pecegiant wrote:

Here because normal;

Why do you think 00:08:281 (3,4) - should be circles and not one slider, it's more rhythmically correct imo and suits the song better, Change?

PandaHero wrote:

Ну привет.

[General]
1. Сделала бы для киаев красненькие цвета комбо, для атмосферности. глаза сгорят
2. У тебя разрешение бгшки неранкабельное кстати. классно. интересно, как я его могу сделать нормальным без потери качества

[Easy]
03:02:439 (1,1) - вот такое расстояние от спиннера до следующего объекта в изи/нормалах не делают, лучше убери этот спиннер совсем. И нотку сюда поставь, ну или слайдер - 03:04:154. наверное бпм позволяет? спрошу потом у знающего человека

Всё хорошо, просто ставь нк почаще, потому что 8-10 объектов в комбо в изи это не ок. поставил

[Normal]
Цс 4 в нормале это дохуя, я бы попросила уменьшить хотя бы до 3.5, но слушать ты меня разумеется не будешь. конечно
Чекни аймод, у тебя там пара объектов анснапнута. снапнул

00:02:281 (2,4) - сюда бы нк, а то хп не резиновое.. а
00:56:281 (3) - и сюда а
01:58:046 (1,2,3,4,5) - слишком сложно для нормала, а ведь это даже не киай, лучше нерфануть и сделать два 1/2 слайдера и ноту. ага, убогие моменты
03:02:439 (1,1) - та же фигня про спиннер, что и в изи. бпм позволяет
03:26:988 (2,4) - опять нк. а
03:46:848 (4) - ^ а

[Hard]
00:13:247 (1) - разбила бы этот ревёрс на слайдер+ноту, играется странно, из-за сильного удара на красном тике - 00:13:868. Алсо поставила бы на этот тик 1/1 слайдер и убрала бы 00:14:074 (2,3), а то нехорошо прыгать на ударные посреди парта, который ты маппаешь под гитару. ок
00:31:867 - вот этот удар зря проёбываешь, сюда бы ноту, как у тебя вот здесь сделано - 01:31:563 (1,2). ладно
02:57:297 (1) - этому парту бы св убавить, а то слайдеры слишком быстрые. убавил
03:37:954 (1,2,3) - писала уже про такое. мхм
03:39:919 (6,7) - стак чуть-чуть слетел, поправь, пожалуйста. нацист
03:45:194 (3,6) - вот тут потерял нк, которые в лунатике делал. да

[Lunatic]
01:17:288 (1) - не нравится мне его форма, я бы сделала обычным слайдером с тремя якорями. эта форма подходит к следующим прямым слайдерам
01:24:943 (6) - поставь нк что ли. ок
01:25:219 (7,8) - а я бы их подальше от 6 поставила, там вроде приличное расстояние между ними на таймлайне, его бы подчеркнуть. подвинул
01:40:253 (4,5) - такой оверлап плохо выглядит, поставь их подальше, вот так, например: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8526083 мне нравится этот оверлап, тем более играть не мешает и соответствует тому, что было раньше в подобной части
02:13:474 (1) - вот в этом парте бы побольше нк наставить, а то из-за того что ноты редко появляются, хп уходит моментально. 02:14:760 (2,5) - сюда бы например не помешало, ну и дальше по аналогии. наспамил
02:44:383 (2,3,4) - выделять тремя одинаковыми слайдерами разный вокал это как-то не очень, сделай 3 ctrl+g хотя бы. а раньше тебя это видимо устраивало. поменял в начале и здесь
02:47:694 (2,3) - сейм щит, только на этот раз я бы посоветовала сделать 3 слайдеру ctrl+j и опустить его вниз. так-то эти слайдеры на слогах одного слова лежат, поэтому оставлю как есть


Оцени своё настроение по шкале от 1 до 10 и не отвечай на этот мод, если оно будет меньше 5. 5.01

tokiko wrote:

[General]
1. глаза сгорят А от сториборды значит не сгорят?
2. классно. интересно, как я его могу сделать нормальным без потери качества
Верх/низ обрезать не пробовал?

