as 01:40:119 (1) - should be for its emphasize vocal + downbeat agree/color]
01:54:030 (4) - i heard that the end should be at 01:55:077 -
lacks of NCs around. usually NCs will be used on red or white tick, depending on what its emphasized there, such as vocals, downbeats, rhythm stuff, etc.

gl

Thanks for modding!!!

Firis Mistlud wrote:
Modding insane as requested

00:09:617 (1,2) - blanket
00:10:287 (3) - nazi，但係同 00:09:617 (1) - 00:10:790 (4) - 配起來嚮美觀上唔係幾夾，如果係同兩個slider都係純彎嘅會好啲都係唔好啦，我改返三做彎算啦
00:16:488 (3,4) - 個人覺得個slider都係嚮 00:16:656 - 好啲，重音unclickable反而係比較靜嘅音click咗感覺唔舒服，或者好似 00:22:019 (1) - 一樣跟電音都可以 OK改返做重音係clickable
00:20:678 (1) - 加快SV？來強調wub， 01:46:488 (1) - 都係OK
00:47:494 (1) - remove NC？一或係加快SV嚟強調結他riff OK
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - 跟wub嘅話好似唔係嚮白線開始，佢係後咗一條藍線我都發現，但係呢度始終都係跟緊鼓聲>.<
01:11:628 (2) - 個人覺得1/8會跟個buildup好啲同意
01:34:337 (1) - 可以remove NC，反而只係 01:34:589 (1) - 好啲，咁樣玩家可以讀到第三個slider係1/4，不過呢個你自己決定啦我覺得三個音都要強調所以就NC了 >.<
01:39:951 (1) - 感覺NC比較多餘OK
good luck

謝謝神mod

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2018-01-11T00:28:46+00:00

did I forgot to return mod for this? ah, i'm so sorry
anyway, here's the m4m return after a long time

modding 3 diffs to be fair with drain time

[normal]
00:34:253 (1,3,4) - avoid stacking in normals, this is not visible too much and may confuse new players
01:27:047 (2) - ^
01:54:030 (6) - again, try to not stack it

[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c

[hard]
00:13:639 (2) - you can make a 1/4 slider instead
00:53:192 (1) - ctrl+h? it improves the flow a bit and also blanks the previous circle
01:54:030 (2) - move to x:197 y:285 maybe

sorry for not modding higher diffs, but i hope this mod helps

gl~

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-11T16:56:57+00:00

ok I gave up so I remapped normal diff kek

Seolv

847 posts

Joined March 2016

Seolv 2018-01-14T20:12:03+00:00

owob from queue

[- -

Normal - -]

00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits
00:44:979 (6) - NC here
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense

[- -

Insane - -]

00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders?
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - )
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there

ok done

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-16T18:56:18+00:00

[ L u k a s ] wrote:
owob from queue

[- - Normal - -]
00:32:745 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This chain of objects is too big for a calm part, try to split it down and divide it into a few separate bits done
00:44:979 (6) - NC here ok
00:43:471 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as the first point yea
01:35:259 (2) - You might wanna make this into a different slidershape to make it consistent since you never used this slidershape before fixed
What I noticed in the map is that the kiai isn't really much more dense than the rest, try to delete some objects in the calm parts to make them less dense, also put NCs consistently since I saw throughout the map there were some places where the NCs didn't really make sense oik fixed all

[- - Insane - -]
00:06:097 (2,3,1) - Make spacing equal just wanted to emphasize the NC
00:06:265 (1,2,3) - Same here fixed
00:08:779 (5,6,1) - Quiet sound, make the spacing smaller I think its fine since this is a small build up climax ish thing
00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think these should have same spacing since the first four have more audible sounds on them unlike the last four, try to make the first four a little bit more spaced well this is following the drum and the wave sound at the same time , and the wave sound is not gone , just fading away but the drum isnt
00:19:505 (1) - Space more so that it isn't confused for a 1/2 gap 00:19:337 - in this part is complete silence so I think that cancels out large movements needed from players , thats why I put them so close to each other , also I've been doing this consistently as well 01:44:645 (1,1,1) -
00:20:678 (1) - Try center the part that goes up in the middle to make it look better Fixed
00:34:086 (7,7) - Why did you make these into kicksliders? because the clap sound is different from the jumps and also to emphasize 00:34:253 (1) - 's release
00:47:494 (9) - Make this slider similar to 00:24:700 (1) - for consistency, or make a special and different slider that you didn't put anywhere else holy how did you spot this lol ok fixed
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - These aren't supposed to go there but on 1/6 (01:02:857 - ) yeah I noticed but I wanted to map the drums as well
01:03:080 (1) - This slider ends on a pretty strong kick that you might want to emphasize, put a circle there yeah ur right

ok done

thanks for mod

Kawashiro

1,522 posts

Joined April 2012

Kawashiro 2018-01-17T07:55:51+00:00

from my q

[Insane]

00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc?
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo.
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this?

