Moso Calibration - Sakurairo Diary · forum

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-07-24T13:38:42+00:00

sorry for being so late, too busy irl nowadays .-.

[aki's diary]

welp~

[h]

nice missing hitsounds there
00:07:785 (1,3,4,5) - wow, such a creative way to set a note without any hitsounds! nice!
00:35:236 (2) - missing whistle
00:42:490 (1,2) - is this blanketed enough? no, it isn't

[n]

yay missing hitsounds again!

[e]

yayy hitsounds again!

meh, pretty good enough

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2017-07-24T18:04:29+00:00

lit120 wrote:
sorry for being so late, too busy irl nowadays .-.

[aki's diary]
welp~
[h]
nice missing hitsounds there
00:07:785 (1,3,4,5) - wow, such a creative way to set a note without any hitsounds! nice!aaaaaaaaaaaaa
00:35:236 (2) - missing whistleaaaaaaaaaaaaa
00:42:490 (1,2) - is this blanketed enough? no, it isn't aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
[n]
yay missing hitsounds again! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
[e]
yayy hitsounds again! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
meh, pretty good enough thx all fixed C:

Ora

959 posts

Joined November 2014

Ora 2017-07-24T18:59:03+00:00

[Easy]

00:20:334 (1) - NC unless this is intentional. If so, fix 00:29:941 (2,3) - because its the same music
00:33:079 (1) - NC?
00:39:353 (2,1) - It looks fine, but this is easy diff and it's the only place in the map you use an overlap (maybe avoid?)
00:45:628 (3) - not very symmetrical with 00:44:059 (1,2) - . could be nicer, easy fix
01:24:647 (1) - maybe be careful with this. Since the CS is big for easy diff the slider is going off screen a bit

[Normal]

00:17:196 (3,4) - getting pretty close to the HP bar
00:50:334 - I don't agree with the rhythm getting less intense than the previous section, specifically 00:50:922 - and the strong beat on 00:51:510 - (maybe try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/wRZ53/379ee97698.jpg) I think the music is intense enough to map with strong beats

[Hard]

01:01:314 (1) - I don't agree with this part being mapped so easy compared to 01:13:863 (1,2,3) - when they're basically the same part with the same intensity. I think they could be mapped both ways but I would be consistent

That's about it, set is looking good ^^ Sorry for late m4m

Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2017-07-24T20:43:37+00:00

Ora wrote:
[Easy]
00:20:334 (1) - NC unless this is intentional. If so, fix 00:29:941 (2,3) - because its the same music k
00:33:079 (1) - NC? k
00:39:353 (2,1) - It looks fine, but this is easy diff and it's the only place in the map you use an overlap (maybe avoid?) hmm i think it's fine
00:45:628 (3) - not very symmetrical with 00:44:059 (1,2) - . could be nicer, easy fix K
01:24:647 (1) - maybe be careful with this. Since the CS is big for easy diff the slider is going off screen a bit
It's fine
[Normal]
00:17:196 (3,4) - getting pretty close to the HP bar mmm, not close enough. It's not touching the health bar so it should be good
00:50:334 - I don't agree with the rhythm getting less intense than the previous section, specifically 00:50:922 - and the strong beat on 00:51:510 - (maybe try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/wRZ53/379ee97698.jpg) I think the music is intense enough to map with strong beats K changed except instead of the 1/2 slider, i put a circle instead so it's not a long chain.
[Hard]
01:01:314 (1) - I don't agree with this part being mapped so easy compared to 01:13:863 (1,2,3) - when they're basically the same part with the same intensity. I think they could be mapped both ways but I would be consistent 01:13:863 - this background sound is a bit more intense here, hence why i mapped them with circles.
That's about it, looking good ^^ Sorry for late m4m thanks for the mod!

MaridiuS

878 posts

Joined June 2014

MaridiuS 2017-07-27T21:29:54+00:00

[Akitoshi's Insanei]
Okay so basically, i've accidentally accepted this m4m, so to escape, I will do a most complete detailed analysis of your difficulty. Please don't hate me for this, cus I don't know how to mod lower diffs. Will put in box cus its frustrating to see this much stuff pointed out at an experienced mapper in a tv size anime 4* song xdxdxd. actually i don't want to see my mod fully red, when its so big