[Easy]
наверное бпм позволяет? спрошу потом у знающего человека
Spinner recovery time should be at least 4 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner - вот тебе Окорин в качестве знающего человека и нет, бпм не позволяет. Можешь вот тут всё почитать - t/517731


[Lunatic]
а раньше тебя это видимо устраивало. поменял в начале и здесь Ну сорян, проглядела

5.01 Ну да, оно и заметно

PandaHero wrote:

tokiko wrote:

[General]
1. глаза сгорят А от сториборды значит не сгорят? красного в сториборде достаточно
2. классно. интересно, как я его могу сделать нормальным без потери качества
Верх/низ обрезать не пробовал? сейчас, только штаны подтяну

[Easy]
наверное бпм позволяет? спрошу потом у знающего человека
Spinner recovery time should be at least 4 beats. This is to ensure adequate time to click a hitobject following a spinner - вот тебе Окорин в качестве знающего человека и нет, бпм не позволяет. Можешь вот тут всё почитать - t/517731 ок


[Lunatic]
а раньше тебя это видимо устраивало. поменял в начале и здесь Ну сорян, проглядела

5.01 Ну да, оно и заметно

• last diff

1. 00:18:833 (3) - forgor your nc
2. 00:19:868 (2) - shouldn't this be a slider? It has similar sound to 00:00:626 (1,5) -
3. 01:01:785 (2,3) - jump xD? Here you have more reasonable spacing 01:08:643 (2,1) - so it's a bit inconsistent
4. 02:57:297 - the flash of sb here feels not very smooth

Asaiga wrote:

hi, quick look ( not going too deep ) no kds cuz already given before

• last diff

1. 00:18:833 (3) - forgor your nc yeahhh
2. 00:19:868 (2) - shouldn't this be a slider? It has similar sound to 00:00:626 (1,5) - it sounds different for me D:
3. 01:01:785 (2,3) - jump xD? Here you have more reasonable spacing 01:08:643 (2,1) - so it's a bit inconsistent fixed by ctrl+g on 01:08:643 (2) -
4. 02:57:297 - the flash of sb here feels not very smooth i've reduced scale at the beginning a little

I'm interested in this map. Support tokiko! thank you!

jonathanlfj wrote:

Russians and Suwako's theme 🤔 kero kero putin

[General]
The last kiai doesn't have the red sb pulsing, is that intentional? yeaaah, it feels like red pulses should be at all white ticks but it would also hurts and make you feel sick

[Easy]
01:37:769 (4,6) - spacing fix
03:04:154 - what happened here lol its not after a spinner gotta hype it up there was a spinner before, placed a slider on empty place now anyway

[Normal]
CS2.8 to CS4 jump, I suggest you use something like 3.6 to even the gap a bit to Hard, it also makes the overlaps less on the edge which imo improves aesthetics i prefer CS2.28 or 1.6 but 3.6 looks good too
00:49:660 (1) - curving this downwards make the flow onto 00:50:488 (2) more natural agreed
01:26:349 (5) - spacing here should be a bit bigger (see 00:25:937 (4)) my bad, fixed now
03:02:868 - following vocals there should be a note here too
03:44:575 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - NCing these in groups of 3s should make the rhythm more understandable for players http://puu.sh/wJSyx.jpg good idea!
That fail spike in the end though, was hoping you could put some other circle heavy sections early in the map to balance it out yes but i also don't know where is a good place for something like that

[Hard]
00:26:212 (2) - the position of this slider is a bit misleading, it should be closer to 00:26:488 (1) to indicate a smaller rhythm gap fixfix
01:25:785 (1,2,3) - despite timing difference these should be equal distant to indicate that they fall within 1/3 rhythm gap, also i do suggest to enlarge the spacing so its more obvious spaced that more a bit and tried to make the spacing between these notes equal but my eyes sucks lol
02:32:331 (10) - make this a 1/4 slider, it actually makes the next double easier to follow sure
02:33:760 (4,5) - not sure if this is a good idea on a Hard, i can play it no problem but im not sure if the target player base can. Suggest you use a slider instead (can increase spacing to compensate) okaaay
03:32:988 (1) - make this a 1/4 repeat slider to correspond with 03:34:644 (1) oke

