ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy here we go
m4m
00:14:141 (1,2,1,2,1) - these seemed inconsistent for me, i dont really understand the placement you choose there...
00:23:046 (1) - do you really need that slider? i think you shud delete it from reasons of to keep the melody following
00:24:548 (4,1) - ds seems inconsistent here
00:38:046 (5,2) - overlap?
00:50:423 (1,3,4) - can you place the (1) in the middle between 3 and 4? i think it will look better
01:36:162 (4,5) - you can make the blanket with sliderstart of (5) to the (4) slider
01:48:162 (3) - place it in the middle of the screen with 90% angle? i mean you got 01:47:412 (1,2) - these things mirrored tho
02:35:052 (2,3) - what sound you emphasizing with these? seems overmapped
03:21:726 (4,2,1) - these ones seemed inconsistent
04:50:425 (1,2) - make them stacked?
Overall i like this song.
Some parts are overmapped, but i think its a good map!
good luck
m4m
00:14:141 (1,2,1,2,1) - these seemed inconsistent for me, i dont really understand the placement you choose there...
00:23:046 (1) - do you really need that slider? i think you shud delete it from reasons of to keep the melody following
00:24:548 (4,1) - ds seems inconsistent here
00:38:046 (5,2) - overlap?
00:50:423 (1,3,4) - can you place the (1) in the middle between 3 and 4? i think it will look better
01:36:162 (4,5) - you can make the blanket with sliderstart of (5) to the (4) slider
01:48:162 (3) - place it in the middle of the screen with 90% angle? i mean you got 01:47:412 (1,2) - these things mirrored tho
02:35:052 (2,3) - what sound you emphasizing with these? seems overmapped
03:21:726 (4,2,1) - these ones seemed inconsistent
04:50:425 (1,2) - make them stacked?
Overall i like this song.
Some parts are overmapped, but i think its a good map!
good luck