I want to endmyself

00:03:275 (1) - I would recommend making this to be 1/2 length not 1/1. Because it ends on a snare, which you basically always avoid, so by having the snare clickable, you will start off the rhythm more smoothly.
00:03:863 (2) - That means this could become a 1/1 slider, which you kinda do on offbeat sliders that follow the guitar and have nothing to do with snares: 00:05:432 (4,1) - like these two
00:04:451 (4,1,2,3) - idk I think that you should redo this pattern: (2) feels out of place, and you kinda have this uncomfy (3) to (4) jump. Like there's not visual distance of (2) to slider like there is visual distance between these objects 00:04:451 (4,3,4) -
00:09:941 (2,3,1) - don't like these aesthetics: The connection between the two big sliders is crude http://i.imgur.com/dAnKe7E.jpg would be better if you do something like this. Also before you comment on "wew lad, yu fkin scuk, luk wat u did to teh spacng llu?!" Imma comment on that:
The section is... calm, I agree. But that doesn't limit you to make the most boring section ever. You could potentially spicen it up by giving emphasis to the downbeat notes, having them with bigger spacing than other notes, to correlate for some contrast/fun, players that can they can look forward too. Having it all in same DS is not really fun imo. So one spacing idea would be that, like the picture suggests, and that could be applied to all downbeats in the section.
00:11:118 (1) - Am a little bit sad that this is the only straight 1/1 downbeat slider in the section, the rest are curved.
00:16:412 (2,3) - I don't want to be the nonmeta patterning police, but seriously, this could be made to look better with something like this, if you're using diagonal angles, makin em curved should look better: http://i.imgur.com/Gqsm6k1.jpg (repatterned though)
00:18:373 (3,1) - crude connection that i've mentioned 00:09:941 (2,1) - , look at the space between 3 and 1, no blanket no anythin: http://i.imgur.com/CsPq8D0.jpg this is my idea of a smoothly connected straight with curved slider without blanketing.
00:23:275 (5,3,4) - BWEEP bip bip BWEEP straight slider police right here! Tilted less than 5 degrees, please reconsider before you get arrested.
00:26:804 (1,4) - partially overlap, please make em fully overlapped, since that's the style ur going in this map.
00:36:216 (1,2) - if you rotate (2) by about 5 degrees, selection center/clockwise it should blanket (1) better and look better.
00:41:706 (2,1) - dont you think by doing this it would look better http://i.imgur.com/xkjdRIU.jpg i'm usually against linear patterning since its boring.
00:46:608 (4) - is an identical sound to 00:45:039 (4) - so I don't believe it should be stacked with (3).
00:48:765 (1,2) - when you heavily follow the vocals with clickable objects on blue ticks, then ignoring some on the following pattern is completely contradictive: 00:50:334 (1,3,5) - this all end on a vocal, meaning vocal is not emphasized.
00:53:863 (2,3,4,5) - ugh this kind of pattern doesn't kinda look good. reason being the left side is filled with these two objects 00:53:863 (2,4) - , when the pattern starts, 00:53:471 (1) - is already gone, so we're stuck in that position for a while, and the problem is the right side has a slider to balance it out. What you could do is to place 00:55:039 (1) - somewhere here http://i.imgur.com/26NpidR.jpg, or rearrange the pattern to fit the my aesthetic needs if you also agree with them xd
00:55:039 (1,3,4) - btw these are partial overlaps, not the structure of your map, so i say fully overlap or something, in the section no partial overlaps are repeated.
rhythm: I kinda disagree with not following vocals, so I won't argue much about that. You based the map on having a weak pattern before a downbeat: 00:54:451 (5) - for example this, even though there's a vocal on a red tick you've put a sliderend to be there, in order to give more emphasis to the downbeat or something. This repeats many times. However, I still think it could need some adjustments:
00:53:471 (1) - this kinda sounds the same as 00:54:255 (4) - with a lil bit less intensity, meaning it would make more sense that to be a slider.
00:54:451 (5) - dunno how you managed this, but this slider other than disregarding vocals, also shits on the drums by having a non clickable part of it landing on a snare 00:54:647 - , which feels completely meh. In fact I hate every possible rhythm that could be done in the kiai fuck this song fuck the composer asdfasfdag 01:00:726 (5) - also this and all such patterns i'm against off. It feels immensely weird when I tried to experiment with rhythm, since it's also on an offbeat, which is usually less comfy than an white tick slider.
01:01:510 (2) - This spacing is kinda low, I think the vocals here are kinda the climax of the kiai... repeated here 01:13:863 (1,2,3,4) - . Nobody would mind some bigger jumps on the climax, and pp farmers will be even happier if this increases sr.
01:03:863 (5,6,1) - this and the patterned I linked before are kinda the most intense and should have the biggest jumps. This one is good enough I think.
01:12:294 (1) - straight slider police, hands behind your back, seriously though, it should have the same angle as 01:13:275 (5) -
01:23:275 (1,2,3,4) - nerf this, we exited the chorus, jumps should be smaller, not bigger xdxd