[Lunatic]
HP6.5 is very harsh on the drain especially on the last kiai; since the section is not dense enough for the drain, missing a note or breaking a slider could put you in the red zone. HR is literal hell lmao HP6 should be fine (maybe not but it's an integer at least)
00:34:556 (1,2,3) - this flows really weirdly due to the direction of the slider, you might want to rearrange this a little mhm mhm, now it's not a triangle
02:26:546 (6,7,8,9) - this pattern plays a bit weird, since the strong beat lands on 02:26:760 (8) but the jump is at 02:26:867 (9). you can move 02:26:760 (8) down but then you might also want to adjust surrounding notes to not make this a reading trap. stacked that note with the slider and maked a 1/4 slider instead of previous two notes, should be arighty now
02:45:211 (4,1) - this is super hard to play without getting a 100 on the slider; i usually fall below half hp here due to the 100s on sliders killing HP recovery rate. Ctrl+g on 02:45:211 (4) would play much better ctrl+g will kill the e m p h a s i z e (but honestly, i pointed out the difference in vocals here by placing two sliders in the one direction™ and one slider with ctrl+g on it. you can see it 00:46:763 (2,3,4) - 01:46:873 (2,3,4) - here as well. buuut i can rearrange these places if that will really needed)
03:23:868 (1,1) - this place would be much more hype of you mapped out the denser rhythms, maybe break it down to 1/4 sliders? 1/4 sliders feels reaaally missleading for me here
tbh skipping 1/4 rhythms in the kiai is not ideal especially since the HP is so harsh, I understand you want to follow the vocals but failing that last kiai 3 times in a row (again) really triggered me lol 不可能HR

Okorin wrote:

haifuri

wait no wrong

the way lunatic is designed leaves a really huge gap towards hard, i'm currently getting more opinions on that but personally i think this is a big issue for this set being pushed forwards, because the average player that can about deal with the hard will be completely destroyed by the spacing and sv differences in lunatic - i think the only way to tastefully solve this would be adding one more diff because i think nerfing lunatic would ruin it

[general]
ever considered having two red combocolours for the kiai sections, they would fit soooo well with your storyboard, current color scheme of the map is kind of plain

[lunatic]
00:58:795 (1,2,1) - this isnt really obvious as to what it snaps to, playing this might not be intuitive, moving two closer to one could potentially be better as far as interpreting it goes
01:08:643 (2) - that this counts as one of the most intense jumps in the kiai seems logically weird, if at all the big drums should be having more bam impacts
01:23:909 (1,3,4) - you never perf stac kstuff in the rest of the diff so i'd try searching for a workaround for this pattern

if you compare sections, 01:43:977 (4,5) - sticks out for being randomly huge in comparison to similar stuff
00:47:591 (4,1) - 01:47:701 (4,1) - 02:45:211 (4,1) - why are you jsut going more and more insane with 1/4 spacing, i mean even the first pattern you had is kinda insane in its context, i dont really see why you'd want even more madness of this sort

03:12:725 (1,2,3) - this would probably play better if you gave less fucks about this being a neat blanket pattern, the movement from 1 to 2 is quite jarring and in comparison 3 feels really close

03:14:011 (4,5,6) - 03:19:154 (1,2,3) - introducing completely new concepts as for how you use standalone triples within the map 3 minutes into the thing seems unfair to the player, the patterns themselves are not really expectable at this point

[]

map itself is solid, i'd nominate if you fix spread

-Mo- wrote:

Had a quick skim through the set and I feel as if the NCing on the Easy diff feels kind of erratic outside of the kiais.

00:34:763 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - And other parts like this, the first combo is only two objects over one measure, while the second is 6 over 2 measures. In my opinion it doesn't make sense to use two different NCing patterns since there are three lines in the vocals on each measure and the music doesn't really change all too much for it to be different. Keeping 00:39:729 (1,2) as one combo is fine since the music changes and these are only two objects for two measures.

00:43:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels way too long to me as a single combo. The same applies for the combo after it. I would also make 00:56:281 (2) the NC since this uses a different rhythm and the change in the music is more distinct here.

00:04:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - This also feels kind of long since it's spanning over just about 4 measures, or about 5 seconds.

00:14:488 (1,2,3,4) - 00:19:868 (1,2,1,2) - These use the same rhythms but the NCing is different again. Even if the music is different, I feel it would make more sense to use a consistent NCing pattern.