Done

GL

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

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Topic Starter

Petal 2018-01-20T15:19:39+00:00

Kawashiro wrote:
from my q

[Insane]
00:03:583 (1,2,3) - Don't you think this combo is too short? I think you can swap nc at 00:04:253 (1,3) - here. And then delete 00:05:594 (1) - this NC. Same as 00:06:265 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here, just follow 4 beat nc owo I'll take your first suggestion but I think the rest after that is fine since I wanted to emphasize on the vocals as well
00:08:946 (1) - just delete nc? I don't agree because this is a downbeat , but instead I removed NC on this 00:09:617 (3) - instead , seems resonable
00:11:293 (1) - this sv changing seems unnecessary. it seems not special and I think 00:09:617 (1,2,3,4,1) - whole this part sounds similar imo. I changed the SV on that because I wanted to emphasize 00:11:628 (1) - , well sometimes I just wanted to do something to express the vocals
00:51:684 (1,2) - stack? owo I don't get what you mean ;w; I assume ur telling me to stack 2 on 1's tail but I didn't introduce doing that at eariler stages of the map so maybe not ;w;
01:11:293 (1,1) - why overlapped this? because I think the hit window on 01:11:293 (1,1) - is too small so I don't want it to be spaced out so much
Done

GL

thank you for mod!~!!@

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2018-01-21T09:57:45+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
Advanced
There are missing hitsounds everywhere fix
00:30:231 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't like that there's only circles here, there are plenty of held vocals so would make more sense to me to use sliders. i prefer this way because the next slider 00:32:075 (1) - have better impact
00:33:751 (4,1,2) - These overlaps are really messy without any reason for them they look fine lol
01:03:918 (2,1,2,3) - This is only going to cause confusion and really hurts my head to look at. Can you use an alternative structure here. placed 2nd circle other side. should be more readable now
yeah not a fan of this too bad but no one like my maps anyway

Underforest wrote:
[advanced]
00:26:712 (2,5,1,4,2,4,1,2) - why you do overlaps like this? :c theyre readable tho lol

th a nk

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fieryrage

osu! Champion / Elite Nominator II

1,402 posts

Joined November 2013

fieryrage 2018-01-31T04:58:24+00:00

o/

priti Avena stop name changing

od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally

00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well?
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat

insane

od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff

00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so)
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else

gl!

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-02-08T01:46:29+00:00

Redownload for New SB , btw I'm taking over arena's diff since he's gone for over 2 months without sign of returning lol

Last edited by Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Petal

Nomination Assessment Team

1,170 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Petal 2018-02-09T08:00:38+00:00

fieryrage wrote:
o/

priti Avena stop name changing
od 9.5 is like really overkill especially considering the insane is only od 7 lol, would make this od 9 personally ok
00:55:538 (8) - shouldn't this have drum hitnormals on it as well? yes
01:03:415 (2) - this is not straight and it makes me Angry aw come on this is barely noticeable fixed
01:10:456 (2,1) - spacing here is like really tiny considering you're coming from a jump lol, would buff this spacing agreed
01:46:153 (1,1) - unrankable due to the hit lighting covering the slider repeat need to look into this
insane
od 8 would fit the spread better here imo considering the od of the top diff yea
00:08:108 (3) - clap shouldn't be here (if it was going to be on something it'd be on 00:08:276 - but that isn't mapped so) fix
00:19:170 (1,1) - space this out a bit more, it contrasts heavily with spacing like 00:18:834 (3,4) - this despite being different rhythm gaps same reason when I replied to Lukas' mod
00:31:739 (1) - remove nc, it isn't really needed here, same goes for 00:42:298 (1) - this one ok
01:02:577 (1,2,3) - this is really needlessly complex, why not just do 1/2 since that seems to be what you're following here? adding the guitar vibros (or whatever it is) here as well makes this really weird rhythmically but its cool :/
01:03:918 (1) - missing clap on sliderend fixed
01:37:270 (6) - better off as a single note on the red tick and something else on the downbeat, feels really underwhelming not mapping the downbeat here since you mapped it everywhere else yeah fixed
gl!

thank you

mancuso_JM_

osu! Alumni

4,615 posts

Joined October 2010

mancuso_JM_ 2018-02-16T01:32:48+00:00

Hi there! Modding from my queue!

