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dkingo wrote:

Hello NM from my queue

mod

[NM]

1. 00:01:076 - Add a note for the flute or something
2. 00:04:504 - ^ No add for this to prevent the similarities in HD
3. 00:07:219 - I think you can use triple here nah....two notes for this in NM
4. 00:08:790 (8790|0,8933|2) - By the pitch from 3 to 1 would be better
5. 00:11:790 (11790|2,11933|0) - 1 to 3?
6. 00:16:076 (16076|3,16219|1) - 2 to 4?
7. 00:41:504 - Triple like above As i said two notes for this.
8. 00:55:647 (55647|3) - Move to col 3 bcs the pitch goes down
9. 01:19:647 (79647|3,79647|0,80076|3,80076|0,80504|3,80504|0) - I would make some changes like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8201123 No change of pattern for this since it recognize the sound for this note.
10. 01:36:362 - 4 LNs is way too much in NM, try to redude 1 or 2 Nahh..i don't think it's too much since the start of LN is in 2 not 4 LN
11. 01:37:933 - The sounds is weak, remove a note

[HD]

1. 00:07:219 (7219|1) - Move to col 3
   No other issues are found in this diff

[MX]

1. 00:04:790 - Add a note
2. 00:18:362 (18362|0,18576|0) - I think you shouoldn't continue the jack when pitch changes Re-arranged some notes.
3. 01:32:933 (92933|1,92933|2,92933|0,92933|3) - I'd prefer 1 LN+3 notes here Nah...the sound is too loud and i think 1LN+3notes is not good since it only focus on LN's in this area.

I really like this song, hope it gets ranked soon, good luck! Osu needs more unplugged songs.

Thanks for Mod and Star dking

DDMythical wrote:

1 / 2 / 3 / 4

Hitsounding job is done really well!

NM

00:11:790 (11790|1) - This is a different pitch to the previous note so it should be shifted onto a different column, Preferably 1 since that keeps the hand balance; It also helps with the fact that the 1st column is left rather empty.

HD

00:06:647 (6647|3) - Personally I would delete this since it isnt mapped to any actual sound -- just a hitsound -- and without it there it gives the upcoming chord more emphasis and space. It breaks the flow of the consistency if you remove this one, but i guess i'll consider this one when it's really necessary to remove.
01:38:076 (98076|3,98076|1,98076|0,98076|2) - Breaking consistency here; Typically you map cymbal crashes to hands but here you've mapped it to a quad. However it is the last note of the song so I can understand the justification here.

MX

00:56:528 (56528|1,56576|2,56695|3,56742|0,56838|1,56885|2) - These look and feel incorrectly snapped. Shouldn't you simplify this into a 1/6 melody? (Here's how I remapped it. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8236061)
01:27:790 (87790|2) - In this diff your cymbals are mapped to quads but here is one random time where this isn't done. I suggest a repattern for consistency. Well if you repattern this one it will break the flows and i'll going to remapped in this area so but if you concern in hitsound it's not the case to break the consistency.

Short mod but this map is pretty much rankable.

Thanks for mod

Unpredictable wrote:

ok we good,

lets get started

1|2|3|4

NM

- 00:20:076 add a note here for the clacking sound? I know there's a clacking sound but i just focus on windwood sound so only LN for this area.
- 00:20:504 (20504|1) - for this LN I'm pretty sure it doesn't end here. i can't really tell if it ends on a 1/8 or 1/12 but i'd change it to 00:20:719 I already check that in 25%playback rate and it's definitely here 00:20:790 -
- 00:41:362 add a note here
- 00:41:504 make this here a hand (3 notes). you can definitely tell its way more emphasized than 00:41:076
- 01:12:790 add a note because of 01:11:933 No add note for this because it only focus on windwood sound.
- 01:13:647 same reason above Same stated above

HD

- 00:05:504 place note here? No add for this. It's only focus on windwood sound.
- 00:21:076 (21076|0,21362|0,21647|0,21933|0,22219|0) - these notes on the same column just don't work well because your literally click on that same column every other 1/2. I'd suggest changing this part to make it balanced with other columns Oh you're the one who notice this, rearranged some notes.
- 00:29:934 LN here?
-01:14:219 (74219|0,74504|0,74790|0,75076|0,75362|0) - yeah same problem here. it just makes these kinda parts more challenging than it really is and it doesn't balance out with the other columns at all
- 01:23:076 (83076|3) - the LN here ends at 01:23:219 Oh also apply some parts have similar.
- 01:31:933 note here?
- 01:38:076 I think this is an unnecessary quad you have here. I'd change it to a hand.