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-07-28T04:36:04+00:00

MaridiuS wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insanei]
Okay so basically, i've accidentally accepted this m4m, so to escape, I will do a most complete detailed analysis of your difficulty. Please don't hate me for this, cus I don't know how to mod lower diffs. Will put in box cus its frustrating to see this much stuff pointed out at an experienced mapper in a tv size anime 4* song xdxdxd. actually i don't want to see my mod fully red, when its so big ...

I want to endmyself
00:03:275 (1) - I would recommend making this to be 1/2 length not 1/1. Because it ends on a snare, which you basically always avoid, so by having the snare clickable, you will start off the rhythm more smoothly. this is to hold the burst from 00:02:294 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - and it has held sound from instrument, it wouldn't hurt if i put 1/1 here tbh
00:03:863 (2) - That means this could become a 1/1 slider, which you kinda do on offbeat sliders that follow the guitar and have nothing to do with snares: 00:05:432 (4,1) - like these two i mapped drum-heavy, if you see how i mapped, all whistles are clickable objects except for 00:06:608 - since there's a dominant high-pitch instruments on 00:06:216 -
00:04:451 (4,1,2,3) - idk I think that you should redo this pattern: (2) feels out of place, and you kinda have this uncomfy (3) to (4) jump. Like there's not visual distance of (2) to slider like there is visual distance between these objects 00:04:451 (4,3,4) - visually safe imo, also 2 has whistle for jump
00:09:941 (2,3,1) - don't like these aesthetics: The connection between the two big sliders is crude http://i.imgur.com/dAnKe7E.jpg would be better if you do something like this. Also before you comment on "wew lad, yu fkin scuk, luk wat u did to teh spacng llu?!" Imma comment on that:
The section is... calm, I agree. But that doesn't limit you to make the most boring section ever. You could potentially spicen it up by giving emphasis to the downbeat notes, having them with bigger spacing than other notes, to correlate for some contrast/fun, players that can they can look forward too. Having it all in same DS is not really fun imo. So one spacing idea would be that, like the picture suggests, and that could be applied to all downbeats in the section. 1.)I'm not a fan of doing that kind of spacing on calm sections anymore 2.)it's not same DS 3.) putting too much spacing on this song wouldn't fit as it's calm in general than energetic. but ye the default whistle related things boosted somehow
00:11:118 (1) - Am a little bit sad that this is the only straight 1/1 downbeat slider in the section, the rest are curved. kay
00:16:412 (2,3) - I don't want to be the nonmeta patterning police, but seriously, this could be made to look better with something like this, if you're using diagonal angles, makin em curved should look better: http://i.imgur.com/Gqsm6k1.jpg (repatterned though) sorry but it's alternating pattern with 00:17:981 (2,3) - , looking more diagonal / 45degree related for general was for my objective on main vocal
00:18:373 (3,1) - crude connection that i've mentioned 00:09:941 (2,1) - , look at the space between 3 and 1, no blanket no anythin: http://i.imgur.com/CsPq8D0.jpg this is my idea of a smoothly connected straight with curved slider without blanketing. nah it's not for blanket or anything.With that image i don't think putting opposite direction from the reverse 00:18:373 (3) - fits in first place w
00:23:275 (5,3,4) - BWEEP bip bip BWEEP straight slider police right here! Tilted less than 5 degrees, please reconsider before you get arrested. jail is just a room
00:26:804 (1,4) - partially overlap, please make em fully overlapped, since that's the style ur going in this map. i overlapped this for making easier to read than stacks but yeah i'll consider it
00:36:216 (1,2) - if you rotate (2) by about 5 degrees, selection center/clockwise it should blanket (1) better and look better. changed 2 a bit
