Thank you![Nemesis] wrote:
Riki's Insane
00:14:686 (2) - that's an undermap, I know that it's supposed to be an easier insane but it's an Insane regardless, I feel like this sound just cannot be ignored (00:14:834 - )
00:18:390 - and again, I'm not gonna mention it anymore, just reconsider your rhythm choices in these moments. Yeah this might be took into consideration, I will wait for more opinions
00:32:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - why would you suddenly change your patterns from repeating sliders to slider-circle? don't talk about variety, you use this pattern only once while all the others look the same 00:39:575 - (1) This is the same, I did it intentionally for variety
00:56:908 (1,2) - feels like a really lazy pattern, why don't you just put a break there instead lol because it's something different
01:21:353 (1) - cool slider
01:53:797 (1) - cool slider vol. 2 Thanks for those!
Thanks for the modPandaHero wrote:
[Riki's Insane]
00:19:575 (1,2) - this sounds axactly the same as 00:20:019 (3) - , maybe will be better to make a reverse slider here? I need to think about this pattern, I think I'll edit it later
00:20:464 (4) - it so strange that you did this loong slider and missed some sounds on 00:20:908, 00:21:057 and 00:21:205. Nothing is missed. The slider clearly follows every single sound here, since there's a wobble on it
00:36:019 (1,2,3) - looks a bit random, will be better, if you make it with same curve and degreese. For example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8500563 Agree with that, fixed!
00:41:797 (2) - I think if you ctrl+h this slider, it will be works better. Yes, fixed
00:48:908 (1) - this long slider is also strange as a previous.
00:56:908 (1,2) - these sliders looks so lazy, you can make a lot of 1/1 sliders instead of it. The intention is to use repetitive sliders, since the sound is itself repetitive
01:21:353 (1) - what is wrong with this slider? o.o I guess tt should be the same form as here - 01:14:242 (1). Nope sorry, I hate copy-pasting
01:30:686 (1,2,3) - I think it will be rhythmically better as a stream because of strong sounds on the slider's ends. A 12 note stream on my diff would be an unnecessary difficulty spike, since there isn't any such stream in the other insane
01:37:797 (1,2,3) - ^
01:07:279 (2) - this note overlap with score % Fixed!
01:50:242 (1) - slider's end overlap a bit with score % Fixed as well
Mir:LwL wrote:
- 00:15:131 (1,2) - Why suddenly change up the rhythm here? Could just start doing it in the next pattern and it'd feel less random since it's seperated by a change in music I think that the 1/3 sound is slightly more intense here, so that's why I separated it
- 00:17:945 - I don't think you should skip over this Same reason here. 1/3 is slightly less audible
- 00:20:686 - same, the very low pitch also actually starts here rather than on 00:20:464 - , so starting the slider here would seem more fitting anyway. Both this and the previous one repeat in this section, the one after the kiai, and the one before the final kiai. I'm following the synth, mainly
- 00:30:686 (1,2,3) - has identical pitch to 00:32:464 (1,2,1,2,1) - , but the patterns are different, and then when the pitch does change (and the song imo is more intense) at 00:34:242 (1,2) - you go back to the previous pattern. The pitch does change at the last group of notes for each pattern compared to the first two, you could do something with that as well (you did at 00:35:131 (1) - , but not before). Applies throughout this kiai and partially to the second one.
I'm not coming back to the previous pattern at all, this is the pattern I used:
repeat slider - repeat slider - repeat slider
repeat slider - repeat slider - repeat slider
1/3 + note - 1/3 + note - 1/3 + note
repeat slider - repeat slider - 3 notes
The very last 3 notes are more intense to click, compared with the rest of the patterns, and that intensifies the rhythm. By the way I can consider replacing those sliders with 1/3 + note again, if it doesn't cause playability issues and make the map too hard
00:32:464 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - The pattern seems to assign equal importants to the white ticks as to the 2/3 ticks (the one the circles are on, idk how else to say it), which I don't hear in the song. It's all 1/3. Every single beat is equally important, so- 00:39:575 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
- 01:04:908 (3) - The sound on the sliderend stands out, making the slider shorter and making 01:05:205 part of the jump pattern seems like a better fit. This does not fully convince me, honestly, but I can try it
Fixed stuff lol
Ready!
https://puu.sh/wBE06/54bdf9c131.osu