MX

- 00:02:933 (2933|3,3219|3,3504|3,3790|3,4076|3,4314|3,4647|3,4933|3,5219|3) - the same problem with HD. you wanna watch out when you're using to much of the same column too much. I'd suggest fixing this part to make it more balanced. Fixed
- 00:10:219 unnecessary hand here. take out a note. Nah it breaks the consistency when you remove this one but i guess i have to re-arrange this one for the better flow
- 00:13:790 (13790|1) - ghost note? can't hear a sound here Oh i forgot to add hitsound here. I know it's a ghost but much better to remain this one for the better flow.
- 00:27:504 (27504|2,27504|3,27647|3,27647|2) - these two should not be doubles. makes these just singles Nah it's even it's single or double it's not the case and it will never breaks the flow.
- 00:27:790 i don't think these emphasized enough for a hand. make into a double. Nah, it breaks the consistency if you remove this one.
- 00:28:362 (28362|2) - this note should be 00:28:433 here I already check it and it's in 1/2 beats not in 1/4
- 00:56:504 there should be a double here for the clacking sound No add for this for the better flow of handstreams.
- 00:56:838 (56838|1) - would suggest that you move this to column 4 the flow is going left and its weird when you switch the stream to the right like that.
- 01:01:933 (61933|2,61933|3) - I don't see the need for a double here. just make it one note Nah, as i said in terms of consistency
- 01:08:790 (68790|2,68790|1) - same with here As I stated above
- 01:26:076 (86076|2,86362|3,86433|2) - I don't like the way this is setup because it's super unconventional to play. I'd suggest moving 01:26:362 (86362|3) - to column 2 and 01:26:433 (86433|2) - to column 4

Hope this helps out with anything. I'll be waiting for my mod soon

Also, really glad you had pick this song. I haven't seen one bit of gameplay, but I do enjoy myself playing some good RPG songs. Don't get to see much of this type of stuff in osu! nowadays.

Cya!

Thanks for mod

Illya X Ram Li wrote:

Hello , im From your queue
this M4M

NM

00:01:504 (1504|2) move to 4 then change with LN No adding LN in this section
00:01:790 (1790|3) move to 3 I'll remain this one since you want to change the previous note to LN but i din't move the notes.
00:43:219 (43219|0) add note to 1 No add note for this. Just concentrate the woodwind sound in this section.
00:44:933 (44933|2) add a note to 3 ^^^
00:45:362 (45362|2) move to 2
01:20:076 (80076|3,80076|0) move to 2 and 3 No move for this for the consistency of sound.

HD

00:28:076 miss note here, add one to 4
01:27:504 (87504|1) add note to 2
01:27:647 (87647|2) add note to 3
01:33:362 (93362|1) miss, add note to 2

MX

None

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Over all its good map

Good Luck

don't forget my map >>Ray - ebb and flow

Sarahkuai wrote:

FROM THIS THREAD
hi ya <(")

HD

... GOOD JOB, NOTHING TO MOD i don't see any problem here

MX

00:00:647 (647|1,790|3) - why you separated this? it should be same position as 00:00:362 (362|3) - (change it into a jack, coz same pitch) I know but i change some notes to be more accurate.
00:00:362 (362|3) - add 1 note (hands) I'll stick to 3 notes.
00:01:219 (1219|0) - change this note into LN to 00:01:504 - No adding of LN in this section.
00:02:076 (2076|0) - same problem ^ to 00:02:076 (2076|0) - ^^^
00:03:790 (3790|3) - ^ to 00:04:076 - ^^^
00:04:647 (4647|3) - ^ same problem ^^^
00:05:504 - change this LN pattern coz it isn't fit on that melody hmm... maybe like this I already this your suggested pattern and i don't like it because it breaks the hand balance in col 1/2 pattern.
00:11:362 - hmm... change it, like this pattern 00:09:219 (9219|3,9290|2,9362|3,9362|1) -
00:45:362 (45362|3,45362|2) - move to the left (middle) coz it isn't same as 00:44:933 (44933|2,44933|3) -
00:57:362 (57362|3,57362|0,57362|1,57647|2,57647|1,57790|0,57790|3,58076|0,58219|3,58219|1,58504|2,58504|0,58647|2,58647|0,58933|3,58933|1,59076|0,59076|2,59362|2,59362|0,59790|3,59790|1,59933|0,59933|2,60219|2,60219|0,60362|3,60362|1,60647|3,60647|1,60790|3,60790|0,60790|2,61076|2,61076|1,61504|0,61504|3,61647|1,61647|3,61647|2,61933|3,61933|2,62076|3,62076|2,62076|0,62362|3,62362|1,62504|0,62504|3,62504|1,62790|0,62790|2,62933|3,62933|1,62933|0,63219|2,63219|0,63362|3,63647|3,63647|1,63790|3,63790|1,63790|0,63790|2,64076|0,64076|2,64219|2,64219|1,64219|3,64504|3,64504|0,64933|2,64933|1,65076|2,65076|3,65076|0,65362|1,65362|0,65504|3,65504|2,65790|3,65790|2,65933|3,65933|0,65933|1,66219|3,66219|2,66647|1,66647|0,66790|2,66790|0,66790|3,67219|1,67219|2,67504|3,67504|0,67647|1,67647|3,67647|0,67933|1,67933|2,68362|3,68362|0,68504|2,68504|1,68790|2,68790|1,68933|0,68933|1,68933|3,69362|2,69362|3,69647|1,69647|0,70076|2,70076|3,70219|3,70219|0,70219|1,70647|3,70647|2,70933|1,70933|0,71076|0,71076|1,71076|2,71362|3,71362|0,71790|1,71790|2,71933|3,71933|0,72362|0,72362|3,72790|2,72790|1,73219|1,73504|0,73647|0) - lel.. don't forced LN too much I know you did this coz to make higher Star, I considered to rearranger the LNs (you should be creative in to arranger LN patterns) Actually I change everything in that section. I hope it's much better than the last LN.