00:41:706 (2,1) - dont you think by doing this it would look better http://i.imgur.com/xkjdRIU.jpg i'm usually against linear patterning since its boring. ~~this anime is about raising a boring girl~~ linear pattern on calm part is good as they aren't spaced much
00:46:608 (4) - is an identical sound to 00:45:039 (4) - so I don't believe it should be stacked with (3). ok
00:48:765 (1,2) - when you heavily follow the vocals with clickable objects on blue ticks, then ignoring some on the following pattern is completely contradictive: 00:50:334 (1,3,5) - this all end on a vocal, meaning vocal is not emphasized. 1.) Alternating 2.) I'm doing somehow consistent with 00:47:196 (1,2,3,4) - to make it less out of place (ye 2nd one has all 1/2 but this is my way how to increase intensity
00:53:863 (2,3,4,5) - ugh this kind of pattern doesn't kinda look good. reason being the left side is filled with these two objects 00:53:863 (2,4) - , when the pattern starts, 00:53:471 (1) - is already gone, so we're stuck in that position for a while, and the problem is the right side has a slider to balance it out. What you could do is to place 00:55:039 (1) - somewhere here http://i.imgur.com/26NpidR.jpg, or rearrange the pattern to fit the my aesthetic needs if you also agree with them xd ok sure 00:53:471 (1) - is gone but combo color? no?
00:55:039 (1,3,4) - btw these are partial overlaps, not the structure of your map, so i say fully overlap or something, in the section no partial overlaps are repeated. as i explained before, perfect stack isn't good for reading for such short amount of time. Also there's similar structure like 3 times even it's not on chorus so ye it wouldn't hurt to see anymore
rhythm: I kinda disagree with not following vocals ask DJPop for that, so I won't argue much about that. You based the map on having a weak pattern before a downbeat: 00:54:451 (5) - for example this, even though there's a vocal on a red tick you've put a sliderend to be there, in order to give more emphasis to the downbeat or something. This repeats many times. However, I still think it could need some adjustments: it's not sliderend, it's reverse hh
00:53:471 (1) - this kinda sounds the same as 00:54:255 (4) - with a lil bit less intensity, meaning it would make more sense that to be a slider. but repeating 23786213 times wouldn't make sense as "consistency", adding variation on high diffs aren't hurt anymore
00:54:451 (5) - dunno how you managed this, but this slider other than disregarding vocals, also shits on the drums by having a non clickable part of it landing on a snare 00:54:647 - , which feels completely meh. In fact I hate every possible rhythm that could be done in the kiai fuck this song fuck the composer asdfasfdag 01:00:726 (5) - also this and all such patterns i'm against off. It feels immensely weird when I tried to experiment with rhythm, since it's also on an offbeat, which is usually less comfy than an white tick slider.next section has higher pitch to emphasize a thing so i held with reverse. Other people might disagree, but it's clear explanation and it's not out of place as i did it several times on identical part already. And the last thing,
I mapped for vocals > drums btw
01:01:510 (2) - This spacing is kinda low, I think the vocals here are kinda the climax of the kiai... repeated here 01:13:863 (1,2,3,4) - . Nobody would mind some bigger jumps on the climax, and pp farmers will be even happier if this increases sr. mapping for pp eww. but i moved 01:01:510 (2) - leftward cuz visual distance with 01:01:902 (4) - was suck
01:03:863 (5,6,1) - this and the patterned I linked before are kinda the most intense and should have the biggest jumps. This one is good enough I think. k but dont expect for major spacing change, it's not even an extra/expert diff
01:12:294 (1) - straight slider police, hands behind your back, seriously though, it should have the same angle as 01:13:275 (5) - aye
01:23:275 (1,2,3,4) - nerf this, we exited the chorus, jumps should be smaller, not bigger xdxd ok

