owo ty owoRaphalge wrote:
ok let's try this
[japanese diff name]
00:42:161 - kinda throwed off that this section is basically a direct copy of the first one. Since there's some weird distortion sounds at 00:43:423 (1) - maybe turn this into a dkkdk or something?
02:14:230 - smash bros yes?
03:05:760 (76) - since this ends on a pretty gravelly sound maybe you can change the pattern to kdkkd? Think it'd look pretty cool if the quints showed up in the same order they did at 02:38:014 (5) - and 02:39:455 (14) - . 03:17:291 (76) - kkddk sounds fine here since the end noises are different I think it ends on an acute sound
03:46:480 - WTFLOL absolutely barbaric
[Hell Oni]
01:50:266 (9) - change to d to make it easier to read? probably just me but i got completely lost here
03:00:355 - compared to the Hakai diff this kiai feels way too easy :S Maybe you can make some patterns longer or even add some simple 1/4's ?
03:03:147 -
03:05:850 -
03:08:913 -
03:13:057 -
03:14:679 -
03:17:382 -
03:20:445 -
03:21:706 -
(examples of where you can add stuff) modified on my own
03:46:480 - AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAA
[Inner Oni]
Looks good but same thing with the density at 03:00:355 - :c I think in this case it's better to adhere to the spread in Oni
[Oni]
Looks alright
[Muzukashii]
03:02:877 (14,15) - ctrl+g? idk it feels kinda weird when half the kiai is k d kkk d k
03:14:409 (14,15) - ctrl+g here too since there's a pretty clear bass emphasis here i think
[Futsuu]
00:33:874 (2) - idk why but this note sounds kinda weird compared to 00:31:351 (3) - and 00:32:793 (6) - it's used to make the rhythm consistent
00:45:405 (2) - same mhm
[Kantan]
mmm speedcore kantan MmMMMmMmmMMMmmmMM delicioso
not replied = applied btw