that's all, GL

@Maienso: I still not convince about changing the bpm because you din't give explanation of changing it and about the notes that you suggested, I'l changed it already in different type of note pattern.

Thanks for Mod Sarahkuai and Illya X Ram Li.

error_exe777 wrote:

heyyy from my queue

1|2|3|4

General

i have a concern with the LN's at the end. they are inconsistent and weird tbh.

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8868321 - NM on left, HD on right

These are completely different patterns and they end at different points.

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8868337 - NM on left, MX on right -

okay, this is justified because MX has a decent pattern used, and the two diffs are opposite.

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8868352 - HD on left, MX on right

just, what. there are two random LN's in MX at the top, and with the 4 LN's at the bottom of MX and 1 in NM, a n d the difficulty between the two is so odd.

overall, i recommend, changing the pattern of NM to make it more similar to the other two (making 1 LN come in at a time), and buff HD, because it's too far away from MX from a difficulty standpoint.

if i had to give suggestions for them:

NM - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8868427

HD - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8868405 - note: the two slider ends and heads that are close together are separated by 1/4

MX - it's fine as it is

just my recommendation. so sorry if i came across rude It's fine but i'll make it more simple in NM and no more change in HD since i din't change the LN patterns in NM

NM

00:05:647 (5647|3,5790|1,5933|3,6076|1,6219|3) - you can make something more interesting than this. I think this note is much interesting since the flow of the sound is really accurate when i use this kind of pattern.

00:41:504 - why is this a triple when 00:48:362 - is a double? please fix this either way round

00:51:362 - why is this a double? it's not very loud

00:53:076 - why not add a LN here? I want to recognize it as a note only and I'm using hitsound on that note.

01:34:647 (94647|1,94647|0,96362|3,96362|2) - in a NM? maybe a bit too much It's not too much since the LN is not difficult to press.

HD

00:47:933 (47933|2,48362|2) - maybe avoid this. it would make more sense to have a jack with a note than with a LN It's fine to have this kind of pattern since it's HD diff.

MX

00:00:790 (790|3,838|2,885|1,933|0) - i do not hear any sound corresponding to this at all. if it's the piano thing, it's snapped to 1/3. won't mention them all Nah, it's not snapped since i use 1/6 beats in this note and i can hear a drum sound (more likely snare drum).

01:18:004 (78004|2,78076|1) - ghosts, i'm certain. i hear a sound for the white tick tho I intention to make that note since i can hear a melody sound and i guess it's more accurate to have this note.

01:18:862 (78862|1,78933|2) - the same as above but no white tick this time ^^^

good set, sorry if came across as rude No it's fine and thanks for mod

best of luck o/

Botan wrote:

started: 2:24pm columns 1|2|3|4

NM00:17:504 (17504|3,17719|2,17933|1,18147|0,18362|3,18576|2,18790|1,19004|0) - Change in rhythm makes this a bit hard to read, maybe make them LNs?
00:26:076 (26076|3,26076|2,26504|0,26790|1) - Rhythm change here was a bit awkward. I think you should map it like 00:23:076 (23076|2,23362|3,23504|1,23790|0,23933|2,24219|1).
00:27:647 - Add note col.2. It's the same same as 01:37:933 (97933|1,98076|0,98076|3).
00:41:504 - Why 3 notes? It's same as 00:07:219. Oh nice! i forgot to put one note here 00:07:219 -
Nice chart, nothing else really bothered me. Thanks for mod
finished: 2:42pm

JesusMD24 wrote:

hai hai owo

MX
00:32:790 (32790|1) - the end of this LN should be at 00:33:219

00:33:362 why didn't u add one note here, it's the same sound like 00:32:504 (32504|1,32504|3) - I want to recognize only the windwood sound.

00:33:219 (33219|3,33362|2,33504|1,33647|0) - this part isn't well, if i were u, i would do this, looks better imo You make it more simple. I'll remain this note for more challenging and it never breaks the flow.

00:40:647 (40647|0,40790|0,40933|0,41076|0) - mmmmm, move this 00:40:790 (40790|0) - to 2 (1-2-3-4) <- columns No move for this. It breaks the hand balance.