sorry but i didn't mapped without thinking anything so i have to write with roses for you as i mapped with specific idea (not all, but most)
our objectives might be different but hey at least i explained further than "it's my style" even my english sucks (no bully tho, but if ur perfectionist then k)

anyway thanks!

update

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Plaudible

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Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2017-08-01T03:40:39+00:00

helo im here

Moso Calibration - Sakurairo Diary
General

Got nothin' here, metadata, hitsounds, tags, lookin' good!

Easy

Re-DS: 00:01:510 (2) -
00:14:255 (3) - Too low in the playfield.
00:22:098 (1) - Slightly concerned with this section, the rhythm is actually extremely dense here compared to other strong parts like the chorus persay. I think it'd be better to simplify the 00:22:098 (1,2) - rhythms into something else, as consecutive circles like this spike difficulty in an easy.
Love the patterning at 00:09:549 (1,2,3) - , but just for improvements make the triangle a bit more evenly spaced, in this instance 2 is further from 1 and 3.
00:39:353 (2,1) - This really stands out in your aesthetic choices in the map and I think it'd be better to avoid the overlap, but if you do keep it I think you should make these two shapes a little more parallel - line up the slider in the middle of the loop.
00:56:608 (1,2) - Guessing this is following the piano, but the chorus is too intense to cover up so much with 3/2 sliders imo. It'd be better to map out more rhythms here like the drums to make the gameplay more intense as fitting for the chorus. Same at 01:09:157 (1,2) - .
01:19:941 (1) - and 01:26:608 (1) - For sake of consistency, remove the NC here to keep it every 2 measures.
My only real concern with this diff is the difficulty spread - http://puu.sh/wYm8C/7975d86da5.png. A lot of the difficulty spikes fall early in the song which doesn't match the song's overall intensity, so I think you should buff the chorus a little more to compensate and make it stronger in gameplay. Nevertheless, clean, consistent, nice!

Normal

Very, very well done here, great diff!
Stacking has popped off some of your distance spacing snaps, like at 00:05:432 (5,6,7,1,2) - for example - turn on stacking and re-snap, throughout the diff.
00:02:490 (5,6) - This feels pretty underwhelming for a buildup, maybe 2 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate imo.
00:09:549 (1) - Slightly hestitant at how low this is, would prefer it be brought up a bit in the playfield.
00:29:941 (1) - NC isn't really necessary here.
00:33:079 (4) - Based on your NC's in the scheme of changing sections, I believe you should NC this too?
01:05:628 (7) - The drum roll here makes this more suited as a 1/2 slider to better lead into the chorus repeat, give it that little more emphasis.
01:18:569 (1) - Putting a slider here feels a bit overmapped given that the song gets pretty dang empty, 2 circles could be cooler to emphasize that. That or do the rhythm you do in the hard, a lot more fitting, that way 01:19:745 - is clickable.
It wouldn't hurt to include the rhythm at 00:53:275 now, would it? Maybe a stack for the vocals. Same thing at the repeat.

Hard

00:04:647 (1) - Feels a bit overemphasized in spacing given how you've been using spacing emphasis on finishes or stronger sounds, this doesn't fit too much.
00:30:334 (2,3,4,5,1) - It's a little weird to me that you incorporate so much 1/4 here, you don't anywhere else in the diff and this is the only real triple rhythm added. I'd either add more elsewhere or simplify these. Also, your spacing between them is a bit inconsistent, compare 00:30:334 (2,3) - to 00:31:118 (4,5) - to 00:09:157 (5,1) - .
00:34:647 (1) - Why do you start NCing every 2 measures here? Every measure works fine and fits the rest of the map better.
00:48:765 (7) - Also means NCing here and 00:51:902 (7) - .
00:49:941 (9) - Feels overly spaced.
01:17:392 (2) - Honestly really don't like the aesthetics of this, it stands out compared to the clean tidy organization in the rest of your map and just doesn't fit too well.
Great rhythm choices here, got nothing else! Just try to incorporate more 1/4 imo.