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good.
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean.
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny).
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map.

- Nice difficulty! Great job!

[Normal]

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good.
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these.
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger.
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please.
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here.
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?

- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that.

[Deppy's Advanced]

00:33:751 (4,1,2) - 00:44:477 (4,1,2) - I know, these overlaps are intentional but are they really necessary? I think you're trying something different in your map but sincerely it doesn't look really neat. You can maybe find other way to don't have these overlaps, I'm sure you can do that much better.
00:40:287 (2,3) - 01:47:326 (5,6) - Minor stuff, stack them properly. You used quite a lot stacks in this difficulty and all of them are well stacked except for these.
01:19:840 (x) - I really missed a beat here, it sounds really empty without it. Would be better to add an object (or at least a slider end) here, you can leave without objects 01:20:510 - , in my personal point of view this is less important.
01:36:600 (5,6,7) - This pattern sounds a bit weird, I think you can represent much better the music here. I tried this rhythmical patterns, I think it'll cover better vocals and instrumentals.
01:55:036 (T) - Can you reduce the volume in this inherited timing point? Actually, it sounds loud to the end of the song, try using around 20% instead and you'll find a better effect.

- Not bad. Maybe not the best difficulty in terms of aesthetic but it flows well in general. Good job!

[GIDZ'S Hard]

01:19:002 (2) - 01:29:728 (2) - 01:32:410 (2) - I'd add New Combos in all these objects, to emphasize the music pitch and those flash kiai that you decided to use.
01:44:645 (3,4,5) - Try reducing a bit the volume in those slider ends mainly, they don't fit really well to the song. In addition, I didn't like to see this pattern stacked, it doesn't flow really well comparing with the whole difficulty, I think you can unstack them as well.

- Good rhythm + Constant spacing = There isn't much more things to mod here

[Starfy's Hyper]

00:31:739 (1,2) - 00:42:466 (1,2) - I prefer to see them unstacked, or at least a bit more separated so players can notice this 1/8 slider. When you play the map, the repetition is not really simple to notice it and it looks like a simple note. Try to make those repetitions more noticeable, so players can expect this pattern much better.
01:20:343 (3,4,1) - 01:21:013 (3,4,1) - 01:31:069 (3,4,1) - 01:31:739 (3,4,1) - Can you rearrange a bit the combo'ing here and transform those antijumps into (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) - (1,2,3) - (1,2,1) respectively? You generally used compressed streams in this kiai section but the usage of those antijumps are understandable here as well, but if you don't make something to make these pattern easier to read, player will probably think this is a simple 1/4. Yeah, you can probably say "players who play this difficulty are not noob to read that" but sometimes they need something like that for a better playability. I'm telling you that because I had a experience in one of my maps in the past, with a similar pattern and some pro players told me to represent better that kind of things and I personally think that makes sense.
01:54:198 (1) - What do you think about ending this slider 1/4 or 1/2 earlier? If you listen the music in 25% playback rate, I think the music stop there.

- Cool. I liked the structure of this difficulty

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here.
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental.
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.

- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - .
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object.
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future.
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3

- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

bite you death

Beatmap Nominator

654 posts

Joined May 2015

bite you death 2018-02-17T15:13:39+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue! hey hey

[byd's Easy]