00:53:504 (53504|0,53647|0,53790|0,53933|0,54076|0,54219|0,54362|0) - whoaa, fix this Why did i fix this? It's good to have this kind of note since the sound is more fit to this kind of note.

00:56:504 (56504|2,56504|1) - this is bad, i would do this I already use this kind of note but some modders are concern about this so i'll change it to LN to make it more simple in this section.

01:01:647 (61647|1,61647|2,61647|3) - those LNs are unnecessary, fix that I don't think that LN's are unnecessary, since it never breaks the flow and hand balance.

01:12:219 (72219|3,72219|0) - two notes are unnecessary, also it's the same sound like 01:00:647 (60647|2) -

01:11:790 (71790|2,71790|1,71933|3,71933|0) - mmmm this is wrong, try this Thanks for the suggestion but i changed it little bit to have more challenging.

01:12:647 (72647|2,73076|1,73504|0) - ghostnotes I can hear the sound at 25% playback rate.

01:12:362 (72362|0,72362|3,72647|2,72790|2,73076|1,73219|1,73504|0,73647|0) - this looks really bad, i would do this You make it more simple. No change for this since it never breaks the flow.

01:32:933 (92933|1,92933|0,92933|3,92933|2,93647|3,93790|0,94504|1,94647|2,96219|1,96219|2,96362|3,96362|0,97647|1,97647|2) - lel this is overnoted, fix this It's not overnoted since the windwood sound is much louder in this section.

that's all i might mod the other diffs soon, idk
GL and check some LNs!!!!

Thanks for mod

acacac wrote:

my m4m modding
[NM]
00:07:219 - 00:41:504 - 00:48:362 - delete a note. because 3 note on a line is serious at NM diff. That's not issue to have 3 notes in NM diff.
01:13:219 (73219|0) - move to 2 and 01:13:647 (73647|1) - move to 1 I'll remain this for different variation of this note 01:12:362 (72362|3,72790|2) -
01:34:647 to 01:37:647 - 2-4 LN note is not important. improve these part plz.
[HD]
00:19:219 - have not listened any strong sound, try to delete a note if you want. 3 notes exists because of 2 hitsounds i used.
01:37:504 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8873128 try this
[MX]
00:35:076 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8873149 try this I'll remain this one.

sorry for too short mod, 'cause I can't find more problem from this beatmap.

eyes wrote:

sorry for double-posting
yo, M4M from queue

MX
00:16:147 (16147|1) - should be on 00:16:123 and here is another note I guess 00:16:195 I already test this one but it's really snapped when you put it.
00:20:933 - here are a lot of jacks, but they are not balanced well, 00:21:219 (21219|2,21362|2,21647|3,21790|3,22076|3,22219|3,22504|0,22647|0,22933|0,23076|0,23362|2,23504|2,23790|3,23933|3,24219|3,24362|3,24647|3,24790|3,25076|3,25219|3,25504|0,25647|0,25933|0,26076|0) -
let's count:
right hand: 8 jacks
left hand:4 jacks
as you can see right hand is overloaded twice.
Also the alternation of jacks is kinda broken:
right(hand)>right>right>left>left>right>right>right>right>right>left>left
it's kinda painful, better use right>left>right>left>right>left and so on. Nah, it's not issue to have this kind of pattern since it's MX diff and if you change it, it breaks the flow of streams.
00:33:362 - you can add a note on 1st column No add for this. Just focus on windwood sound.
00:40:790 (40790|2,40933|2) - these should be on 2nd column for consistency with previous double jacks 00:27:362 (27362|3,27362|2,27504|2,27504|3,27647|3,27647|2,27790|2,27790|3)
00:46:933 (46933|1) - 00:49:504 (49504|3) - 00:58:933 (58933|1) - these lns end much earlier than you snapped, these are just random expamples, this issue is over all the map
01:27:290 - note for consistency with 01:26:433 (86433|3)
01:32:933 (92933|1,92933|2,92933|0) - suggestion: extend lns till next lns start, like this 01:32:933 (92933|3,93647|3) I'll remain this one.

NM
00:05:504 - it's hard pattern for normal diff, it'd be better to place double instead of ln
00:06:362 (6362|2,6362|1,6790|1,6790|2) - these are different in terms of pitch relevancy, make this chord 00:06:790 (6790|2,6790|1) - to [14]
00:41:362 (41362|1,41504|2) - CTRL+H for balance
00:10:647 - 00:14:076 - 00:19:219 - why these are doubles? in this part there are sounds that much more stronger than these doubles, but they are single notes
00:19:219 (19219|3) - this should be a ln I gues I'll remain this one.
00:47:790 (47790|1,47933|0,48219|1,48362|0) - too uncomfortable, CTRL+H this 00:48:219 (48219|1,48362|2)

Thanks for mod

_Stan wrote:

Hello from my modq

|1|2|3|4|

NM

1. 00:01:647 - miss a note maybe, I dont understand why you catch this at 00:00:790 - and 00:01:076 - but ignore it here, just in order to reduce the difficult? I'ts bad idea cuz you didn't not catch them all will make player like Beginner who doesn't know what it mean
2. 00:01:933 - 00:02:790 - 00:04:504 - 00:05:076 - ^ I guess i have to make it a sync note but if the note pattern is still not good, i guess i just to make it more similar to HD diff.
3. 00:29:076 (29076|1) - 00:32:504 (32504|1) - delete these notes, cuz 00:28:219 (28219|3) - I believe that this note meas music not hat, then from 00:27:790 - to 00:34:647 - , you just catch hat 2 position but actually there have many like 00:32:504 (32504|1) - 00:30:790 - 00:31:647 - 00:33:362 - , at a part, I mean within 4-8 white lines, you should not change or make causal notes it's not ok I guess you din't notice that i using whistle hitsound. It's not the issue if i use hitsound.

HD

1. 00:28:076 (28076|3) - idk here have a sound or not, if have, why there 00:34:933 - not
2. 00:50:933 - miss a note

MX

1. 00:18:790 - add a note? cuz your notes distribution form 00:17:504 - to 00:19:004 - is 3 2 3 2 3 2 2 3 3, here should be a heavy beat
2. 00:27:362 - it's necessary to make 2 notes same time? Same effect but here you just 1 00:13:790 - As you can hear here 01:01:647 (61647|2) - it has a strong beat than this note 00:13:790 -
3. 01:01:647 (61647|2) - delete this, no need to make 3 LNs same time? what is you want to emphasize? I know but i'll make it more challenging and it never breaks the balance.
4. 01:27:362 (87362|3) - make this stop at 01:27:647 - and add a note 01:27:790 - at col [4], every time you encounter this heavy beat + cymbal you make 4 notes, but just 2 is obviously not enough

that's all, good luck

Thanks for mod

Maxus wrote:

Your request, but I don't think it's ready yet for now.

[MX]
00:06:362 (6362|0,6362|3,6790|0,6790|2,6790|3) - These all should be 1/2 LN, as it's 1 compound sound that you use to make wall LN at 00:05:504 -
00:07:647 - All of these LN isn't 1/1, it's all 1/2 LN, extend the LN tail this long doesn't follow the instrument you intend to follow, and i'm really sure it will cause problem if you extend it too far away from original music. My concern applies until 00:16:219 -
00:18:147 (18147|0,18362|2) - You may want to switch column between these notes to be more consistent in the stack you intended (I mean 00:17:504 (17504|0,17504|3,17719|0,17719|3,17933|0,17933|3) - )
00:18:790 (18790|1,19004|2) - Switch column here too.
00:19:981 (19981|1,20028|2) - Overmapped, this is clearly 1/4 snap.
00:22:647 - This rythm is already different with 00:20:933 - , in 00:20:933 - You hear continuous 1/2 beat which is indeed fit with your current pattern. However at 00:22:647 - you don't hear continuous beat anymore, indicate that it's different rythm that needs to be emphasize by different pattern structure. you can try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928596 instead.
00:26:290 - I can assure you that the early 1/6 you put doesn't really have 1/6 synth exist there. It should be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928601
00:28:219 (28219|1,28362|2,28504|3) - These 3 notes should be 1/2 LN as they are the same synth you follow at 00:28:647 (28647|2) -
00:30:219 (30219|2) - This LN should stop at 00:30:504 - , and you need to make new LN at 00:30:647 (30647|1) - (i mean change into 1/2 LN)
00:33:219 - Think you can pull different wall LN to actually signify 00:33:647 - that have big emphasizement. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928674
00:35:076 (35076|0,35219|1,35362|2) - Same as 00:28:219 (28219|1,28362|2,28504|3) -
00:36:647 - change to 1/2 LN
00:37:076 - same as 00:30:219 (30219|2) - ,and so on, same applies to other similar part.
00:56:504 - Why cover with only LN? in pattern before like 00:40:076 (40076|2,40147|0,40219|3) - , you cover 1/4 sound with 1/4, not with LN. so this one should be 1/4 too. like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928721
00:58:933 (58933|1) - 1/2 LN.
01:01:647 - these 3 LN doesn't really make sense in how it perceives the sudden instrument appears here. it doesn't really give strong sound but have 3 LN. I recommend https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928740
01:02:790 (62790|1,62933|3) - These LN are really really too long, and second LN isn't suppose to exist in first place. like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928761 .
01:03:790 - more or less the same with 00:56:933 - , and i even somehow felt they are different pattern..
01:05:362 (65362|1,65504|2) - this even makes less sense here in terms of rythmical correctness.. and it also out of place because you don't really use it anywhere in other structure (random structure) , use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8928814
01:08:933 (68933|0,68933|1) - Both of these LN should ended at 01:09:076 - instead.
01:13:647 - Think you should perceive this in another way to give more emphasizement at 01:13:647 - , mainly something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8929212
01:19:647 - 01:20:076 - 01:20:504 - Should be 1/2 LN to reflect the emphasis the instrument put on here.
01:26:504 (86504|1) - should be ended at 01:26:790 - for consistency.