Akitoshi's Insane

Any particular reason for cs 3.8? :< 4 would be just fine.
Could you use the polygon circle creation tool or something for 00:00:138 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ? I like the way you represent the rhythm here but it's pretty noticeably handplaced.
00:02:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So I'm guessing you focused on the buildup of the synth sounds here since this isn't supported entirely by the drum beats. Given that, I feel like it'd be better to make 00:04:647 - clickable by some means to keep that rhythm pattern going. ctrl+g'ing the rhythm at 00:04:451 (4,1) - would be great imo. Same applies to ending.
00:08:569 (1,2,3) - NCs could be better I think, maybe remove NC at (1) because it's the same sound as the others, but when the rhythm pattern changes at 00:08:961 (2) - NC?
00:09:941 (2) - This neglects a lot of the vocal rhythms that you focus on later at points like 00:13:275 (2,3,4,5) - , and feels a bit underwhelming, think you could map this out more.
00:22:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this rhythm would be better represented like 00:25:236 (1,2,3,4) - , since they're repeating vocal patterns, it'd be more familiar in play.
00:23:667 (1,2,3,4) - Going with that, this rhythm would be more fitting as what you had at 00:22:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo.
So from 00:22:098 (1) - to 00:27:981 (5) - you have two rhythm patterns - the first combo will be x at 00:22:098 (1) - , the 2nd at 00:23:667 (1) - will be y. Right now you have an xyyx pattern, though I think an yxyx would be much more appropriate, summing up my last two points.
00:33:079 (1,2,3) - Because of how you handle visual spacing between other objects this is pretty difficult to interpret as 1/4. If you're going to use this pattern (which I think the rhythm fits really well) you should handle it like you do 00:31:412 (4,1) - to make the 1/4 more recognizable, no? This occurs at other instances like 00:48:765 (1,2,3) - , and 00:51:902 (1,2,3) - . If not, perhaps bring them closer in spacing to something like this http://puu.sh/wYp7a/6af88258ac.jpg so that it stands out better.
00:52:687 (1) - This is pretty underwhelming for the buildup into the chorus. Would you consider a rhythm like this instead? http://puu.sh/wYoIe/a7d4d4c8fc.jpg. The little high pitched squeaks on the first half of the kickslider are pretty weak, but the last four are strong so distinguishing these might make this nicer. If not, maybe consider 2 kicksliders instead?
01:06:020 (1) - Just my personal preference but this feels weird aesthetically, would prefer it lined up with the stream.
01:17:392 (2,3) - Aesthetic nitpick, line up pls? <3
01:27:196 (3,4,5,6) - This just feels a bit lazy, maybe make a few jumps here based on the drums, this really oversimplifies the rhythm imo.

Alright, think I'm happy with this, call me back ^^

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-08-01T05:34:13+00:00

Plaudible wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane
Any particular reason for cs 3.8? :< 4 would be just fine. ~~Utaha has bigger tiddies than Megumi~~ I love 3.8 personally but ok i'll change it for u
Could you use the polygon circle creation tool or something for 00:00:138 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ? I like the way you represent the rhythm here but it's pretty noticeably handplaced. fixd
00:02:490 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - So I'm guessing you focused on the buildup of the synth sounds here since this isn't supported entirely by the drum beats. Given that, I feel like it'd be better to make 00:04:647 - clickable by some means to keep that rhythm pattern going. ctrl+g'ing the rhythm at 00:04:451 (4,1) - would be great imo. Same applies to ending. ok
00:08:569 (1,2,3) - NCs could be better I think, maybe remove NC at (1) because it's the same sound as the others, but when the rhythm pattern changes at 00:08:961 (2) - NC? aye
00:09:941 (2) - This neglects a lot of the vocal rhythms that you focus on later at points like 00:13:275 (2,3,4,5) - , and feels a bit underwhelming, think you could map this out more. sure
00:22:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this rhythm would be better represented like 00:25:236 (1,2,3,4) - , since they're repeating vocal patterns, it'd be more familiar in play. i tried
00:23:667 (1,2,3,4) - Going with that, this rhythm would be more fitting as what you had at 00:22:098 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo.
So from 00:22:098 (1) - to 00:27:981 (5) - you have two rhythm patterns - the first combo will be x at 00:22:098 (1) - , the 2nd at 00:23:667 (1) - will be y. Right now you have an xyyx pattern, though I think an yxyx would be much more appropriate, summing up my last two points. yupppp i hope i did it right
00:33:079 (1,2,3) - Because of how you handle visual spacing between other objects this is pretty difficult to interpret as 1/4. If you're going to use this pattern (which I think the rhythm fits really well) you should handle it like you do 00:31:412 (4,1) - to make the 1/4 more recognizable, no? This occurs at other instances like 00:48:765 (1,2,3) - , and 00:51:902 (1,2,3) - . If not, perhaps bring them closer in spacing to something like this http://puu.sh/wYp7a/6af88258ac.jpg so that it stands out better. it will be less challenging for reading and it has really strong drums compared to 00:31:118 (3,4) - to worth emphasize like that. also they aren't that hard to hit as 4* Insane tbh
00:52:687 (1) - This is pretty underwhelming for the buildup into the chorus. Would you consider a rhythm like this instead? http://puu.sh/wYoIe/a7d4d4c8fc.jpg. The little high pitched squeaks on the first half of the kickslider are pretty weak, but the last four are strong so distinguishing these might make this nicer. If not, maybe consider 2 kicksliders instead? followed with ur image
01:06:020 (1) - Just my personal preference but this feels weird aesthetically, would prefer it lined up with the stream. i tried
01:17:392 (2,3) - Aesthetic nitpick, line up pls? <3 ye i have rly bad sight at lining a thing
01:27:196 (3,4,5,6) - This just feels a bit lazy, maybe make a few jumps here based on the drums, this really oversimplifies the rhythm imo. sure, but i didn't buffed that much though

thanks!!