00:10:287 (2) - Try adding some whistles in basically all this slider (except the sliderbody) to follow vocals. I can understand if you don't want to add hitsounds in 00:01:572 (1) - because everything sounds really quite, but I think they are necessary here, they sounds really good. ye i just copied hs from my old shitty diff and it had a different rhyhm, will fix hs things
00:29:728 (2) - I personally think you can move this slider some grids down, doing that it won't touch the HP Bar. I know this is a bit nitpicky but it'll help you in term of aesthetically. Try moving this slider some grids down by using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). eh, doesnt touch hp bar or score bar for me so i think its fine, but if you provide a screenshot or something where it touches it on a different resolution i can change it
01:02:577 (1) - Similar as 00:10:287 (2) - . In this case, it'll help you to follow the new sound in the instrumental, if you know what I mean. ye
01:20:008 (3) - This is a bit nitpicky as well, but this slider head is touching a bit the HP Bar with the default skin. You can fix it easily by moving this object some grids down, I recommend you to select all these notes 01:20:008 (3,4,1,2,3) - - so you don't have fix anything in this nice pattern and adapt 01:23:695 (4) - to the spacing afterwards, it is really easy to fix that, so you should give it a try. Same as before about using Grid Size: 4 (tiny). ye moved it down a bit
01:44:980 (4,1) - This is the only pattern in 1/2 in the whole map, there is no need to make this map more difficult, in addition this pattern becomes inconsistent due this reason. If you replace the slider (4) for a single note in 01:44:980 - you'll make this pattern more consistent with the rest of the map. tough one, as it follows the song. but i guess keeping it consistent would be better, so changed
- Nice difficulty! Great job! ty :d

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere. i believe the metadata is taken from a ranked set, but there was some arguing about surname first, here's the metadata links and you can decide which is better xd
http://sooopiyo.pw/
https://p.eagate.573.jp/game/bemani/p/a ... totto.html
Lanturn wrote:
Lots of Japanese artists use Given / Family order on their websites when writing in Romanization.
http://nbcuni-music.com/maon/
http://www.tomatsuharuka.com/
http://www.mizukinana.jp/
http://minori-smiledays.jugem.jp/

even CDs do this
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-wj5Sd3aZFus/U ... IGNITE.jpg
http://www.generasia.com/w/images/thumb ... N_2003.jpg
http://blog-imgs-45.fc2.com/a/r/t/artw0 ... _q90v2.jpg

add these hs for me @matha https://puu.sh/zpKdU.wav (soft-sliderslide4) https://puu.sh/zpKei.wav (normal-sliderslide5)

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Petal

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Petal 2018-02-22T16:59:25+00:00

mancuso_JM_ wrote:
Hi there! Modding from my queue!

Normal

00:11:628 (1,1) - The recovery time after the spinner is not high enough for this difficulty because the BPM is not that slow. There aren't that much ways to fix that, I don't know if you want to use a slider instead of this spinner, anyway I tried something different that I'd like to show you. If you try to move the objects closer to the middle of the screen, I think the recovery time will be enough because the cursor movement won't be really abrupt. Take this as an example omg fixed thank you~
01:21:851 (x) - I think you can add a note here to follow vocals closer, it won't be difficult after all and breaks a bit the 1/1 pattern that it doesn't sound really good. agreed
01:23:360 (3,4) - I think 4 notes don't work really good here, you can take advantage of vocals here and try to use a slider instead of these. okay
01:32:075 (1) - This note as a single combo is not following really good your combo'ing. I'd try to remove it and just emphasize the next one with a new combo, where the music becomes stronger. ok
01:42:131 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - vs. 01:46:823 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Try to make the combo'ing between these patterns consistent please, the music is basically the same but you used a different way to add them. I'd try something 01:42:131 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - vs. 01:46:823 (3,1,1,2,3,4) - , I personally think you can have a single combo when the music sounds like 01:42:131 (1) - & 01:47:494 (1) - . Give it a try please. I think I fixed the problem
01:44:645 (1,1,1) - This combo spam is not really necessary in that kind of difficulties, I see your idea but still these notes are following the same thing in the music. I'd use a simple (1,2,3) here. ok
01:52:857 (3) - Add a New Combo to emphasize the end of the map?ok
- I didn't find major problems in this difficulty but the comboing becomes weird at the end of the map. Would be better to fix that. Fixed

[Insane]