To summarize, this map have majority of LN tail being longer than it should be, and some cases where you mix multiple instrument and make them wall LN which makes it really not blend and sync well with what you try to follow. I know you try to create map with heavy LN patterning, but it still needs to be within music boundaries that you try to layer.
I think have couple of great mod to solve the rythm issues will be preferable. I guess i'll make it more blend and sync. All accepted but i change some patterns and remove some notes to make it more comfortable.

1. 00:05:217 - how about http://puu.sh/xpuLE/8a83cc11c0.png ? following the pitch
2. 00:28:645 (28645|1) - should be ln till 00:28:860 -
3. 00:33:431 - missing?
4. 01:19:645 (79645|3,79645|0,80074|3,80074|0,80502|3,80502|0) - this sounds have different pitch, http://puu.sh/xpuE7/edf49a89db.jpg better imho.
5. u give 00:07:217 - and 00:48:360 - triplet notes but here 01:27:788 - just double notes:/

Leonita wrote:

uhm, the correct bpm is 140 and offset 360 with common metronome uwu
i'll mod it later if u have done to fix it. dont kudosu before i edit this post;D

[ Blaze ] wrote:

hi,NM req on Illusionary Border Queue
feel free to reject,I still need learn about modding

column
l1l2l3l4l

NM

01:14:360 (74360|0,74502|2,74788|0,74931|2,75217|3,75360|1,75645|3,75788|1,76074|2,76217|0,76502|2,76645|0,76931|1,77074|3,77360|1,77502|3) - MONOTONE,need more pattern style,u can look at this
01:17:788 (77788|0,77931|2,78217|3,78360|1,78645|2,78788|0) -
01:19:645 (79645|3,79645|0,80074|3,80074|0,80502|3,80502|0) - try not to put note always at same column if the sound is different. I know but i'll remain this one.

HD

00:05:502 (5502|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8948900 how bout this?
00:26:074 (26074|3) - put the LN until 00:26:360 (26360|2) - same as this 00:26:502 (26502|0,26788|1) -
00:37:931 (37931|3,38074|1) - ctrl+j
01:14:645 (74645|2,74931|2,75217|2,75502|2) - anchor,rearrange the pattern
01:16:074 (76074|2,76360|2,76645|2,76931|2,77217|2,77502|2) - look,another anchor 'w'

MX

00:28:074 (28074|3) - ghost note? No, you can hear it at 25% playback rate.
00:33:217 (33217|3) - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8948550 I'll remain this one since it's much emphasize and challenging.
00:34:502 (34502|2,34645|1) - ctrl+h
00:51:645 (51645|1) - add 1 note here?
00:56:574 (56574|2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8948644 how bout this? No add some notes to here to make it the notes getting snap.
01:10:217 (70217|3,70502|3,70645|3,70931|3) - and this 01:10:217 (70217|3,70502|3,70645|3,70931|3) - too much pattern at col 4 right? No it's not since the LN coordinates the notes.
00:58:931 (58931|1) - change this into single note maybe? No change this since there's a violin sound.
00:57:360 (57360|3) - this LN maybe end at here 00:57:788 (57788|0) - No, it's snap if the end of LN is here.
01:05:931 (65931|0) - ^ 01:06:217 (66217|3) - I'll remain this one since there's a loud sound here 01:06:217 -
01:01:931 (61931|3) - change the LN into single note
01:03:788 (63788|3) - ^
01:04:217 (64217|3) - ^
01:08:931 (68931|0,68931|1) - ^ No changes all of these since there's a violin sound and it makes more challenging to play.
01:18:002 (78002|2,78860|1) - delete this ,then 01:18:074 (78074|1,78931|2) - ctrl+h
01:20:931 (80931|0) - and this 01:22:645 (82645|3,82788|2,82931|1,83074|0) - and this too 01:24:360 (84360|2,84502|1,84645|0,84788|3) - then this 01:27:788 (87788|0,87931|1,88074|2,88217|3) - and then this 01:31:217 (91217|1,91360|2,91502|3,91645|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8948844 how about this sample? 'w' No change of this one and your sample is not enough to change it and you make it more easy to play MX diff.
01:32:360 (92360|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8948885 better if like this? I'll remain this one.