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Ohwow

1,193 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

Ohwow 2017-08-01T09:30:28+00:00

Plaudible wrote:
helo im here

Moso Calibration - Sakurairo Diary
General
Got nothin' here, metadata, hitsounds, tags, lookin' good!

Easy
Re-DS: 00:01:510 (2) - wops fixed
00:14:255 (3) - Too low in the playfield. k
00:22:098 (1) - Slightly concerned with this section, the rhythm is actually extremely dense here compared to other strong parts like the chorus persay. I think it'd be better to simplify the 00:22:098 (1,2) - rhythms into something else, as consecutive circles like this spike difficulty in an easy. k
Love the patterning at 00:09:549 (1,2,3) - , but just for improvements make the triangle a bit more evenly spaced, in this instance 2 is further from 1 and 3. fixed
00:39:353 (2,1) - This really stands out in your aesthetic choices in the map and I think it'd be better to avoid the overlap, but if you do keep it I think you should make these two shapes a little more parallel - line up the slider in the middle of the loop. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa k fixed
00:56:608 (1,2) - Guessing this is following the piano, but the chorus is too intense to cover up so much with 3/2 sliders imo. It'd be better to map out more rhythms here like the drums to make the gameplay more intense as fitting for the chorus. Same at 01:09:157 (1,2) - . k
01:19:941 (1) - and 01:26:608 (1) - For sake of consistency, remove the NC here to keep it every 2 measures. k
My only real concern with this diff is the difficulty spread - http://puu.sh/wYm8C/7975d86da5.png. A lot of the difficulty spikes fall early in the song which doesn't match the song's overall intensity, so I think you should buff the chorus a little more to compensate and make it stronger in gameplay. Nevertheless, clean, consistent, nice! hopefully fixed, but there's this 1 part that i changed but i'm a bit skeptical myself. 00:21:510 (3) - I changed from 1/2 slider + circle into a 3/2 slider to lower spike, but in return, i'm mapping that loud sound to the sliderend

So yeah i ended up changing a lot of stuff in this diff as a result of applying these mods, might want to look over again

Normal
Very, very well done here, great diff!
Stacking has popped off some of your distance spacing snaps, like at 00:05:432 (5,6,7,1,2) - for example - turn on stacking and re-snap, throughout the diff. oh my god It doesn't even let me snap it correctly even with stacking on. I manually spaced them myself, hopefully they are all fixed.
00:02:490 (5,6) - This feels pretty underwhelming for a buildup, maybe 2 1/2 sliders would be more appropriate imo. Made the 2nd circle a 1/2 slider, didn't want to make the chain too long since it's only the beginning of the song.
00:09:549 (1) - Slightly hestitant at how low this is, would prefer it be brought up a bit in the playfield. When I testplay it, it's not off the screen, so it should be good
00:29:941 (1) - NC isn't really necessary here. k
00:33:079 (4) - Based on your NC's in the scheme of changing sections, I believe you should NC this too? k
01:05:628 (7) - The drum roll here makes this more suited as a 1/2 slider to better lead into the chorus repeat, give it that little more emphasis. k
01:18:569 (1) - Putting a slider here feels a bit overmapped given that the song gets pretty dang empty, 2 circles could be cooler to emphasize that. That or do the rhythm you do in the hard, a lot more fitting, that way 01:19:745 - is clickable. k
It wouldn't hurt to include the rhythm at 00:53:275 now, would it? Maybe a stack for the vocals. Same thing at the repeat. K, had to rotate the whole kiai and the rest of the end 180 degrees to fit the spacing LOL

Hard
00:04:647 (1) - Feels a bit overemphasized in spacing given how you've been using spacing emphasis on finishes or stronger sounds, this doesn't fit too much. fixed
00:30:334 (2,3,4,5,1) - It's a little weird to me that you incorporate so much 1/4 here, you don't anywhere else in the diff and this is the only real triple rhythm added. I'd either add more elsewhere or simplify these. Also, your spacing between them is a bit inconsistent, compare 00:30:334 (2,3) - to 00:31:118 (4,5) - to 00:09:157 (5,1) - . Fixed
00:34:647 (1) - Why do you start NCing every 2 measures here? Every measure works fine and fits the rest of the map better. fixed
00:48:765 (7) - Also means NCing here and 00:51:902 (7) - .fixed
00:49:941 (9) - Feels overly spaced. fixed
01:17:392 (2) - Honestly really don't like the aesthetics of this, it stands out compared to the clean tidy organization in the rest of your map and just doesn't fit too well. changed hopefully it's better
Great rhythm choices here, got nothing else! Just try to incorporate more 1/4 imo. added 2 more 00:34:255 (3,1) - 00:40:530 (3,1) - Hopefully that's enough cause i can't find anywhere else I could put these nifty 1/4s