00:01:572 (1,2,3) - I don't really agree with the rhythm usage here, I prefer to see the idea of Starfy and Avena instead, 3/4 sliders doesn't have anything to do/represent here and the last 1/1 sounds quite off. Just in case, I'd like to see that instead.okay I didn't relise how bad this was until now
00:11:628 (1) - Use a spinner instead of a slider? You did that in Normal and I have to say a Spinner is more difficult than a simple slider. In addition, you can take advantage of this looking that you don't have any spinner here. having this to be a slider just feels nicer , I feel like if it was a spinner it would be too short to bring out any emphasis to the song
00:17:829 (2,3) - I'd like to see a higher spacing between these objects because appear a new sound in the music, if you listen to it properly, you'll notice it. You can maybe do something like that, take this as an easy example, you can maybe have a better idea than me xD.00:16:991 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here I was trying to emphasize the sound behind the drums , it would be weird if I were to space these out imo because the noise in the background is fading away , that takes away a reason for a sudden jump/DS increase in the map even though there is a drum sound there
00:23:024 (1,1) - The spacing between them can be a bit higher too. Try moving 00:23:192 (1) - around x:384 y:336, you'll emphasize the new sound in the instrumental. ok
00:24:700 (1) - This 3/4 doesn't sound that bad but in this difficulty you can innovate a bit more in my opinion. I think there is enough sound in 00:24:868 - and especially in 00:24:952 where I think that passive mapping doesn't cover the song enough in this difficulty in particular. If I were you, I'd reduce this slider in 1/4 and add a single note in 00:24:952 - to provide the music a better rhythm, you should give it a try. If you do agree with me, do that in 00:47:494 (1) - too.one of the reasons that I increased the SV on this slider is because I wanted to bring out 00:25:036 (1) - 's hard downbeat , but currently with your method replacing it with a 1/4 slider and circles won't bring the same effect that I wanted it to
00:31:739 (6) - Increase this slider length in 1/4? Long vocal section that can be good represented with that technique. You can reduce the volume at this slider end for a better sound effect.good idea
00:38:443 (1,2) - A bit minor, but for a weird reason this is the only manual stack in the whole difficulty. Would be better to stack them properly for consistency.fixed , I misclicked here
00:41:963 (4,5) - In this case, the downbeat at 00:42:466 - isn't well emphasized due the passive mapping, I think a slider start should be placed there. Following my suggestion at 00:31:739 (6) - as well, you can use this rhythm instead.fixed
01:20:678 (6) - A constant 1/2 doesn't benefit the song at all in the kiai, you have a lot of things to follow instead of the simple instrumental that always goes in 1/2. I think you can follow vocals here, by doing a pattern like this don't really like sliders ending on blue tick because it will ignore the drum sound on the red , but I do agree that this need to change so I did a few adjustments
01:43:639 (2,3) - You can use a jump here as I mentioned in 00:17:829 (2,3) - . Take this as an example.
same reason as above ><
- Some things can be emphasized better, despite that, this is a good difficulty.

[Avena's Extreme]

00:31:739 (1) - vs. 00:42:467 (1) - This sections are basically the same rhythmically but you're leaving a rest time in 00:31:907 - that isn't really necessary. Use a 1/2 slider as you did in 00:42:467 (1) - . fixed
01:01:153 (x) - It's an extra, you can fill this blank with a note in my opinion. The sound is higher enough to have an object. it kinda feels weird to have a triple in the calm part , I understand that placing a note there is reasonable but I just personally don't like it
01:11:963 (T) - Reduce the volume in this green line, the slider is following that background sound but actually it sounds pretty loud. Try using 15% instead.ok
01:15:902 (x) - 01:26:628 (x) - If you can do some tweaks in these patterns to have notes in these points would be excellent because there is a good sound to follow there, but well, if you can't find a good solution I'm not going to bother you that much.
01:21:348 (1) - Can be extended in 1/4 to cover better both instrumental/vocals.ok
01:46:153 (1,1) - The reverse arrow isn't complete hidden by the note, but in some way it can cause confuse due the fast slider. I think (1) can be moved some grids to don't have any problem in the future. fixed
01:54:030 (1) - I'm a bit sad because this slider doesn't end in 01:55:036 - where the music stops completely. Can you do that for me? :3
I didn't get this either but I mean he must have his own reason right?
- "Priti" nice difficulty in general xD. Still, it can receive some more mods because I only see one in all this thread.

That's all!
I have to say this set is pretty well done in general, I'd like to see some more mods in Insane/Extra mainly.
I'll probably come back in the near future. I hope this mod can help you!
Till then, Good Luck! c:

PD: If you have a metadata source, I'd like to see it somewhere.

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