I luv the song <3
btw GL for this map~

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Kyousukee wrote:

HD
01:38:074 (98074|0) - add 1 more note or make it to the column 3 is nice than the current one i think ~

mx and nm is good. gl ^^

Leonita wrote:

hello,
uhm, the correct bpm is 140 and offset 360 with common metronome uwu
i'll mod it later if u have done to fix it. dont kudosu before i edit this post;D

edited:
1/6 = rankable. example: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/767310

[NM]

1. 00:05:217 - how about http://puu.sh/xpuLE/8a83cc11c0.png ? following the pitch
2. 00:28:645 (28645|1) - should be ln till 00:28:860 -
3. 00:33:431 - missing? Yes
4. 01:19:645 (79645|3,79645|0,80074|3,80074|0,80502|3,80502|0) - this sounds have different pitch, http://puu.sh/xpuE7/edf49a89db.jpg better imho. I guess i'll change it now but not this pattern that you suggest.
5. u give 00:07:217 - and 00:48:360 - triplet notes but here 01:27:788 - just double notes:/

nice song, gdluck!

Thanks for mod Updated with self-mod!

1. 00:01:645 - 00:03:360 - 00:05:074 - pretty weird that you exclude these notes from the major melody, better add them back
2. 00:05:645 (5645|2,5788|1,5931|2,6074|1,6217|3,6360|2,6360|1) - instead of this, how about: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019646 to represent the ascending pitch
3. 00:17:502 - to 00:19:217 - make these LNs to be normal notes would fit more with their actual length, cuz these sounds actually give ppl a jumpy feeling, but not that continuous
4. 01:08:360 (68360|2) - it is better to end on 01:08:931 - otherwise would be harder, and not consistent with HD

1. If you have a LN on 00:06:360 (6360|2) - , how about make another one on 00:06:788 - with the same length of 00:06:360 (6360|2) - cuz i think they are same type of sound
2. 00:49:502 (49502|0) - just make it to normal note cuz i think you can avoid such short LN in HD
3. 01:02:360 (62360|2) - you didnt make this as a short LN, so better make 01:02:788 (62788|2) - to normal note as well

1. 00:13:788 (13788|1,13931|1) - prefer double these C notes, cuz you double them like here 00:53:502 - and 00:40:645 -
2. 00:55:931 - just make this to single note, cuz no W here and just a weak sound
3. 01:25:645 (85645|0) - i would prefer to make this LN end at 01:25:931 - , so you can put another note on 01:26:074 - in col1 to represent the sound here with a double, which you did it after, like 01:26:502 - 01:26:931 - 01:27:360 -
4. 01:30:788 (90788|0) - the same suggestion as above
5. 01:34:645 - i really think here should be a double note (same type of sound as 01:36:360 - ) so to achieve this, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019683

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding queue

[NM]

1. 00:01:645 - 00:03:360 - 00:05:074 - pretty weird that you exclude these notes from the major melody, better add them back Nah, it's similar pattern in HD diff if you add it and i don't think that's weird.
2. 00:05:645 (5645|2,5788|1,5931|2,6074|1,6217|3,6360|2,6360|1) - instead of this, how about: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019646 to represent the ascending pitch Much better to stick this kind of pattern.
3. 00:17:502 - to 00:19:217 - make these LNs to be normal notes would fit more with their actual length, cuz these sounds actually give ppl a jumpy feeling, but not that continuous
4. 01:08:360 (68360|2) - it is better to end on 01:08:931 - otherwise would be harder, and not consistent with HD

[HD]

1. If you have a LN on 00:06:360 (6360|2) - , how about make another one on 00:06:788 - with the same length of 00:06:360 (6360|2) - cuz i think they are same type of sound
2. 00:49:502 (49502|0) - just make it to normal note cuz i think you can avoid such short LN in HD Nah, it breaks the flow of LN for this 00:49:217 (49217|2,49502|0) - and mostly i use LN for windwood sound.
3. 01:02:360 (62360|2) - you didnt make this as a short LN, so better make 01:02:788 (62788|2) - to normal note as well

[MX]

1. 00:13:788 (13788|1,13931|1) - prefer double these C notes, cuz you double them like here 00:53:502 - and 00:40:645 - Nah,
   the hitsound is not consistent if you add one note and it's not loud compare to the hitsound here 00:53:502 - and 00:40:645
2. 00:55:931 - just make this to single note, cuz no W here and just a weak sound
3. 01:25:645 (85645|0) - i would prefer to make this LN end at 01:25:931 - , so you can put another note on 01:26:074 - in col1 to represent the sound here with a double, which you did it after, like 01:26:502 - 01:26:931 - 01:27:360 -
4. 01:30:788 (90788|0) - the same suggestion as above No add for this, just focus on windwood sound.
5. 01:34:645 - i really think here should be a double note (same type of sound as 01:36:360 - ) so to achieve this, better do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9019683 As i said, just the windwood sound, since 01:34:502 (94502|1) - this note can consider as a 2 notes when reach the LN here 01:34:645 -

Good Luck! Hope my mods can help you =w=)/

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Rivals_7 wrote:

vgmdb is kinda unofficial to be used as an eligible source for the title. Assuming you have this game, is there any ways you can see the list of its music soundtrack in game and see this music's title? just to confirm that the translation is true and official. Sadly i don't have this game and i just got the music in youtube. I was search for an official translate ver but only vgmdb gives a translate ver. But if necessary to to find the official translate ver, i guess i'll ask for metadata to the others (alacat or kwan maybe).