Alright, think I'm happy with this, call me back ^^ ^^ Thanks! Updated Aki's

Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2017-08-01T22:49:21+00:00

pm'd stuff for lower diffs for recheck, one more thing aki sorry D:

i figured out why 00:48:765 (1,2,3) - bugs me so much, you don't really follow vocals at all in this section, mostly prioritizing drums, so when you do map the vocals out here it's a bit uncomfortable. 00:51:902 (1,2,3) - is more supported by drums and such, so it's fine, but i really think you should change the rhythm on that first one mentioned

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-02T03:52:41+00:00

copypasted the rhythm from 00:47:196 (1,2,3,4) - but a bit intense
also fixed drum-hitnormal things on 00:09:941 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cuz few of them were missing and inconsistent
thanks again!

edit : another minor hs change, @Ohwow pls change sth for me in future if there's hitsound issues again tfw using discord, not on in-game chat lole

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Plaudible

1,028 posts

Joined September 2015

Plaudible 2017-08-03T01:47:43+00:00

onegai (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ onegai

～('▽^人)

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2017-08-07T03:42:47+00:00

akytoshy
01:18:569 (1,2,3) - should try to differentiate this section from the usual kiai stuff. all instrumental stuff goes away yet ur treating it like nothing changed

some possibilities are lowering sv and/or using less dense rhythm

easy
00:33:079 (3) - go with a 2/1 slider like 00:51:902 (3) - . mapping 1/1 over what should be a 3/4 thing makes it sound like something's unsnapped lol (00:36:216 (2) - these are ok cuz clear sound on white tick tho)

call me back!!!!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-07T04:59:19+00:00

@pishifat i fixed with ur suggestion aka less dense rhythm with som anti-jump, thanks

osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:妄想キャリブレーション
Creator:Ohwow
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:冴えない彼女の育てかた♭
Tags:saenai heroine no sodatekata flat season 2 saekano how to raise a boring girlfriend ending a-1 pictures tv size akitoshi
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pishifat

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pishifat 2017-08-15T20:50:44+00:00

zzzzz

Ohwow

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Ohwow 2017-08-15T20:51:37+00:00

<3

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-08-15T21:37:25+00:00

Congratz for your first ranked beatmap !

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Eir_DELETED 2017-08-16T01:15:54+00:00

wow Congratz your first qualified map!

Shunao

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Shunao 2017-08-16T01:58:47+00:00

Gratz bro!~ \o/

Akitoshi

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Akitoshi 2017-08-16T05:41:40+00:00

gratz w

also i love Utaha

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-08-16T12:59:53+00:00

need clarification about the inconsistency between unicode and romansied title, thanks!

title         Sakurairo Diary
title_unicode 桜色ダイアリー (TV Size)

Underforest

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Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-17T01:15:36+00:00

Pretty sure it's a mistake because meta source doesn't have "(TV Size)" tag

@Ohwow gratz in 1st qualified map

Ohwow

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Ohwow 2017-08-17T02:09:26+00:00

Underforest wrote:
Pretty sure it's a mistake because meta source doesn't have "(TV Size)" tag

@Ohwow gratz in 1st qualified map

Yeah I took it off on the English title but forgot to take it off on the Japanese title Fuk.

Thanks BTW c:

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-08-17T09:51:52+00:00

let's get it fixed

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-08-17T11:49:00+00:00

why are slidertick and sliderslide both silent?

Ohwow

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Ohwow 2017-08-17T21:38:19+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
why are slidertick and sliderslide both silent?

I just dislike the sound of sliderslide, it just sound off when combined with the bass of the music.

As for slidertick, I added back in since it helps follow the missing beats in Easy & Normal~

Ohwow

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Ohwow 2017-08-20T22:54:50+00:00

still waiting for a response

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2017-08-21T04:09:18+00:00

since you change something other than meta, i only rebubble