I'd say it's probably worth going through this diff's combos and making them at least consistent within each musical section, and more consistent over the whole diff overall.

Yohanes wrote:

I thought the title was haifuri this whole time

1. 00:25:247 (2,3) - вот мне нравится переход на 1/3 тут, сложновато получается, думаю, заменить это два серкла на слайдер, как-то вроде и сложность сильно не падает, но играться должно намного лучше. Ну и тут 00:25:454 - нет такого сильного звука, чтоб выделять его кликабельным объектом, думаю, стоит выделить побольше 00:25:247 - .
2. Давай проясним, ты мапал под инструментал вперемешку с вокалом. Вот, скажем, тут 00:27:315 (1,2,3) - точно выбраны инструменталы — но ритм какой-то слишком странный, ибо ударный, который должен быть кликабельный, у тебя на нем стоит слайдеренд 00:27:729 - . Предлагаю сделать что-то такое.
   
   такое

   
   
   получается 00:27:625 - этот кикслайдер у тебя стоит вообще не на чем, звука-то ударного нет.
   00:35:591 (1,2,3) - то ж самое. Там и другие должны быть, вроде. Посмотри сам там.
3. 00:34:453 - зря андермапаешь, пятинотый стрим заходит же.
4. 01:04:785 (1,2) - не нравится, что ты так сильно стопишь здесь ритм. Если у тебя там идут паттерны и иногда гап в 1/1, то тут сразу два таких гапа. Инконсистент, как говорят? Первый серкл на слайдер поменять мб, или сразу два, чтоб под вокал фитал.
   02:04:903 (1,2) - сейм, ну и другие.
5. 01:25:571 - странно. Ты точно пропустил серкл.
6. 02:12:617 (1,2) - тут же наоборот вырастает интенсивность, даже сб это выделяет, а спейсинг почему-то нет. Стоит побольше его.
7. А тебе говорили про эти слайдеры 02:57:297 (1,2) - ? Я уверен, что говорили. Мое мнение — из-за того, что в карте нет сложных паттернов на "читалку", то такое будет просто уничтожать игроков. Неожиданно очень появилось.

Okorin wrote:

can u reply to wafu's concern i think the hitsound thing is valid sure

lunatic new
00:27:315 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - these sort a patterns are kinda confusing because you got to play triple circle triple and then a double after, i think having 00:27:936 (1,2) - be slider would solve issue yes
also applies to things like 00:35:798 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:27:425 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 01:35:908 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - yes
01:22:253 (1,5,6,7) - aesthetics lol it's an aesthetically beautiful overlap
02:33:081 (1) - should be 1/3???? ya, i'm deaf
02:36:521 (1,2,3) - visually equal spacing between all of these make rhythm a pain to interpret should be better now
02:56:704 (2) - seems off too to me really off
02:57:297 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - violate rc because 2nd slider of each is already visible before the first one faded out did some unstacks

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Lunatic]
01:12:928 (4,5) - what happened here lol, first slider is missing a repeat (01:13:303 sound is not covered and 2nd slider starts at a yellow tick) fixed in that diff and in extra too
01:25:357 (2) - would prefer this to be a repeat slider to cover the drums: http://puu.sh/x3u3M.jpg okay, i hope that stack with next note isn't hurtful
02:30:831 (2,3,4,5,6) - got a little confused here, its much easier to read if you don't stack the double http://puu.sh/x3u80.jpg fix

thats all from me thank you!

Okorin wrote:

oh the solution to this is really simple

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

scaled your bgs properly
turned actual bg into sb element to get rid of it at one point
redid the scaling effect differently using easing 16 instead of 0 and only scaling up and not starting from something smaller than the original
idk if this counts as me optimizing your sb or as me doing your sb though optimization due to my inexperience


short question why do you have lyaguha4.jpg in /sb/ which is basically your bg in bigger and your bg in / is same file but smaller i'm not really sure but when i delete it the map in editor turns in something like that. in game it still looks fine so idk

also why does last kiai have no pulsing effects should i add that while im at it lol uum, the last kiai have a lot of finishes in it and i wasn't sure where to add these effects

Shiirn wrote:

oops i deleted the puush after 3 days of no comment

M a r v o l l o wrote:

Ребят кто такой токико я чет не знаю его. Грац энивей