1234

[MX]

AImod first tho

00:00:860 (860|2,895|1,931|0) - 00:02:574 (2574|1,2610|2,2645|3) - these are pretty odd since the first note before was on 1/6 distance followed by this ministair in 1/12 but in the same direction. i would recommend to swap it like you do - 00:04:217 (4217|0,4288|3,4324|2,4360|1) - just for convenient reading

00:17:502 (17502|3,17502|0,17717|3,17717|0,17931|3,17931|0,18360|0,18360|3,18574|3,18574|0,18788|0,18788|3) - i found this kinda weird since the song got pitch change but those were jacked. some suggestion https://puu.sh/xveFY/47e36c3121.png

00:20:002 - might actually worth to add a note since there's a descending flute noise

00:44:788 (44788|2,44931|1) - was thinking this could be swapped places since - 00:44:502 (44502|3,44502|2,44788|2,44931|3) - is kinda tempting to hit

01:18:002 (78002|2,78860|1) - tbh i didnt heard anything here so probably a ghost

00:47:931 (47931|1) - should be longer. see HD This should be the right LN (same LN in NM) and already fix the LN in HD

01:27:074 - maybe add a note? there's a particular instruments in which - 01:27:502 (87502|0,87645|1) - also following it

[HD]

00:00:788 (788|1) - moving it to 3 to make it visually better (I think)

00:23:074 (23074|0,23502|1,23502|0,23931|1,23931|0,24217|1) - left hand is kinda tempting to here so i would suggest this https://puu.sh/xvjeK/8afb8d6dac.jpg

00:25:931 (25931|1,26074|2) - ctrl+g would be quite balanced. mainly - 00:25:645 (25645|1,25788|0,25931|1) - and - 00:26:074 (26074|2,26074|3,26360|2) -

00:43:931 (43931|2) -

:thonk:

00:46:931 (46931|3) - also :thonk:
01:00:217 (60217|0) - aaaaaaa

01:01:645 (61645|2) - eh whats this even follow
ok so i just realized this also exist in MX but it doesnt really clear to me

[NM]

00:07:217 (7217|2) - i think its a little too excessive to put 3 noter on NM so would reduce one

00:38:788 (38788|1) - not sure which one is more accurate. the HD MX one or this NM one

00:39:788 (39788|1) - ^ like this diff is literally harder to sustain 300G than the HD MX I know the NM one is more accurate because of the windwood sound but you said it's harder to get 300G, then i guess i use the HD one to make it more balance.

fix those inconsistent LN end first

Updated All diifs hopefully i fix all inconsistent LN end

FadillSan wrote:

NM req from my queue~
Fell free to reject~

NM

00:27:788 (27788|1,27788|0) - I think this sould be single note.. No for consistency of this note 00:34:645 -
01:13:217 - add note ?
01:13:645 - ^
01:27:217 - here too No add for this. Only focus on windwood sound.

HD

I think this already Ok~

MX

00:53:360 (53360|2,53360|0) - should be single note I don't think that since it has a bass and windwood sound that intended to put.
01:03:217 (63217|3,63217|0,63360|1,63360|2,63645|1) - https://puu.sh/xxMp3/ab47ffa707.jpg Nice suggestion but i change it to make it more balance.

Nice song :3 Good luck~

Updated

Acnos wrote:

From my queue

0|1|2|3

General :

1. Nothing :3

 NM :

1. 00:00:360 (360|2,645|2,1074|2,1502|2) - anchor u.u It's not anchor since it's not in the same beats.
2. 00:01:645 - add a note? I intended not add note here to make it not similar to HD diff.
3. 00:31:645 (31645|1) - the sound finish here 00:31:860 - but, i guess you did it for that the beginners players easier for them to play, just in case you left this :3 Yeah
4. 01:08:931 (68931|0) - the LN finish here 01:09:222 -

 HD :

1. 00:21:502 (21502|2,21788|2,22074|2,22360|2,22645|2) - here you are doing the forefinger right work hard imo It's not the issue since it's more rhythm to the sound.
2. 00:33:645 (33645|0) - this Ln finish here 00:34:431 - I intended the LN end here for consistency.
3. 01:22:645 - a double here?, in sounds like this, you make doubles 01:21:645 (81645|1,81645|2) -
4. 01:21:645 (81645|2,81645|1) - ^
5. 01:31:217 (91217|0) - ^ No add notes here since it just focus on windwood hitsound only.

 MX :

1. 00:06:788 (6788|0,6788|2,6788|3) - is necessary 3 LNs?, IMO I think it feels better if you delete one I don't think that's a issue since the sound is strong.
2. 01:23:502 (83502|2) - move to column 2 I'll remain this note for hand balance.
   - I think those LNs are very fine :3

that is all, I hope this mod have helped you

Good Luck~

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